The Merc with the Lounge - - - - - - Part 168

Status
Not open for further replies.
My first story's finished. Just shy of 7000 words. I hope its not too gridmark. I've noticed themes of compassion, mental health, and doing what needs doing.
 
Sounds kind of like a version of Burn Notice with Chuck Norris as the star :D
You need to watch the good RAVEN series then http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0103518/?ref_=fn_al_nm_1a

Jeffrey Meek played Johnathan Raven (the name he uses at the moment) an ex ninja, ex special forces, ex CIA operative who only wants to find his son and live in peace....fortunately for us viewers he doesn't find his kid but he does find lots of scantily clad babes (it takes place in Hawaii) being harassed by lots of guys who need their asses kicked.

Basic story....American kid (Raven) living in Japan sees his family slaughtered in front of him by Ninjas.....he trains in martial arts, manages to infiltrate the Ninja sect, get trained even more by them, and then in one night kill almost all of them in a bloody night of revenge. He then spends several years as a military special forces black ops/CIA agent who eventually gets fed up with all the dirty tricks and retires under new name in Hawaii. Helping a friend being harassed by the Yakuza, the surviving Ninjas find out he still lives and start sending people to kill him. In between these attacks he keeps running into other *******s who need their teeth kicked out....while lounging on the beaches of Honolulu....land of bikinis......
 
I saw Hardcore: Henry today and it was really awesome. Henry kills the villain by[BLACKOUT] decapitating him with his own optic nerve.[/BLACKOUT]
 
Must be an inspiration from some Japanese, Chinese, or Korean movies.
 
The Story of Ricky is probably where they got the inspiration for [BLACKOUT]the kill someone with your own body part thing.[/BLACKOUT]
 
That's the one with a guy [blackout]choking the protagonist using his own insistence[/blackout]?
 
I think I saw that on a WatchMojo list, that's how I knew about the film, and what made me think of it reading about Hardcore: Henry.
 
I saw Hardcore: Henry today and it was really awesome. Henry kills the villain by[BLACKOUT] decapitating him with his own optic nerve.[/BLACKOUT]

Magneto was hilariously badass.
 
Anyone else have trouble accessing the site a short while ago?
 
Yeah for alittle bit Duke. Not sure what went on
 
Probably tinkering with the server/s or maintenance on the site I'd assume.
 
Probably, At least we're back for alittle while lol
 
So my province just instituted free tuition to low income students which I think is pretty awesome. They're releasing more info later on over the next few weeks but I'm hoping it will include older people (aka me) who want to go back to school but are ****ing broke all the time.

My sister is annoyed since she just graduated with her masters three years ago and has a debt of around $20,000. I doubt they'll do anything about that. :(
 
Were any of you aware we could post the word ****e here on the Hype? I had no idea that it wasn't auto-censored. #TheMoreYouKnow
 
Sorry about that guys... I was making some adjustments for the war to come.
 
Ah Reek, so nice of you to join us for this lovely evening. :yay:
 
So my province just instituted free tuition to low income students which I think is pretty awesome. They're releasing more info later on over the next few weeks but I'm hoping it will include older people (aka me) who want to go back to school but are ****ing broke all the time.

My sister is annoyed since she just graduated with her masters three years ago and has a debt of around $20,000. I doubt they'll do anything about that. :(

That sounds great!

Sorry about that guys... I was making some adjustments for the war to come.

What do you mean?
 
My first story's finished. Just shy of 7000 words. I hope its not too gridmark. I've noticed themes of compassion, mental health, and doing what needs doing.

Cool beans. Always good to get something done and feel that accomplishment. :D
 
15087571483_9cb79e1a52_o.gif
 
Status
Not open for further replies.

Users who are viewing this thread

Back
Top
monitoring_string = "afb8e5d7348ab9e99f73cba908f10802"