"The ROLO Factor": Wolverine & Storm's Relationship

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AznBABYBANDIT said:
Lool writer? I never had any idea how it'd go. Btw u from Hong Kong?

Try the pageone in Central. Got a House of M yesterday and a Kitty's debut... Just pricey... U know, 200 $

Yeah~I come from HK~~~~How about you~?
200$US DOLLAR or HK dollar~???!!!!!!
How about Ohio then~? Can I buy the comic in Ohio~?

Yeah, she doesn't love Scott, there was just a bit of sexual tension there from the start. They acted on it and it kinda forms a love rectangle instead of a triangle, but it is obvious who belongs together. Although....Scott never finished his sentence.... :)

*sigh* Logan is just Logan, I have no idea why he's leaving just the X-men. Maybe he just feels broken. Poor Logan....yet again.
But Ororo felt hurt when Scott got back to Jean.....Why then~? I don't really sure that I want Rolo in this story....=="""~~~ Maybe Logan should go back to Mariko[If there would be one in the story~HAHA~]
I dunno, he's jealous i guess.
I don't think so........maybe he thought that the only one in the mansion who love him died and he need to go this time~???


Scogan thread.......what X fans laugh to died~??=="""~
 
Well of course she felt hurt, she cares for Scott, but she isn't in love with him. New chapter! Yay! :)
 
Voli23 said:
Well of course she felt hurt, she cares for Scott, but she isn't in love with him. New chapter! Yay! :)

The write update it for two days.....
They started to love each others now....
But I always think that Logan needed to be loved...
so maybe storm in this story is not suitable for him....
 
I don't know anything about forge.... out of curiousity, why does everyone hate him? I mean, of course I prefer Logan over him, but I'm just wondering just what makes everyone hate Forge.

oh and krystalnic... dunno if you are still reading my fic, but I updated The Second Sun: Twenty Sunless Years. I dunno if you were still reading it though.
 
Most hate him cos he broke Ororo's heart.
But if marvel would have let her get with Wolverine then her heart would be there with no cracks.
BTW:
Look at this link ROLO loverz. It ain't ROLO romanced based but it features RO and Lo through out the video.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JKOda2A3Vqg
 
Hey, is anyone else having a problem getting on the RoLo Realm site? It just doesn't show up for me anymore. :(
 
Ntcrwler and I are working on a X3 rewrite with an X4 attached novel like project. Here is a missing scene with Ororo and Logan that takes place after Logan crashes the danger room session. Feel free to review, beta, or burn! BTW this was like 97% Ntcrwler's idea.

[*** Scene - Ororo's gardens behind the mansion. Outside. Daytime]

Ororo walks over to a group of white hydrangea bushes. She is visibly upset
and under stress. She raises a pair of sheers and gets to work trimming the
bushes. Her motions are jagged and stiff, reflecting her state of mind

Logan is taking a stroll in the gardens. He's smoking his cigar. He goes
around a corner and comes across Ororo.

Logan:
Hey?

Ororo looks up, annoyed

Ororo:
Logan... What are you doing here?

Logan:
I needed some... fresh air. [puffs on his cigar].
What are YOU doing here?

Ororo:
It's my garden, Logan. I **** to work on it.
It helps relieve stress!

Ororo trims the bushes violently, betraying her feelings

Logan:
Not doing a good job, are you?

Ororo:
Why don't you go get some fresh air somewhere else?

Rain clouds coalesce overhead. A few drops fall down

Logan:
Hey... Ro...look.... I'm sorry about this morning, all
right? I'm sorry if I came off like a jerk...

Ororo:
It's not all right. And yes, you were a jerk. What kind
of an example did you set for the students?"

Logan:
They deserve to know how to fight and win instead of
spending all their time hiding

[Cut to window on third floor of mansion. Standing in window is Jubilee]

Jubilee looks down, smiling mischieviously

Jubilee:
Oh man, those two are at it again? This is gonna be good!

[Cut back to Logan and Ororo]

Ororo:
Logan, sometimes the best plan is to evade and escape.
But I'm sure you know all about escaping

Logan:
What's that supposed to mean?

[Ororo looks at him angrily]

Ororo:
You neven stick around, do you?

[the rain clouds form into a thunderhead. We hear a low rumble of thunder]

Logan:
I know when I'm not wanted...

Logan turns around and leaves. Ororo calls him with a tone of authority.

Ororo:
Logan!!

Logan stops in his tracks and turns back to face Ororo

Ororo:
In case you didn't notice, people appreciate your help
here. Some actually do give a damn about you and WANT you
to stick around

[the thunderhead dissipates into broken cumulus clouds]

Logan:
No, I didn't really notice...

Ororo:
Why do you pretend not to care?

Logan:
Why do you?

Ororo takes another violent cut with the sheers, then jerks back and yelps out
in pain. She cut her index finger, drawing blood. The clouds reform into a
menacing thunderhead and another rumble is heard.

[Cut back to window above]

Jubilee:
Oh man, he must have REALLY ticked off Miss Monroe this time!"

[Cut back to Logan and Ororo]

Ororo:
DAMN!

She tosses the sheers aside angrily and nurses her finger with her lips. Logan
moves in to help, tries to touch her, but Ororo slaps him back aside

Logan:
Take it easy, will you? Don't get excited!

Ororo:
It's bad enough all the stress I have to deal with without
you having to add to that pile!

Logan [gently]:
I really was trying to help the kids this morning

Logan takes her hand, closes it into a fist, and cups it with his own, hiding
the index finger and blood from view. Ororo does not fight back this time

Ororo:
Logan... you can be so difficult sometimes!

Logan:
So can you

Ororo:
Sometimes you make wounds in other ways than with your claws
that hurt just as much.

Ororo looks down at her hand. Logan covers it protectively with his own so she
can't see the wound or blood, and strokes her wrist with his thumb.

Logan:
Believe it or not, I can't stand the sight of blood

The thunderhead above clears up again into scattered clouds

Ororo:
Stop that

Logan:
Stop what?

Logan keeps stroking her hand, and smiles a little

Ororo:
Why don't you give people a chance to... like you?"

Logan:
I didn't think people cared

Ororo:
If you give them a chance, some of those people may
actually return feelings for you...

Logan leans in a little towards her

Logan:
I didn't think YOU cared"

Ororo leans towards Logan, her hand and wound forgotten

Ororo:
I... I....

A gentle breeze starts to blow around them, playing with Ororo's hair like
that of a fashion model's. They both lean in and are very close

Ororo [cont'd]:
I do care

A rainbow appears in the skies above the mansion.

Logan:
So do I...

They tilt their heads, close their eyes, and move in for a kiss

[They suddenly stop in their tracks as they hear a strong voice in their
heads]

Xavier:
Ororo, Logan! I need to see you both immediately in my
office! I believe something...extraordinairy has happened.
It may involve...Jean

Both Ororo and Logan raise their eyebrows, their faces a mere inch away from
each other

Logan:
Did he just think 'Jean'?

Ororo:
Jean?

Logan:
Jeannie? What the hell?

All thoughts of the moment and each other are forgotten. Logan quickly pulls
away and turns to head back to the mansion. But Ororo does not follow. She
stands there, stunned. Disappointed. Sad. Tears well up in her eyes.

The rainbow is lost and in its place the clouds reform into a sinister mass
dark as night. Without warning, torrential rain starts to pour down on
Westchester.

Logan stops and turns around slowly. He sees Ororo is still standing among her
garden, staring back at him, being drenched by the downpour

Logan:
Ro?

Ororo sighs very slowly, sadly.

Ororo:
Logan... [sigh]

She bends down to pick up her sheers, turns her back to Logan, goes back to
trimming her bushes, very gently this time. Oblivious of the rain.

[*** END SCENE ***]

---

[SCENE - Xavier's office. It is raining heavily outside. Daytime]

A very wet-looking Wolverine walks in quickly to see a very grave looking and
serious Xavier.

Xavier:
Logan, where's Ororo? Weren't you two together?

Logan:
She's... drying off. You gonna wait? Or you gonna explain
what the hell you just threw into our heads about something
involving Jean?

Xavier:
Logan, I think...you'd better sit down...

[*** END SCENE ***]
 
Like I said in the Storm thread...
Logan is out of character.
He wouldn't admit he was a jerk and apologize... and I doubt he would even consider none the less apologize in the same day.
Other than that, it was a very sweet moment. :)
 
deep_thinkin said:
Like I said in the Storm thread...
Logan is out of character.
He wouldn't admit he was a jerk and apologize... and I doubt he would even consider none the less apologize in the same day.
Other than that, it was a very sweet moment. :)

That's why peer reviews and suggestions are so helpful in this early stage of the project. We tweaked the dialogue a bit so that Logan isn't so... forward and open about admitting he was wrong and a jerk. I also reazlied we had a continuity problem, so the dialogue was adjusted to show that the danger room session was several days ago and Storm was fuming terribly at Logan during this entire period, which will be supported in the other scenes when they are in the same room leading up to this one.
 
OK, here's the same scene with the dialogue tweaked a bit so Logan isn't so open about apologizing or admitting he's a jerk. How does this work now?

Logan:
Hey... Ro...look.... About how I acted at that last
training session-"


Ororo:
What about it? You acted like a complete jerk! The
Danger Room is not a video game! We are tying to teach
teamwork! What kind of an example was that for the
students?"


Logan:
They deserve to know how to fight and come out winning
instead of hiding and scurrying around like mice


Ororo:
Logan, sometimes the best plan is evasion and escape.
I'm surprised you're not the one teaching them that,
since you seem to know so much about running away


Logan:
What's that supposed to mean?

[Ororo looks at him angrily]

Ororo:
You just pass through but you never stick around, do you?

Logan visibly flinches. The rain clouds form into a thunderhead. We hear a low rumble of thunder

Logan:
I know when I'm not wanted...
 
Ororocity said:
More scenes, pleasse!!

Goddessreicho is working on the next scene. But patience please :) As we both discovered, good, believable ROLO takes time and TLC to write. Thanks for your enthusiasm, support, and reviews. it helped make a difference :)
 
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