Trust

[Hunter Rider]

I decided on the title as it's one of the themes of the fic, hope you guys like

CAST Key

NYPD detective 1 - MaskedManJRK (MJK)

NYPD detective 2 - byrd man (bm)

Female Mossad agent - Spidermanluvr28 (SML)

Female Computer expert - Jolie

NYPD Captain - Cmill

President of the USA - Fran

Secret service agent female - Tza

Secret Service Agent male - Mister J

Director of the CIA - Heat Z

Small time message runner from Brooklyn - The Iron Fist (TIF)

Harlem Kingpin - FA

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The next 5 roles are harder to explain without giving away the story so i'll be vague

Leader of a unit of men at the heart of the story - Whiskey Tango (WT)

team member 1 - Sniper - BadgerPhil (BP)

team member 2 - Explosives expert - Abaddon (Abby)


team member 3 - tech expert - NDX

team member 4 - vehicle specialist - The Iron Man (TIM)

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Another day in New York City, Detective MJK had just picked up his partner detective Byrd man and they were on their way to the precinct for another day on the job.

MJK: "Ok....just say it"

bm: " Say what ?"

MJK: " You have your "I want to say something about my sex life" face on, which is usually followed by a tale of your misadventures in attempting to get Julie to have butt sex"

bm: " Jesus!.....I'm that obvious ?"

MJK: " Lets just say you should never play poker for serious money"

bm: " Damn", so anyway, i thought i was in last night"

MJK: "Wait....you didn't try, the "Whoops i thought it was the other hole" approach did you ?"

bm: "Hell no........already tried that and failed....so i rented us a nice little flick y'now ?....so i put it on and we start watching, she's getting kinda frisky and i make the move and she just stops me stone cold and says she's going to bed, i can "finish up" without her....I mean how did the burners go off so quick ?"

MJK: " I'm guessing b/c you made advances towards the forbidden city, she ain't letting you in there man, just give it up, i don't know why it's such a big deal for you anyway"

bm: "Oh that's rich coming from you, the guy who bangs women that **** like porn stars"

MJK: " Y'see that's where you have it all wrong, i do that b/c i'm a commitment phobe with no social graces"

bm: " Yeah...riiiiiiight"

MJK: "Anyway, you no longer "bang", you have a wife, you "make love", just be grateful you're getting any at all, most of the guys on the job with wives have already put their penises in storage"

bm: " I dunno man, it just feels like it's all lights out missionary these days...oh and another thing, Molly came home from school yesterday and asked what a homosexual is.....I mean she's 6 for Christ sake"

MJK:" What'd you tell her ?"

bm: "I said their the same as vegetarians"

MJK: "........you told her homosexuals don't eat meat ?...........never mind, speaking of meat I'm gonna go get my morning burger"

bm: " Ugh i don't know how you can eat that at this time in the morning"

MJK: " Sets me up nice for the day"

MJK smiled and pulled up in front of greens store, both men got out and went in, MJK got his burger with everything, had a quick word with the owner green, paid for it and stuck it in the microwave near the window as bm browsed the car mags.....MJK glanced out the window and saw a long Mayback pull up across the road with 2 small flags on either site of the bonnet, behind it was a black SUV, suddenly a semi truck cab pulled in front of the Mayback and screeched to a halt

MJK: " Hey bm, over here man....take a look at this"

as bm walked over two black dirt bikes screeched into view and opened fire on the SUV as the drivers got out to talk to the semi driver.

MJK: "Oh ****, 911! green, 911!"

MJK ran out into the street and pulled out his glock as the bikes reached the Mayback that was trying to pull back, he fired one shot at the nearest bike and hit the driver in the leg, he lost control of the bike and skidded along past the Mayback, the second rider took aim and fired into the back seat of the Mayback spraying the entire cabin and then sped off, MJK ran forward as the fallen rider was getting up.

MJK: " Hold it NYPD!"

The man pulled out a gun from his jacket

Bang!!!

MJK shot him dead

bm: "Jesus, was that mother****er deaf or just stupid ?"

MJK: " We need a bird, the other one couldn't have gotten far"

bm: " Already one up, we should have confo in a minute"

The 2 detectives went over to the body and took off the helmet, a man around mid 40's with salt and pepper hair and beard was under it.

A few minutes later SWAT arrived..the team leader came over.

SWAT team leader: " So MJK, this is the other one ?"

MJK: " Yeah, has the bird picked up the second yet ?"

STL: "Nope....looks like your guy just vanished, there's no sign of him."

bm: " What the **** ? he only had a minutes head start tops"

MJK: " Who was the big wig in the Fancy car ?"

STL: " That is...sorry was...The President of the Palestinian National Authority.......he was hear to speak at a charity function along with the President of Israel, it was one of those peace efforts set up on neutral soil by our President"

MJK: "Well it looks like someone didn't want that to happen and hired Houdini to **** things up, when the lab crime scene boys have bagged and tagged him were gonna need him printed, this was no amateur hit and someone find the ****ing semi driver and what company uses that rig....we just fell hip deep into a sh1tstorm guys"


To be continued......

 

[Cmill216]

Molly came home from school yesterday and asked what a homosexual is.....I mean she's 6 for Christ sake"

MJK:" What'd you tell her ?"

bm: "I said their the same as vegetarians"

MJK: "........you told her homosexuals don't eat meat ?...........never mind

Oh, lordy.

But, onto more important matters, that was a pretty sudden turn of events. Crazy how we see these two officers going about their daily routine and suddenly, BOOM. They look to be thrust into a pretty massive and chaotic situation.

Good start, homie.

 

[tzarinna]

Ha, ha, ha......just jump right on in there with the sex, violence and controversy. t:



Where am I?

 

[Byrd Man]

Wow...that mirror's my sex life so much, you have no idea.

 

[Sebastos]

Heh, that's some great stuff. Looking forward to more hunter. up:

 

[Jolie_Desastre]

damn great work big bro..humor..and action..nice

 

[The FallenAngel]

Awesome start as always hunter.

Loves me some sex and violence.

 

[Whiskey Tango]

Kick ass, I've been looking forward to this. I give it one more episode before stuff starts blowing up. up:

 

[Mister J]

I'm trying to fight an urge to go to McDonald's and got way too excited when the burger was mentioned.

The last line of the story builds anticipation nicely.

 

[NDX]

 

[Spider-Man Luvr28]

Lol. Same as vegetarians.
I loved it.

 

[Badger]

Awesome start Hunter, can't wait for more.

 

[MaskedManJRK]

Sweet beginning, man.

 

[The IronMan]

great start hunter

 

[DBella]

Excellent start, Rob! What a crazy life this is... one moment you go about your business, daily routine... go to a burger joint to get something to eat... talk about the important things in life like sex and the next minute... BOOM! What an explosive beginning! I look foward to the chaos that follows...

Homosexuals are the same as vegetarians? Hahaha! Comedy + sex + violence = Fantabulous!

 

[Hunter Rider]

Thanks for all the replies guys, next chapter coming in a few minutes

 

[Hunter Rider]

Chapter 2

20 minutes later MJK and bm were sitting in Captain Cmill's office back at the Precinct.

Cmill: " So what we got ? "

MJK: " A bunch of dead bodies and a bike "

Cmill: " Is that you being funny ? b/c i don't consider this a humorous situation, i mean we have an assassination of a foreign president on our patch with 2 of NYPD's finest on the scene, now we need to make some headway on this gentlemen "

bm: " We haven't got anything to go on boss "

Cmill: " Lets see what the one we got in the morgue tells us "

MJK: " Are we calling a seance ? just kidding, bottom line is suspect 2 disappeared and I'm betting whoever drove the semi isn't it's regular owner, we got nothing on this one Cap "

Cmill: " Then find something, this is gonna bring all the high ups out of the woodwork, I'm gonna have more initials crawling up my ass than a porn star has d1cks on ******** day "

Jolie: " Got something guys "

Jolie was the young and pretty MIT student that had joined the NYPD straight out of Uni, seemed an odd job for a girl who could make a lot more but what she didn't know about computers wasn't worth knowing.

MJK: " What you got ? "

Jolie: " The bike used in the hit was a hire, sprayed black, i got the number from the lab guys, they're sending me everything else but i ran that first, it was hired using a credit card, now i ran the number on the credit card and it's a phony but a very clever one, the way it's set up is like a ghost transfer, the business that they use the card on won't know for 72 hours that there is no money until it suddenly vanishes...b/c it was never there "

MJK: " Holy ****, that's some James Bond stuff right there "

Jolie: " Well i was able to trace another transaction, the same card was used to rent a room at the hendry in Brooklyn yesterday, room 206 on the 8th floor "

MJK: " i love you, let's go bm "

bm: "I love you to but in a platonic way b/c I'm married "

MJK: " Jesus christ man, are you gonna ask her if she does anal ? "

Jolie: " huh ? "

MJK: " Come on! "

MJK and bm sped across town and arrived at the Hendry, they made their way into the building and got the key for the room off the manager.

They made their way up the stairs, guns un holstered, bm slid the key into the lock and they made their way into the room.

All the signs pointed to it being vacated, then as bm approached the bathroom the door burst open and a man disarmed bm before taking him down to the floor, MJK made to shoot but the man again was quicker and disarmed MJK with with two quick arm movements, he was a large man, around 6'3 and had longish black hair and a scarred face with a partial beard.

MJK threw a punch but the man blocked and took MJK down to the floor with one swift move and locked in a cross choke, MJK could start to feel the room swirling around him when the man was kicked in the back of the head.

AS MJK regained his senses and got to his kness he could see a beautiful long dark haired woman fighting with this massive guy in the middle of the room, they were exchanging and blocking so fast it was hard to make out who was wining until the woman got in a body blow and then hit him with a spin kick that sent him crashing through the window and plummeting 8 stories.

MJK: "Jesus, who the hell are you ? "

SML: " My name is SML, i am a Mossad agent and a thank you will do"

MJK: " Yeah, thanks...so who was that guy ? "

SML: " i don't know, i followed you 2 here, i need to be in on this case with you "

bm: " Woah, my head, what's going on ?"

MJK: " Looks like we got us a third wheel, you better come back to the precinct with us, oh and bm, call it in, there's another body to clean up. "

Back at the precinct SML's credentials were verified

Cmill: " I'm not used to having foreign agents working with my detectives, this is a courtesy "

SML: " And my government appreciates it, we need to prove that Israel had nothing to do with the assassination "

Cmill: " I understand, just don't go pissing in my pool.....so where are we now MJK ? "

MJK: " Back to where we were asince kung fu katrina over here volleyed our only lead out an 8 story window "

SML: " Saving your ass "

Cmill: " Ok enough!.....the only thing you can do is what we always do, hit the street, if it happens in NYC then our street knows about it "

The phone in Cmill's office buzzed

Cmill: " Ok, I'll send them down....Jolie is down with Bella in Pathology, they said to get down there "

bm: " on our way boss "

Bella was the resident pathologist, she was a slim woman with dark hair and a pale complexion, kind of introverted and shy, didn't say a lot unless it was about dead bodies

MJK: " Ok so what you got "

Bella: " Well he's dead "

MJK: "I could have told you that over an hour ago sweetheart "

Bella: " Yes but could you have told me he's been dead 5 years ?"

MJK: " What ? "

bm: " Are we talking Vampires here ? "

MJK looked round at bm

MJK: " ........ "

Bella: " no bm, not vampires "

Jolie: " Spooks "

MJK: " Ok, spill "

Bella: " When i examined this man i noticed he had several scars from bullet wounds on his torso, which meant he either served or was a known criminal, so i checked his prints in the database and got nothing, that's when i called Jolie "

Jolie: " I did a...ahem...deeper search and found that his name was John boother, code name Whisper, he was part of a Navy Seal team that all died in Bogota in 2002 "

MJK: " Jesus christ he was a spook "

bm: " I don't get it "

MJK: " Spook is a term used when an agent is erased, his death faked and record wiped, he becomes a ghost...a spook, he doesn't exist, he does the jobs that the President can't sign off on, black bag stuff, wet work, you name it "

"Very good detective"

A voice boomed from behind, Cmill had entered the room and with him was Heat Z, the director of the CIA.


To Be Continued.....

 

[Mister J]

This is like an Alias/NYPD Blue/CSI crossover.

I'm guessing on NYPD Blue, because I never watched that ****, but Alias and CSI is the good stuff.

I'm intrigued.

 

[Badger]

Oh this is getting very exciting...

Great build up, Hunter!!

 

[The FallenAngel]

Another great one. This keeps getting more and more interesting.

 

[DBella]

Whoa!! It just gets better! Very intriguing stuff in this chapter, Rob. I especially like SML's entrance. Haaai-yah! Need to read more before I can make more comments but so far, I'm lovin' it!

Btw, I didn't think I had a part in this fanfic. Thanks.

 

[Orb]

Nice. Looks like I'm coming.

 

[tzarinna]

Damn son.
I was a little disappointed that it wasn't vampires or zombies. It's still getting me going though. I'm sensing some Bourne influence.

 

[Fran]

 

[DBella]

Damn son.
I was a little disappointed that it wasn't vampires or zombies. It's still getting me going though. I'm sensing some Bourne influence.

In this fanfic, I'm glad there's no vampires or zombies but it'd be great to see Rob write a horror fanfic someday. Offtopic: Saw the trailer of 30 Days of Night and it looks good.