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Well, this is my first attempt to write a fan fiction. :yay:





Ultimate Comics: X-Men
#1 Vol. 2
Rated T: Violence, mild gore, language.
EVENT’S ARE APON US PT. 1
Previously in Ultimate X-Men …

After the Ultimatum wave hit, over half the X-Men were killed. As the others that are left mourn those that have died, Quick Silver swears on his father’s grave that he will carry out his father’s plan. Elsewhere, Wolverine recovers from the fatal attack and wonders where the %^&* everyone is…


…six months later…

Havoc walks into a bar. He asks for a drink, a big one. He sits back down at a booth. On the TV, the president rambles on about the new and improved sentinel program. These are disguised to look just like humans, so they can kill more quickly and blend in with the environment. So police won’t get the sentinels mixed up with regular thugs, no cops will be on duty for the next five weeks. Havoc shakes his head and walks out…

Wolverine walks out of the cave he has been living in. He sniffs the air. He turns around to find Toad sitting on top of a pile of dirt. He explains how he had paid Mystique to disguise as him. Then, she would get killed, only to turn into wolverine and use the healing factor. But then he states also: he and Quick silver are uniting the brotherhood! Wolverine gets out his claws and lungs for toad, stating that the brotherhood are not going to do anything but get their blood on his god**** claws. Toad easily beats up Wolverine and throws him off the cliff of the mountain. He is impaled on a tree branch. He heals, only to get slapped across the face by Toad’s tongue…

Colossus rings Rogue’s doorbell and demands she follows him. He leads her to the tombstones of her fellow friends. She crouches down next to Xavier’s tomb, but he grabs her and punches her across the face. He reveals HE is a part of the brother hood to! She tries to absorb his powers, but only absorbs half. They, equally matched, start to brawl. Suddenly, they are interrupted by Jean. She slams Colossus aside, calling him a @#$%^&*. She then places a flower on Cyclops’s grave. But then gets a telepathic message from wolverine…
 
Ultimate Comics: X-Men
#2 VOL.2
Rated T: Violence, mild gore, language.
EVENTS ARE APON US PT. 2
Previously in Ultimate X-Men…
After the Ultimatum wave hit, over half the X-Men were killed. As the others that are left mourn those that have died, Quick Silver swears on his father’s grave that he will carry out his father’s plan. Elsewhere, Wolverine recovers from the fatal attack and wonders where the %^&* everyone is. But, after he is attacked by Toad, he calls for Jean’s help. SHE had to fight Colossus who had ultimately turned to be bad. Now Toad is about to choke Wolverine to death…

Wolverine slices at Toad’s tongue, but it keeps growing back! Toad grabs him by the hair and slams him into the river. But suddenly, he is picked up by telepathy and thrown into the mountain. Jean quickly runs over and helps Wolverine up. Rogue runs over and touches Toad’s face. She gains the memories he had. She tells the other two that the Colossus that had attacked them was Mystique. Also, the brotherhood were getting three new recruits. There would be no way they could fight them all! Suddenly, Jean had an idea. She told the others to follow her…

She breaks open the door to Professor Xavier’s lab. She sets down the bodies of NightCrawler, Beast, and Angel. She then starts to begin her plan. She raises her hands. Then, she uses her telepathy to try and start the heart inside of them. She moves the blood in the veins and gets the brain thinking. Then, at last, the two bodies awaken. She uses the last of her energy, and then blacks out. Wolverine asks why she did not help Xavier, and Rogue says she was told by Xavier during Ultimatum that if he believed that if God says it’s his time, then he will not argue. Beast gets up. He takes a few steps, then breaks into a full run. The rest follows him to the hangar. He activates a HUGE ship that lifts up into the sky. When everyone gets in, he takes off. He presses another button, and the ship turns invisible. “Welcome to the new HQ.” He said.
On a secret base on Alcatraz, the new brotherhood line up. It consists of Toad, Mystique, Saber-Tooth, Quick Silver, and three new members: Thug (he feels no pain), Verre (she becomes invisible in the light), and Burst (has super fast martial art skills). They train inside a gym, literally being able to tear through each obstacle with ease. Quick Silver says, “Who votes we go finish what Magneto started?” Everyone raises their hands…
 
Ultimate Comics: X-Men
#3 VOL. 2
Rated T: Violence, mild gore, and language.
EVENTS ARE UPON US PT. 3
Previously In Ultimate X-Men…
After the Ultimatum wave hit, over half the X-Men were killed. As the others that are left mourn those that have died, Quick Silver swears on his father’s grave that he will carry out his father’s plan. Elsewhere, Wolverine recovers from the fatal attack and wonders where the %^&* everyone is. But, after he is attacked by Toad, he calls for Jean’s help. SHE had to fight Colossus who had ultimately turned to be bad. Toad is about to choke Wolverine to death, but Jean arrives to help him. She uses her energy to revive Beast, Angel, and NightCrawler. They relocate their base to a new X-Jet. Meanwhile, the new brotherhood get ready to attack…
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The X-Men try to think about how to tell the president that ALL mutants are not responsible for the attack. NightCrawler agrees to warp into his office and tell him. He flies to Washington DC and gets a pass to go on a tour. (This scene is gonna be a homage to X2. –Spidey.) When the crowd clears up, he takes off his jacket and warps throughout the white house. The guards spot him and start to shoot, but he knocks away their guns. He then is grabbed by none other than the Enforcers. They had decided to go straight and help the white house with security. But NightCrawler outsmarts them all and easily beats them up and shoves them in a closet. He finally manages to reach the president. He tells him all about how every mutant is not responsible, just the brotherhood is…

BLAM! A gunshot fires. NightCrawler hides behind the desk. He takes the president into his arms. He is bleeding to death. He dies. NightCrawler looks up and is smacked on the face. He is punched repeatedly yet quickly. Then he notices a big man in the room. NightCrawler teleports to him and kicks him in the balls, but he doesn’t feel it. He doesn’t even flinch. NightCrawler grabs his walkie talkie and says, “Guys, the Brotherhood is here!!! Oh my @#$%^& there here!!!”

The X-Men, (Jean Grey, Ice Man, Angel, and Beast for this mission), leap out of the x jet. Saber-tooth lunges at them, but is frozen by Ice Man. Beast grabs Mystique and digs his claws into her back. Toad grabs him and slams him up against the wall. Jean Grey is punched by no one. She looks around and WHAM!! She gets hit again. Then, Quick Silver encloses the X-Men into a Hurricane. He encloses them away, leaving them no air to breathe…
 
Ultimate Comics: X-Men
#4 VOL.2
Rated T: Violence, mild gore, and language.
EVENTS ARE UPON US PT. 4
Previously In Ultimate X-Men…
After the Ultimatum wave hit, over half the X-Men were killed. As the others that are left mourn those that have died, Quick Silver swears on his father’s grave that he will carry out his father’s plan. Elsewhere, Wolverine recovers from the fatal attack and wonders where the %^&* everyone is. But, after he is attacked by Toad, he calls for Jean’s help. SHE had to fight Colossus who had ultimately turned to be bad but turned out to be Mystique who turned out to be bad. . Toad is about to choke Wolverine to death, but Jean arrives to help him. She uses her energy to revive Beast, Angel, and NightCrawler. They relocate their base to a new X-Jet. Meanwhile, the new brotherhood get ready to attack. They attack suddenly, with new members Verre, Burst, and Thug. Quick Silver suddenly encloses the X-Men in a whirl wind…
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Night Crawler staggers to the hole in the Oval Office’s wall. He teleports to Quick Silver, grabs him, then teleports him facing the wall. He runs straight into it, and is knocked out. Beast quickly grabs Thug and slams him to the ground, but it has no effect. Mystique turns into Cyclops, and moves towards Jean. She turns around and faints. Toad, thinking Mystique is the real Cyclops, wraps his tongue around her head. He squeezes it, and it cracks open. Blood spills out onto the lawn. She turns back to normal.

“Holy #$%^&*!!! I killed Mystique!” He screamed, only to get smacked by Angel. Angel is grabbed by the throat by Sabre-Tooth, and is starting to choke. Beast grabs his throat, and the three engage in a big brawl. But from a long distance, it looks like a cloud of dust and grass as the three pummel each other to pulp.
Night Crawler suddenly was thrown to the roof of the White House. He gets up, and is smacked and karate chopped by Burst. He moves like lightning, striking fast yet hurtfully. He gets ready to deliver the final blow, but Night Crawler teleports away.

“Get back here you mother @#$%!!!” Burst screamed. WHAM!!! Night Crawler comes up from behind and punches him across the neck.

“Don’t mind if I do.” He replied. He then teleports away.

Mean while, Beast hops aboard the X-jet to call for back up, but Verre sneaks up from behind him and hits him with a crow bar…
 
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