El Bastardo
Literary elitist
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You're mistaking deus ex machina for plot device and character arc. Or journey. In this case, technically journey, or at least arc in the atypical sense. They are not one and the same. Ever. Claiming something a deus ex machina prohibits the ability for it to belong properly inside the narrative.
And now back to our regularly-scheduled spoiler tag. Whee!
But yes, the ending as contrived. All endings are contrived, and most writers readily admit that fact. (All writers shoud admit this fact.) But, hey, have fun with your disappointment, I guess.
And now back to our regularly-scheduled spoiler tag. Whee!
Yes, the teleporter plane was just introduced at about the time Cap steals it, I do believe. I'll agree with you there. I disagree with your implied point about the intent of introduction. Cap explicitly states that he only agreed to be captured so he could get his hands on it. That makes it justification, narratively, for the wonderful romp through France which occupied 1-2 early issues, one, and two, for getting Cap to Alaska, was it? for the finale. This is outside of deus ex machina territory. Were it deus ex machina, Cap would be wandering aimlessly, stumble upon it, and likely proclaim, "Oh snap!" That A on his mask doesn't stand for Luck! 
My opinion on the matter of the ending is that way too many people would have whined about how, had Cap and Red Skull dueled in an epic battle of two-page spreads, it would have been just a rehash of how Millar ended Ultimates and Ultimates 2. So I don't care about how he ended it, because it works as an ending to the conflict, and further shows that, for all his swagger and power, Red Skull was a small threat and nothing more than a boy with daddy issues. The real ending works well enough, too, so moot point.

My opinion on the matter of the ending is that way too many people would have whined about how, had Cap and Red Skull dueled in an epic battle of two-page spreads, it would have been just a rehash of how Millar ended Ultimates and Ultimates 2. So I don't care about how he ended it, because it works as an ending to the conflict, and further shows that, for all his swagger and power, Red Skull was a small threat and nothing more than a boy with daddy issues. The real ending works well enough, too, so moot point.
But yes, the ending as contrived. All endings are contrived, and most writers readily admit that fact. (All writers shoud admit this fact.) But, hey, have fun with your disappointment, I guess.