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I have altered this movie, fixing all the crappy parts (almost the whole film, including the title to match with X2: X-Men United)
Here's What I have so far.
Black. A glowing light is shown in the middle of the screen
Hank McCoys voice is heard.
Three streams of light come out of the center light.
The streams of light have turned into a bird. Camera zooms into the middle where a blue flame bursts onto screen. Credits are coming up while cells duplicate and DNA bands are shown while blues flames continue to burn in the background. Pan to
An X shaped door slams and a circle in the middle spins. Camera zooms into the blue light in its center.
Int. Scene 2
20 years ago
INT. A quite suburb.
A blue Mercedes Benz pulls onto the side of the road. Two men come out. Professor Charles Xavier and Eric Lenshier.
They walk ring the doorbell and Mr. and Mrs. Grey greet them.
INT. the Grey Living room.
Mr. Grey, Charles and Eric are all sitting on sofas.
Eric frowned and all the metal in the room began to shake. Charles sent him a telepathic message. Eric, he is not evil. Hes just uninformed.
Eric looked at Charles and sent him a psychic response. Informed.
Once again the metal started shaking harder this time and the picture frames fell off the walls. Eric, stop it!
A thirteen year old girl peaked her head from behind the stairs. Her father got up and left at her sight. She came and sat down where her father was sitting and look at Eric. Xavier sent her a Psychic not. Its very rude, you know, to read my thoughts or Mr. Lenshiers without our permission.
Jean frowned. Whats wrong with me?
Charles ignored Erics remark.
Jean stayed put and without any hesitation all the cars outside began to float as well as a mans lawnmower and the water out of a gardeners hose.
INT. Black Screen
Black. Explosions and missiles can be heard. Boom. The scene glows. Black. Boom. Glows. Explosion is seen. Wolverine jumps out of the way.
A missile comes by Wolverines head. He ducks and it goes at Iceman and Shadowcat.
Iceman tries to freeze it.
Shadowcat grabs Iceman and the missile goes through them.
Iceman smiles at her. Rogue sees them.
Colossus puts his hand on Rogues check. Rogue metals-up as a piece of rubble comes flying towards them both. It shatters on impact and both are unharmed.
An echoing voice is heard.
Colossus and Rogue regroup with Iceman and Shadowcat.
Lasers sweep the nearby remains of a house and another missile is launched right passed the X-Men, Nightcrawler then *BANFS* behind them.
The X-Men continue to move.
Rogue looks frustrated. Storm comes in.
A giant robot lands a half mile away and the earth shakes.
Wolverine looks over to Colossus.
Colossus picks up Wolverine, spins around twice and throws Wolverine directly at the Sentinel Robot. Wolverine flies out the other side. Nightcrawler *BAMFS* into the air, catches Wolverine and *BAMFS* back on the ground. The Sentinel falls over.
The scene morphs into a large, circular metal room.
Wolverine turns left out of the room while the rest of the X-Men turn right. Storm fallows Wolverine.
Cyclops walks by the other hall.
Wolverine catches up with Cyclops leaving Storm behind. Cyclops has a small pack slung over one shoulder. He brushes past Logan.
Cyclops stops and turns to face Wolverine.
Cyclops stops and turns to face Wolverine.
Cyclops's emotion pour out.
Scott pulls out of his pocket a the pendant Jean was wearing during last years museum field trip. Logan looks confused.
Scott stopped himself. A tear comes down from under his glasses. Logan looks at the bag.
Wolverine hesitates.
Wolverine stops to think.
Professor Xavier rolls his wheelchair into the room. He looks shocked.
XAVIER:
Continued...
Here's What I have so far.

Black. A glowing light is shown in the middle of the screen
Hank McCoys voice is heard.
Mutation,
It is an essential key for human survival. Some may fear it, some may hate it. Some my try and cure it. It is usually taken thousands and thousands of years. But every few millennia, evolution leaps forward.
X3:
X-MEN INCITED
An X shaped door slams and a circle in the middle spins. Camera zooms into the blue light in its center.
Int. Scene 2
20 years ago
INT. A quite suburb.
A blue Mercedes Benz pulls onto the side of the road. Two men come out. Professor Charles Xavier and Eric Lenshier.
ERIC:
Do we really have to meet them all in person, Charles?
CHARLES:
This ones special.
They walk ring the doorbell and Mr. and Mrs. Grey greet them.
MR. GREY:
Let me just call her and you can be on your way.
CHARLES:
Mr. grey please, I would rather speak with you before her.
INT. the Grey Living room.
Mr. Grey, Charles and Eric are all sitting on sofas.
CHARLES:
When did this start?
MR. GREY:
You mean when did she start being
a freak?
Eric frowned and all the metal in the room began to shake. Charles sent him a telepathic message. Eric, he is not evil. Hes just uninformed.
ERIC:
Well Mr. Grey let me inform you that your daughter is not a freak. In act, in the evolutionary chain, she is superior to you.
Eric looked at Charles and sent him a psychic response. Informed.
MR. GREY:
It all started when her best friend had died. There was an accident. A hit and run driver. We were all devastated. Jean took it harder then any of us. She stopped eating and became angry a lot quicker then usual. And now she is always reading our minds and if she is not happy she throws things across the room with her mind. Please, take her to your school and fix her.
Once again the metal started shaking harder this time and the picture frames fell off the walls. Eric, stop it!
CHARLES:
Could you please call her down?
MR. GREY:
Jean honey, would you please come down? There are two men here to see you.
A thirteen year old girl peaked her head from behind the stairs. Her father got up and left at her sight. She came and sat down where her father was sitting and look at Eric. Xavier sent her a Psychic not. Its very rude, you know, to read my thoughts or Mr. Lenshiers without our permission.
ERIC:
Did you think you were the only one of your kind young lady?
Jean frowned. Whats wrong with me?
CHARLES:
We are mutants Jean.
ERIC:
Homo-superior, Charles,
Charles ignored Erics remark.
CHARLES:
We are like you.
JEAN:
Really? I doubt that.
Jean stayed put and without any hesitation all the cars outside began to float as well as a mans lawnmower and the water out of a gardeners hose.
ERIC:
Oh Charles, I like this one.
CHARLES:
Jean, I trust you read out pamphlets?
JEAN:
Your advertisements? Yes.
CHARLES:
So I trust you are packed?
JEAN:
Yes.
CHARLES:
Then lets go.
INT. Black Screen
Black. Explosions and missiles can be heard. Boom. The scene glows. Black. Boom. Glows. Explosion is seen. Wolverine jumps out of the way.
WOLVERINE:
Youre gone a few days and the whole world goes to hell!
A missile comes by Wolverines head. He ducks and it goes at Iceman and Shadowcat.
Iceman tries to freeze it.
ICEMAN:
Its not working!
SHADOWCAT:
Let me try.
Shadowcat grabs Iceman and the missile goes through them.
SHADOWCAT:
Now whos the damsel in distress?
Iceman smiles at her. Rogue sees them.
COLOSSUS:
Look out!
Colossus puts his hand on Rogues check. Rogue metals-up as a piece of rubble comes flying towards them both. It shatters on impact and both are unharmed.
ROGUE:
That felt weird
COLOSSUS:
Youre telling me!
An echoing voice is heard.
XAVIER:
X-Men, keep moving.
Colossus and Rogue regroup with Iceman and Shadowcat.
SHADOWCAT:
Piotr, where are the others?
COLOSSUS:
Nightcrawlers getting civilians to safety, Storms leaving it obstacles and Cyclops is trying to slow it down.
Lasers sweep the nearby remains of a house and another missile is launched right passed the X-Men, Nightcrawler then *BANFS* behind them.
NIGHTCRAWLER:
Keep moving! Ve are running out of time!
The X-Men continue to move.
ICEMAN:
Nightcrawler, you get everyone to safety?
ROGUE:
You think he just decided to abandon his job, unfinished, to come and baby-sit us?
Rogue looks frustrated. Storm comes in.
STORM:
I set up a tornado back there; if Logan fails the tornado should do it. If not then hope for the best.
SHADOWCAT:
What happened to Cyclops?
WOLVERINE:
He couldnt make it. Watch out Storm, your tornado died out pretty fast. Hes coming and fast.
STORM:
So why arent you slowing him down?
WOLVERINE:
Relax me and tinman got this.
STORM:
Logan we work as a team.
A giant robot lands a half mile away and the earth shakes.
WOLVERINE:
Good luck with that!
Wolverine looks over to Colossus.
WOLVERINE:
Two words, bub. Fastball Special.
Colossus picks up Wolverine, spins around twice and throws Wolverine directly at the Sentinel Robot. Wolverine flies out the other side. Nightcrawler *BAMFS* into the air, catches Wolverine and *BAMFS* back on the ground. The Sentinel falls over.
CEREBRO:
Simulation terminated.
The scene morphs into a large, circular metal room.
WOLVERINE:
Hey Colossus, you throw like a girl.
COLOSSUS:
Cut me some slack Canuck, I pitch with my left!
Wolverine turns left out of the room while the rest of the X-Men turn right. Storm fallows Wolverine.
STORM:
Logan what was that?
WOLVERINE:
A danger room session.
STORM:
A defensive danger room session.
WOLVERINE:
Well the best defense is a good offense. Or is it the other way around?
STORM:
Logan,
WOLVERINE:
Look, if you dont like it you can punch and scratch Cyclops all you want, Im just the substitute.
Cyclops walks by the other hall.
WOLVERINE:
Speak of the devil.
Wolverine catches up with Cyclops leaving Storm behind. Cyclops has a small pack slung over one shoulder. He brushes past Logan.
WOLVERINE:
Hey, Scott, they were looking for you downstairs; you didn't show.
Hey, Scott, they were looking for you downstairs; you didn't show.
Cyclops stops and turns to face Wolverine.
CYCLOPS:
What do you care?
WOLVERINE:
Well for starters I had to cover your ass.
CYCLOPS:
I didnt ask you to,
WOLVERINE:
Youre right, the Professor did. I was just passing through and-
CYCLOPS:
So pass through Logan!
WOLVERINE:
Look
I know how you feel.
Cyclops stops and turns to face Wolverine.
CYCLOPS:
What do you care?
WOLVERINE:
Well for starters I had to cover your ass.
CYCLOPS:
I didnt ask you to,
WOLVERINE:
Youre right, the Professor did. I was just passing through and-
CYCLOPS:
So pass through Logan!
WOLVERINE:
Look
I know how you feel.
CYCLOPS:
Stop,
WOLVERINE:
When Jean died,
CYCLOPS:
I said stop! I hear her calling out
to me Logan! I see her surrounded by water screaming at me. Voices pleading me to come and help her.
to me Logan! I see her surrounded by water screaming at me. Voices pleading me to come and help her.
WOLVERINE:
Voices?
CYCLOPS:
Listen, last night I found this
WOLVERINE:
Looks like a bird.
CYCLOPS:
It's the phoenix Jean got after coming to this school
WOLVERINE:
Why did the Professor give her that?
CYCLOPS:
I don't know. A welcome maybe? Look I found it behind her picture frame this morning.
WOLVERINE:
So maybe you misplaced it?
CYCLOPS:
She was wearing it when she...
WOLVERINE:
Youre not going back there.
CYCLOPS:
Why do you care?
WOLVERINE:
The only thing you could find is her body.
CYCLOPS:
Then I'll atleast know she's really gone.
WOLVERINE:
I'm coming with you
CYCLOPS:
CYCLOPS:
No your not
XAVIER:
Scott,
CYCLOPS:
CYCLOPS:
Professor?
XAVIER:
I tried looking for her like you asked me.
CYCLOPS:
CYCLOPS:
And?
XAVIER:
XAVIER:
Get to Alkali now. Logan I want you and Ororo to go with him
CYCLOPS:
CYCLOPS:
Professor! I-
XAVIER:
XAVIER:
Scott, be prepared, there is something there, but I fear it's not Jean.
Continued...