An Attempt at a Batman Forever Trailer

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Basically, this is what my vision was for Batman Forever. In other words, what I wanted to see, the tone I wanted it to have, and a familiar deleted scene that should have been in the movie. You'll notice I darkened and desaturated some of the colors to give it a darker look.

It's actually my first ever attempt at a full trailer, so I'm sure there are flaws, but I live and I learn so go ahead and hit me with some critique.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=7DYI-dB7pas
 
Nice but it looks like a teaser trailer.
 
Nice but it looks like a teaser trailer.

Come to think of it, I actually thought I could start it where the bat starts flying in and that combined with the scenes after it could serve as a teaser trailer, but I'd rather show a little of Two-Face and Riddler.
 
Basically, this is what my vision was for Batman Forever. In other words, what I wanted to see, the tone I wanted it to have, and a familiar deleted scene that should have been in the movie. You'll notice I darkened and desaturated some of the colors to give it a darker look.

It's actually my first ever attempt at a full trailer, so I'm sure there are flaws, but I live and I learn so go ahead and hit me with some critique.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=7DYI-dB7pas

I like it, and I especially like what you've done with the bat at the end. However, the shot of Bruce and the bat is far too long for a trailer - it should be one or two seconds at most.

My number one recommendation is that you find some scenes and shots that aren't usually used. With Forever, there are a number of shots and scenes which turn up in every trailer and fan video. Every time. Since the movie is two hours long, and every shot is great to look at, there's no excuse for it.

I like it. I'm working on one of my own right now, actually.
 
Thank you. After further review, I see that the bat scene is a bit long. I was looking through all the deleted scenes and ended up using Alfred's and Two-Face's unused quotes. And of course the bat at the end. I have no idea why the giant bat scene wasn't in the movie. It added so much to his return to Batman. It just puts an iconic, emotional stamp on the whole thing. Thanks for the advice, looking for more.
 

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