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Breakout + Previous Work

TheDarkKnightBM

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Hello people of the SHH boards!

It's been a long time since I've logged in here.. lol.. I was last scene on the boards when I was hypin' my Batman Fan Film: Nothing To Fear, but time has passed and I've created over 10 films/ shorts and you can view them on my [url="http://www.youtube.com/profile?user=PhelpDogg]YouTube[/url] account. Some of the films I've made were: Superboy 1-3, Fat-Bat!, The Homeless, Goo, Anguish, A Day Without Sunlight, Hitman 1-3, Sell Me Your Soul.. and etc., you can get more information and what not on the YouTube account.

But in the meantime.. I'm making a film called BREAKOUT, which is about a man, James Reeves, who is accused of murder and armed robbery, the accuser is the mobster Steven Goreman and he did this because Reeves wanted out of the gang because he has a wife and is about to have a child but the mobster won't take it, and gets placed in Walberg Prison, where it's run by commissioner Emily Lane. Once he's in the hellhole, he plans on breaking out with the help of Chris Stewart, but the question is, can they do it and will they succeed? I'm on the 3rd rough draft of the script and hopefully this film will come out sometime during the summer. This is my 2nd major film project I've worked on and I hope it'll turn out how I imagine it to turn out. I've got the whole entire cast casted and all I have to do is get my ideas down on paper/ screen.. which is hard.

If anyone of you guys want to read the script so far, just PM me or post it in this thread but you'll be spoiled. (Ermm obviously lol.:whatever: ) Anywhoo, I bet your puzzled and kind of feeling weird right now because, yes, we ARE KIDS PLAYING ADULTS! Yeah, but just try not to imagine that kids are cops and criminals but we are 12 & 13 :dry:. Well, so, thats it for now.

Enjoy!

~William Phelps
www.philmz.ws
[email protected]
 
Welcome aboard! I love most of your work, how you've put it together and how you shot/cut/assembled it. I can specialy commend you on that "Hitman" short you did, specialy that last 5 seconds of it, you know what im refering to...;)
 
Welcome aboard! I love most of your work, how you've put it together and how you shot/cut/assembled it. I can specialy commend you on that "Hitman" short you did, specialy that last 5 seconds of it, you know what im refering to...;)
Thanks a lot Waveride! I forgot to mention that the BREAKOUT teaser is online.. it's nothing much but tells the storyline.

[YT]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PD_6bsTcHZ4[/YT]
 
Awesome Willy! I'm really looking foward to Breakout!
 
Here's a script sample of BREAKOUT so far (Two first opening sequences):

FADE IN

EXT. PRISON - CELL HOUSE - NIGHT

INT. PRISON HALLS

A GUARD walks down the hall, with his small black club in his right hand. Another guard is sitting at a desk that's towards the entrance of the prison and is reading a LIFE magazine. He looks at his watch, it reads 9:45 PM. He folds his magazine and takes off his hat and rubs his forehead with the top of his hand.

GUARD

Shifts over, gonna get myself some coffee.

GUARD

OK.

GUARD gets up and the other GUARD sits down and opens up the LIFE magazine and starts reading.

JAMES REEVES (V.O.)

June 14th, 11:45 PM. A Monday.

We pan through the halls until we get to a cell and the cell number reads: REEVES, JAMES: 4201. We zoom in, through the bars, and enter the cell.

INT. CELL

JAMES REEVES, a man who is accused of murder and armed robbery, is sitting on his bed, looking at the wall. He is tapping his foot on the ground.

JAMES REEVES (V.O.)

My name is James Reeves and how did I get placed into this hellhole? Did I commit murder? Armed robbery? Rape? No, I was accused of a crime.

JAMES REEVES takes out a red rubber ball and starts tossing it into the air.

JAMES REEVES (V.O.)

I've been here for a week and a half and I already want out. The cells are about 5x8 and I'm given a ****ty bed and sink.

JAMES REEVES throws the ball into the air and doesn't catch it, it rolls on the ground out of the cell and the GUARD'S foot stops the ball from rolling any further. He bends down and picks it up.

GUARD

Betta' be more careful Reeves.

JAMES REEVES stares at the GUARD with disgust. The GUARD smiles and starts throwing it up into the air and leaving the cell.

JAMES REEVES (V.O.)

Not to mention the guards are total *****es, but what do you expect in prison? It ain't a luxury.

GUARD (O.S.)

(DISTANT)

Lights out!

JAMES REEVES reaches up and turns off his small light and lays down on his bed and puts his hand behind his head. He falls into a deep sleep:

FADE TO

EXT. JEWELRY STORE - NIGHT - PAST

JAMES REEVES has a case of jewels and runs towards a blue TOYOTA van and puts it into the trunk. STEVEN GOREMAN, the mobster who runs the town and is untouchable, shoots at two guards and kills them with a shot to the head.

GOREMAN

Boys, lets go!

Three MALE THUGS jump into the van and a female THUG, MARY, walks up to GOREMAN.

GOREMAN

And girls.

MARY runs into the van as more GUARDS start running out of the jewelry store and start shooting at the van. GOREMAN gets into the passenger side of the car as JAMES REEVES gets into the drivers seat.

INT. CAR

JAMES REEVES starts up the car and steps on the gas pedal and drives out of the jewelry store parking lot.

GOREMAN

Haha!

All the gang members are smiling and laughing, but JAMES REEVES isn't happy at all. GOREMAN is still smiling as he nudges REEVES on the shoulder.

GOREMAN

What's wrong?! Haha! We got what we wanted, huh?

JAMES REEVES

No, not we, you guys. I told you guys that I want out of this gang!

GOREMAN

And that ain't gonna happen, once your in the gang you stay in the gang till the last day you live.

JAMES REEVES is silent.

EXT. JEWELRY STORE

POLICE CARS are parked everywhere in the jewelry store parking lot. COMMISSIONER EMILY LANE gets out of her car and walks towards an officer and the officer walks towards her.

EMILY LANE

(ANGRY)

You called for me?

OFFICER

Yeah--

EMILY LANE

For what? To tell me that they got away? You got to be ****ting me, this is the 4th time Goreman's gang got away.

OFFICER

I'm sorry commissioner--

EMILY LANE

-- Sorry ain't gonna cut it, what's your name?

OFFICER

Dan. Dan Brown.

EMILY LANE

Dan..

EMILY LANE rips off his badge.

EMILY LANE

You can kiss your badge goodbye.

EMILY LANE turns around and walks back towards her car.

OFFICER

Y-You can't!

EMILY LANE turns around.

EMILY LANE

I just did.

EMILY LANE shakes her head and opens her car door.

EMILY LANE

(SASSY/ MOCKING)

"I'm sorry commissioner." Jesus god.

LANE gets into her car and starts it up and leaves the jewelry store parking lot.
 
The script is completed! It's 80 pages. PM me if you want to read the script.. but you'll be spoiled. :P
 

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