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Hi, everybody! I'm Byrd Man, been a member since 06 and hang out mostly in the RPGs. This fanfic game from a potential RPG I tried to make but never picked up enough steam to go anywhere. So, I decided to make a fanfic out of it. I love westerns, I love superhero stories. So, now I take it all and blend it up. Will the results be awesome or sucky? Read, and find out. I've decided to tell the story through three characters. Three of my favorite DC characters. Batman, Flash, and Green Arrow. If I can continue with it, other DC characters will show up and make apperances. So without further ado, let's get on with it.

PS. I have taken some historical liberties with California and other parts of the west at the time. So, if you're a history buff. Don't flip out.

DC 1878

Prologue
1858

"Papa?" The little boy cried out with tears in his eyes.

In front of him, his mother and father laid in the dirt streets.
It had been a perfect night for the Wayne Family before this. Thomas Wayne, the wealthiest man in California, had taken his Mexican bride, Marta, and young son Bruce out to a lovely night at the theater. As the family walked towards they’re awaiting coach, a man with a revolver had taken the life of Thomas and Marta, leaving only nine year old Bruce weeping in the dirt.

He looked up, his eyes red, but his face emotionless. This was to be the last night of Bruce Wayne’s childhood.
 
Chapter 1

20 Years Later
Keystone City, Kansas

"Late again, Deputy Allen?" Sheriff Jason Garrick peered over his spectacles and across his desk at the blond haired man.

Barry Allen had been a deputy for all of two weeks. Of those two weeks, he had shown up to his post late five times so far.

"Sorry, sir. I woke up in plenty of time. I’m just…"

"Slow. I know." The sheriff said with a sigh.

Jason Garrick had been the sheriff of Keystone for fifteen years. Under his watch, Keystone had made it through some tough times. Lawlessness, the bloody border war that almost tore the town, along with Central City across the river, apart. While the only sign of his age was his graying temples, the stout man still held the same resolve he had when he was a young man.

"So, Deputy." Garrick said as he propped his feet on his desk.

"What shall I do about you being late, especially today of all days?"

It was the first of the month, and that meant it was time for prisoner transfers. Men who were wanted for crimes in other states were taken to stand trail for their crimes. This month, Sheriff Garrick had caught a real celebrity.

Ed Thawne, nicknamed The Professor because of his love of using big words and his knowledge on almost every subject, was famous through out the Midwest for his crimes. He had robbed banks in every state from Missouri to Arizona, cutting a path of death and destruction as he went. He was in the process of robbing Keystone’s bank, when the sheriff and his deputies had apprehended him. Naturally, Barry Allen was running late and missed the action, Thawne was caught, but he took down two deputies in the process.

"I know what I’ll do, Deputy Allen." He placed his feet off the desk and
looked Allen in the eye.

"I want you to personally escort Ed Thawne to Arizona."

"M-me, sir?"

Garrick nodded. "Yes. Don’t worry, son. I know you’re new, but he’ll be shackled and you’ll have a shotgun trained on him at all times. You’re gonna escort him by train to Arizona. The only problem that I see is that the train don’t run out all the way to the prison in Allendale. You’re gonna have to get a couple of horses and escort him all the way up there."

"But…umm, Sheriff….why don’t we just have a trial and hang him here? Iron Heights ain’t done yet, but they have the gallows."

Garrick shakes his head at his young deputy. "No can do, son. Arizona was where his mess started, and that’s where he’ll finish it. They’re gonna hang him high."

Barry Allen can only nod at his boss, he’s only been a deputy for two weeks, and now he’s going to escort one of the most dangerous men in America across multiple state lines to the gallows.


Indian Territory, Oklahoma

"Hit him again." The army lieutenant says to his three troops.

"With pleasure, sir." The sergeant grins as he lays another punch into the Indian.

The Indian was unusual to say the least, his skin was red as the rest of his tribe, but his hair was as blond as corn silk. Somewhere down the line, he had a white relative.

The three army men take turns beating on the poor man until his face is swollen and bruised, and his ribs are broken.

"That’s enough, boys." The lieutenant says as he mounts his horse and motions his men to follow.

"That’ll teach that dirty injun to try to steal our food." One of the sergeants says as the four men ride away, leaving the Indian on the plains, broken and bruised.

*********​

<You act foolishly, young one.> The tribal chief said to the young man who walked beside him in the cold morning air.

<What am I to do?> The blonde haired Indian protested to his chief. The cuts and bruises on his face

<I watch day after day as our people go hungry. Fever and sickness rage throughout our tribe, yet the white men you were so eager to make a treaty with do nothing to help us. We need food, we need medicine.>

<And we will have those.> The chief reassures the brave.

<The white men have promised us this. We must keep true to the sacred bond we made with them.>

The brave only shakes his head in disgust.

<These white men respect nothing. These treaties you so foolishly sign push us farther and farther away from our homes, until we are forced to march to this god forsaken land. How much longer until the white men take this land from us as well? Where will we have to go? Farther West? This country was our land, our people loved it, now these white devils force us off of it, inch by inch. I can no longer stand for this.>

The chief says something to the brave in an effort to calm him down, but it falls on deaf ears. He is already gone.


Gotham City, California

"Master Wayne, we&#8217;ve arrived." The brown skinned man tugged at his companion sleeping as he sat next to him in the stagecoach.

He was simply known as Alvarez, born in Spain, he had journeyed to America and ended up in the employment of railroad magnate Thomas Wayne. That had been almost thirty years ago, almost thirty years ago that he made the promise to Thomas to take care of what was dearest to him.

"Master Wayne."

The young, dark haired man stirred slightly as the coach bounced and shook. While he appeared to be asleep, Bruce Wayne was wide-awake. For ten years, he had been awaiting this day.

When his father moved here from the east, Gotham had been known as Las Sepulcher, a small town in between San Diego and Mexico. Thomas brought the railroad with him. With the railroad and California officially given to America, the town boomed and was Americanized with the name of Gotham.

Thomas took a young Mexican girl as a bride and built a sprawling house on a ridge overlooking the booming city and the ocean. Wayne Manor, as it was named, was finished just in time for the couple to welcome a son into the world, Bruce Tomas Wayne.

With the prosperity Gotham was facing, the ever-emerging underbelly was beginning to show. Lawlessness and corruption ran wild in the town. The town&#8217;s only source of law, Marshall Loeb, almost always looked the other way for a price.

The night the Waynes were gunned down was just viewed as another day in the harsh city. Nobody shed a tear for the dead husband and wife, except one little boy and an old Spaniard. That night, as his parents blood ran through the dirt, quickly turning it into mud, Bruce swore a vow on their lifeless bodies, one he would carry out no matter what.

"Master Wayne. Are you ready?"

Bruce quietly nods as the coach door swings open.

"I&#8217;ve been ready since I was nine."
 
Looks pretty good so far. Love me some westerns too, so I'm definately going to keep an eye out for this. :woot:

One thing I noticed--maybe a slight nitpick, but it did bug me while reading. During the prologue, you have:

It had been a perfect night for the Wayne Family before this. Thomas Wayne, the wealthiest man in California, had taken his Mexican bride, Marta, and young son Bruce out to a lovely night at the theater.

Is "Mexican" really necessary in her description? The name "Marta" can be enough for this instance to at least hint that she's not the anglo-saxon version we're used to--plus it works a lot better in your first chapter. I would just have it be, "his bride, Marta."

You don't have to change it if you don't want to--I want to actually make a living writing, so I tend to notice these things.

But again, good job--can't wait to read more. :woot:
 
I left Mexican in there, cause not everyone is as sharp as you are, JRK.
 
I'm not yer slave, ya varmit! :cmad:

Not to mention, that's impossible. Even for a mod.
 
But if they don't get it in the prologue, they'll get it in the first chapter.

I may not be studying to write like some of you? But I fail to see how an adjective, one word, is a flaw in that sentence, paragraph, story, etc.

Perhaps he wanted to make it known she was Mexican, because in that timeline is around when Mexico would still have ties to Spain after its independence. Therefore it would make even more sense when we find out that Bruce spent 20 years in Spain?
 
I think "Mexican" is needed just because some people might think, "Oh, it's a typo. He forgot the 'h.'"
 
Byrd, you gotta make this have a poll so the people can vote.
 
Oh, trusty. You and your aquatic humor. :)
 
Ya'll keep *****ing like this, I'm calling eveyone in my story a Mexican!
 
Digging it so far. I especially look forward to seeing more with Barry Allen.

And I hate you.
 
Chapter 2

Keystone City, Kansas

"You better not get yourself killed." The red hair woman said as she looked up at Barry Allen. Her name was Iris West.

"Don’t worry about me, Miss Iris." Barry said as he prepared to mount his horse.

"Pa’s already gave you consent for my hand, it’d be a shame for you to go and do something stupid."

Barry coolly smiled as he swung his leg up over his saddle and mounted his horse.

"Like I said, ma’am. I’ll be safe."

As Iris looked up at her man, a young boy runs up next to her with wild eyes.

"Hey, Barry! You shoot anyone today?!" He said with excitement.

"Not today, Wally. But the day ain’t over yet." He winked at his fiancée’s nephew.

"Go on, Wally. I’m sure your ma has got some chores that needs to be done."

As Wally runs off back towards the house, Iris looks back up at Barry, a worried look on her face.

"Thawne is a dangerous man."

"He’ll be chained and I’ll have the gun, not much a man can do without a gun."

"Just come back in one piece. I don’t want to look like a fool, marrying a corpse and all."

Barry tips his hat as he squeezes the horses’ sides with his legs, the horse snorts and trots off towards town.

**************​

"Perhaps a procurement of transportation might be a bit too much to ask."

Ed Thawne remarked as the deputies marched him down the streets of Keystone City. His bowler was pulled back on his head, and his black suit hang loose over his thin body.

"A scoundrel like you, you’re lucky we don’t shoot you dead right now."
Sheriff Garrick remarked as he led the party towards the train station.

"Which one of you gentlemen will be the lucky one that takes me to the gallows?" Thawne asks politely as he and the deputies continued their march.

"That’ll be me." Barry says as he keeps the shotgun in his hands pointed at Thawne’s back.

"Oh, well. A strapping gentleman like yourself should have no trouble delivering me to my final rendezvous with judgment."

The rest of the deputies are silent as they march him on. In five minutes time, they reach the train station and chain Thawne to a seat.

"Don’t worry, Allen." Garrick says as he overlooks his young deputy.

"You’ll be gone, about a week at the most. You should have two horses waiting for you once you two get to Arizona. The prison is about thirty miles south of the station."

Barry nods silently as Garrick speaks.

"One piece of advice, son." Garrick says as he puts a hand on shoulder of the deputy.

"Don’t talk too much to Thawne, his tongue is about as dangerous as a gun in his hands."

"Yes, sir." Barry says, nodding in agreement.

Garrick and the rest of the deputies watch as Barry Allen and Thawne’s train pulls out of the station, heading west towards Arizona.
Barry keeps his shotgun on Thawne as the train picks up speed.

"Hi." Thawne says as he stares at Barry sitting across the compartment from him.

Barry Allen didn’t say anything back. To him, the sooner the job got done, the sooner he could come home. Even though they were only a few miles out of Keystone, home never seemed so far away to Barry.


Indian Territory, Oklahoma

The wild mustang ran hard across the plains, galloping hard over the hard ground. The blond haired brave on its back, holding onto the horse’s main as it ran. An ominous orange light glows over the distant horizon.

<No.> was all he could say as he rode over the ridge.

The village he had left just hours earlier was covered in flames, the ground had turned black from the ash, all the small huts had burned to the ground. But the worst sight was at the center of the village.

Every man, woman, and child had been murdered and placed in a massive heap.

With his hair blowing in the ash filled wind, tears started to flow freely from the brave’s face. They were all gone, and he knew who had done it.
His eyes fell on one of the dead faces. The chief, with a bullet hole in his head, looked back lifelessly at him from edge of the village.

<Father.>

He turned his horse away from the carnage. Now was not the time for grieving.

He kicked his horse hard and held on as they galloped north towards the Army fort.

He could grieve later. Now was the time for war.


Arizona

"They’re gonna hang me in the morning, before the night is done." Sang Ed Thawne as he flopped on his horse with his hands tied together.

"They’re gonna hang me in the morning, and I’ll never see the sun."

Barry Allen rode behind him with his shotgun still trained on Thawne’s back.

They had been riding through the barren desert for two hours now. Thawne had been singing that song since they stepped off the train.

"So, Barry." Thawne said as he finally stopped his singing.

"You got someone you care about back in Kansas?"

Barry remained silent as he kept on riding.

"Come on, nobody? I figure a farm boy like you would be knee deep in farmer’s daughters. Don’t tell me you’re one of those Nancy Boys who like to suck on-."

"Not that it’s any business of yours, but yes. I have someone. And yes, she’s a farmer’s daughter."

"That’s real sweet."

Thawne scratched at his cuffs as they rode.

"Got any kids?"

"……No, now go on and shut your mouth before I shut it for you." Barry said as he squeezed his horse with his legs, the horse broke out in a trot and he and Thawne were side be side.

"So, no kids. Well that’s good. Because if you had a son or a daughter, I’d feel really bad about this!" Thawne yelled as he planted his elbow into Barry’s shoulders.

Barry tilted on his saddle. Desperately trying to hold on, he forgot about the shotgun in his hands.

BLAM!

Both his and Thawne’s horse reared and bucked the two men off. They fell to the ground hard with the shotgun between them.

"You son of a-" That was all Barry could get out before Thawne beat him to the gun.

"Sorry, Barry. You’re just too slow."

Thawne leveled the shotgun at him and squeezed the trigger.

BLAM!

The shotgun pellets tore through his chest, leaving Barry slumped on the desert ground, blood pouring out into the sand.

"Thanks for the ride, son. I think I can take it from here." Thawne said as he stepped over Barry and headed towards the spooked horses with the shotgun in hand.

"They’re gonna hang me in the morning, before the night is done. They’re gonna hang me in the morning and I’ll never see the sun."

Barry Allen could only lay on the ground and look up as the life started to leave his body.
 
awsome story. keep up the good work. are we going to see Wonder Woman and Superman?
 
I've got ideas for both, but they won't show up anytime soon.
 
Chapter 3

Gotham City, California

"Master Wayne." Alvarez whispered in the darkness of the cave.

Unbeknownst to Thomas Wayne when he built it, Wayne Manor sat on top of a massive underground cave. Bruce had found that out the hard way when he was eight.

Playing on the beach one summer day, Bruce had discovered the cave’s opening while collecting seashells. Much to his dismay, he had awoken the cave’s residents, all two thousand of them. Bats flew out of the cave, paralyzing Bruce with fear as they passed over him into the light.

His father had told him that those bats were nothing to be afraid of, that they were more scared of him than anything. But, even twenty-one years later, as he stood inside the very cave, that day had stayed with him. In his journeys throughout the world, every teacher he studied under, that day with the bats always lingered in the back of his mind.

Tonight was the night he took that fear and used it as a weapon.

"Master Wayne?" Alvarez spoke again, in his arms was a bundle of clothing.

Bruce stood next to a horse in the darkness. The horse was massive, a Clydesdale that was as black as midnight and stood at least eighteen hands high. The horse alone was awe-inspiring.

"Master Wayne?" Alvarez spoke once more, this time snapping Bruce out of his thoughts.

"Yes?"

"It is ready." Alvarez carried the bundle of clothes heavily, almost like a great weight was on them, as he handed them over to his master.

"Thank you."

Bruce stared down at the clothing, he knew that tonight was the night.


Arizona

RAWK!

A buzzard flew low over the desert, it could smell death in the air, and it was almost time for him to feed.

Unfortunately for Barry Allen, the smell of death was coming from him.

"Iris." He whispered softly as he stared up at the sky, his blood slowly trickling into the sand.

"I’m sorry, ma’am, but looks like you’re gonna have to marry a corpse." He snickered at that thought.

He wasn’t sure how long it had been since Thawne had shot him, but the pain in his chest had given way to slow spreading numbness. It was already moving to his brain, as hallucinations and fever started to set in on him.

"Glory glory hallelujah, glory glory hallelujah, his truth is marching on." He weakly sang.

The end was almost here, he could feel it.

He had to be hallucinating now, he could see a shadow blot out the sun and a face above him. It was the face of an old Indian, his face wrinkled and red.

"THis truth is marching on."

Barry Allen’s eyes rolled into the back of his head as he blacked out. The Indian above him grabbed his ankles and started pulling him in the sand.
Off in the distance, storm clouds loom.

Indian Territory, Oklahoma

He had crushed and mashed up grass all day, but in the end it was well worth the effort.

The grass had been made into a green paste. Green was his tribe’s color. Now he was all that was left of the tribe, and he would make damn sure that the tribe’s color would be the last thing these white men saw.

Painstakingly, he had used to paste to turn each and every one of his arrows green, now all that remained was his face.

He rose out of the grass, his face turned emerald by the war paint. He had managed to save the headdress of his father, and that’s what he wore with his blonde hair tied up inside of it.

With green face and green arrows. He called for his horse.

Arizona

Smoke and incense filled the shaman’s tent. He danced around a fire, chanting for the white man on his deathbed.

"Hemmotonya!" He chanted as he circled Barry Allen’s dying body.
Outside the tent, rain started to pour down and thunder rolled.

"Hemmotonya! Hemmotonya!"

The shaman had done many healings in his time on this earth, but this would be the hardest one he had ever done.

Thunder rolls again outside the tent, the shaman’s horse whines and bucks in fright.

"Hemmotonya! Hemmotonya!" his hands now placed on Allen’s chest, he chants and pumps, trying his best to heal the dying man.

"Hemmotonya!"

The shaman’s horse crashes into the tent, but the shaman doesn’t look up. He’s too focused on the dying man.

"Hemmotonya! Hemmotonya!"

He’s so focused on Barry Allen, he doesn’t notice his hair rising from the static electricity.

KRAKOOM!

Lightning tears through the tent, blowing the shaman away and striking Barry Allen and the shaman’s horse.

Rain starts to pour into the tent as the shaman looks at Barry Allen’s body, smoke rises off of it, but he lets out a cough and sputters.

Somehow, some way, Barry Allen still lives.

Gotham City, California

Nighttime in Gotham meant one thing, The Iceberg Club was hopping.
On the outside, The Iceberg Club appears to be a social club Gotham’s social elite meet and share drinks. But only few really know what goes inside of it.

Run by would be socialite Oswald Cobblepot, the Iceberg was in reality an opium den where Cobblepot has trafficked in Asian children to service his clients, some girl as young as nine years old.

While Loeb had every right to shut the place down, he choses not to. It made sense to him, seeing as how Cobblepot paid him a hundred dollars a month to look the other way.

Loeb wouldn’t do anything to stop Cobblepot’s business. But for Bruce Wayne, it was a start.

"Password?!" The bouncer standing outside the door rudely says through the slot.

WHAM!

A fist drives through the wooden door and grabs the bouncer by the collar.

"Ahh!" He screams as the hand slams him hard against the door.

A figure kicks down the door and moves through the shadows into the dimly lit opium den.

"Did you hear that?" One man says to the man next to him as he lays on the den’s cushioned floor, sucking on a pipe full of opium.

"I don’t-" Is all his friend can manage to get out, as he’s grabbed into the darkness.

"Oh god!" The man screams as he’s drug into the darkness as well.

Oswald Cobblepot sits up and pushes the young Asian girls off of him. Something is going wrong in his establishment.

He pulls out a revolver just as a hand appears out of the darkness and grabs it.

"Whaaa!" He yells, a whip comes out of the darkness and grabs him by the throat.

The figure emerges from the shadows, the stitches on his leather cape and cowl are illuminated by the lamps of the den, his pointy ears resembling the horns of the devil.

"Wha?" Cobblepot croaks as the whip tightens around his neck.
The masked man pulls him closer, until he can smell the fish on Cobblepot’s breath.

"I’m Batman."
 

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