Don't be harsh

[The Evolutionist]

I really like the way you portrayed the impact a murder can have on someone who was close to the victim, and the choice to keep it in B+W was a very good one.

The main problem comes in the way you move the camera. Sometimes it's very fluid, other times it's really sudden. This can work out in a longer piece, but the shorter the film, the more consitency needed.

Overall, it's a very good film, especially for a first timer.

 

[Hades]

That guy has dreamy hair.

I wish my hair was that thick and lucious.

What do you use

 

[Wolfwood]

Visually it was pretty good, aside from a few extremely quick cuts.

The main guy kind of looked like Val Kilmer and Collin Farrell mushed together.

 

[black_dust]

Visually is looks great, B+w is always a good move for dramas

I thought the credits should have been at the end tho, a mention to who directs it is fine but i hate whole casts at the start of a film.
When he "Shoots" or what ever he does to that guy it went WAY! to fast you should have at least had about more there not just a WOOSH and he is sleeping next to a bog brush....

Good effort tho

 

[jaguarr]

Hamfisted:(ham-fist-ed)-Where one would roll up a piece of ham around his fist and shove it up the butt.

Yeah....not the imagery I was going for with that term. Google is apparently not your friend.

jag

 

[muertevilla]

i like the part where the guy is practicing his sweet kung fu reverse high kick and wooden katana skills.

 

[Road Warrior]

That guy has dreamy hair.

I wish my hair was that thick and lucious.

What do you use

LMFAO! I will send this comment to the actor. t:

 

[Road Warrior]

I really like the way you portrayed the impact a murder can have on someone who was close to the victim, and the choice to keep it in B+W was a very good one.

The main problem comes in the way you move the camera. Sometimes it's very fluid, other times it's really sudden. This can work out in a longer piece, but the shorter the film, the more consitency needed.

Overall, it's a very good film, especially for a first timer.

Thanks for the compliment! I wasn't very satisified with the finished product because it was supposed to be a lot longer! Unforunately I made too many mistakes with the schedules and finding good locations! But, like I said before..."live and learn."

 

[Wilhelm-Scream]

That would've been a lot cooler if it was the same story but directed by David Lynch.
Also, the music had me cracking up within 4 notes. lol

 

[Road Warrior]

Also, the music had me cracking up within 4 notes. lol

Temp music tends to suck, but I didn't have the time or budget to get a composer!

 

[Catman]

Also, the music had me cracking up within 4 notes. lol

I see that you bashed him in two threads! Nice

 

[Wilhelm-Scream]

I see that you bashed him in two threads! Nice

Well, the music wasn't entirely his fault 'cause he can't do music on his own.
But still, if he'd held up a mic while beating on some boxes and ting-tanging on some glasses it would've at least been more interesting.

 

[Deep Thinkin'!]

My first film:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dljwYQAMuHQ

It's a piece of crap! But, you know what they say..."live and learn."

Eh, not bad for your first try.

Hope you don't mind if I critique you... just a little advice... One thing I've noticed about movies is that you need to keep the camera as still as possible. Also, with home videos there is a weird background noise, so if possible try and use a microphone to get rid of that.

The acting was pretty good, but I didn't really know what was going on. All I knew was that some guy was yelling "No!" and talking to a woman or something. Then he killed somebody...

But good first try. If my words sounded harsh, it was not intended... it's just in my nature to critique.

 

[Wilhelm-Scream]

Eh, not bad for your first try.

Hope you don't mind if I critique you... just a little advice... One thing I've noticed about movies is that you need to keep the camera as still as possible. Also, with home videos there is a weird background noise, so if possible try and use a microphone to get rid of that.

The acting was pretty good, but I didn't really know what was going on. All I knew was that some guy was yelling "No!" and talking to a woman or something. Then he killed somebody...

But good first try. If my words sounded harsh, it was not intended... it's just in my nature to critique.

Threadkiller!

 

[Catman]

But still, if he'd held up a mic while beating on some boxes and ting-tanging on some glasses it would've at least been more interesting.

Stomp would have sued him.

 

[Deep Thinkin'!]

Threadkiller!

I love you too. :heart: :meow:

 

[Hades]

Oh, Wilhelm.

 

[Catman]

I love you too. :heart: :meow:

We all love him!

 

[Deep Thinkin'!]

We all love him!

He's so mean he's cute! :meow:

I just want to pinch his cheeks! :heart:

 

[Wilhelm-Scream]

He's so mean he's cute! :meow:

I just want to pinch his cheeks! :heart:

I'm not going to PM you any pics of my ass.
I'm plenty popular already.

 

[Catman]

I'm not going to PM you any pics of my ass.

I'm sure he'll enjoy that!

 

[Ken Kutagari]

Cool!

You and JAL should make a movie sometime

 

[Deep Thinkin'!]

I'm not going to PM you any pics of my ass.
I'm plenty popular already.

Oh darnit...

I was just being nice originally. I had only meant well for Road Warrior because I myself hope to go into movie making. Whether he accepted my advice or not was his choice. I was merely expressing my opinion. If you have a problem with that, feel free to bite me.

 

[Catman]

Cool!

You and JAL should make a movie sometime

HEY...I wouldn't mind watching a porno starring Jessica Alba!

 

[Ken Kutagari]

Until you find out she has a penis