Hell on Earth

[Hugebear]

Hey Comicboy, nice to see your here.

 

[Kevin]

I never leave.

 

[Hugebear]

I'm jotting all of this down. I'm going to put it in script form and send it to Jerry Bruckheimer and get rich off all of you

Glad you think its good.

 

[Kevin]

Actually, I wasn't even sure what he meant.

Also, I've considered Hell on Earth since EMT brought it up.

 

[enterthemadness]

Part 11

FRANK: Aren't we still riding in the car?

ALEXIS: Not with all that blood!

FRANK: We won't be on foot. We'll be much safer in the car.

ALEXIS: True, but like I just said, there's blood everywhere inside.

FRANK: Ok.

EXT. DOWNTOWN CITY -- NIGHT

Downtown is deserted. Cars are either parked or crashed into eachother or something else.

EXT. DOWNTOWN CITY -- SIDEWALK

Frank and Alexis walk on the sidewalk.

ALEXIS: Well, we know the city is having the same problem we just escaped from.

FRANK: Do you think it's just here...or all over?

ALEXIS: The county, state, or country?

FRANK: Country?

ALEXIS: If it isn't, it will be sooner or later.

FRANK: Will? Maybe the infection isn't country wide?

ALEXIS: It could spread from here or spread from another infected area.

A zombie crawls out of a bush and stands up.

ALEXIS(CONT'D): Wonder if I'm a good shot?

She aims the shotgun at the zombie and fires. The zombie head explodes! Blood and brain matter land on the sidewalk and street.

FRANK: I say you are.

ALEXIS: How far is the nearest police station?

FRANK: About...two blocks from here.

ALEXIS: How you injure the arm?

FRANK: Landed on a pitchfork at David's farm.

ALEXIS: I assume he saved you afterwards?

FRANK: Yes, he did. He made a tough choice. Let his mom eat me...or kill her.

ALEXIS: That takes some guts to do.

FRANK: Also takes some to kill yourself from not turning into one of them.

ALEXIS: Not in my opinion. It's either kill yourself after you've been bitten or become one of those things. Not a hard choice to make.

Frank looks around.

FRANK: It's too quiet here. No way downtown is like this so soon and so few of those things here.

 

[Kevin]

Couldn't wait until monday?

Anyway, Good! Alexis is badass.t:

By the By, I put an index on the first page.

 

[Hugebear]

Yes Good.
FRANK: Country?

 

[Hugebear]

By the By, I put an index on the first page.

Nice job on the index, Comicboy.
The title looks good there.

 

[Kevin]

I don't know why I didn't think of putting it there in the first place.

 

[Hugebear]

Yeah, but thats ok.

 

[enterthemadness]

Couldn't wait until monday?

Anyway, Good! Alexis is badass.t:

By the By, I put an index on the first page.

I had time this morning.

Well, she had the potential to become a badass. She shows up with a machete(sp?) and is willing to kill David when she finds out he is turning. Frank rather not kill unless he has to and David was kind of a wussy. He showed flashes of guts....but I couldn't see him becoming a rambo type person.

 

[Hugebear]

Should she become a badass?

 

[Kevin]

your choice

 

[enterthemadness]

Well, she has the potential. She doesn't have to. If it came to her or Frank...I go with her being the badass. But the beauty of this...is that we can work together as a team to decide who should become a badass.

 

[Hugebear]

I'd like to have this character discussion with you guys. I want to know what you guys think about the characters?

 

[Kevin]

What do you mean?

 

[Hugebear]

I mean Frank is the main character right? Should she be a badass?

 

[Hugebear]

Well, she has the potential. She doesn't have to. If it came to her or Frank...I go with her being the badass. But the beauty of this...is that we can work together as a team to decide who should become a badass.

Yes as a team we should decide. This time, I thought we could discuss the characters.

 

[Kevin]

Hmm. I would say Frank is. The way I'm writing it, I try to tell the story from his POV and how it's affecting him. And Alexis? How do you see her?

 

[enterthemadness]

Yeah, I'm sure we can all decide on that Frank is the main character in this story.

What should we do about Alexis? Should any of these two (her and Frank) become a badass? Should we introduce more characters in the city?

 

[Hugebear]

I see her as wanting to be a badass.

 

[Kevin]

I do think we should introduce more characters down the line. And for that matter, do we even know where this story is going?

And I wrote Alexis tough. She's the "Get things done/Hit now, question later" Type of girl, but doesn't always use her head. That's why Frank's there, to keep her cool headed.\

Also, should she be younger?

 

[Hugebear]

I don't know what to make of Frank. Is he a wuss?
I thought he would be a little tough too. But if she is tougher then that makes him look bad and less interesting.

 

[Hugebear]

lol, its interesting to hear your thoughts on them, even on David. I don't think any one of us know where the story is going, but we can't spoil it for the readers.

 

[Kevin]

Really? I honestly think something is happening with Frank. I put him in my shoes, I wouldn't wanna kill until I came to the point of snapping. And if no one's noticed...

Spoiler

Frank's been talking to himself alot. Since the begining, he's been talking to himself, and now it's to the point where he's arguing with himself.