Yeah know what Dude...? Have some more confidence in yourself, you don't seem to be very positive about your work. To the point that you seem like your not able to finish your projects. Just write until your fingers bleed and love doing it. Don't worry if other's like it while your writing, if you do then you'll second guess yourself too much and never get anything done.
Just be confident and your work will probably be even better then you think.
Also... good work on this script, good charcterzation. Finish it though.