Hey guys these are my stories about a place called Nicole City, Here's the first chapter of the first story which will (hopefully) become a film someday. Also see: http://www.superherohype.com/forums/showthread.php?t=227603 "The Body collector" By WeaponZ2 http://www.superherohype.com/forums/showthread.php?t=226817 "Vintage" Another fan fic by Karem-Knight/Tom Ebbs/ ME! http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v...rent=NicoleCity.gif&refPage=&imgAnch=imgAnch1 CORRUPTION By Tom Ebbs/ Karem-Knight PrologueWelcome to Niecole the city wheres its hard to be a bad person. Private Detective Claude Downing was possibly the best detective in Nicole city. He had defeated a few of Nicole citys worst criminals, Now he was on his biggest case yet Don Franco Zano of the Zano family. Claude had been troubled investigating Zanos drug trafficking with who he had a partner more powerful then him (Zano), Until a snitch from Zanos family told Claude which Harbour and where. Nicole City 11.00pm December 2005. Claude arrived at Portland Harbour, Pier 23 the scrawny man said in a weasel like voice, He walked in the sewer like smell of the area. Homeless people and corpses of their friends were at the place. Claude held tightly to his revolver, until he reached the pier, slowly making the door do a screech heard around the area, This place is the centre or Predators blood. Claude thought to himself, He had his flashlight looking for anything new, taking a few pictures with his camera. Claude then accidentally knocked over a crate on the label with the word Charon, Claude took a photo then put his camera down thrusting to open the crate. Theres nothing there. said a through Italian accent Claude put his flash light to wear he heard it from, he saw none other then Don Zano You .. Claude said gritting his teeth, You wouldnt expect that I would find out of your preaching to my job, my good will, MY LIVILY HOOOD! Zano said with a angered face turning into a grin, Two built men stand next to Zano Boys I think our friend would like to see a closer look of our nice package, show him a fresh one. The one man grabs Claude the other Opens the crate. THEYLL FIND ME ZANO Claude shouted in desperation SOMEONE WILL GET YOU FOR THIS ONE DAY! The man stuffs Claudes head into the charon. The bodyguard screamed as he saw his hand burnt, the other takes out Claudes head to reveal a burnt skull with red eyes and dissolved tounge and hair which once was gelled back scruffier, The Bodyguard let go and let Claudes body lay down with a huge thump. Lets go, Zano said But Boss said the bodyguard holding on to his burnt arm, Zano took out a revolver and shot the bodyguards chest twice. "Lets go".