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Entry A
The Origin of Hyper
Professional wrestler James Hypeton had it all: a million dollar salary, a happy marriage to a trophy wife, and a young daughter he would kill for. But his life took a tragic turn when he began to feel inferior to other wrestlers and started taking steroids.
As a result, he began to neglect his family and friends and spend all his time finding new ways to become stronger. One night, under the influence of numerous drugs, he killed his wife and daughter, and he was strong enough to do it with his bare hands.
Once sober, the realization of what he had done was so traumatic that it caused his mind to create a separate personality, one that believed he was a superhero. To this end, he modified his wrestling costume to look more heroic, pumped himself full of steroids to gain super strength, and stole a pair of untested rocket boots from a science lab to simulate flight. Now, using the name Hyper, he patrols SHH City, defeating evil wherever he sees it. Since he has no memory of his origin, he doesn't know his own strength and often kills criminals by accident. This has led the police to erroneously believe that he is a murderous vigilante, and they are always trying to catch him in the act. They have no idea that he is a misunderstood soul with a tragic past he doesn't remember.
Entry B
HYPER!
Alarm clock rings, Henry sits up from bed and hits it with his hand. He tried to get out of bed but fell right back down into his bed and the clock began to ring again, again he hit it.
Henry brushing his teeth when he notices some hair growing on his face, he spits out the toothpaste and opens the medicine cabinet and pulls out a razor and shaving cream. He sets them down and washes off his toothbrush with water from the tap. He put the toothbrush back up in the medicine cabinet along with the toothpaste. He filled a glass up with water and threw the water into his mouth and began to move it around and then he spat it out. He then opened his hand and with the other squirted some shaving cream onto his hand and began to smear it across his face where the hair had been growing. He washed off the hand with the shaving cream and picked up the razor, Henry gasped then began to shave.
Henry's hamster, Sarah came out of her nest to get some food when Henry screamed. She stood up to see what happened. Henry came running out of the washroom and ran towards the couch and leapt onto it, grasping his cheek in pain. Sarah began to groom herself. Henry got up from the couch and there was a cut along his cheek. He looked at Sarah.
Laugh it up, Sarah. Laugh it up - Henry
Henry was about to walk back into the washroom when someone knocked on the door. Henry jumped in fright and looked around back-and-forth between to front door to the washroom, he gasped and quickly sped towards the door but on his way picked up a scarf and wrapped it around his face. Henry opened the door and it was his landlord, Rick.
Rick looked at Henry in disgust and then revolved his eyes around Henry's apartment.
...how are you, Rick - Henry
Huh... you don't sound so surprised to see me, Henry. Nice to see you've converted - Rick
Henry looked down at his scarf then laughed a bit but stopped as he noticed Rick's face.
...nice tie there, Rick - Henry
Don't try to play with me, Henry. Where's my rent? - Rick
I told you I needed more time to get it - Henry
Rick ranted on but then Henry noticed his neighbor across the hall, Dan placing a mat outside the door as he quickly looked at Henry and winked. Henry tried to tell him with his eyes not to do that. Rick noticed Henry doing so. He turned around and there was nothing there but a mat outside the neighbor's door. He looked back at Henry.
What's wrong with you? - Rick
Henry studdered to find words.
I guess I played to much 'World of Warcraft' last night, I totally pwned that noob - Henry
Rick pointed at Henry and then walked away and Henry gave him the finger behind his back. While Rick was walking he slipped up on the mat that Dan placed outside the door. Henry laughed as Dan rose to his feet and quickly stared at Dan's door in anger then walked away.
Henry sat down at his desk and opened a file on the computer and immediately got an E-Mail. He clicked on it and it read:
Late again, Henry? - Amy's E-Mail
Henry peered around the corner to see he was about to wave but then came back towards the computer and began to type. Amy recieved an E-Mail from Henry.
Hey, Amy. 'Landlord can be a real pain sometimes... actually, let me rephrase that... MOST OF THE TIME!!! - Henry's E-Mail
Amy laughed and began to type.
LOL! Yeah, Rick can sure be a pain in the ass at times. Anyways, would you and Dan like to come out tonight with me and Lisa? - Amy's E-Mail
Henry was stunned and had his head fall down on the keyboard and he accidently hit 'Send'. He sat up and tried to stop it but the E-Mail was already sent. Amy got the response which read:
gtyhfgtyhfgtyhff - Henry's E-Mail
Henry came over to her desk.
Did Dan write this? - Amy
Henry smiled.
Yes; me and Dan will go out with you and Lisa - Henry
Good, here's my number and just call when you want to know when and where we'll meet - Amy
Neat-O - Henry
Henry knocked on Dan's door and gasped and put his back up against the wall as he knew he would have to wait a while. Dan finally opened the door and Henry looked at Dan as he got up from against the wall.
What? I'm trying to beat a noob on 'Runescape' - Dan
Henry walked into Dan's apartment and walked into the living room and sat down on the couch as Dan followed.
You feel like taking a break and getting out of this hell-hole tonight, Dan? - Henry
No, I'm waiting for news on the new 'Dark Knight' trailer! - Dan
Havn't you seen enough from the first trailer? - Henry
Well... this one is supposed to have Two-Face - Dan
I doubt it - Henry
Shut up, Henry - Dan
Why don't you? - Henry
"Why don't you?" - Dan
Shut up, Dan - Henry
Dan and Henry gasped.
I'm sorry, man - Dan
Me too, Dan - Henry
Dan and Henry shook hands and sat down on the couch.
So... where are we going? - Dan
I don't know, havn't called Lisa or Amy yet - Henry
Wait, Lisa's going? - Dan
Yeah 'Lover-Boy', she is - Henry
SWEET HELL! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME THAT IN THE FIRST PLACE?! NOW I'M NEVER GOING - Dan
Ahh, come on, Dan. You might have a chance to get back together with her again - Henry
Dan stared blankly at Henry and then got up and sat down at the computer.
Henry got up and stood beside Dan.
Come on, Dan. Think about it - Henry
Dan played 'The Dark Knight' trailer and Henry was about to say something else but then pulled up a chair and sat down next to Dan as he stared at the screen as the trailer played, his jaw dropped down as the trailer began.
When is this movie coming out? - Henry
Entry A
The Origin of Hyper
Professional wrestler James Hypeton had it all: a million dollar salary, a happy marriage to a trophy wife, and a young daughter he would kill for. But his life took a tragic turn when he began to feel inferior to other wrestlers and started taking steroids.
As a result, he began to neglect his family and friends and spend all his time finding new ways to become stronger. One night, under the influence of numerous drugs, he killed his wife and daughter, and he was strong enough to do it with his bare hands.
Once sober, the realization of what he had done was so traumatic that it caused his mind to create a separate personality, one that believed he was a superhero. To this end, he modified his wrestling costume to look more heroic, pumped himself full of steroids to gain super strength, and stole a pair of untested rocket boots from a science lab to simulate flight. Now, using the name Hyper, he patrols SHH City, defeating evil wherever he sees it. Since he has no memory of his origin, he doesn't know his own strength and often kills criminals by accident. This has led the police to erroneously believe that he is a murderous vigilante, and they are always trying to catch him in the act. They have no idea that he is a misunderstood soul with a tragic past he doesn't remember.
Entry B
HYPER!
Alarm clock rings, Henry sits up from bed and hits it with his hand. He tried to get out of bed but fell right back down into his bed and the clock began to ring again, again he hit it.
Henry brushing his teeth when he notices some hair growing on his face, he spits out the toothpaste and opens the medicine cabinet and pulls out a razor and shaving cream. He sets them down and washes off his toothbrush with water from the tap. He put the toothbrush back up in the medicine cabinet along with the toothpaste. He filled a glass up with water and threw the water into his mouth and began to move it around and then he spat it out. He then opened his hand and with the other squirted some shaving cream onto his hand and began to smear it across his face where the hair had been growing. He washed off the hand with the shaving cream and picked up the razor, Henry gasped then began to shave.
Henry's hamster, Sarah came out of her nest to get some food when Henry screamed. She stood up to see what happened. Henry came running out of the washroom and ran towards the couch and leapt onto it, grasping his cheek in pain. Sarah began to groom herself. Henry got up from the couch and there was a cut along his cheek. He looked at Sarah.
Laugh it up, Sarah. Laugh it up - Henry
Henry was about to walk back into the washroom when someone knocked on the door. Henry jumped in fright and looked around back-and-forth between to front door to the washroom, he gasped and quickly sped towards the door but on his way picked up a scarf and wrapped it around his face. Henry opened the door and it was his landlord, Rick.
Rick looked at Henry in disgust and then revolved his eyes around Henry's apartment.
...how are you, Rick - Henry
Huh... you don't sound so surprised to see me, Henry. Nice to see you've converted - Rick
Henry looked down at his scarf then laughed a bit but stopped as he noticed Rick's face.
...nice tie there, Rick - Henry
Don't try to play with me, Henry. Where's my rent? - Rick
I told you I needed more time to get it - Henry
Rick ranted on but then Henry noticed his neighbor across the hall, Dan placing a mat outside the door as he quickly looked at Henry and winked. Henry tried to tell him with his eyes not to do that. Rick noticed Henry doing so. He turned around and there was nothing there but a mat outside the neighbor's door. He looked back at Henry.
What's wrong with you? - Rick
Henry studdered to find words.
I guess I played to much 'World of Warcraft' last night, I totally pwned that noob - Henry
Rick pointed at Henry and then walked away and Henry gave him the finger behind his back. While Rick was walking he slipped up on the mat that Dan placed outside the door. Henry laughed as Dan rose to his feet and quickly stared at Dan's door in anger then walked away.
Henry sat down at his desk and opened a file on the computer and immediately got an E-Mail. He clicked on it and it read:
Late again, Henry? - Amy's E-Mail
Henry peered around the corner to see he was about to wave but then came back towards the computer and began to type. Amy recieved an E-Mail from Henry.
Hey, Amy. 'Landlord can be a real pain sometimes... actually, let me rephrase that... MOST OF THE TIME!!! - Henry's E-Mail
Amy laughed and began to type.
LOL! Yeah, Rick can sure be a pain in the ass at times. Anyways, would you and Dan like to come out tonight with me and Lisa? - Amy's E-Mail
Henry was stunned and had his head fall down on the keyboard and he accidently hit 'Send'. He sat up and tried to stop it but the E-Mail was already sent. Amy got the response which read:
gtyhfgtyhfgtyhff - Henry's E-Mail
Henry came over to her desk.
Did Dan write this? - Amy
Henry smiled.
Yes; me and Dan will go out with you and Lisa - Henry
Good, here's my number and just call when you want to know when and where we'll meet - Amy
Neat-O - Henry
Henry knocked on Dan's door and gasped and put his back up against the wall as he knew he would have to wait a while. Dan finally opened the door and Henry looked at Dan as he got up from against the wall.
What? I'm trying to beat a noob on 'Runescape' - Dan
Henry walked into Dan's apartment and walked into the living room and sat down on the couch as Dan followed.
You feel like taking a break and getting out of this hell-hole tonight, Dan? - Henry
No, I'm waiting for news on the new 'Dark Knight' trailer! - Dan
Havn't you seen enough from the first trailer? - Henry
Well... this one is supposed to have Two-Face - Dan
I doubt it - Henry
Shut up, Henry - Dan
Why don't you? - Henry
"Why don't you?" - Dan
Shut up, Dan - Henry
Dan and Henry gasped.
I'm sorry, man - Dan
Me too, Dan - Henry
Dan and Henry shook hands and sat down on the couch.
So... where are we going? - Dan
I don't know, havn't called Lisa or Amy yet - Henry
Wait, Lisa's going? - Dan
Yeah 'Lover-Boy', she is - Henry
SWEET HELL! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME THAT IN THE FIRST PLACE?! NOW I'M NEVER GOING - Dan
Ahh, come on, Dan. You might have a chance to get back together with her again - Henry
Dan stared blankly at Henry and then got up and sat down at the computer.
Henry got up and stood beside Dan.
Come on, Dan. Think about it - Henry
Dan played 'The Dark Knight' trailer and Henry was about to say something else but then pulled up a chair and sat down next to Dan as he stared at the screen as the trailer played, his jaw dropped down as the trailer began.
When is this movie coming out? - Henry
