'Spider-Man 4' - thejon93

[dozer2025]

Wow, people take criticism well around here.

It doesn't matter how nice you are, on other boards my opinion is met with:

"Oh yeah? How many scripts have you written?"

"Obviously, you have never read a (name of hero here) comic."

"Get off your high horse."

"Yo estaba con su mamá ayer por la noche, amante de Burton!"

"انت على الارجح مثل جويل Shumacher ، القضيب الحبيب

"Come ho busto circa il vostro naso?"

 

[thejon93]

Wow, people take criticism well around here.

It doesn't matter how nice you are, on other boards my opinion is met with:

"Oh yeah? How many scripts have you written?"

"Obviously, you have never read a (name of hero here) comic."

"Get off your high horse."

"Yo estaba con su mamá ayer por la noche, amante de Burton!"

"انت على الارجح مثل جويل Shumacher ، القضيب الحبيب

"Come ho busto circa il vostro naso?"

Haha, I've faced that on here a few times. But, I just like being respectful to people who actually take their time to read it and give me their honest feedback. I usually don't like to give people my feedback because either I'd get too carried away with it, or they'd think that I'm an idiot for misjudging them.

 

[UltimateJustin]

Yeah, that's the problem when you write it out like this. I'm currently taking some time off of this one and writing a script for another idea of mine. I think I've learned from this one and my others with regards to the pacing and dialogue, and whatnot. After I'm finished with my current project entitled: "Raining Down(half of the draft is already written, should be available to read on here in a week or a little less, maybe more)", I'll re-write this in a screenplay format, extending some sequences and generally making it better because, it's really hard to write a script on here not just because of the format, but because you generally don't have the patience to bother reading through it after you've written it. You just post it and hope for the best(but sometimes it doesn't even load up and you are forced to re-write it because you can't copy and paste once you've written it). Anyways, thanks for the feedback, man. Really appriciate it, makes my dream of becoming a screenwriter/director much more than a dream, so thank you very much, dozer2025

Also, I'll be sure to look up the police chat, or whatever they call it. Thanks for the suggestion, for I think it'll help me in some of my future stories.

After you write something, highlight all of it and press ctrl+x and then press ctrl+v, then post it. That way if it messes up you can just press ctrl+v to post it again. You can't right click copy but you can still use ctrl+x.

 

[thejon93]

After you write something, highlight all of it and press ctrl+x and then press ctrl+v, then post it. That way if it messes up you can just press ctrl+v to post it again. You can't right click copy but you can still use ctrl+x.

Thanks, Justin. Gotta write that down somewhere for sure.