My Batman Fan Film Script

[lollycop]

Batman: Orgin Of A Clown ONE

"The world needs bad guys, we need them to support the heros, hey, if it werent for "us" there wouldent be any heros". The joker whipes the blood of his mouth. Batman jumped towards the joker and did a kick to the face. A tooth flew out of the jokers mouth. "YOU KILLED GORDAN, YOU KILLED KATE, NOW I WILL KILL YOU" yelled Batman. The Joker laughed as he looked Batman into the eyes, the eyes of darkness, the eyes of a knight. The joker, quickly punched Batman a couple of times until the knight was on the ground rubbing the blood off his mouth. "Batman, you shall now, have the smile of a prince" yelled the Joker. The Joker kneed Batman to the face. Batman was surely knocked out. "Now when you wake up, you'll be dead handsome". The Joker, pulled his knife from his pocket and started to carve a smile into Batmans face. All of Gotham could hear was the laughing of a maniac.

 

[lollycop]

Batmanead End Part ONE

"The world needs bad guys, we need them to support the heros, hey, if it werent for "us" there wouldent be any heros". The joker whipes the blood of his mouth. Batman jumped towards the joker and did a kick to the face. A tooth flew out of the jokers mouth. "YOU KILLED GORDAN, YOU KILLED KATE, NOW I WILL KILL YOU" yelled Batman. The Joker laughed as he looked Batman into the eyes, the eyes of darkness, the eyes of a knight. The joker, quickly punched Batman a couple of times until the knight was on the ground rubbing the blood off his mouth. "Batman, you shall now, have the smile of a prince" yelled the Joker. The Joker kneed Batman to the face. Batman was surely knocked out. "Now when you wake up, you'll be dead handsome". The Joker, pulled his knife from his pocket and started to carve a smile into Batmans face. All of Gotham could hear was the laughing of a maniac.

Thats only like 5% of the script.

 

[Penismightier]

I'm a screenwriter. Would you like my help with formatting software? There's a lot of rules and stuff that go along with screenwriting. I'd be glad to help, since it's worth it to make it look professionally formatted.

 

[Superhobo]

Reads like a prose story, but sounds like a script. Need to work on diction as well as grammar.

 

[lollycop]

Reads like a prose story, but sounds like a script. Need to work on diction as well as grammar.

Nah, its just the script for a animation. As long as I can read it. Its perfect.

 

[kooguy911]

thats not a script or a screenplay. I dont really like it but its hard to read. Like someone said its a prose not a screenplay. But if you can understand it, then I guess it doesnt matter as long as the animation comes out.

 

[kooguy911]

kind of sounds like a 12 year old wrote it. thats not offensive im just saying that it doesnt seem very professinal...

 

[Green Goblin 1964]

Batman: Orgin Of A Clown ONE

"The world needs bad guys, we need them to support the heros, hey, if it werent for "us" there wouldent be any heros". The joker whipes the blood of his mouth. Batman jumped towards the joker and did a kick to the face. A tooth flew out of the jokers mouth. "YOU KILLED GORDAN, YOU KILLED KATE, NOW I WILL KILL YOU" yelled Batman. The Joker laughed as he looked Batman into the eyes, the eyes of darkness, the eyes of a knight. The joker, quickly punched Batman a couple of times until the knight was on the ground rubbing the blood off his mouth. "Batman, you shall now, have the smile of a prince" yelled the Joker. The Joker kneed Batman to the face. Batman was surely knocked out. "Now when you wake up, you'll be dead handsome". The Joker, pulled his knife from his pocket and started to carve a smile into Batmans face. All of Gotham could hear was the laughing of a maniac.

Double-you-tea-eff.....