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I'm going to be posting my own version of the story every now and then... I'm not going to do it all in one sitting, so please do not critic the main story until i'm done with the whole thing.
Also, if you read the first part, please come back for the other parts when I'm done... I'm gonna make the rest of it sorta shorter so it won't be as long as the first part.
RED = Battles
Ok, I've looked at some rumored things, and even thought up most of this myself. Very little of this is true, this is just my opinion. I'm going to write a fan story of what I'd like to see in this film:
In the 4th installment we pick up where we left off in 3. It has been 5 months and there's been unrest in the police department as super-villains have been on the upscale, what with Sandman, Venom and now a rumor of a new villain! Due to the fact that Manhattan will loose a lot of business if they told them another villain was on the rise, the NYPD has decided to keep this information strictly confidential. Not even Spider-Man knows exactly what's going on. We find Peter Parker as he's taken to detective work to figure out what exactly is going on. Meanwhile Doctor Connors has been working tirelessly on a formula that should promote the regrowth of his lost right arm, which he lost in the military. He is on the verge of a breakthrough as Connors and Peter both work together on the formula... Peter Parker has just got the job of being Doctor Connor's laboratory assistant. But soon chaos hits when the experiment goes wrong. At first Dr. Connor's arm began to grow back, but when his skin begins to turn green and scales come over him, Parker begins to get nervous. Suddenly Connors becomes The Lizard, and his mind is enslaved to it. The Lizard, thinking that Peter is to blame, violently attacks Peter. He has no choice but to put on his costume and fight him as Spider-Man or Dr. Connors might hurt himself, civilians, or even Peter!
This battle takes place in Dr. Connor's lab and soon escalates as it is lead out into the College campus. Since it is night, there is no worry of harming students. Spidey kicks Lizard and he lands into the streets, and there a large 18 wheeler hits the Lizard, knocking him unconscious. Spidey watches in horror as the truck flips over and catches on fire. Spidey jumps to the rescue as he saves the trucker and the Lizard, who by now has re transformed back into Connors. Spidey gets away with the two just in time as the truck explodes!
Later that night Peter watches from the side as firefighters put out the fire. A few policemen walk over to Peter and begin to ask him questions and asking him if there were any witnesses. Peter had to say no, or his identity might be found out. The police lifted a piece of Spidey's torn suit. "I think the Bugle was right all along... if we can't get any witnesses to give us information then we'll have to blame Spider-Man..." the cop added. "What's your name, son?" he asked Peter. Peter told them his name and they added his name to the list of possible witnesses. Peter realizes this. "I told them I wasn't a witness!" Peter thought to himself.
The next day Peter met up with Mary Jane to have breakfast together. They discussed Doctor Connor's problem and The Lizard. "I can't give myself in as a witness. If they ask me what happened then I wouldn't know what to say because I would be getting Dr. Connors in big trouble. But if I don't tell them then they could incriminate Spider-Man of trying to commit murder!" The breakfast came to a conclusion, and the two parted their separate ways. Peter went to the Bugle hoping to earn a little bit of cash. As he walked in the door Jameson immediately began blaming Peter of stealing his medications. "I didn't take your medications, sir. Why would I need them!" Pete said over and over. Finally Jameson gave up with the investigation and cut to the chase. "You know that truck explosion on Amsterdam Avenue last night?" JJ asked. "What about it?" said Peter. "Well, they think they have found the cause of the accident... It's a most unlikely victim." Peter listened closely. "No... please don't be Dr. Connors." he thought. Jameson continued. "... It just so happens the attempted murderer is Doctor Curtis Connors." Peter quickly interrupted. "What? No!" "Well the NYPD say that he's the only lead they have. They did a blood test at the site of the accident and they found Connor's blood." Peter quickly attempted to stand up for his friend. "No, I was there, it wasn't him!" "Wait, let me continue... they say they also found a piece of cloth from Spider-Man's costume." Peter cowered down. Jameson continued "Yes sir, I'm placing my money on the fact that it was him. Connors is innocent I say!" Peter interrupted Jameson. "Yes! It wasn't Connors!" "Ah, so you agree that Spider-Man is a killer, don't you, Parker?" Parker remained silent for a little while, then he spoke up. "No..." "Then who do you think did it?" asked Jameson. There was another silent moment, then Peter began to converse again. "So do you have any pictures for me to take for you?" "No, get out!" Jameson shooed him out.
Peter walked out of the office when Betty Brant stopped him. They talked for a few seconds and this and that, then Peter walked over to Robby to ask him if there were any pictures. He told him yes and they were over at the college campus. So Peter went on his way. While there he met up with Doctor Connors. He told him that the police thinks that he is innocent of attempting to murder the trucker. "I am..." replied Connors. "... I created that lizard monster... and I couldn't stop it." He began talking of making a cure for it, when suddenly police sirens went off, Peter looked out of the window to see the SWAT team outside preparing to come in. Peter seemed to have vanished as the SWAT team broke into the lab. They arrested Connors and took him outside, when suddenly Spidey came out of nowhere, swooping down, grabbing Connors and swinging off into the distance, while the SWAT team shot at Spidey. The webslinger landed on top of Connors apartment. "Get inside! Quick!" Spidey told him. "Wait..." Connors stopped Spidey from swinging away. "Thanks for saving me..." "No problem..." replied Spidey. "You do realize your in big trouble with the NYPD now..." "Yeah... I know..." answered Spidey. "... I'll try to clear your name of this accident as soon as possible. With that Spidey jumped off the roof and swung away. "How!?" yelled Connors. There was no answer, for Spidey was too far away.
Peter went to visit Aunt May. She asked him when he and MJ planned to get married. Peter told her that they've not set a date yet. Aunt May scolded him jokingly on how he's waiting too long and should go ahead and get married soon. Peter answered her and told her he planned to set a date soon. After that there was talk about Uncle Ben, finances, and everything. They spent a few minutes discussing things Uncle Ben use to do with Peter. Peter could definitely see signs that Aunt May wasn't doing well at all and he just had the feeling he could loose her any day.
That night at a high security prison we see violent noises as a few cops are thrown by an unknown person into the camera frame and out of the camera frame. We see a hooded figure walk around a corner and to a jail cell where inside is Flint Marko AKA The Sandman. The cell is radioactively protected somehow so nothing made of sand can get out. Flint sees this dark figure and he gets up. "Who are you!?" he asks. The person answers with a familiar voice "I'm getting you out of there." Flint responds "I can't see how. This prison cell is radioactively protected... nothing made of sand can get out..." The figure looks at Flint from under his hat. "Sand? Interesting... let me see..." Flint curiously looked at him, then he turned his hands into sand and then turned his sand hands into a sand mace. "Interesting..." responded the figure. He then goes to the cell control panel, and looks at the metal door. Flint looks across the hall at him from inside the cell. "You can't get in there. It's sealed shut!" Suddenly a metal tentacle appears from under the trench coat and goes through the radiative protector and looks straight at Flint. "I have my ways of getting into places... and... getting out of situations..." Doctor Otto Octavius AKA Doctor Octopus turns around, and with another tentacle he removes he takes off his hat. Flint is shocked. "You're that mad scientist I heard about! The one that drowned in the river!" Flint exclaimed. "Do I look dead to you!?" responded Doc Ock. He then turned around back to the doors to the control panel. His four metal arms grasp onto the doors and forced them open. Then one tentacle goes to the lever, and it turns the radiative protector off. Flint grins. Ock turns around. "Listen, Sand-freak! I helped you escape jail, now I want you to help me..." Flint looked at Ock. He chuckled "We're not out of this yet..." Suddenly an alarm goes off and the two look around.
High action music plays as cops come around the corners of the hallways. The two split up. Ock turns to his right and goes to attacking the police on the right end of the hallway. Sandman turns to the left, turns his hand and arms into sand and begins wiping out the cops on the left end of the hallway. Ock quickly goes through the cops, slinging them every which way, until he reaches the outside. He turns around and looks at the prison waiting for Sandman, as his tentacles protect him from gun fire and approaching police. Inside Sandman is now a sand monster as his whole body is a huge sand monster! Finally he has reached the very middle of the prison. Cops close in. Flint looks around then suddenly he makes sand shoot out from himself like a sand explosion. A loud chorus theme plays as all the cops are suddenly blast to the edges of the prison walls. On the outside Ock watches with a grin on his face as sand flies out from the prison. It flies towards Ock, as the tentacles shield his face. After all of this is done, the pile of sand lying in front of Ock turns into Sandman, and then he becomes Flint Marko again. "... what do you want?" asks Marko.
The next day, Peter, still curious about the rumors of a new villain Daily Bugle pass into the NYPD's criminal records. He goes to the section entitled "Super Heroes". He looks at the super heroes listed. He goes down the list: Spider-Man... "Typical" he thought. He continued reading the list: Norman Osborn, Otto Octavius, Flint Marko, Eddie Brock, Curtis Connors. Peter looks at Connor's name in shock as he clicks the name to see what this is all about. He reads the article on him: "Manhattan: City of chaos as yet another super-freak rises. The Lizard. Further known as Doctor Curtis Connors. Nearby citizens witnessed the truck explosion earlier this week as a huge lizard-like monster was seen nearby transforming into a man with a lab coat on. Later the next day investigators found a sample of DNA at the site which were none others than Doctor Curtis Connors himself! Also a patch of clothing off of Spider-Man's suit was found. Many say Connors is the attempted murderer, and that Spider-Man is innocent. But others are not so sure..." Peter closes down the file and leaves.
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TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Also, if you read the first part, please come back for the other parts when I'm done... I'm gonna make the rest of it sorta shorter so it won't be as long as the first part.
RED = Battles
Ok, I've looked at some rumored things, and even thought up most of this myself. Very little of this is true, this is just my opinion. I'm going to write a fan story of what I'd like to see in this film:
In the 4th installment we pick up where we left off in 3. It has been 5 months and there's been unrest in the police department as super-villains have been on the upscale, what with Sandman, Venom and now a rumor of a new villain! Due to the fact that Manhattan will loose a lot of business if they told them another villain was on the rise, the NYPD has decided to keep this information strictly confidential. Not even Spider-Man knows exactly what's going on. We find Peter Parker as he's taken to detective work to figure out what exactly is going on. Meanwhile Doctor Connors has been working tirelessly on a formula that should promote the regrowth of his lost right arm, which he lost in the military. He is on the verge of a breakthrough as Connors and Peter both work together on the formula... Peter Parker has just got the job of being Doctor Connor's laboratory assistant. But soon chaos hits when the experiment goes wrong. At first Dr. Connor's arm began to grow back, but when his skin begins to turn green and scales come over him, Parker begins to get nervous. Suddenly Connors becomes The Lizard, and his mind is enslaved to it. The Lizard, thinking that Peter is to blame, violently attacks Peter. He has no choice but to put on his costume and fight him as Spider-Man or Dr. Connors might hurt himself, civilians, or even Peter!
This battle takes place in Dr. Connor's lab and soon escalates as it is lead out into the College campus. Since it is night, there is no worry of harming students. Spidey kicks Lizard and he lands into the streets, and there a large 18 wheeler hits the Lizard, knocking him unconscious. Spidey watches in horror as the truck flips over and catches on fire. Spidey jumps to the rescue as he saves the trucker and the Lizard, who by now has re transformed back into Connors. Spidey gets away with the two just in time as the truck explodes!
Later that night Peter watches from the side as firefighters put out the fire. A few policemen walk over to Peter and begin to ask him questions and asking him if there were any witnesses. Peter had to say no, or his identity might be found out. The police lifted a piece of Spidey's torn suit. "I think the Bugle was right all along... if we can't get any witnesses to give us information then we'll have to blame Spider-Man..." the cop added. "What's your name, son?" he asked Peter. Peter told them his name and they added his name to the list of possible witnesses. Peter realizes this. "I told them I wasn't a witness!" Peter thought to himself.
The next day Peter met up with Mary Jane to have breakfast together. They discussed Doctor Connor's problem and The Lizard. "I can't give myself in as a witness. If they ask me what happened then I wouldn't know what to say because I would be getting Dr. Connors in big trouble. But if I don't tell them then they could incriminate Spider-Man of trying to commit murder!" The breakfast came to a conclusion, and the two parted their separate ways. Peter went to the Bugle hoping to earn a little bit of cash. As he walked in the door Jameson immediately began blaming Peter of stealing his medications. "I didn't take your medications, sir. Why would I need them!" Pete said over and over. Finally Jameson gave up with the investigation and cut to the chase. "You know that truck explosion on Amsterdam Avenue last night?" JJ asked. "What about it?" said Peter. "Well, they think they have found the cause of the accident... It's a most unlikely victim." Peter listened closely. "No... please don't be Dr. Connors." he thought. Jameson continued. "... It just so happens the attempted murderer is Doctor Curtis Connors." Peter quickly interrupted. "What? No!" "Well the NYPD say that he's the only lead they have. They did a blood test at the site of the accident and they found Connor's blood." Peter quickly attempted to stand up for his friend. "No, I was there, it wasn't him!" "Wait, let me continue... they say they also found a piece of cloth from Spider-Man's costume." Peter cowered down. Jameson continued "Yes sir, I'm placing my money on the fact that it was him. Connors is innocent I say!" Peter interrupted Jameson. "Yes! It wasn't Connors!" "Ah, so you agree that Spider-Man is a killer, don't you, Parker?" Parker remained silent for a little while, then he spoke up. "No..." "Then who do you think did it?" asked Jameson. There was another silent moment, then Peter began to converse again. "So do you have any pictures for me to take for you?" "No, get out!" Jameson shooed him out.
Peter walked out of the office when Betty Brant stopped him. They talked for a few seconds and this and that, then Peter walked over to Robby to ask him if there were any pictures. He told him yes and they were over at the college campus. So Peter went on his way. While there he met up with Doctor Connors. He told him that the police thinks that he is innocent of attempting to murder the trucker. "I am..." replied Connors. "... I created that lizard monster... and I couldn't stop it." He began talking of making a cure for it, when suddenly police sirens went off, Peter looked out of the window to see the SWAT team outside preparing to come in. Peter seemed to have vanished as the SWAT team broke into the lab. They arrested Connors and took him outside, when suddenly Spidey came out of nowhere, swooping down, grabbing Connors and swinging off into the distance, while the SWAT team shot at Spidey. The webslinger landed on top of Connors apartment. "Get inside! Quick!" Spidey told him. "Wait..." Connors stopped Spidey from swinging away. "Thanks for saving me..." "No problem..." replied Spidey. "You do realize your in big trouble with the NYPD now..." "Yeah... I know..." answered Spidey. "... I'll try to clear your name of this accident as soon as possible. With that Spidey jumped off the roof and swung away. "How!?" yelled Connors. There was no answer, for Spidey was too far away.
Peter went to visit Aunt May. She asked him when he and MJ planned to get married. Peter told her that they've not set a date yet. Aunt May scolded him jokingly on how he's waiting too long and should go ahead and get married soon. Peter answered her and told her he planned to set a date soon. After that there was talk about Uncle Ben, finances, and everything. They spent a few minutes discussing things Uncle Ben use to do with Peter. Peter could definitely see signs that Aunt May wasn't doing well at all and he just had the feeling he could loose her any day.
That night at a high security prison we see violent noises as a few cops are thrown by an unknown person into the camera frame and out of the camera frame. We see a hooded figure walk around a corner and to a jail cell where inside is Flint Marko AKA The Sandman. The cell is radioactively protected somehow so nothing made of sand can get out. Flint sees this dark figure and he gets up. "Who are you!?" he asks. The person answers with a familiar voice "I'm getting you out of there." Flint responds "I can't see how. This prison cell is radioactively protected... nothing made of sand can get out..." The figure looks at Flint from under his hat. "Sand? Interesting... let me see..." Flint curiously looked at him, then he turned his hands into sand and then turned his sand hands into a sand mace. "Interesting..." responded the figure. He then goes to the cell control panel, and looks at the metal door. Flint looks across the hall at him from inside the cell. "You can't get in there. It's sealed shut!" Suddenly a metal tentacle appears from under the trench coat and goes through the radiative protector and looks straight at Flint. "I have my ways of getting into places... and... getting out of situations..." Doctor Otto Octavius AKA Doctor Octopus turns around, and with another tentacle he removes he takes off his hat. Flint is shocked. "You're that mad scientist I heard about! The one that drowned in the river!" Flint exclaimed. "Do I look dead to you!?" responded Doc Ock. He then turned around back to the doors to the control panel. His four metal arms grasp onto the doors and forced them open. Then one tentacle goes to the lever, and it turns the radiative protector off. Flint grins. Ock turns around. "Listen, Sand-freak! I helped you escape jail, now I want you to help me..." Flint looked at Ock. He chuckled "We're not out of this yet..." Suddenly an alarm goes off and the two look around.
High action music plays as cops come around the corners of the hallways. The two split up. Ock turns to his right and goes to attacking the police on the right end of the hallway. Sandman turns to the left, turns his hand and arms into sand and begins wiping out the cops on the left end of the hallway. Ock quickly goes through the cops, slinging them every which way, until he reaches the outside. He turns around and looks at the prison waiting for Sandman, as his tentacles protect him from gun fire and approaching police. Inside Sandman is now a sand monster as his whole body is a huge sand monster! Finally he has reached the very middle of the prison. Cops close in. Flint looks around then suddenly he makes sand shoot out from himself like a sand explosion. A loud chorus theme plays as all the cops are suddenly blast to the edges of the prison walls. On the outside Ock watches with a grin on his face as sand flies out from the prison. It flies towards Ock, as the tentacles shield his face. After all of this is done, the pile of sand lying in front of Ock turns into Sandman, and then he becomes Flint Marko again. "... what do you want?" asks Marko.
The next day, Peter, still curious about the rumors of a new villain Daily Bugle pass into the NYPD's criminal records. He goes to the section entitled "Super Heroes". He looks at the super heroes listed. He goes down the list: Spider-Man... "Typical" he thought. He continued reading the list: Norman Osborn, Otto Octavius, Flint Marko, Eddie Brock, Curtis Connors. Peter looks at Connor's name in shock as he clicks the name to see what this is all about. He reads the article on him: "Manhattan: City of chaos as yet another super-freak rises. The Lizard. Further known as Doctor Curtis Connors. Nearby citizens witnessed the truck explosion earlier this week as a huge lizard-like monster was seen nearby transforming into a man with a lab coat on. Later the next day investigators found a sample of DNA at the site which were none others than Doctor Curtis Connors himself! Also a patch of clothing off of Spider-Man's suit was found. Many say Connors is the attempted murderer, and that Spider-Man is innocent. But others are not so sure..." Peter closes down the file and leaves.
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TO BE CONTINUED!!!