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  1. Excel

    Excel O-bama-ama-ama-ay-ay

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    writing a horror story bout afather who realizes his girl is the devil. but upon realzing it, how can i end it? have him die and she lives? both die, both live? shes saved somehow?HELP ME.
     
    #1 Excel, Apr 5, 2006
  2. guitarsingerguy

    guitarsingerguy Who am I?

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    Well, she's the devil. You GOTTA have the devil win.
     
    #2 guitarsingerguy, Apr 6, 2006
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    You should try just writing it to the end and having the end reveal itself. A form of free-writing. just go in not having the idea and as events unfold it will be become clear to you where the story should go. No one can tell you how to draw out the plot or write the ending to a story, it just has to come out from your own imagination and the plot itself.
     
    #3 spdrknight, Apr 6, 2006
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    i agree with spdrknight let the story tell u what's going to happen.
     
    #4 owen_2006_294, Apr 6, 2006
  5. Antonello Blueberry

    Antonello Blueberry Inglorious bastard

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    She becomes the first female Pope.
     
    #5 Antonello Blueberry, Apr 6, 2006
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    Ronny Shade back for a limited time

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    In a dramatic exorcism, the father is forced to kill his daughter when she cannot be cured, and we find out later that the devil has jumped from her body into his.
     
    #6 Ronny Shade, Apr 6, 2006
  7. Excel

    Excel O-bama-ama-ama-ay-ay

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    oh i like that one
     
    #7 Excel, Apr 6, 2006
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    girl/devil kills father
     
    #8 Asteroid-Man, Apr 10, 2006
  9. Master Chief

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    It'd be awesome if she kills him.

    But isn't this like The Omen or something?
     
    #9 Master Chief, Apr 10, 2006
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    with a dash of Rosemary's Baby.
     
    #10 Man-Thing, Apr 11, 2006
  11. Excel

    Excel O-bama-ama-ama-ay-ay

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    what happens in rosemarys baby??
     
    #11 Excel, Apr 16, 2006
  12. eXperiment

    eXperiment ...gone wrong.

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    ^ agree
     
    #12 eXperiment, Apr 16, 2006
  13. FunBobPants

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    wasnt this a show on Fox? its also pretty similar to The Omen trilogy
     
    #13 FunBobPants, Apr 21, 2006
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