Need YOUR help! (please :-))

[The Amazing Lee]

Bump!

 

[Honey Vibe]

Thanks for bumping, TAL.

A Piece of Cake Questionnaire

What did you like about the short film and why?
I love the way "barriers" to acknowledging one's personal needs are represented for the minutia it really is: filmsy, sloppy, oft-revised sticky notes.
The scenes that represent the carrot as something 'OK' (that is, pure/healthy/respectable enough according to the "barriers"), but ultimately awkward and difficult to swallow, are brilliant.




What did you not like about the film and why?

In the end, the boy seems just as unsatisfied after "having his cake", as he was eating its impostor, the carrot.


Was the plot of the film understandable and if not how could I make it more understandable?

Your commentary is what knits the film together and makes it understandable. Make your audio louder. And if you're going to show yourself in it as a character, I would recommend revising your role as The Doctor or The Psychologist, or some other omnipotent foil character that works well as narrator and quasi-villain.


What is the moral of the story and is it presented well?
Amongst all these points to moralize us, it gets at an original moral much older and wiser: find what's most satisfying to you. It's neat to see that showcased in a modern way.



How well did you connect with the main character and what exactly made you relate to him?

Everyone is looking for their "piece of cake". His little quest is very easy to relate to.


Would this film make you want to watch future projects of this particular director?

Most definitely.


How exactly does this film make you feel?

Sated.


How well do you think that the music linked with the movie and did it heighten the mood?

The music was surprisingly well-selected, from better tracks than just a typical iPod music list. The music assists the narrator in telling the story very well.

What target audience do you think the short film is aiming towards?
(Please tick the appropriate box. You may tick more than one box)
❏ 10-15 year olds
❏ 16-24 year olds
❏ 25-40 year olds
❏ 40-64 year olds
❏ 65+

All. Without any offensive content or narrow music choice, this film is open to any open mind.

 

[The Amazing Lee]

Yay, cheers for this. ^__^

 

[CyberFaust]

A Piece of Cake Questionnaire

What did you like about the short film and why?
the editing was nice, but what struk me most was the music, probably because i have a thing for OSTs and such




What did you not like about the film and why?
i did not like the dude's hair!
and some of the shots were a little short for my taste




Was the plot of the film understandable and if not how could I make it more understandable?
it's a nice plot and i understood it fine, but if you want to make it silly-proof use subtitles or something




What is the moral of the story and is it presented well?
life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what your gonna get...nah, just had to say it






How well did you connect with the main character and what exactly made you relate to him?
the hunger, the need for cake!




Would this film make you want to watch future projects of this particular director?
well i did subscribe to the youtube account




How exactly does this film make you feel?
hungry, although i just ate




How well do you think that the music linked with the movie and did it heighten the mood?
it did, the music was the best part about the movie, good work picking songs



What target audience do you think the short film is aiming towards?
(Please tick the appropriate box. You may tick more than one box)

❏ 16-24 year olds




there ya' go.
I'm still gonna need help with premier pro, i'll probably ennoy you about it this weekendt:

 

[The Amazing Lee]

hahaha that's ok. Though I'm not really that good at it. I use it to a VERY basic level.

 

[CyberFaust]

if you can tell me how to where the damn cut button is, si o can chop up films at a selected frame it'll do. Or how do i do that thing like with movie maker where it cuts it into frames on it's own because that's my main problem at the moment

 

[The Amazing Lee]

the splicing tool should be in the tool box. which is a strip on either the right or left hand side. it looks like a razor blade.

erm...well just use the splicing tool for the second thing you wanna do.

 

[black_dust]

if you can tell me how to where the damn cut button is, si o can chop up films at a selected frame it'll do. Or how do i do that thing like with movie maker where it cuts it into frames on it's own because that's my main problem at the moment

Drag and drop you footage into the editor, select the start and end points of the part you want, then click insert and it will drop into the time line. If you wish to chop it up on the time line you can use the blade (on the left hand side) and chop them up.

 

[CyberFaust]

groovy, thanks

 

[The Amazing Lee]

Thanks for pissing over my parade Black Dust.

 

[black_dust]

Pffff!! come back when you know how to use After effects little boy

 

[The Amazing Lee]

I don't. actually I was using it today at college to sort out my animation. he he.

 

[The Amazing Lee]

Bump.