Hey guys, need help with a query letter, anyone care to critique? Here it is:
For the uninitiated,
Power will be redefined forever.
Mathion is the heir to the throne of Ánovén, but his story is already legend among his people. At the age of seven years old he encountered a dying White Wolf, and received two gifts that would change everything. Now with a White Wolf at his side and a powerful artifact in his possession, he learns that the eastern city of Kihar is threatened by an advancing army of werewolves.*
Mathion gathers together a small but diverse band of warriors,*consisting of both friends and family,*to aid Kihar in any way they can. In the ensuing battle, one of his compatriots is captured, and Mathion decides to undertake the impossible: infiltrate Ak'horokaš, the black stronghold of the demonic werewolf Lord Azgharáth, and rescue his friend.*
The choices made here will set in motion events that will hurtle these peoples toward a final confrontation, and force this young man to face a destiny he never knew he had, bringing him to a personal duel with Azgharáth for the fate of the Wolfstones. They will change not only everyone's lives forever, but the course of history itself.
MATHION: BOOK ONE OF THE MAVONDURI TRILOGY*is a traditional epic quest fantasy story, appropriate for readers of all ages but aimed at late middle school to early college students, roughly 350-400 pages in length not including the Appendices.*
In addition,*MATHION*offers readers a refreshing take on the werewolf legend, giving them a scope and history that will enthrall readers of both fantasy and horror alike.
These creatures are indeed monstrous, and to put them in a fantasy setting with epic battles fought throughout the pages of the story adds depth to their character and breathes new life into the high fantasy genre as a whole. The time and effort put into the world behind the story allows suspension of disbelief to give way to genuine belief not only in the world, but the story and most importantly the characters within it.*
Thank you for your time, if you have any further inquiries please contact me at email
[email protected]*or by phone at*(***)***-****. I look forward to hearing from you.*
Sincerely,
Jeff Shanley