Official Nightavenger Thread

[Ghostrider87]

Ghostrider87, where do you plan on making this available? Online or in comic shops?

Either way it seems like you still have a lot of work to do involving the development of your characters. To me it just seems that your hero and his world are undeveloped. The feel is that things are just thrown together.

Are you ready to try and publish this thing yourself?

No I am getting help. I need a artist. I am also getting a editor.

 

[Colossus24]

Are you paying these people?

 

[mrsparkle]

Please dont take this the wrong way but you might want to think about changing his hero name nightavenger kind of sounds like your trying to rip off other characters try and think of somthing origional dont if your happy with it but i think you would get more recognation with whoever your presenting this too.

 

[Ghostrider87]

Please dont take this the wrong way but you might want to think about changing his hero name nightavenger kind of sounds like your trying to rip off other characters try and think of somthing origional dont if your happy with it but i think you would get more recognation with whoever your presenting this too.

Ok I am not trying to rip off other characters. Besides it took me a long time for me to land on Nightavenger and I don't plan on changing it.

 

[Colossus24]

ghostrider are you ignoring me?

 

[Ghostrider87]

No I am not ignoring you.

 

[Colossus24]

No I am not ignoring you.

were you planning on responding to any of my questions?

 

[Ghostrider87]

Well I guess I would have to pay them.

 

[Colossus24]

well you really should work some more on the story and developing the characters (and your writing skills) before you hire anybody.

 

[Ghostrider87]

Well I already have the origin story written.

 

[Ghostrider87]

Villain 1: Oh no, it's Nightavenger and his......Star...Vehicle.
Villain 2 : Ya know Jim, he don't sound so tough when ya put it that way.

Think of more creative names for things other than Night Avenger and
Star Vehicle, sounds like a gay batman with a name from the 70s.

It does not sound like a gay Batman from the 70s. Just because you can't invent a Super Hero don't be insulting mine. Another thing never insult my Super Hero again. I am confident Nightavenger is going to become a success.

 

[Colossus24]

I know that, but your writing skills are not what they should be if you want to be a professional. I am not trying to be mean or anything, but you really need to work on your writing.

 

[Victor Creed]

It does not sound like a gay Batman from the 70s. Just because you can't invent a Super Hero don't be insulting mine. Another thing never insult my Super Hero again. I am confident Nightavenger is going to become a success.

Actually I have invented a superhero, and he doesn't have 101471320518593457094851 different abilities and his name is Generic Man. I hate to tell you, but if Nightavenger was original, and going to be a success there would be more of a buzz on this forum.

Also, your writing does need a lot of improvement. I am sure someone was right when they assumed English is not your native tongue. Perhaps a few simple college level english courses will give you the skills you need. As of now, not even Image comics would pick that one up.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I am not looking for Image comics or another comic company to pick up my Super Hero. Why because I would have to give up the Super Hero since I don't work for that company.

 

[Ghostrider87]

Actually I have invented a superhero, and he doesn't have 101471320518593457094851 different abilities and his name is Generic Man. I hate to tell you, but if Nightavenger was original, and going to be a success there would be more of a buzz on this forum.

Also, your writing does need a lot of improvement. I am sure someone was right when they assumed English is not your native tongue. Perhaps a few simple college level english courses will give you the skills you need. As of now, not even Image comics would pick that one up.

Quit repeating the constructive criticism. The point has gotten through.

So you are saying because their is not more buzz about Nightavenger he is not going to be a success.

 

[Ghostrider87]

Nightavenger will not fail.

 

[Colossus24]

Are you planning on taking some writing classes?

 

[Ghostrider87]

Yes now I would like to see an end to the constructive criticism because I have gotten the point. I plan on making a villain for Nightavenger that is a part of the Mob.

 

[Dismay]

This is a very interesting topic.

How do you plan to sell this character to Marvel? And, do they buy character ideas?

 

[Harlekin]

He is going to self-publish it.

 

[animateer]

I like the disc-jockey concept. I would make him a hardcore gangta rapper DJ. He can work in the underground night club circuit, while spinning records and groping chicks, he could learn of pending mob crimes.

Walks a hot crack-head home and BAM.... Superpowers!
Although I wouldn't have him struck by the metorite, that would kill a human. I would have him investigate the giant glowing rock as it explodes, rendering him unconcious.

Anyway, keep working on it!

 

[Ghostrider87]

I have loaded Nightavenger Sketches and managed to get them to fit.



Check out my Nightavenger Sketches
http://www.superherohype.com/forums/showthread.php?t=247080

 

[Ghostrider87]

What I have for the Mob Villain is more hair parted off to the side and fancy suits. I am thinking about him having a right hand man. I also want him to have a fancy building in downtown Chicago.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I saw female super villains at www.dragonhero.com that have snakes.
Black Mamba was really hot but deadly. Therefore, it got me thinking I should
make a hot female super villain for Nightavenger that has some specie of
a snake for a name and control over them.

 

[x-kid2234]

This is a fun thread.