Rita from Nightavenger and what She looks like

[Ghostrider87]

I will have to get started on her background. This might take some time.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I am thinking that this might be a easier background.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I would like feedback and responses please to this post that I did. Thanks to the person or person's that post in advance. But please post feedback vote comments and respond.

 

[Colossus24]

I don't know, while I think Salma is attractive, I don't know if Rita needs to be that good looking. It is entirely up to where you eventually want to take that character.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I will have to think of a job for her. I think the answer might be a person who sells books at a bookstore before she becomes a secretary.

 

[Harlekin]

Seriously, dude, what is your purpose?

 

[Ghostrider87]

My purpose is for you to vote. I also have to come up with background information.

 

[Harlekin]

Why is it such a big deal is what I mean? Besides, you're not asking us if we think Rita is attractive, you're asking us if you're little girlfriend from Hooters is attractive, of which we can't see the picture, so you ask us if we think Salma Hayek is attractive. Really, the question is asinine.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I am still working on the right job before she becomes a secretary.

 

[spdrknight]

Should it matter what Rita looks like and if we find her attriactive? Her personality and traits should be on display and not what she looks like. Why are Rita's look so important?

I just don't get the point, sorry.

 

[Harlekin]

Should it matter what Rita looks like and if we find her attriactive? Her personality and traits should be on display and not what she looks like. Why are Rita's look so important?

I just don't get the point, sorry.

Exactly what I was trying to point out.

 

[Ghostrider87]

This is a little harder than I thought.

 

[spdrknight]

Link is not working.

 

[Harlekin]

Link is not working.

Yep. Put it up on a real host like www.photobucket.com

If she's your girlfriend or not doesn't matter, we're just wondering why you are obsessed with her appearance.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I think I am going to use for when they first meet is she is a guest on the Radio talking about the Chicago White Sox.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I must resume getting the rest of my character written. I also have to come up with the main villan.

 

[Harlekin]

You posted the wrong link.
http://rapidshare.de/files/21653245/JwC.jpg is the real link. And really, don't use Rapidshare for that stuff.

As for the chick though: Yeah, she's hot. I wouldn't liken her to Salma Hayek though.

 

[Dope Nose]

she's okay, but nothing spectacular.

 

[spdrknight]

I took a look, she doesn't seem like anything special.

If I were you thought I would not focus so much on your character's appearance. You don't want that to happen, in that way they become boring. Focus more on the quirks and specifics of the persona, the history and mannerisms of the character. Base the character on the actor or person in your life but make them unique in and unto themselves. In my head I cast actors in my 'movie', the story that plays out in my mind, but I do not make the reader see the actor... I make them see the character I am trying to create.

Do not get caught up in the physical, it is pretty on the page but not very special in the end.

Just my personal thoughts.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I guess I should focus on the background, mannerisms and all the other stuff. I will follow your advice.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I am pretty sure that it will come to me sooner than later.

 

[TwilightPro101]

As much as I hate to say it, I agree with everyone. She's nothing truly stand out.