So I went and made a film trailer for college!

[The Amazing Lee]

....You can view it. tell me your honest criticism (unless you're too harsh)

It's not the best quality and you have to wait 18 seconds before the video comes on (just the way I recorded it onto dvd) but hopefuly you'll enjoy it.

Here's the synopsis:

Smile follows the story of Tim Freeman, a 20 year old office Clerk, who just hasn't got his head around how to control his own life.When his own selfish and slobbish nature forces him to lose all that makes him happy, he knows that he has to change the way he lives. When an advertisement tells him that happiness comes when the right doors are opened,he journeys to find his true self and leave the old Tim, behind.

and here's the video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmzuq06zVNY

 

[Sabretooth]

Eh,questionable plot but I kind of like the trailer. Pretty good work.

 

[The Amazing Lee]

we didn't explore the fantasy element, it was best to leave that to the audience's imagination.

 

[Tsunulia]

It's not loading for me.

 

[The Amazing Lee]

it might be because you have to wait 18 seconds for itto come on.



it doesn't start straight away.

 

[Tsunulia]

No it started loading then just stopped. I'm on a very slow connection.

 

[The Amazing Lee]

dohness.

 

[Flexo]

You need to get drunk, hop in a trash can, and roll down a hill... while filming from the inside of said can.

Action sequences kill. And so do first person shots.

 

[Corinthian™]

....You can view it. tell me your honest criticism (unless you're too harsh)

It's not the best quality and you have to wait 18 seconds before the video comes on (just the way I recorded it onto dvd) but hopefuly you'll enjoy it.

Here's the synopsis:

Smile follows the story of Tim Freeman, a 20 year old office Clerk, who just hasn't got his head around how to control his own life.When his own selfish and slobbish nature forces him to lose all that makes him happy, he knows that he has to change the way he lives. When an advertisement tells him that happiness comes when the right doors are opened,he journeys to find his true self and leave the old Tim, behind.

and here's the video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmzuq06zVNY

that be yer voice?

You sound like an average british person-thing

I like your plot... I expect to see it and hope you upload it(in parts) on youtube...

 

[The Amazing Lee]

that sounds like a plan

 

[DOG LIPS]

Yeah, that's just what I need before sleep, a shot of Lee's little package.

 

[The Amazing Lee]

that be yer voice?

You sound like an average british person-thing

I like your plot... I expect to see it and hope you upload it(in parts) on youtube...

Oh, I only made the trailer. didn't actually make the film.

it was a project for college. which was create a film trailer and promote it.

Thanks for the general interest though.

 

[The Amazing Lee]

that be yer voice?

You sound like an average british person-thing

I like your plot... I expect to see it and hope you upload it(in parts) on youtube...

and yesh, that was my voice. and me.

 

[The Amazing Lee]

Yeah, that's just what I need before sleep, a shot of Lee's little package.

thank god Morg hasn't seen it. Otherwise he probably would have bought my package by now.

 

[Corinthian™]

Oh, I only made the trailer. didn't actually make the film.

it was a project for college. which was create a film trailer and promote it.

Thanks for the general interest though.

Gawd you ****ing suck

DOn't talk to me ever again

*puts Lee on ignore*

 

[The Amazing Lee]

::Cries::

 

[DOG LIPS]

I demand an avatar be made of the Lee-package scene.

 

[Tsunulia]

::Cries::

Tears do not become you......

 

[The Amazing Lee]

Nah. it's only corinthian. that peeing bastad.

 

[Corinthian™]

I demand an avatar be made of the Lee-package scene.

Make it with the flag of UK and you are set for life

 

[DOG LIPS]

Make it with the flag of UK and you are set for life

 

[The Amazing Lee]

oh jeezus. do you have to. I hated doing that scene.

they MADE me put on the superman pants.

mine eynes!

 

[DOG LIPS]

oh jeezus. do you have to. I hated doing that scene.

they MADE me put on the superman pants.

mine eynes!

Make a full movie and sell it on DVD, I'll buy a copy.

 

[The Amazing Lee]

just for the crotch shot?

 

[Wilhelm-Scream]

BANNED