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If I was to become a director, which I want to be. And if I was to redo Spider-Man, which I want to do, in the future. Then this is how I would do it.
By the way, this is only a rough draft, and it seems basically just like Spider-Man 1 , with Spider-Man 2 elements thrown in... but hey, what can you do? (As I continue in the story with later instalments of this idea, the story will get more original)
THE AMAZING
SPIDER-MAN
SPIDER-MAN
Peter is a nerd at school and Flash Thompson, Liz Allen and others constantly pick on him. The whole while Harry Osborn, his best friend, protects him, and Gwen Stacy feels sorry for him.
Gwen Stacy will take the place of Mary Jane Watson for a little while (going more according to the comics). Gwen still doesn't know much about Peter, she just stands afar, pitying his life.
During a radiactifity demonstration, Peter is bitten by a spider, that dangled down into the radiactive beam and eventually receives his powers. We are also introduced to Uncle Ben and Aunt May. The Parker's have a lot of financial problems, and there is fear that they may have to move to an apartment if something good doesn't happen to their finances.
Norman Osborn and Otto Octavius both are friends and workers together in Oscorp. Norman is the owner. Both work on a Fusion Reacter project and they are forced to test it within a week, or they'll loose they're contract! Otto is weary of testing it so soon, but Norman forces him, telling him that if Otto doesn't do it, then Norman will! Otto eventually decides to go ahead and do it.
Peter, by now has discovered his powers, and for a while he has been acting very strange and has been forgetting to keep his promises to his aunt and uncle. And now, upon paying more attention to his aunt and uncle's finances, and looking at a Wrestling Ad in the papers, he decides to make a costume and enter, so he can help his aunt and uncle with finances. When he leaves, Uncle Ben follows him out the door and decides to take him. Uncle Ben brings up Peter's oddness lately and the two get into an argument. Peter then gets out and leaves.
At the wrestling match, Peter wins and goes in for the money and the guy won't pay him! Long story short, he is robbed and Peter refuses to go after him, for revenge.
Meanwhile, Uncle Ben waits for Peter. Flashbacks of his argument with Peter. Uncle Ben feels very troubled by his nephew's reaction. Someone comes up to the car and taps a gun on the glass. Uncle Ben is startled, the man breaks into the car and grabs Uncle Ben. "Wait sir, you don't want to do this!" Uncle Ben pleads. The man tells him all he wants is the car...
When Peter goes out, he sees that Uncle Ben has been shot! He goes after the carjacker and when he catches up to him and finds out that it's the guy that he refused to stop! The guy trips and falls.
At the graduation, Peter, Harry, Gwen, Flash Thompson, Liz Allen and others smile as they're picture is taken. Norman comes and him, Peter and Harry have a conversation. Norman invites Peter to live with Harry in his old apartment, in order to help out with finances. Back home Peter and Aunt May talk about the loose of Uncle Ben. Peter then makes the decision to be a hero. Because "With Great Power, comes great responsibility"
Later, Spider-Man swings through the city doing various, spectacular things. Meanwhile, Otto Octavius opens up the demonstration, and attaches the mechanical arms to his spine, and everything seems to be going good when suddenly the machine begins to pull metals from all over the room towards the machine! Spider-Man swings by and sees people running away screaming, he crashes through the window and then destroys the machine. But in the process, the destroying of the machine causes an explosion, that kills Otto's wife, Rossy! Soon after, sparks from the machine go to Otto and knock him unconcious!
That night, at the hospital, the surgeons plan to cut off the mechanical arms and the surgery goes horribly wrong as the arms defend themselves. They take out all the doctors!
Back at Harry and Peter's apartment, Peter looks at the paper and sees a Daily Bugle ad saying that they will pay big bucks for photos of Spider-Man and Doc Ock!
Long story short, Peter gets the job, bringing photos of himself as Spidey. Now JJ Jameson gives Peter the job of getting photos of Doc Ock. Peter goes on an investigation, he finds Ock's lair and takes a few photos. Ock notices him. "You! You killed my wife, and my scientific dream!" The battle begins as Ock attacks Spidey.
The whole Doc Ock/Spidey story continues on...
And eventually Peter asks Gwen Stacy out and she accepts.
Anyway... the story goes on. Doc Ock eventually goes into hiding, and Norman is being fired from Oscorp by the board of directors. Norman now uses himself as a guiny pig in HIS experiment!
Gwen Stacy will take the place of Mary Jane Watson for a little while (going more according to the comics). Gwen still doesn't know much about Peter, she just stands afar, pitying his life.
During a radiactifity demonstration, Peter is bitten by a spider, that dangled down into the radiactive beam and eventually receives his powers. We are also introduced to Uncle Ben and Aunt May. The Parker's have a lot of financial problems, and there is fear that they may have to move to an apartment if something good doesn't happen to their finances.
Norman Osborn and Otto Octavius both are friends and workers together in Oscorp. Norman is the owner. Both work on a Fusion Reacter project and they are forced to test it within a week, or they'll loose they're contract! Otto is weary of testing it so soon, but Norman forces him, telling him that if Otto doesn't do it, then Norman will! Otto eventually decides to go ahead and do it.
Peter, by now has discovered his powers, and for a while he has been acting very strange and has been forgetting to keep his promises to his aunt and uncle. And now, upon paying more attention to his aunt and uncle's finances, and looking at a Wrestling Ad in the papers, he decides to make a costume and enter, so he can help his aunt and uncle with finances. When he leaves, Uncle Ben follows him out the door and decides to take him. Uncle Ben brings up Peter's oddness lately and the two get into an argument. Peter then gets out and leaves.
At the wrestling match, Peter wins and goes in for the money and the guy won't pay him! Long story short, he is robbed and Peter refuses to go after him, for revenge.
Meanwhile, Uncle Ben waits for Peter. Flashbacks of his argument with Peter. Uncle Ben feels very troubled by his nephew's reaction. Someone comes up to the car and taps a gun on the glass. Uncle Ben is startled, the man breaks into the car and grabs Uncle Ben. "Wait sir, you don't want to do this!" Uncle Ben pleads. The man tells him all he wants is the car...
When Peter goes out, he sees that Uncle Ben has been shot! He goes after the carjacker and when he catches up to him and finds out that it's the guy that he refused to stop! The guy trips and falls.
At the graduation, Peter, Harry, Gwen, Flash Thompson, Liz Allen and others smile as they're picture is taken. Norman comes and him, Peter and Harry have a conversation. Norman invites Peter to live with Harry in his old apartment, in order to help out with finances. Back home Peter and Aunt May talk about the loose of Uncle Ben. Peter then makes the decision to be a hero. Because "With Great Power, comes great responsibility"
Later, Spider-Man swings through the city doing various, spectacular things. Meanwhile, Otto Octavius opens up the demonstration, and attaches the mechanical arms to his spine, and everything seems to be going good when suddenly the machine begins to pull metals from all over the room towards the machine! Spider-Man swings by and sees people running away screaming, he crashes through the window and then destroys the machine. But in the process, the destroying of the machine causes an explosion, that kills Otto's wife, Rossy! Soon after, sparks from the machine go to Otto and knock him unconcious!
That night, at the hospital, the surgeons plan to cut off the mechanical arms and the surgery goes horribly wrong as the arms defend themselves. They take out all the doctors!
Back at Harry and Peter's apartment, Peter looks at the paper and sees a Daily Bugle ad saying that they will pay big bucks for photos of Spider-Man and Doc Ock!
Long story short, Peter gets the job, bringing photos of himself as Spidey. Now JJ Jameson gives Peter the job of getting photos of Doc Ock. Peter goes on an investigation, he finds Ock's lair and takes a few photos. Ock notices him. "You! You killed my wife, and my scientific dream!" The battle begins as Ock attacks Spidey.
The whole Doc Ock/Spidey story continues on...
And eventually Peter asks Gwen Stacy out and she accepts.
Anyway... the story goes on. Doc Ock eventually goes into hiding, and Norman is being fired from Oscorp by the board of directors. Norman now uses himself as a guiny pig in HIS experiment!
To be continued...
By the way, this is only a rough draft, and it seems basically just like Spider-Man 1 , with Spider-Man 2 elements thrown in... but hey, what can you do? (As I continue in the story with later instalments of this idea, the story will get more original)
