'The Amazing Spider-Man' Screenplay by 'thejon93'

[thejon93]

PART 16:

INT. ENFORCER'S APARTMENT - DAY

DAN and OX stepped inside the apartment. But, before he
could even make it through the doorway, MONTANA was stopped
by the LANDLORD.

LANDLORD
(To MONTANA)
Rent is past due, WILLIAM.


MONTANA
You'll get it, when you get it.
Okay?...


LANDLORD
(Pauses
momentarily)
...You have 'til the end of the
week.


The LANDLORD then walked off and up the hallway, MONTANA
stared furiously up at him, before he stepped in-through the
doorway and then slammed the door behind him. Both OX and
DAN were looking at him, as they stood in the living room.

MONTANA
(Voice raises in
volume)
...I'm tired of this place, and I
hate this damn city!


MONTANA kicked his boot up-against the wall, from the
impact, there was a large dent in the wall from his kick.
MONTANA then marched over to the window, where he then
stopped before it and looked out and down at the street. DAN
and OX both followed MONTANA with their eyes, as they turned
to face him, while he was by the window.

MONTANA
(Mutters)
...Kid.


DAN
Yeah?


MONTANA
(Mutters)
...You're right. These people...
they don't deserve my attacks...
They'll all be getting their's,
soon enough... But, for now...


MONTANA turned to face DAN.

MONTANA
(Finished)
I'm sorry about today.


DAN
...You didn't ask much of me. But,
next time... I'll follow along.
You released me from prison to
start something new... With you
two... I'll follow you guys
anywhere, from now on, for what
you did... You guys are the only
true family I have.


MONTANA smiled softly, as he then nodded at DAN.


INT. PETER'S BEDROOM - DAY

PETER took one of the half-empty web-cartridges out from
within his fake book, as he then took it to the doorway.
Holding it up against the doorknob, he then released a seal,
as artifical web then begun to spiral around the doorknob.

PETER popped the seal back into place, where he then looked
around his room for a place to tie the line onto. Finally,
he just took it with him back to his desk, wrapping it
around one of his desk-legs.

PETER
(Mutters to
himself)
Time to sew 'em up, SPIDEY.


PETER picked up a needle and thread with both his hands, he
held the thread to the little, as he then slid the thread
into the hole on the end of the needle.

PETER
(Mutters)
Easier than I remember.


PETER tied the thread, where he then reached behind him to
grab his SPIDER-MAN costume, which was hanging from the
chair. he laid it flat out before him on the cleared-out
desk, where he then poked the needle in and through the edge
of where the cut was on the front of his suit.

CUT TO:


PETER holds up the SPIDER-MAN costume to the falling sun,
outside his window. The cut along the chest was sewn back
up, while the wrist-areas were also patched up.

PETER
(Mutters to
himself)
Not too shabby, MR. PARKER. Not
too shabby, at all.


PETER then folded up the costume in his arms, where he then
crouched down beside his bed. Reaching under it, he pulls
out a briefcase. Opening it, PETER gently places it inside,
to make sure it would fit, as it did. Satisfied, PETER
closed the briefcase and slid it back under his bed.

PETER stood back up, then sat down on his bed. Sighing, he
looked outside the window. Thinking to himself for a few
moments, PETER then catches sight of his cell-phone on his
shelf. PETER reaches towards it and picks it up.

CUT TO:


In his bedroom, HARRY's cell-phone started to vibrate by his
computer desk. HARRY looked over at it while he sat at the
computer desk and picked it up.

HARRY
(Answers the phone)
Hello?

 

[thejon93]

PART 17:

EXT. JUNKYARD - NIGHT

A lightpost above flickers on-and-off in the middle of the
junkyard. Peering out from behind a van was PETER, as he
looked around the yard to see if anybody was around. PETER
pulls his head back to behind the van.

PETER
(Whispers)
Okay, HARRY. The coast is clear.


HARRY
(Whispers)
PETE, why are we here again?


PETER
(Whispers)
Hey! It's "NERD'S R US" here,
ain't it? Come on.


PETER carefully snuck around the deserted van, while HARRY
gasped and then followed behind PETER. Searching through a
pile of metal scraps, PETER pulls out a scrap that interests
him. He places the scrap inside his backpack.

HARRY
(Whispers)
What are we looking for here,
again?


PETER
(Whispers)
Definitely not winter tires, my
friend.


HARRY sarcastically laughs, while he then searches through
the pile with PETER. He pulls out a piece and shows it to
PETER. PETER shakes his head, disapproving of the scrap,
where HARRY then tossed it away. Colliding with the ground,
it made a loud, metal-bang. PETER reeled himself up
slightly, before crouching back down.

PETER
(Whispers)
Can you try your best to not...
make... noise?...


HARRY
(Whispers)
Hey. You asked me to come along
with you on this... "adventure".
What are you, anyhow, afraid of
the dark?


PETER
(Chuckles lightly;
whispers)
Please... Why would I be scared
when I've got this flickering
candle above my head?


PETER pointed back to the flickering lightpost, as HARRY
himself then chuckled lightly. PETER and HARRY continued to
look through the scrap-metal. Finding another good piece,
PETER places it inside his backpack, along with the other.
HARRY then pulls one up.

HARRY
(Whispers)
This good?


PETER takes hold of HARRY's hand and twists it around to
examine the metal scrap.

PETER
(Whispers)
...Yeah, that'll do. Good find,
HARRY.


PETER takes the piece of scrap from HARRY and places it
inside his backpack, as well. Where suddenly, a white light
flashed over the both of them. HARRY and PETER both jumped
to their feet in fear, holding their arms high in the air.

HARRY
Don't shoot!


ABNER
What in the heck are you kids
doing here?


PETER
(Mutters)
...ABNER?...


HARRY
Who?


ABNER led the light off of HARRY and PETER, where he then
walked towards the two.

ABNER
Hey, PETER. What are you out this
late for?


PETER
(Smirks)
The... almighty power of science,
of course.


Another man then walked up next to ABNER.

MAX
Who are these guys?


ABNER turned to face MAX.

ABNER
These are "kids", MAX. One's named
PETER, and the other's named...?


ABNER then faced towards HARRY.

HARRY
(Studders)
Ahh... I'm HARRY, HARRY OSBORN.


MAX
OSBORN, ehh? Why is it that I see
your billboards all over the city
with your name plastered on 'em?


HARRY
Oh, those are my father's.


MAX
(Nods)
I see. Rich daddy's boy right
here, as well. Well... semi-rich,
of course. Especially when
compared to somebody who has
billboards all around the city.


HARRY smiles, while ABNER notices the pile of scrap-metal
PETER and HARRY were searching through.

ABNER
So, PETER...


PETER
Yeah?


ABNER
(Pauses for a
moment)
You know, we just received a batch
of broken and busted airplanes, a
while ago. You can check over
around there, if you want.


ABNER points into the direction of the airplanes. PETER and
HARRY turn to where ABNER had pointed.

ABNER
(Continues)
But, just be careful, I don't want
to hear reports tommorrow morning
about how two youngsters who were
injured or... Well, just be
careful. Right, fellas?


PETER and HARRY exchange looks with one another.

PETER
Definitely.


CUT TO:


PETER and HARRY climbed inside an abandoned airplane. PETER
looked around in amusement, while HARRY looked around in
caution.

PETER
(Whispers)
How old do you think this plane
is, HARRY?


HARRY
(Whispers)
...My predicition: Too old to be
stepping in. I'm starting to wish
those guys back there would've
just told us to leave.


PETER
(Whispers)
Don't worry about it, HARRY... If
you hear it creaking, just step on
over to the opposite end.


HARRY gulped.


INT. AUTO SHOP - DAY

Walking in the student-filled auto shop, RANDY and PETER
make their way towards the welding equipment.

RANDY
So, let me get this straight,
PETER. You want me to make you
a...


PETER
Wrist-bracelet... like thing.


RANDY takes PETER's plastic grocery bag with the pieces of
scrap-metal inside.

RANDY
Well... I'll see what I can do for
you, genius solider.


RANDY then set the bag of scrap-metal down on the welding
table.

PETER
Thanks a lot for this, RANDY.


RANDY
No problem, PETE. How's the BUGLE
going?


PETER
It's going great. It really is.
It's nice to have such a steady
job when you're still in high
school.


RANDY
Definitely agree with you on that
one. Better to start early than
later.


PETER nods.

RANDY
(Remembers)
Oh! And, how's my father working
along with you?


PETER
It's great. It's just so nice to
work with such a kind guy.


RANDY
(Chuckles)
Great for me, right?


PETER
Yeah. Definitely.


RANDY
Yeah. But, you should see him when
he comes into the house. He's kind
of like FRED from "THE
FLINSTONES"-


RANDY stops, as PETER and him start to laugh.

RANDY
(Mocks FRED
FLINSTONE voice)
WILMA!


PETER and RANDY continued to laugh.

 

[thejon93]

PART 18:

EXT. SKYSCRAPER - DAY

Along one of the many tall skyscrapers, SPIDER-MAN is
clinged up-against the wall of the building. Where he
continues to look around the city.

SPIDER-MAN
(Narration)
Just great, right? A SPIDEY
without a web, perfect.


SPIDER-MAN suddenly lets his grip of the building wall go,
whereas he slowly descends lower and lower down the
building, until he finally touches hold of it again, with
his feet, as he begins to run down along the wall.

Reaching the peak now to where it was safe to jump onto
another building, SPIDER-MAN kicked away from the building
wall and landed amongst a rooftop; rolling to a halt.

SPIDER-MAN looks down to his camera to notice that it has
fallen over while on auto-shoot; even through the book that
was holding it in place. SPIDER-MAN picked up the camera and
examined the pictures that it took, only one of the pictures
was any good.

SPIDER-MAN gasps.

SPIDER-MAN
Why can't the webs be organic?



INT. DAILY BUGLE - DAY

The DAILY BUGLE was busy, as usual. PETER made his way
through the mob of people and finally found his way on over
to ROBBIE's desk. ROBBIE wasn't there. PETER looked around
for ROBBIE.

ROBBIE
Hey, PETER.


PETER turned around to catch sight of ROBBIE holding in his
arms a pile of file folders.

PETER
Hey, ROBBIE.


PETER helped ROBBIE with the file folders he was carrying,
where he then set them down onto ROBBIE's desk.

ROBBIE
Thanks, PETE. Catch any new pics
of the wall-crawler?


PETER
Well... "picture" of SPIDER-MAN.


PETER hands ROBBIE the photo he shot. ROBBIE chuckles.

ROBBIE
(Looks at PETER)
This is great, PETER.


PETER
Really?


ROBBIE
(Examines the
photo)
Yeah. From the reflections of the
buildings, to the position of the
shot, to SPIDER-MAN... Did he hit
you while he was falling?


PETER
(Laughs)
No. But he was pretty darned
close-


JAMESON
(Shouts)
PARKER!


PETER jokingly closes his eyes, as ROBBIE smirks.

PETER
(Whispers to
ROBBIE)
I'll see you later, ROBBIE.


ROBBIE
(Waves)
Good luck.


CUT TO:


Stepping into JAMESON's office, PETER looks up at JAMESON.
NED was also inside the office, standing by the wall, with
his arms folded. JAMESON turned away from peering out the
window and turned around to face PETER.

JAMESON
Oh, you're here.


PETER
(Confused)
Yes, sir?...


JAMESON
PETER, guess what?


PETER
What?


JAMESON
(Shouts)
My son! That's what! My son's
going to the moon, tomorrow, so we
should have front-page pictures of
that!


PETER
(Surprised)
JOHN's going to the moon?...
Tomorrow?!


JAMESON
(Shouts)
Yes! Didn't anybody tell you?!


PETER
No, sir. But, I wish I'd known of
this beforehand. Last I heard,
they were making preparations for
the mission-


JAMESON
(Shouts)
What?!... My son doesn't need
preparation! By golly, boy, he's
an AMERICAN HERO!


PETER
Absolutely, sir.


JAMESON
(Pauses
momentarily,
shouts)
See? I told you so!



EXT. PAWN SHOP - NIGHT

Rushing out of the pawn shop were TWO MUGGERS, who started
sprinting up the street. Catching sight of the muggers,
SPIDER-MAN leapt from his spun webline, and cast another
one, as he swung down towards the TWO MUGGERS.

SPIDER-MAN
(Calls)
Hey, boys!


The TWO MUGGERS turned around to see SPIDER-MAN swinging
towards them, as he kicked the two across their faces.
Falling to the ground, SPIDER-MAN webbed them up to the
sidewalk.

SPIDER-MAN
Whoa, boys. Talk about a simple
chore. You fellas gonna try this
again sometime?


MUGGER #1
We won't have to try... Not when
you're out of the equation, freak.


SPIDER-MAN
You know what's funny? I think
that you're about the third guy,
this week, who said that to me.


MUGGER #2
Save us the humour, SPIDER-MAN.
Somebody's going to get killed
tonight, if you don't do something
about it.


SPIDER-MAN looked down at MUGGER #2, he crouched down beside
him.

SPIDER-MAN
(Whispers to
MUGGER #2)
Then are you brave enough to tell
me where this is going down?...

 

[thejon93]

PART 19:

EXT. ROOFTOP - NIGHT

SPIDER-MAN leaps free from being clung up-against the
building wall, landing on the roof of the building where the
ENFORCERS were gathered. MONTANA held his lasso over the
building's edge, a woman's cries echoed over the edge. A
helicopter lied near the side of the building, it's blades
spinning.

MONTANA
Glad to see that you've answered
our little invitation there,
SPIDER-MAN. We've got a little
task for you to play here with
us...


CUT TO:


CAPT. STACY walked over to the OFFICER checking a mechanical
device.

CAPT. STACY
Do you think this'll work, son?


OFFICER
I'm not sure, sir. But, I'm hoping
this works-


CAPT. STACY
(Completes)
Just in case the man can't save
the damsel.


JEAN then appeared behind CAPT. STACY, crossing her arms
together.

JEAN
Glad to see that you've finally
come to your senses, GEORGE.


CAPT. STACY turns around to face JEAN.

CAPT. STACY
(Smirks)
Nice to see you too, DEWOLFE.


JEAN
(Nods)
Likewise, CAPTAIN.


CUT TO:


OX
I say that we destroy the little
bug now.


OX clenches his fists together.

MONTANA
Why do that when we can play a
fun-little game with him, first?


MONTANA smirked.

SPIDER-MAN
What makes you think I haven't
been through this kind of thing
before?


The ENFORCERS all laughed.

MONTANA
(Chuckling)
What makes you think we told
ourselves that to begin with?


SPIDER-MAN didn't respond, as the four remained silent for a
moment. MONTANA smirked again.

MONTANA
(Mutters)
Okay...


MONTANA then pulls loose his lasso, a woman's loud scream
echoed throughout the street again, as SPIDER-MAN raced into
her direction. DAN prepared his bo staff, only to have
SPIDER-MAN leap off to the side of the building.

DAN
(Screams)
No!


CUT TO:


CAPT. STACY
(Yells)
Hit it now!


The OFFICER hit the device, only to have the instrument on
the sidewalk instantly inflate. CAPT. STACY smiled in
surprise, only to have the instrument explode.

CAPT. STACY
(Curses)
Dammit!


CAPT. STACY then looks up at the building wall, only to see
that SPIDER-MAN had caught the woman. CAPT. STACY smiled, as
SPIDER-MAN then discovered something. Suddenly, SPIDER-MAN
let the woman go, the crowd on the street gasped, as the
woman then hit the ground.

Everyone was frozen with shock, until CAPT. STACY walked
towards the fallen woman. SPIDER-MAN met with him while
climbing down the wall. CAPT. STACY crotched down and
checked the woman, she looked so real. Aside from the inside
of her mouth, which was obviously mechanical with silver
glowing around the edges inside.

CAPT. STACY
(Whispers)
This was all for you?


SPIDER-MAN
(Whispers)
I certainly hope not.


CAPT. STACY smiled, as he nodded.

CAPT. STACY
(Whispers)
And, what else is next? You not
web-swinging?...


SPIDER-MAN chuckles.

SPIDER-MAN
You'll be quite surprised,
CAPTAIN.


SPIDER-MAN noticed the crowd of people look up to the sky,
SPIDER-MAN looked up as well, only to see the helicopter
from on the roof take-off. CAPT. STACY stood to his feet,
followed by SPIDER-MAN.

CAPT. STACY
I'm sure we'll catch them soon,
hero. Just rest easy tonight in
knowing that.


SPIDER-MAN
(Sighs)
Yeah... However, my night's not
over with these guys yet-


Suddenly, PETER PARKER's cell-phone went off. SPIDER-MAN
took the phone from out of his back-pocket and answers it.
SPIDER-MAN turns towards CAPT. STACY.

SPIDER-MAN
Excuse me.


CAPT. STACY smirked, as SPIDER-MAN then leapt back up onto
the building wall and began to climb up it, until he reached
the roof.

CUT TO:


On the rooftop, SPIDER-MAN answered his cell-phone as he ran
along it into the direction to which the helicopter was
headed.

SPIDER-MAN
Hello?


SPIDER-MAN quickly slipped his cell-phone into his mask,
while still online with the person, so that it'd stay put as
he leapt to the next building ahead.

GWEN
(On the phone)
PETER?


SPIDER-MAN finally landed amongst the building wall, as he
quickly begun to scale up it.

SPIDER-MAN
Hey, GWEN. How are you?


SPIDER-MAN finally made it up to the rooftop, as he
continued his pursuit of the helicopter; which was
approximately a regular-sized building length away from him.

GWEN
(On the phone)
I'm good. How are you?


SPIDER-MAN
Excellent-


SPIDER-MAN stopped speaking for a moment, as he then leapt
to the next building.

SPIDER-MAN
(Finished)
Never been better.


SPIDER-MAN landed right amongst the rooftop of the building,
as he then ran along to the next.

GWEN
(On the phone)
That's good. But, I was wondering
if you wanted to go out after?...


SPIDER-MAN
Certainly. I'll meet at your place
in about a half-hour.


SPIDER-MAN then leapt far across to the next building, just
barely making it to grasp onto the building wall.

GWEN
(On the phone)
Alright. I'll see you then. Bye.


SPIDER-MAN
See ya, GWEN.


SPIDER-MAN begun to run up the building wall, as he then
pulled his cell-phone out from within his mask and placed it
back in his costume's pocket. Making it up to the edge of
the building, SPIDER-MAN flips around and goes to spin a
webline at the water-tower. But nothing came out, as he
didn't have his web-shooters.

SPIDER-MAN
(To himself)
Great, SPIDEY.


SPIDER-MAN descended slightly down the building, before
grabbing hold of the wall again. With that, he quickly
continued his way up the building. This time, crawling onto
the roof. SPIDER-MAN then leapt onto water-tower to examine
the helicopter's position. He could still make it.

SPIDER-MAN
(To himself)
Might as well try...


SPIDER-MAN leapt off of the water-tower into the direction
of the flying helicopter. He was slowly beginning to gain on
the helicopter, as the building's he leapt didn't vary much
in height-difference.

 

[thejon93]

PART 20:

OX and DAN both looked down at SPIDER-MAN gaining on the
helicopter.

DAN
Hero's still on us, MONTANA.


MONTANA
(Pulls up his
lasso)
Good.


MONTANA tossed the lasso to DAN, as OX then slid the door to
the helicopter open. He held firmly onto the side, as he
glared down to catch sight of SPIDER-MAN leaping up to a
cable antenna. OX pulled back in and patted DAN on the
shoulder to ready the lasso.

Suddenly, a large thud came across the side of the
helicopter. DAN straightened his position, where SPIDER-MAN
then appeared along the edge of the helicopter's doorway
with his head in-view of DAN. DAN swung the lasso, but
missed SPIDER-MAN as he pulled back outside the helicopter.
DAN grunted in rage.

SPIDER-MAN suddenly came crawling quickly into the
helicopter. DAN again swung the lasso, but missed SPIDER-MAN
again, as SPIDER-MAN crawled down from the interior of the
helicopter and kicked DAN in the head. Only it was OX who
hit SPIDER-MAN with a clubbing blow, as SPIDER-MAN was
reeled backwards by the blow.

Crashing into the helicopter's interior, SPIDER-MAN quickly
comes back at OX with his own clubbing blow right into OX's
gut. OX grunted in pain, as he fell down to his knees. But
suddenly, DAN was up with the lasso and swung it at
SPIDER-MAN. The lasso hit SPIDER-MAN's head, where suddenly,
SPIDER-MAN's mask came off, as it flew out the window.

DAN was frozen for a moment, glaring at SPIDER-MAN while he
tried to hide his face from the ENFORCERS. But then, OX
kicked SPIDER-MAN in the stomach. This launched SPIDER-MAN
out of the helicopter, as he landed painfully on his back,
where he landed on the roof of a building.

The helicopter shut it's door and disappeared behind the
skyscrapers of downtown MANHATTAN.

SPIDER-MAN grunted in pain, as he held hold of his head.
Leaning over to his side, SPIDER-MAN then caught sight of
his mask. It lied further along the rooftop to which
SPIDER-MAN himself was on.


INT. STACY'S HOUSE - DAY

GWEN sat patiently on her sofa, watching the television. It
was set on a news-station. But GWEN's eyes were fixed to the
clock it had on the banner at the bottom.


INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY

AUNT MAY sat amongst the sofa. Knitting, she was listening
to the cooking channel which she had set on. She smiled in
agreement about the host had said about a certain recipe.

Suddenly, PETER came rushing through the front-door, as he
raced up to the washroom. AUNT MAY could only catch a
glimpse of him, as she looked up at the staircase in
confusion.

CUT TO:


PETER closed the door to the washroom. Turning over to the
mirror, he took off his shirt to reveal his SPIDER-MAN
costume underneath. He threw his shirt to the floor as he
then stretched out his costume a bit to try and relieve
himself of the pain he was experiencing.

PETER grunted in pain, as he then sat down amongst the
toilet seat. Holding his head in his palms, he slowly gasped
for breath for a few moments. But, afterwords, he then
reached over and the curtain over to the shower and turned
on the hot water tap.


INT. CHAMELEON'S APARTMENT - DAY

The ENFORCERS came walking up behind CHAMELEON; who was
seated on his sofa, reading the newspaper. It was a
front-page story, entitled: "JOHN JAMESON TO THE MOON".

CHAMELEON
(Chuckles lightly)
I love this guy.


CHAMELEON folds up the newspaper and sets it on the table.

MONTANA
We failed, DMITRI.


CHAMELEON stood up from the sofa and brushed off his suit
with his hand, where he then walked around the sofa to meet
with the ENFORCERS.

CHAMELEON
I know. Why else do you think I'm
learning how to read english?
Especially for tomorrow morning's
newspaper.


CHAMELEON smiled, showing his crystal-white teeth, where he
then turned away from the ENFORCERS and walked into the
kitchen. CHAMELEON sighed, as he opened the fridge door.

CHAMELEON
(Pauses for a
moment)
You know, I'm beginning to think
of hiring SPIDER-MAN himself for
completing some of my errands. I'm
sure it'd be worth it, hiring
somebody who could actually get
the job done.


DAN seemed enraged. MONTANA peered at him for a moment,
before turning back to CHAMELEON.

MONTANA
The job you gave us was to kill
SPIDER-MAN to make room for you to
do your buisness with the scum of
the criminal underworld... We're
getting the job done, and we're
going to get the job done!


CHAMELEON suddenly burst out, laughing maniacally.

CHAMELEON
And, you think that you... and
your little crew there aren't a
part of the criminal underworld?
Give me a break.


MONTANA yawned aloud for a moment.

MONTANA
You know, CHAMELEON, you have a
cool head... But, it's a damn
shame that your mouth isn't worth
listening to.


CHAMELEON then turned towards MONTANA, angrily, where
MONTANA, OX and DAN then turned away from CHAMELEON and
headed towards the exit.


INT. ENFORCER'S APARTMENT - DAY

DAN, MONTANA and OX all sat up-against the wall on the
floor. MONTANA took a drink from his canteen, as he then
faced the others.

MONTANA
We'll have to be out of here by
morning.


OX nodded, while DAN turned to face MONTANA.

DAN
You certainly did tell that freak
off, MONTANA.


MONTANA and OX started laughing, where DAN then joined in.

MONTANA
Thanks, kid.


MONTANA patted DAN on the shoulder, while OX then reached
over to MONTANA and grabbed the canteen to take a drink.

DAN
(Asks MONTANA)
Remember in the helicopter today,
when you passed me the lasso?...


MONTANA
Yeah.


DAN
I hit SPIDER-MAN in the head-


MONTANA and OX both begun to laugh hysterically.

MONTANA
Bet that was fun for ya, right?


DAN looked away from MONTANA, as he thought for a moment.

DAN
I tore his mask. It fell off his
face.


DAN once again turned to face MONTANA, who was listening
carefully, along with OX.

DAN
I saw the man behind the mask.


MONTANA
(Shouts; stands to
his feet)
What?!


MONTANA looked down at DAN, while OX looked back and forth
between MONTANA and DAN.

DAN
I didn't think it was that big of
a deal. I mean, I could barely
define his face to you guys
whether I drew it out on paper or
told you in description.


MONTANA
Then tell me what you saw.


DAN paused for a moment, as he closed his eyes and thought.

OX
His hair was brown. He was
caucasion, from what I could tell
when I kicked him out of the
helicopter.


DAN
(Opens eyes, nods)
Yeah. He was a kid, MONTANA.


MONTANA
...How old would you say?


DAN
He looked to be about... sixteen
years old.


MONTANA turned away from DAN, as OX stood to his feet as
well. MONTANA then walked towards the weapons cache and
sorted through it.

MONTANA
(Mutters to
himself)
And, MIDTOWN HIGH would be the
most likely place for him to be.


OX
(Overhears MONTANA)
"MIDTOWN HIGH"?...


MONTANA turns towards DAN and OX, where he then smiles.

MONTANA
Boys, we're gonna get that money
by catching us a SPIDER-MAN...

 

[thejon93]

PART 21:

INT. PETER'S BEDROOM - DAY

It was close to nighttime, as the sky was coloured a
light-blue. Seated on the ledge of his window, PETER looks
down to his cell-phone. On it's screen, it read "GWEN STACY"
and had GWEN STACY's cell-phone number below it. Looking up
to the sky, PETER then closed the phone.

PETER
(Mutters to
himself)
You can't call her...


Suddenly, the doorbell rang. PETER turned his attention
towards it, where he then quickly set his phone back onto
his desk and raced out of his room.

CUT TO:


Rushing down the stairs, PETER beat AUNT MAY to the door. He
turned towards her while holding onto the doorknob.

PETER
(Smiles)
I got it, AUNT MAY.


AUNT MAY nodded, as she then went back into the kitchen.
PETER took a deep breath, closing his eyes for a moment,
before opening the door. But, he was surprised at who was at
the other end.

PETER
(Surprised)
RANDY, what are you doing here?


RANDY smirked at PETER.

RANDY
What you forget already?


RANDY then pulled out from the grocery bag he had with him
two new web-shooter casts. PETER's eyes widened, while he
remained speechless for a moment.

PETER
You finished it already?


RANDY
(Smiles)
Hey. That's what you get for
calling the best.


PETER smiled back at RANDY, who handed PETER the two
web-shooters, where he then turned around and begun to walk
back towards his bike, which was on the sidewalk.

PETER
(Calls)
RANDY!


RANDY reached his bike, then turned back around to face
PETER.

PETER
Thank you.


RANDY nodded, where he then climbed back onto his bike and
begun to ride up the street.


INT. STACY'S HOUSE - NIGHT

GWEN finished dinner, sitting with here mother, HELEN, at
the dining room table.

HELEN
Honey, I know you're sad about
you're friend not arriving. But,
you have to remember that, that
boy has a lot of responsibilities.


GWEN looked up at HELEN and smiled lightly.

GWEN
I know...


Suddenly with that, the front-door opened. It was CAPT.
STACY.

CAPT. STACY
(Calls)
Anyone home?


HELEN
We're in the dining room, GEORGE.


CAPT. STACY peered around the corner at the two.

CAPT. STACY
GWEN, you have somebody at the
door.


GWEN then got up from her seat. By the doorway, CAPT. STACY
took off his shoes and hung-up his coat. Walking out of the
way, it revealed to GWEN that PETER was at the door. GWEN
smiled, as she then walked towards PETER.

GWEN
You're late.


PETER
I always am.


GWEN then grabbed hold of PETER and hugged him. Looking up
at CAPT. STACY was PETER, where CAPT. STACY smiled in the
sight of the two. PETER smiles back at him, where he then
hugged GWEN back.


EXT. PARK - NIGHT

Seated on a bench viewing out towards the trees in the park,
while facing the traffic, PETER and GWEN sat next to each
other, both of them were holding milkshakes in their hands.
PETER took a sip from his own.

PETER
(Pulls away from
the straw)
Ugh... I think I'm gonna get
brain-freeze from this.


GWEN
(Giggles;
surprised)
What? It's good!


PETER
(Chuckled)
I know, I know.


GWEN then took a sip from her milkshake. She then pulled the
straw away from her.

GWEN
You should've picked chocolate,
because this is delicious.


PETER
Nah... I've got to stick around
with my main four food-colours.


GWEN
And, what would those four colours
be?...


PETER
(Looks at GWEN)
Red, white, blue and black, of
course.


GWEN
(Rolls eyes,
laughs)
Of course, SPIDER-MAN.


PETER
Hey! Well, he certainly has a cool
costume. Remember my costume for
halloween, last year?


GWEN
SPIDER-MAN.


PETER
Darn, you're good at remembering.
But, guess what it'll be this
year?


GWEN
(Guessed)
SPIDER-MAN?


PETER
Darn, you're also good at
guessing.


GWEN nodded, as she took another sip from her milkshake.

GWEN
Thank you.

 

[thejon93]

PART 22:

INT. MIDTOWN HIGH SCHOOL - DAY

PETER and HARRY walked up the staircase, along with other
STUDENTS, as the bell rung for class.

HARRY
So did you ask her, or not?


PETER
(Looks at HARRY;
smiles)
HARRY... Take some advice from the
love-master here, you just can't
jump into things with girls.
You've got to ease into it, take
your time. You know?


HARRY
(Mutters)
Oh, I know.


PETER
Hey. Do you not know who I am?-


FLASH then came up from behind PETER and shoved him lightly.
FLASH then started to laugh along with KENNY and LIZ, where
the three of them then continued up the staircase, with
FLASH holding his arm around LIZ's shoulder.

FLASH
(Laughing)
Get to class, PUNY PARKER!


PETER
(Calls to FLASH;
jokes)
Thank you very much, FLASH. And,
yes. Come one, come all! Be
dazzled before the very sight of
"THE AMAZING PUNY PARKER!"


HARRY put his hand on PETER's shoulder, as they stopped at
the top stair.

HARRY
(To PETER)
Have you never heard of ignoring
the bully?


PETER smiled, as he then set his hand on HARRY's shoulder.

PETER
HARRY, that's something I would
strongly recommend to any good
citizen around the world and
beyond.


CUT TO:


The hallway was clear, as footsteps begun to approach closer
to the classrooms.

CUT TO:


GWEN looked across the room at PETER. She quickly turned
back once she noticed PETER turning his head. PETER smirked
and tapped on HARRY's arm beside him. HARRY leaned in-closer
to PETER once MR. EDGAR turned towards the blackboard.

PETER
(Whispers)
I told you I was the love-master.


CUT TO:


In the main office, the SECRETARY was sorting through papers
in a file folder, until she looked up, where suddenly, she
was blown backwards in her chair by a powerful force. It was
MONTANA and the shock gun. TEACHERS from near came into the
room to inspect, but were also hit by the shock gun.

CUT TO:


PETER's SPIDER-SENSE suddenly went off in the middle of MR.
EDGAR's lesson. PETER looked around him, nothing seemed
dangerous. PETER raised his hand. MR. EDGAR stopped to
answer PETER.

MR. EDGAR
Yes, PETER?


PETER
Can I go to the washroom?


MR. EDGAR
Can you wait until after the
lesson?...


PETER nodded his head, where MR. EDGAR then nodded
in-return. Turning back towards the blackboard, MR. EDGAR
continued on with his lesson. PETER still remained slightly
worried about his SPIDER-SENSE going off, as he carefully
scrolled his eyes across the classroom.

CUT TO:


DAN and OX stood by the opposite end of the hallway, away
from each other.

MONTANA
(Over headset)
Attention, fellas. The teachers
are down in the office area.


OX and DAN then nodded at one another, where DAN then pulled
out of his pack a clamp which he attached to the first
classroom in the hallway. He passed the clamp at the other
end to OX, who attached it on the doorknob of the classroom
on the other end. Once finished, DAN and OX headed over to
the next two classrooms.

CUT TO:


MONTANA walked out of the office area, holding the shock gun
firmly in his hand. He then noticed TWO TEENAGERS talking to
one another by their lockers. MONTANA pursued them, where he
then pointed the shock gun at the two of them to grab their
attention. The TWO TEENAGERS raised their hands in fear.

MONTANA
(Smirks)
Good boys.


MONTANA then pulled the trigger back to the shock gun, which
sent the TWO TEENAGERS flying backwards and into the
lockers. MONTANA let out a slight laugh.

CUT TO:


DAN and OX were down with the classes down that hallway,
where they were then at the end with the washrooms.
Suddenly, on DAN's side, a TEENAGER opened the door to the
boy's washroom. DAN turned towards him and smiled, directing
the young boy to get back. He stepped back away from the
washroom door so DAN could close it behind the boy, as he
then placed a clamp around the door handle. Passing the
other to OX, he set it around the door handle of the girl's
washroom.

CUT TO:


MONTANA climbed up the staircase, leading to the second
floor.

CUT TO:


OX and DAN also climbed up the staircase to the second
floor, only it was a different staircase. This staircase led
up straight to the library, where both OX and DAN appeared
in-front of a glass-window looking into the library. OX
ducked down out of view, while DAN stood frozen for a
moment. DAN stepped closer to the window.

OX
(Whispers)
What are you doing, DAN?


DAN stopped nose-length away from the window, as he
continued to look at a YOUNGSTER who looked simular to
PETER. DAN pointed at the kid.

DAN
(Mutters)
That's him...


Suddenly, DAN wacked the window with his bo staff, where the
window then fell broken into a million pieces down to the
floor. The KIDS inside the library screamed, as the majority
of them ran away from DAN and OX. While the YOUNGSTER, who
looked like PETER, sat frozen in his seat from DAN staring
at him.

CUT TO:


MONTANA ran into the direction of the library, crossing into
the hallway which OX was in. OX was climbing into the
library through the window DAN broke. MONTANA heard a
classroom door open behind him, it was MR. EDGAR. MONTANA
quickly turned around and shot MR. EDGAR with the shock gun.

CUT TO:


DAN chased the YOUNGSTER around the aisles, as the YOUNGSTER
cried in fear. Turning a corner, the YOUNGSTER then ran into
OX, but OX didn't have a chance to catch him, as the
YOUNGSTER ran around him.

CUT TO:


Some of the kids in the classroom screamed from this, as
PETER's SPIDER SENSE went off. Suddenly, MONTANA appeared in
the doorway. Pointing the shock gun at the kids inside the
classroom, he quickly charges it up then fires at all of
them, where all of the kids in the classroom flew down
backwards from the blast. Everyone grunted in pain,
including PETER. PETER's grunts caught MONTANA's attention,
but he wasn't sure where it came from, from one of the
students. MONTANA pointed the shock gun at the mob of the
students on the floor.

MONTANA
One of you fellas have caught my
attention. Which one may that be?

 

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PART 23:

MONTANA stepped in closer to the students, PETER looked up
at MONTANA in fury. MONTANA looked down to PETER, then
smiled, as he pointed the shock gun down at PETER. Freezing
for a moment, the two stared at each. Until FLASH and KENNY
suddenly grabbed MONTANA by the legs, throwing him down to
the floor hard. The majority of the students then all begun
to attack MONTANA. FLASH suddenly laughed, as he reached up,
holding the shock gun in his hands.

FLASH
(Laughs)
Sweet!


PETER
(Warns)
FLASH-


FLASH and KENNY then both ran out of the classroom, followed
by the students who attacked MONTANA. MONTANA was
unconscious. Only PETER, HARRY, GWEN, LIZ and EDNA remained
in the classroom. PETER then stood up, as GWEN stood up with
him, grabbing hold of his hand.

GWEN
Where are you going, PETER?


PETER
(Quickly says)
I have no time to explain this, I
have to go now.


PETER was about to run off, before noticing that GWEN still
had his hand. He stepped back towards her and placed his
other-hand on GWEN's hand holding PETER's.

PETER
(Whispers to GWEN)
This ain't for the BUGLE, neither.
Trust me.


GWEN smiled, as she then set her free hand amongst PETER's.

GWEN
Alright.


PETER nods. GWEN then let go of his hands, as PETER patted
HARRY on the shoulder on his way out of the classroom.

CUT TO:


Still chasing the YOUNGSTER, DAN covers the rear of the
library aisles.

DAN
(Calls to OX)
Catch him if he comes out, OX.


OX didn't answer, as he retained focus on the aisles. While
DAN checked up and down each one.

CUT TO:


PETER was inside the boy's washroom. Already in the
SPIDER-MAN costume, only his mask remained to be put on.
However, before he slipped on his mask, he stopped himself.
He looked down to his backpack. Sitting inside it were his
new web-shooters. He pulled them out.

CUT TO:


GWEN, HARRY and LIZ all left from the classroom. Rushing up
the hallway leading to the stairs. However, LIZ suddenly
stopped herself. She looked back to the classroom and rushed
back towards it. But suddenly, MONTANA appeared, walking
out, holding EDNA hostage. His free hand gripped hold of his
lasso.

MONTANA
Young lady, would you mind finding
SPIDER-MAN and telling him to meet
me up on the rooftop? Thank you
very much.


MONTANA walked backwards towards the staircase with EDNA,
while keeping an eye on LIZ.

CUT TO:


Down to the last aisle in the library, DAN prepares to turn
the corner, but when he does, SPIDER-MAN suddenly appears.

SPIDER-MAN
Looking for me, FANCY?


DAN then wiped his bo staff towards SPIDER-MAN's head, where
SPIDER-MAN ducked, as DAN hit the books amongst the aisle.
SPIDER-MAN then stood back up and kicked DAN in the stomach,
which launched him backwards to the floor.

CUT TO:


LIZ ran down the hallway towards the running students, in
the mist of them, she could see RANDY.

LIZ
(Calls)
RANDY!


RANDY stops running with the students, as he then stopped
and looked back at LIZ. She then ran into him and hugged
him.

RANDY
You alright?


LIZ
I need to find SPIDER-MAN.


RANDY responded to her by turning his attention towards the
library. LIZ followed RANDY's eye-sight and caught
SPIDER-MAN in the library, fighting OX and DAN.

CUT TO:


OX swung a punch towards SPIDER-MAN's head, only to have
SPIDER-MAN avoid it by leaping backwards to the floor, where
he then kicked in OX's kneecaps with his feet. OX screamed
in pain, as he fell to the floor.

Suddenly, SPIDER-MAN's SPIDER SENSE went off. He turned in
the direction of the warning. It was DAN. SPIDER-MAN only
mildly avoided collision with DAN's bo staff, as SPIDER-MAN
himself rolled back to his feet to defend himself from DAN's
quickened attacks on him with the bo staff. Finally, DAN hit
a funny bone in SPIDER-MAN's forearm, as SPIDER-MAN no
longer had enough energy to defend from the blows. In
realization, SPIDER-MAN evaded another swing from DAN's bo
staff by leaping backwards.

CUT TO:


LIZ and RANDY rushed into the library, through the students
rushing out. Suddenly, the YOUNGSTER, who looked like PETER,
came rushing towards the exit. He banged into both LIZ and
RANDY, as he hurried out.

CUT TO:


DAN went to swing his bo staff at SPIDER-MAN, but SPIDER-MAN
again dodged it. Only to have OX clothesline SPIDER-MAN,
in-return. With the impact, SPIDER-MAN was flipped towards
one of the book shelves, which he knocked over with the
impact.

CUT TO:


LIZ then shook her head, where she then tried racing towards
SPIDER-MAN. But RANDY caught her from doing so, she fought
with him for a moment, but then finally stopped.

LIZ
(Cries)
SPIDER-MAN!


CUT TO:


SPIDER-MAN heard LIZ's cry, as he sat up from on the fallen
book-stand. But, quickly after that, his SPIDER-SENSE went
off. SPIDER-MAN rolled out of the way from DAN, as his bo
staff took out a shelf on the fallen book-stand. SPIDER-MAN
stood up on the book-stand, but then leapt into the air,
where he then kicked DAN in the chest with his feet.
However, while in the arm, OX grabbed hold of SPIDER-MAN's
legs, where he then tossed him towards a pyramid of book in
the middle of the room.

With SPIDER-MAN's collision, he knocked all off the books
over. Grunting in pain, OX quickly leans down to help DAN
back to his feet. The both of them then quickly march
towards SPIDER-MAN, who then begins to toss the fallen books
at them to stun them.

Sliding off of the fallen pile of books, SPIDER-MAN then
spins two weblines at one book each, where he then pulls
them off of the pile and hits DAN and OX's faces with them.

SPIDER-MAN
Ouch! Thankfully, for you, these
aren't hardcovers.


SPIDER-MAN delivers one finally swing of the books to DAN
who falls to the floor and lands with a thud on his back.
Only OX remained standing now. SPIDER-MAN then charged
towards him. Running up his body, SPIDER-MAN flips and kicks
OX in the head twice, with both his heels, where while still
in mid-air, he descends slightly back down to OX's stomach
length. There, SPIDER-MAN kicks OX, with both of his heels,
in the stomach. OX fell down onto the coffee table, breaking
it apart on impact.

Once landed, SPIDER-MAN paused for a moment, then let out a
chuckle, as he begun to web OX down to the floor. SPIDER-MAN
turned around and saw LIZ running towards him, as RANDY
walked. But suddenly, SPIDER-MAN was hit in the kneecap by
DAN's bo staff, as SPIDER-MAN fell painfully down to the
floor on his knees. DAN then held the bo staff in a
different position and hit SPIDER-MAN hard amongst the
shoulder.

SPIDER-MAN screamed aloud, as he fell to the floor to his
side. DAN then flipped the bo staff into the air, but,
before he could even touch it again, RANDY came running
towards DAN and shoulder-blocked him. Knocking DAN down to
the floor, seemingly unconscious.

LIZ ran to the other side of SPIDER-MAN, as she and RANDY
both gently helped him up to his feet.

SPIDER-MAN
(Gasps for breath)
Thanks.


LIZ
SPIDER-MAN, we-


Cutting LIZ off, the library doors slammed open. It was
FLASH, and the rest of PETER's science class.

FLASH
(Yells; gasping
for breath)
SPIDER-MAN! There's this
crazy-guy... with a cowboy hat...
Holding that girl-


LIZ
(Completed for
FLASH)
EDNA. He's got EDNA.


SPIDER-MAN was about to reply, before he noticed FLASH
holding the shock gun. SPIDER-MAN suddenly took it out of
FLASH's hands to examine it.

 

[thejon93]

PART 24:

SPIDER-MAN slammed the door open to the roof. From further
along, he could hear EDNA's cries. SPIDER-MAN then begun to
limp towards MONTANA.

MONTANA
(Laughs)
I see you've got a little limp
there, SPIDER!


SPIDER-MAN
(Calls to MONTANA)
You know what I'm gonna wind up
saying, MONTANA, so do as you can
only guess!


MONTANA
(Calls to
SPIDER-MAN)
You see, SPIDER-MAN, guessing is
not my greatest strength... Hell,
I even guessed that you were going
to come in from behind me!...
Only... that would've been your
best decision.


SPIDER-MAN finally reached within talking range of MONTANA.

SPIDER-MAN
Maybe it's my day to rely on
others.


MONTANA
(Mocks)
Oh, but I thought you were the
hero... Face it SPIDER-MAN, when
you came out that door, you've
already lost.


SPIDER-MAN
The only thing I've "lost", is my
patience... with you. Let her go.


MONTANA didn't respond.

SPIDER-MAN
I'll give you one more chance, but
that's all you're getting...


MONTANA smirked at SPIDER-MAN, where suddenly, MONTANA was
hit by a blast from below, which launched him into the air.
It was FLASH, with the shock gun, on the ground below with
the students from MIDTOWN HIGH all gathered by the entrance
way.

SPIDER-MAN
(Mutters to
himself)
Guess I was wrong.


EDNA was also affected by the hit, as she begun to tip over
the edge. SPIDER-MAN begun to sprint towards her, sliding
underneath MONTANA [in mid-air], SPIDER-MAN then shot back
up and leapt towards a now-falling EDNA, whom he saved with
ease, as he then spun a webline towards the school.

Finally landing safely to the ground, the crowd then all
cheered, as SPIDER-MAN let-go of EDNA and catapulted himself
back onto the rooftop; using his already spun webline. He
landed right before the fallen MONTANA. MONTANA sighed.

 

[thejon93]

PART 25:

LIZ looked over at EDNA and was about to pursue her. Until
she stopped herself, as a large crowd of students gathered
around her.

With that, a vehicle then arrived on the scene with a placed
police-siren on the roof of the vehicle. Stepping out of the
vehicle was CAPT. STACY, who ran through the crowd of
students, looking for GWEN. Finally, he caught sight of her
near HARRY and EDDIE. He ran towards her.

CAPT. STACY
(Calls)
GWEN!


GWEN looks over to see her father, she then runs towards him
as well, as they both run into each other hugging one
another tightly.

CUT TO:


HARRY
(Sighs)
Well... it's nice to see that
someone's happy.


EDDIE
(Chuckles)
Really? Then why aren't you,
HARRY?


HARRY
This whole "destruction-factor"
will probably prevent the
field-trip from happening...


EDDIE
(Pauses for a
moment)
You really do want to see your
mother again, do you?


HARRY nodded.

EDDIE
Tell you what, HARRY. If this
whole "field trip" doesn't happen,
I'll take you up there.


HARRY
(Looks up at EDDIE)
Really?...


EDDIE
(Jokes)
Well, as long as you pay for the
gas-tank, rich boy.


EDDIE then tossed his arm around HARRY's shoulder, as they
both begun to laugh.

CUT TO:


MONTANA
You can't trust me enough to leave
me here lying?


SPIDER-MAN
It's not that I don't trust you...


SPIDER-MAN then webbed-up MONTANA to the roof. MONTANA
sarcastically chuckled, for a moment.

SPIDER-MAN
(Finishes)
But it comes with the
responsibility.


MONTANA
(Closes his eyes)
I see.

 

[thejon93]

PART 26:

INT. SCHOOL BUS - DAY

2 WEEKS LATER...

The students waited outside the bus, as EDDIE helped MR.
EDGAR up on-board. He took a seat in the first seat in-front
of the doors. MR. EDGAR had gauze taped around his head and
his right leg was in a cast. EDDIE stepped back outside of
the bus and handed MR. EDGAR his crutches and his notepad.
MR. EDGAR then patted EDDIE on the shoulder.

MR. EDGAR
Thank you, EDDIE.


EDDIE
No problem, ED.


EDDIE then stepped off of the bus and stopped before PETER,
GWEN and HARRY.

EDDIE
Well, what can I say?... You guys
have a fun-time, alright?


PETER, GWEN and HARRY all nodded, where EDDIE then pursued
HARRY alone.

EDDIE
Tell MRS. OSBORN, EDDIE said "HI".


HARRY
(Smiles)
No problem, EDDIE. And, thanks.


EDDIE then smiled back at HARRY.

FLASH
(Yells)
Come on, DILL WEEDS! What's the
hold-up?


EDDIE, PETER, GWEN and HARRY all then smirked, as EDDIE
begun to exchange handshakes with all three of them.

EDDIE
Have fun, guys.


GWEN
We'll see you soon. Right, MR.
BROCK?


EDDIE
(Jokes)
Please...


Finally, the students slowly begun to pile up along the bus.
PETER, GWEN and HARRY were among the first on-board, as they
headed towards the backseats on the bus. Finishing off for
the students, FLASH was the last on-board the bus. Then
followed by LIZ. They looked up and down the rows of seats,
almost all of them were completely full. Except for one
beside MR. EDGAR and another beside EDNA.

FLASH
Well, LIZ...


FLASH was about to pat LIZ on her shoulder behind him but,
when he turned around, she wasn't there. He spun around,
looking for where she had gone.

LIZ
Ahh, FLASH...


LIZ held her hand up in the air. FLASH looked down to see
that she was seated beside EDNA.

FLASH
(Stunned)
Wha- What?! I thought you didn't
like her?!...


EDNA lowered her head in shame, LIZ peered slightly over at
her.

MR. EDGAR
MR. THOMPSON, please take a seat.


FLASH
(Sighs)
Alright...


FLASH finally took a seat beside MR. EDGAR.

EARL
Ready for take-off, MR. EDGAR?


MR. EDGAR
Ready for take-off, EARL.


With that said, the bus driver, EARL, closed the doors to
the bus, started it up and took off driving. Suddenly, a
crowd of kids in the back cheered. MR. EDGAR and EARL both
chuckled.

MR. EDGAR
(To EARL)
Kids these days.


FLASH
(Under his breath;
mocks)
Yeah...


CUT TO:


PETER
Well guys, it's the first-time
we've ever found our way to the
back-seats. And, it's all because
of our ingenious brains.


PETER reached over the seat before his and GWEN's and patted
HARRY on the head. GWEN giggled, as PETER sat back.

PETER
This is so thrilling.


GWEN
(Turns to PETER)
Really?


PETER
(Turns to GWEN)
Yeah!


GWEN chuckles.

PETER
I'm serious, I've actually never
been outside of MANHATTAN before.


GWEN
Again, really?


PETER
Yes!


GWEN
If I asked AUNT MAY that, would
you still be saying the same
thing?


PETER rubbed his chin momentarily.

PETER
Let me think... Yes!


GWEN
(Giggles)
We shall see, MR. PARKER.


PETER
(Smiles)
So be it then, MS. STACY.


CUT TO:


LIZ turned to face EDNA, who was peering out the window on
her side.

LIZ
...I like your dress...


EDNA remained frozen for a moment. fixed on looking outside
the window.

EDNA
Of all the things you could've
just said to me, you choose to
compliment me on my appearance.


LIZ
Maybe because at the moment that's
the only part of you I know.


EDNA
(Turns to face LIZ)
You're right... And, that's all
you'll ever understand about me.


LIZ lowers her head down in shame, EDNA peered slightly over
at her, before turning back to facing the window.

LIZ
...I'm sorry about BECKY...


EDNA closed her eyes, as they begun to water.

LIZ
...I lost a relative, too... Only
it wasn't my sister... My brother,
MARK...


EDNA turned to face LIZ.

EDNA
Was he murdered?


A teardrop rolled down from one of LIZ's eyes.

LIZ
...His apartment building in UPPER
MANHATTAN caught fire... He was
inside.


Another tear then slowly begun to roll down LIZ's cheek, as
she sob slightly and started to whipe away the tears. EDNA
hesitated, but finally set her hand on LIZ's shoulder.

EDNA
(Smiles)
I guess we're not so different,
afterall.


LIZ then suddenly hugged EDNA, as EDNA hugged her back.

CUT TO:


FLASH looks over at LIZ and EDNA hugging. Slowly, a smile
set across his face.

CUT TO:


Disappearing into the light of the sun while crossing over
the GEORGE WASHINGTON BRIDGE, was the school bus carrying
the kids of MIDTOWN HIGH's science class.



FADE OUT.

 

[spiderfan08]

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[thejon93]

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5 days later, and a thank you very much.

Seriously though, thanks for keeping up. Hope you and everyone else alike enjoyed the read.

 

[Arrow157]

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[red hood 4]

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[thejon93]

Good Story so far

Haha. Well, thank you.

I like it,very cool

Thanks, mate.