The Attack

[bullets]

As Chris went on with his speech, Bullets noticed a lone man standing near the back doorway and nudged Casey to check him out.

That's awesome.


This story seems to be getting better as it moves forward. I'm not saying that because of a nod . I mean in terms of the writing and it does flow.

 

[RED-RAIN]

good stuff lobo, cant wait for more

 

[hammy]

Yikes! What's going to happen? This has me on the edge of my seat.

 

[Lobo]

good stuff lobo, cant wait for more

Yikes! What's going to happen? This has me on the edge of my seat.

Thanks guys. I'll try to not make it too long before the next chapter. I have another fic I've ignored for too long right now though

 

[hammy]