Since there's some interest in the rough outline I put together for a Flash movie, I'll share. And I realize that this is a very rough draft which is inconsistent in formatting, syntax, etc. If that makes the reading hard, I apologize.
part 1
THE FLASH
Opening: A bank robbery in Central City by Pied Piper (Hartley Rathaway, rebellious rich kid, has sonic pipes which can perform hypnosis or emit shattering blasts). Cops are on the scene getting ready to storm the place and so is a fancy police van. The Pied Piper is toying with the police, sending out shattering blasts sending cop cars flying and preparing to make his escape. After one of Piper's blasts the police scientist inside the van, Barry Allen, is shown analysing the soundwaves and programming something into a counter sonic device. The police then storm the building and one brave officer overcomes Piper with the aid of that device which emits counter sound waves to Piper's sonic blasts, thereby cancelling them out.
The hero cop, John Gardner, is a media darling. Proclaimed a hero. He's given the opportunity to give credit to Barry, but Barry shakes him off, letting him bask in the glory. Iris is of course covering this and notices. During this press conference it's established that Central City is overrun with these rogues after they knocked off S.T.A.R. labs and stole a host of scientific equipment. The police promise that this is the first Rogue capture of many and Piper is packed off to Iron Heights penitentiary where they have a special wing for costumed crooks.
After the press conference, Barry gets a call from Jay. Jay congratulates Barry and the Central City Police. Says, he looks forward to hearing a story from his number 1 fan for a change. Barry laughs at that and is modest about it all. Jay says the only one hes fooling is himself. Barrys modest saying that hes only part of a team doing their job. Jay says that the team has gotten a whole lot better since Barrys joined them. Barry asks him if thats so, why do I have a ton of reports to review today?
A day at work for Barry Allen. A huge stack of reports. Barry sits at his desk. And reads. And makes comments in the margins. And the world speeds by around him. But the pile on his desk slowly gets smaller and smaller.
Lunch. Barry sits at his desk with a bag lunch. But his eyes dart across the page of the comic hes reading. We following along at high speed as he reads about the adventures of a speedster with a costume like Hermes. The Flash.
Back to work for Barry. The hour gets late. He doesnt budge from his desk. The world speeds by. And the task gets done.
Barrys getting to leave, the cops are going to go out to celebrate and invite Barry along. They want him to at least celebrate with them. He thinks about it, but then remembers he's late for a date with Iris and tosses some last bits of paperwork, and the sonic device, in a drawer, locks it up, and hurries off.
His first words to Iris are, of course, "Sorry, I'm late." Her reply is that she's used to it and anyways, she knows that the department had a big day. And that she knows Barry had a little to do with it. She then asks him why he didn't step up and take credit? And he explains that he was just doing his job, it was science that defeated the Pied Piper and someone would have thought it up sooner or later, and, besides, it wasn't his life on the line if it didn't work. He was just Q to James Bond. She thinks he doesn't give himself enough credit, particularly that anyone else would think it up. She says Jay would agree with her. But, she's not going to argue, she knows how special Barry is, even if noone else, including Barry himself knows. But, she cautions Barry not to take her for granted.
Later that night, John Gardner arrives home from his celebration. But someone is watching from the bushes down the road. Mere moments after Gardner locks up, when he's taunted and then attacked by Mirror Master - Sam Scudder. Master of mirrors, illusions, holograms, and with the ability to use mirrors as a gateway to another dimension that he can use to travel from place to place. This time, Mirror Master uses every reflective surface to attack and brutally beat Gardner to death.
We then fade in a transition to the crime scene with Barry Allen investigating personally. No signs of entry. No signature. Just a brutal attack. Barry will eventually figure out that Gardner wasn't reaching for his gun, which he couldn't see from his angle, but instead pointing towards a mirror, identifying his attacker.
But, of course, Barry has no proof. Which the Police Captain points out. Its not like Mirror Master isnt wanted for a ton of crimes anyway. Yes, but Gardner deserves justice for his murder. Theres no argument to that. But you have to find the proof. Barry promises he will.
That evening, a non-descript warehouse in a seedy part of town. Inside, there are two henchmen, in parka-like outfits. Henchman 1 (Don) says Boss sounds pissed, doesnt he Rob? Henchman 2 (Rob) replies Darn right. Kicking ass, Don.
Inside the room the henchmen are guarding, the Rogues, Mirror Master (Sam Scudder, scumbag, master of illusions and able to use reflective surfaces as a gateway to travel), Weather Wizard (Mark Mardon, mercurial, controls weather through his weather wand), Captain Boomerang (Digger Harkness, disgrace to the continent of Australia, untrustworthy, has high tech boomerang weapons), Heat Wave (Mick Rory, hot head and obsessed with fire, has fire based weapons) and Captain Cold (Len Snart, cold blooded, smart, has ice based weapons), are arguing. Cold, all business and logic, says Mirror Master's attack on the cop was "stupid". It's just going to rile up cops. People have romantic notions about bank robbers, Jesse James, Dillinger, Bonnie and Clyde, but they can't abide cop killers "You didn't kill a hero, you created a martyr." He might as well have killed off a lab tech while he was at it. CC suggests that they shouldn't bust Piper out of prison now because it would just implicate them as accessories. Say that they need to be "smart" and they all can retire early. Of course there's an argument. Boomerang, of course, doesn't care about anyone but himself. Weather Wizard sides with the voice of reason. Heat Wave of course argues on the side of Mirror Master, but in the end, they decide to just leave it be. Who's out there to stop them anyways and it's just a bigger share for them. At one point, Weather Wizard offers to do something about the thunderstorm brewing outside, but told not to bother as it is insignificant in the big picture.
Back at the Central City crime lab, Barry is sifting through the evidence. Trying to find something tangible to tie Mirror Master to the murder. Iris calls.
You have a good excuse this time for missing our date. Are you all right? They talk. Barry says he has everyone working on the case, but so far hasnt come up with any evidence. Hes convinced theyll find it though. I dont believe in the perfect crime. These guys arent that smart. They always forget something. Like the fact that their victims are intelligent and aware of whats going on, not mere pawns. Hell have left something. I just dont know where it is yet. Science will find an answer. Youll find an answer. Iris corrects him. Iris suggests if theres something Barry cant talk about with her, that he give Jay a call. He practically was a cop. Hell understand. They say their goodbyes. Barry puts the phone on a charger, right in front of the chemical rack. And pauses a moment.
Lightning strike. Chemicals. Barry Allen knocked unconscious and covered with chemicals. Which seep into him as hes sprawled on the ground. Moments pass and hes awakened by the janitor who asks him what happened. Barry honestly doesnt know as theres not a sign of chemicals although theres glass everywhere. The janitor shoos Barry out and begins to clean up.
Shaken, Barry goes to a nearby diner and gets a cup of coffee. Everything seems to be all right. But, he discovers his new powers when a waitress slips, threatening to spill a platter of food all over a customer. In Flash time, Barry rights it, without quite believing it. He hurriedly pays his bill and steps outside. Where rain seems to be falling in slow motion. He literally steps in between the raindrops and then outraces a bus like its standing still. Yahoo, he yells as he builds up speed and races through the streets.
Barry calls Jay to arrange a meeting from a nearby payphone. Hurries off by a sign signaling Keystone City (Home of The Flash) featuring the classic Jay Garrick image and is there practically before Jay has the phone back on the hook.
Jay and Barry meet in a back room of his house full of Flash memorabilia. I'd suggest Jay use a cane. Barry fills Jay in on what's happened to him. Asks why the world picked himself to give these wondrous gifts to? Jay, responds, that he can think of no one better. Barry's his biggest fan, knows all his tricks, and even tracked him down after he retired from his run. Mentions that millions of men in WWII thought they were ordinary men, but when called they beat back the threat of the Nazis. Rifles through his things and pulls out a ring and give it to Barry. Barry says I already know to drink my Ovaltine. Very funny exclaims Jay who then explains that it contains a costume which expands on contact with air. Yeah, I read a paper on that cloth by a guy named Palmer Barry butts in Only problem is that it takes hours for a normal person to fold it back down right. But less than a second at superspeed replies Jay. Invented by a Princeton guy named Infantino, who's also one of his biggest fans. Could never bring himself to wear it, it just wasn't his style, but he reckons it will suit Barry to a t. He also comments that it has a mask. Criminals these days aren't like they were in Jay's time. They had a code of honor. Heck, the Shade even sends him Christmas cards to this day. That recent killing in Central City is why it's a good idea to keep your identity secret. Keep them guessing. Tells Barry to think it over, but if he wants to take up the mantle of the Flash he has Jay's blessing.
The next day is like any other. Barry goes to work and cleans up the last traces of the accident in the lab at superspeed. A radio call goes out of a robbery in progress by a criminal, gunshots. Barry clears out his lab to send people to the crime scene. And then, in a blur, changes into The Flash. A costume thats not fake rubber armor or leather, but more akin to a track suit. Its bright red, yellow wings on the head, extra padding on the hands to cushion blows, yellow boots with extra thick treads, and goggles to protect the eyes. And hes off in a blur.
A robber, The Turtle, gets out of a car with a bag full of loot. The car speeds off with the police in fast pursuit, while he gets into a rowboat and slowly rows away.
Flash speeds after the getaway car and runs across the same lake the Turtle is rowing across. Right through a swarm of bugs. Which stops him at the other side as he spits out bugs and clears his goggles.
At that point The Flash notices the Turtle and his bag of loot. Clever. The Flash then takes out the rowboat and Turtle in a tornado whirlwind and deposits him and the loot by a pair of park cops.
Then after the getaway car. The camera will cut to slow motion as a bullet is fired from a bandits gun. And we'll track it to see that it's zeroed in on the officer driving the car. And we'll track around to see The Flash closing on the bullet. But will he reach it in time? The scene will speed up as we follow the Flash as a blur past the police car and then see him skid to a stop. Where he'll open his fist to reveal a bullet. "Way faster than a speeding bullet."
The Flash then speeds off as the bullet falls to the ground. The getaway car will then slam to a sudden stop, with a crimson blur around it, as the robbers find their car suspended on blocks with the wheels off. The Flash stops to admire his handiwork as he sees the cops catch up to the bewildered crooks. But there are more sirens, for something else, and The Flash speeds over to a store window to see reports of a breaking robbery at the Central City Art Museum. Seems the Rainbow Raider is busy.
We pan through the museum. Guards are knocked out. Others are restrained by rainbow colored bands of energy. Still others are trapped in side rooms with rainbow colored bands of energy blocking the door. Finally, we come across the Rainbow Raider (Roy G. Bivolo, frustrated artist, able to emit blasts of energy and create solid light barriers with his goggles) admiring a painting in his possession, Duchamp's Nude Descending a
Staircase (No. 2).
Put the painting down. Lets not damage it.
The Rainbow Raider turns and sees The Flash for the first time. At the ready at the doorway of the main gallery.
Nice outfit. the Rainbow Raider replies. Its elegant in its lines and simplicity.
The Rainbow Raider slowly sets the painting down, never taking his eyes off The Flash. Showdown at the Central City Museum.
The Rainbow Raider fires first. And again as he tries to keep up with The Flash, and not hit any paintings, as the Flash builds up speed. Flash runs into a corner, gets sideways on a wall, bounds to another wall, and then accelerates before the Rainbow Raider can get his head turned and delivers a devastating superspeed punch to the jaw. The Rainbow Raider goes down in a heap.
A moment passes. Oww. The Flash shakes his hand which hurts like the devil. Hes learned that hes not immune to Newtons Third Law of Motion and that every action has an equal and opposite reaction. In short, punching someone at superspeed hurts. He takes a moment to gather himself, hangs the painting back where it should be, and then speeds off.
We'll then cut to an evening newscast. Which recounts the adventures of the mysterious human thunderbolt. Jay watches with a smile. Which will be interrupted when The Flash comes onto set. And announces who he is, full of blurs and lightning and verbal distortion. He's The Flash, just an ordinary citizen of Central City gifted with powers and here to help. He asks the people of Central City just to think of him as a friend, not a hero like the police officers who put themselves on the line every day. And he tells the Rogues that he's coming after them and that they can't outrun him. "And, if they want to come after me, well, catch me if you can." He then speeds off.
With a cut to Iris who's watching it in a restaurant bar. Who's startled when Barry arrives with a "Sorry, I'm late." line. She corrects him, he's early.
At which point, we'll cut to meeting again of the Rogues. Heat Wave wants to
go after The Flash hard and fast. Cold encourages them to use their head, remain calm, and put together a plan before going in half cocked. Don't rise to the obvious bait. Use your head and we'll be rid of this upstart in no time. The topic is brought up as to whether they bust the Rainbow Raider out of prison. Boomerang says that they shouldn't bother as he's sure that the Rainbow Raider will be a very popular prisoner. They all have a laugh about that.
After the meeting, the Weather Wizard pulls Boomerang aside and says he has
a job planned and doesn't want to wait out Cold. Says he has an ex-wife and kid that want their money. What are the odds of the Flash actually arriving in time anyways? That said, there's no reason to be stupid and he'd like backup. Boomerang asks How much is my share?
And we'll cut back to Barry and Iris getting back from a full night on the town. Full of passion. Iris asks what's come over him? And, Barry, defensive, asks why, does he seem different? "No, not really, just... fuller. Like something missing was added. You'd call it a catalyst, I suppose." Barry smiles and then gives her a big kiss.
End Part 1