The Official Writing Help Thread

[Assassin32]

Just kidding. BTW, for you who have no clue who that is, buy clerks, mallrats, chasing amy, dogma (wait, don't), and Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back. Don't go anywhere near Jersey Girl!

Hey.....Dogma and Jersey Girl own.

 

[The Phantom]

Some added notes. I used the Step One and Step Two techniques detailed on the first page of this thread.

Plot Points

Step One: Before miner Paul G. Toole can retire as a priest, he must take on one last mission on an undiscovered planet. It so happens that this planet is the homeworld to a race of werewolves. (Science Fiction, Horror)

Step Two: Paul is planning on retiring to a priest escape the shadows of his old life, where he watched his daughter die in a freak accident right before his very eyes. His wife left him because of the "incident". And so he plans to move on, but before he can he's contacted by his company (Sectora Corp.) who asks him to commit to one last job. He is sent on a mission to live on a new, strange planet for ten days with his mining crew to find out what type of minerals can be found on the planet. They are sent with a Sweep Team and a company psychiatrist and anthropologist. Sneaking onto the mission is the adventerous old fart, Mr. Ned and his assistant. But they discover that this "man-made" planet is the homeworld to a race of Werewolves. So now Paul and the rest of members of the mission must survive on the planet and find a way to escape the bloodthirsty fangs of the werewolves.

 

[DC/MARVEL]

Hey.....Dogma and Jersey Girl own.

Yeah, without Ben Affleck.

 

[DrVenkman90]

hey guys i am writing this story and it seems bad to me. I don't know of anyways to make it better so I was wondering if you could help. Here is chapter one. Oh and it is called Dc Vs. Marvel.
Chapter 1
In a smoky alley filled with darkness a hero walks. The hero’s name is Batman and he is filled with anger at injustice. Every year, on the same day, at the same hour, he lays two roses for the two parents that were killed by that same injustice he fights to keep out of the city he loves named Gotham. He lays the two roses down on the ground and says, “I will avenge you, no matter how long it takes.” As he walks to the car he calls the Batmobile he thinks about what he has accomplished as a superhero. He thinks about the friend he fought with in battle Jason Todd. Jason Todd died fighting evil. This evils name was the Joker.
Batman had never known anything about the Joker. He was a sadistic mad man bent on making Batman’s life terrible. Joker was still on the run from Batman. Joker took away Jason Todd and made Batgirl (Barbra Gordon) a paraplegic. Batman had enough tragedies in his life. But being Batman had a responsibility. Batman finally reached the Batmobile. He jumps in and drives to the legendary Batcave.
The car phone rang while he was driving. “Hello,” He said in a raspy voice to conceal his identity. “Hey Batman, its Superman and we have a problem.” “What is it Superman.” “The Watchtower has picked up that” he pauses for a moment. “Our planet is going to merge with another one just like our own making there more people and no one should be harmed by it, but the only bad thing is there will be another 6.5 billon people on Earth.” “But there is going to be land because with our two planets merging the land will be doubled somehow.” “Is that even possible,” says the Dark Knight. “No, but it’s going to happen in one hour and there is nothing we can do to stop it.”
“This does mean someone here or there is using a force to do this since it isn’t possible.” “Well, the more the merrier.” “Actually Batman, with more people there will be more villains.” But Superman wouldn’t there be more heroes.” “Yeah you’re right Batman.” “So Clark when is the welcome party.” “Well the news will tell the world about it and then it is done.” “This is weird, there is going to be a person like me coming.” The car pulls into the Batcave. “Superman ill meet you at the Watchtower.” “Bye Bruce,” Superman said. Bruce hangs up the phone and gets out of the car.
The Batplane was something of beauty. It was a stealth fighter developed by Wayne Tech. It was a prototype so no one had one. Batman gets and then is approached by Dick Grayson. “Hey Dick, want to take a trip to the Watchtower.” “Sure Bruce, I would love to.” Nightwing gets in and they take off to the Watchtower.

 

[The Demon's Head]

BATMAN: REDEMPTION

ACT 1

We open at Jarvis Tetch's cell in Arkhm Asylum for the criminally insane.
"aND thICK aNd Fast TheY came aT last, aNd MorE anD MoRe. aLL HOPPing thrOUGH tHe FRothy wAVES AnD scraMBLING tO tHE sHORe!" he mutters to himself. A figure, wearing black enters Tetch's cell. "wOUld yOu likE Some moRe teA?" Asks Tetch. The figure looks at him and pulls out a gun. He aims it at Tetch's face. "yOu coUlD aLwaYs Have MOre!" cries Tetch. He fires.
Blood splatters over the wall. Tetch's blood drips all over the floor, His eyes Peering out as if he was looking directly at us. A message is written with blood on the wall: "None of them are safe..."

 

[Kevin]

bumping this because I think this may bring us closer to being friends... i'm so lonely sometimes.