coluanprime
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I loved Season 2 and thought it was awesome, but like everything it had some flaws.
Here are my ideas to fix some of them.
1. Moira's Trial and subsequent Mayoral Campaign - This definitely needed some work. Moira being a candidate for Mayor seemed way too sudden and false, why were people who were screaming for her death suddenly rooting for her to become mayor. Ways I would have improved it - Throughout the trial and her imprisonment I would have shown crowds screaming for her release/not guilty because they thought she was going to be killed. EDIT: I also would have had the trump card about the affair have never have come up because it totally crushed her defense. Malcom's return could be explained that he prevented Donnor from getting access to the info about the affair.
2. Laurels Drug Abuse Storyline - It was done fairly well, but it wasn't amazing. Ways I would have improved it - (assuming the version of the trial I presented above happened) I would have had Laurel let go from the DA's office for her failure to win against Moira. Spencer could have done this because she wanted Moira dead because she had lost a brother in the quake or something. Then I would have had her drug abuse start here instead of having her be caught with drugs. I would have switched State vs. Queen with Keep Your Enemies Closer which would not have had much effect on the season's flow and since I moved the start of the Drug Addiction story to ep 7, that would cut down on a lot of the turn around time for her sobriety so moving it to 6 would give her storyline and extra ep. This may sound silly but I wish one of the characters would have commented on her lost wait just to shut up all the rude fans who spent half the season talking about her "joker jaw"
PLEASE BE SPECIFIC (i.e. not kill laurel or get a new actor for oliver)
Here are my ideas to fix some of them.
1. Moira's Trial and subsequent Mayoral Campaign - This definitely needed some work. Moira being a candidate for Mayor seemed way too sudden and false, why were people who were screaming for her death suddenly rooting for her to become mayor. Ways I would have improved it - Throughout the trial and her imprisonment I would have shown crowds screaming for her release/not guilty because they thought she was going to be killed. EDIT: I also would have had the trump card about the affair have never have come up because it totally crushed her defense. Malcom's return could be explained that he prevented Donnor from getting access to the info about the affair.
2. Laurels Drug Abuse Storyline - It was done fairly well, but it wasn't amazing. Ways I would have improved it - (assuming the version of the trial I presented above happened) I would have had Laurel let go from the DA's office for her failure to win against Moira. Spencer could have done this because she wanted Moira dead because she had lost a brother in the quake or something. Then I would have had her drug abuse start here instead of having her be caught with drugs. I would have switched State vs. Queen with Keep Your Enemies Closer which would not have had much effect on the season's flow and since I moved the start of the Drug Addiction story to ep 7, that would cut down on a lot of the turn around time for her sobriety so moving it to 6 would give her storyline and extra ep. This may sound silly but I wish one of the characters would have commented on her lost wait just to shut up all the rude fans who spent half the season talking about her "joker jaw"
PLEASE BE SPECIFIC (i.e. not kill laurel or get a new actor for oliver)
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