<SOL>
The Command Desk is strangely empty, the lights dim. Suddenly, we see a black CAPE dip into frame.
MIKE: I am the caped avenger of the night. Ever since my parents died, Ive sworn to wage a lone campaign against crime and corruption
Then a yellow cape dips into frame.
MIKE: What the
? Who are you?
TOM: Dont you recognize me? Im your lovable sidekick, Robin!
MIKE: Well, alright. Together, the two of us shall be all that stands between Gotham City and destruction, eh Robin?
TOM: Keep up, Mike, Im Nightwing now!
CROW: And Im the new Robin!
MIKE: Alright, then the three of us shall be all that stands
GYPSY: Four of us!
MIKE: Who?
GYPSY: Im Batgirl!
MIKE: Fine, whatever. Then the four of us
NANITE: (O.S.) Yoohoo, Mike! Down here.
MIKE: What in the hey now?
The viewport opens to show a view of the Nanites.
NANITE: Were the Birds of Prey! Oracle, Black Canary, Huntress, Misfit, Big Barda
MIKE: How many of you are there?
NANITE: About twenty.
MIKE: Okaaaaay
then the twenty-four of us shall fight a hopeless quest to
Cambot turns to a mirror to reveal he is dressed as Azrael.
MIKE: (O.S.) Oh, for crying out loud!
<Spaghetti Planet>
<SOL>
Mike has taken off his Batman outfit and changed in a Superman costume.
MIKE: Fine, be as Batty as you want. Now Im the Last Son of Krypton.
Crow jumps in, dressed in a red miniskirt and blonde wig.
CROW: And Im the Last Daughter of Krypton!
TOM: (eyeing Crow) Saaaay
A light starts beeping.
MIKE: Look alive, spin-offs, the Luthor-Brainiac Team is calling.
<Deep 13>
Dr. F and TVs Frank face camera.
DR. F: So, youve learned that profit motive always trumps conceptual truthfulness. Good for you, boobie. I assume youre ready for our invention exchange?
<SOL>
MIKE: You bet.
<Deep 13>
Frank holds up what looks like a periodic table of elements, only it haphazardly veers off in several directions.
DR. F: As youre well-aware, every superhero has a weakness. But how to keep track of whos vulnerable to what? With this, the Mad Scientists Guide To Weaknesses, you dont have to. Here we have the Superman Family of weaknesses
magic and Kryptonite
the Batman Family of weaknesses
emotional intimacy
the Marvel Family, the X-Men, and so on. Its a must for any secret lair. It even has Spider-Man
bridges, of Madison County or otherwise.
FRANK: And if you order now, we throw in a free sample of Kryptonite, colored for your convenience.
Dr. F opens the box.
DR. F: Ooh, Teal Kryptonite. This
actually makes it so Superman must see Must-See TV.
<SOL>
MIKE: Wow. Thats completely sinister and morally bankrupt.
<Deep 13>
MADS: Thank you!
<SOL>
Mike is holding up what looks like a simple collectors longbox.
MIKE: As all comic book fans know, theres nothing more frustrating than taking a chance on a first issue, getting to care about the characters and situations
then what do the editors do?
CROW: They chop it out at the knees! Bam!
MIKE: Well, with the hypothetical longbox, now thats no longer an issue. Just reach in a ways
He reaches into up to the elbow.
MIKE: Think about what you want to read, and pull out the issue!
He yanks out issue 150 of Young Justice.
MIKE: See? Heres the issue that wouldve been put out by DC this month if the series hadnt been canceled.
CROW: (reading) Empress greatest tragedy?
TOM: (reading) I didnt know Deathstroke was into that sort of thing.
MIKE: Well, were still ironing the kinks out.
<Deep 13>
DR. F: As you can see, boobies, in every universe some things remain constant. Speaking of which, your experiment today is the phenomenally best-selling, phenomenally late All-Star Batman and Robin, by maestro Frank Miller.
<SOL>
TOM: Cool! Frank Miller! He did Sin City and 300 and Batman Year One and
MIKE: Cool it, Tom. This is jumped-the-shark Frank Miller. Kinda like Michael Jackson after he went white, only with less child molestation.
CROW: (disagreeing) Have you READ The Dark Knight Strikes Again?
The usual cacophony starts.
ALL: Ahh! Weve got movie sign!
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MIKE: As opposed to the Girl Wonder.
CROW: Frank Miller and Girl Wonder opposed? Stop talking crazy!
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TOM: Catering: Joe Gillies.
CROW: Horse Wrangler: Alabaster Finch.
MIKE: Vomiting: Us.
3/20/05
TOM: And since then, theyve gotten all the way up to issue four.
CROW: It makes The Ultimates look like 52!
MIKE: What have I told you two about fanboy in-jokes?
Edited 6/15/05
CROW: This was edited?
PAGE ONE
1.
INT. CIRCUS TENT NIGHT
WILD ANGLEgo nuts, Jim12-year-old DICK GRAYSON
MIKE: Too young to be slashed?
CROW: Never. Im all about that hot neonatal twincest.
MIKE: Eww.
We love him from the moment we first see himthose big eyes, that trusting, sweet smile
TOM: Those muscular thighs
FLIPS, upside down, through space. Airborne. In circus costume. Keep it simple. A TRAPEZE swings wild behind him. No other background needed.
CROW: At least not until the fourth season, when it turns out shes descended from a French witch and destined to reunite all the Kryptonian elements.
Our boys confident as all hell.
SUPER: BATMAN AND ROBIN THE BOY WONDER
Episode One
MIKE: The Phantom Menace.
TOM: More like the Phantom Plot Progression!
1.1.1 CAP: This should get me KILLED.
1.1.2 CAP: But it WONT.
MIKE: But just in case it does, Im glad I put in a call to All-State.
1.1.3 CAP: Not that I can BREATHE, with my HEART fighting it out with my ADAMS APPLE, just now
CROW: Is the winner going to go on to face Mike Tyson?
MIKE: (Tyson) Im gonna eat his heart, Im gonna eat his children
PAGE TWO
1.
CLOSER ANGLETWO HANDS, one his MOMS,
CROW: One belonging to Ash
One his DADS, grabs Dicks either FOREARM, arresting his fall, just as his hands grab theirs.
2.1.1 CAP: --but I know for sure Ill get through this.
2.1.2 CAP: Theyre always there for me.
2.1.3 CAP: They always catch me.
TOM: Man, wouldnt it be ironic if there came a point when they WERENT there for him?
2.
WIDERMOM and DAD, youthful, legs LOCKED on TRAPEZES, FLING young Dick UPWARD.
TOM: Dick learns at a young age that showing affection will result in being rapidly pushed away.
CROW: Oh, ouch. In a very meta way.
2.2.1 CAP: Mom and Dad.
2.2.2 CAP: They always catch me.
TOM: Sometimes right when Im in the middle of enjoying a Playboy.
2.2.3 CAP: Theyre always there for me.
3.
FULL FIGUREDICK, in flight upward, joyful.
2.3.1 CAP: Theyre always there for me.
MIKE: So, you think his parents are always there for him?
2.3.2 CAP: I fly.
PAGE THREE
1.
INT. PLUSH APARTMENT NIGHT
FULL FIGUREVICKI VALE walks, in bra and panties and not one inch of clothing more,
<Mike covers the Bots eyes.>
BOTS: Hey! Whats going on!?
MIKE: Sorry, this is not for young robots peepers.
Walksno, hell, she strutsBACK-LIT against the cruel, Art Deco beauty of GOTHAM CITY. Think Rita Hayworth in her prime.
MIKE: And in her undies.
CROW: Seriously, Mike, whats going on?
MIKE: Just some boring exposition. Nothing you have to see.
Shes gorgeous. She speaks to her headset, dictating:
3.1.1 VICKI: So weve got ourselves a MAN of STEEL in Metropolis
TOM: A Man of Nitrogen in Vancouver.
CROW: A Man of Carbon in Pittsburg
3.1.2 VICKI: --and why exactly IS it we call him a MAN of STEEL? That DOES bring certain THOUGHTS to mind.
MIKE: Oh, she must read Scans_Daily.
3.1.3 CAP: Gotham City.
3.1.4 CAP: Vicki Vale.
3.1.5 CAP: Columnist.
3.1.6 CAP: Gadfly.
TOM: Libertarian.
MIKE: Pisces.
CROW: Not a lesbian, but experimented a little in college.
MIKE: Crow!
3.1.4 CAP: Dictating.
CROW: Und then, ve vill invade Poland!
3.1.5 CAP: Shes trouble.
3.1.6 CAP: The kind of trouble you want.
TOM: So, not the Trouble written by Mark Millar?
CROW: Oh, Marvels most popular character is really sweet old Aunt Mays bastard son. Thats a GREAT idea for a comic.
MIKE: Stay focused, guys.
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CLOSER-MEDIUM ANGLEVICKI continues. She ***** her head, tossing her hair. Detail her BRA. Itll drive them crazy, Jim.
MIKE: Not quite in the way you want, Frank.
4.1.1 VICKI: MAN OF STEEL? I mean, come ON. ENQUIRING GIRLS want to KNOW.
TOM: Which is why Larry Niven wrote Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex.
4.1.2 VICKI: So METROPLIS gets a MAN OF STEEL. And what do we get in dear old GOTHAM CITY?
MIKE: Trouble?
CROW: Right here in Gotham City?
TOM: The kind of trouble you want or the other kind?
A damn FLYING RODENT. Who doesnt even FLY.
CROW: But you just said he
A goddamn BAT MAN.
2.
BODY SHOTTHIGH UPgive us an even better angle on the babe. Front on. Walking right at us. She knows what shes got. Make them drool.
MIKE: Man, breaking the fourth wall just to flirt? I dont think Grant Morrison would approve.
4.2.1 VICKI: I mean, how lame is THAT? This LOSER dressed up like DRACULA and throws a few OTHER losers through WINDOWS and were supposed to SWOON? I dont think so, Masked Manhunter.
4.2.2 VICKI: Sometimes I DESPAIR, dear reader.
CROW: Tell me about it. Were only four pages into this!
Sometimes life seems to hold no MEANING.
CROW: Obviously its time to start complaining about comic books!
TOM: They turned Cass evil! Bastards!
MIKE: I dont like how Bart is all mopey now!
CROW: They killed Steph and didnt give her a memorial!
MIKE: Guys, I think we really made a difference there.
TOM: Yeah, that showed em whats what!
They get a MAN OF STEEL. We get a flying RAT. Whats a poor girl to DO?
TOM: Well, if life gives you a flying rat, make rat-aid.
MIKE: Shouldnt that be RAT-aid?
3.
OK, Jim, Im shameless.
ALL: We know.
Lets go with an ASS SHOT. Panties detailed. Balloons from above.
MIKE: But theyre full of Smilex gas!
CROW: (Nicholson) Like my plastic surgeon always said, if youve gotta go, go with a smile!
TOM: (Nicholson) You cant handle the truth!
MIKE: (Nicholson) My name is Wilbur Force. My first name is Wilbur. My last name is Force. I dont have a middle name. I have three or four abscesses, a touch of pyorrhea, nine or ten cavities, I lost my pivot tooth, and Im in terrible pain.
BOTS: Huh?
MIKE: Im old-school.
Shes walking, restless as always. We cant take our eyes off her. Especially since shes got one fine ass.
4.3.1 VICKI: But at least weve got BRUCE WAYNE, here in GOTHAM. BRUCE WAYNE. RICH as HOWARD HUGHES
TOM: Uhh, is that the best analogy she can think of?
MIKE: Of course. Dont you know Brucie is gonna end up wasting his life to build the Spruce Bat, sending Robins in to take jars of urine out of the Batcave
4.3.2 VICKI: --and LOOKS? Excuse me. Do NOT get me started.
CROW: Oh, how we wish we couldve taken that advice earlier.
The man is as hot as the SUN.
TOM: Yeah, but in five million years hes gonna develop a red giant of a beer belly.
A womans skin MELTS at the THOUGHT of him.
MIKE: Dont even think about it, Crow.
CROW: I wasnt going to say anything!
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CLOSE-UPVICKI turns her love face, her HAIR flowing, in response to her apartments BUZZER. A bit annoyed.
SE(BIG): BZZZZT!
5.1.1 VICKI: What the HELL?
2.
WIDERBACK VIEWVICKI moves toward a security monitor at her ELEVATOR. Keep our eyes on how good she looks. Something tells me you can pull that off, Jim. Go for a furious gesture. A raised fist, something like that. Nothing vulgar.
MIKE: Too easy. Let it pass.
5.2.1 VICKI: Jesus. I hate that thing. Makes me jump out of my SKIN.
CROW: I thought she already melted out of her skin when she thought about Bruce Wayne.
TOM: Speaking of which, how ironic that she dislikes Batman and
MIKE: We got it, Tom.
TOM: Because Bruce Wayne actually is
MIKE: Got it!
Why do they have to make DOOR BUZZERS so damn LOUD? Whats WRONG with this town, anyway?
CROW: Ray Nagin is the mayor.
MIKE: DC really missed an opportunity at not following No Mans Land up with Chocolate Gotham City.
5.2.2 VICKI: Besides the FLYING RAY GUY who doesnt FLY, I mean?
TOM: Shes right. Its not flying, its falling with style.
MIKE: Cmon, guys, lets leave Vicki to her flying rat guy.
CROW: Good. Because Ive got a few problems with this comic and a great plan to fix it!