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Alright my fans, I know I promised you an update tonight, but as I come to the final battle, the big shabang, I notice that everything I have planned for it now, just isn't not meshing, just not working, I need time to rethink this, and the rest of the night is plenty of time, tommorrow shall see the final battle and the death of an X-Man. I promise.
God, that's morbid, promising the death of an X-Man.
God, that's morbid, promising the death of an X-Man.
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It's not about me putting it off, god knows that...god knows I have some written right now, but I don't want to half ass this final battle, I don't want half ass any of this.
This is about bringing you the best script possible. This script has been the most challenging yet fun thing I've ever done in my career as a fan fic and screenplay writer. It's given me an enormous amount of respect for the writers of X1 and X2, and hell even X3.
This is about bringing you the best script possible. This script has been the most challenging yet fun thing I've ever done in my career as a fan fic and screenplay writer. It's given me an enormous amount of respect for the writers of X1 and X2, and hell even X3.
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EH MEN! bring it on....sounds great....there better be some good Storm vs. Callisto action. lmao
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I definitely want to see Storm on Callisto, or at least have a VERY vivid mental image.PeRfEcT_StOrM said:
Take all the time you need, Bill, and ignore those who harass you. Art doesn't obey schedules or timeframes
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and more power use. lets see some air attacks, pressure domes, emps, ice blasts, super kicks. this better be good
you cant ignore what u cant stop........ Please hurry up. this is the best fan fic with accuracy and reality at the same time. some fics have phoenix powers in the wrong body and focusing it on a not so great character. u focus it on all of them. hrry.... ( X_fan cries)
you cant ignore what u cant stop........ Please hurry up. this is the best fan fic with accuracy and reality at the same time. some fics have phoenix powers in the wrong body and focusing it on a not so great character. u focus it on all of them. hrry.... ( X_fan cries)
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i can't wait for a more mental vivid picture of storm fighting callisto.
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INT. SENTINEL FACILITY – MAIN CHAMBER - SECONDS LATER
Sinister is working at panels as are Gambit, Callisto, and Sabretooth. Pyro is staring up at the massive 24 foot sentinel robot sitting in the middle of the room in what can be described as a throne almost. This is MASTERMOLD. By size alone we can tell this is not your average sentinel.
PYRO
So, that’s the bad puppy eh? Doesn’t look so tough.
Sinister turns to Pyro.
SINISTER
My boy, that machine could kill any mutant on this planet.
Callisto is finished at her machine and begins to head towards Sinister with a concerned look on her face.
SINISTER
You are done uploading the files into your share?
CALLISTO
Yes, I’m picking up something though.
SINISTER
Yes?
CALLISTO
More than something. Some group. It’s the X-Men.
SINISTER
Go outside. I’ll finish here. They’ll simply have to be unnecessary casualties.
Callisto smiles. She, Gambit, Pyro and Sabretooth exit the room.
INT. X-JET - NEAR SENTINEL FACILITY – SAME TIME
The group stands around a holographic image of the sentinel facility, they look prepared for battle. Joining the usual X-Me are Cecilia and Emma in black leather suits of their own. Storm and Cyclops are circling the display.
CYCLOPS
As far as we can tell there’s 5 of them. 4 of which just appeared to exit the building. Essex is likely to be the one still left in the building. Magneto, can you get in there and hold him off for me?
MAGNETO
You underestimate me. I will have no qualms dealing with Nathaniel.
CYCLOPS
Good, just remember, save some of him for me.
CYCLOPS
Storm; is there anything you need to add?
STORM
People, I can’t stress this enough, in the case he gets those sentinels running in his favor, the whole mission changes. It’s no longer about taking down the bad guy. It’s about protecting the citizens.
Cyclops nods.
STORM
Oh, and the runt in the trench coat, let me deal with him.
Wolverine and Nightcrawler smile at that.
STORM
Let’s go do this people!
The X-Men prepare to leave the jet.
EXT. SENTINEL FACILITY – MOMENTS LATER.
Callisto, Sabretooth, Pyro, and Gambit are standing outside of the facility. The sentinels that had arrived before are standing immobile, shut off, perhaps by Sinister. The robots that remain from battling these are patrolling the ground.
GAMBIT
You sure bout this?
CALLISTO
Positive. I can feel them. We just can’t see them yet.
Sabretooth sniffs the air. Suddenly, before he knows it, he’s ambushed, Wolverine pounces him claws drawn and they are back rolling in the dirt. The robots turn their attention to this, as does Callisto, but before Callisto can even think she’s kicked in the face by Storm’s out drawn legs as she flies into battle. Pyro goes to fry Storm but is caught by an icy blast that freezes his clothes and some of his skin. He slowly and painfully turns to see Iceman.
ICEMAN
Johnny Boy, being the useless pawn again?
Pyro grits his teeth and begins a flame blast towards Iceman, but is caught by surprise when a shield goes up around him as Cecilia charges into battle.
CECILIA
Thank me later.
But before Cecilia can turn back around from shouting at Bobby, she’s smacked in the throat with Gambit’s outdrawn staff. Gambit hears a roar and is pounced by Beast.
BEAST
Where on earth are your manners, boy, you never hit a lady! You however…
Beast starts punching Gambit in the head multiple times. Callisto kicks Storm back off her and into an approaching robot. The robot falls back and in the background we see Nightcrawler teleport into battle. Storm stands up, Callisto speeds around her and is about to grab her when she’s grabbed by a bamfed Nightcrawler.
NIGHTCRAWLER
No. No. No cheating.
Nightcrawler throws Callisto face first into the ground and bamfs off. In the background, Jubilee is seen dealing with robots by exploding them with mass fireworks, some even in groups. Kitty phases through Callisto as she stands; only to be shocked by Storm’s lightning.
STORM
You again? And here I thought my only fun here would be taking care of Remy?
Storm is tackled from off screen by Gambit himself as she says this.
GAMBIT
You ask for me chere?
Gambit and Storm dive into the pushes and Callisto smiles following after them. Wolverine and Sabretooth are exchanging blows to the face. Wolverine slides his claws out and digs them into Sabretooth’s chest, but Sabretooth gets the better of Logan and jabs his own “claws” into Logan’s stomach. He licks the blood off them.
SABRETOOTH
I’ve been waiting a long time for this. Sitting in that prison cell, just waiting to taste your blood.
Wolverine gives a disgusted look to this, but begins to charge Sabretooth, claws drawn. Sabretooth kicks Logan back.
SABRETOOTH
Now do you really want to kill your last chance to get to your past?
WOLVERINE
My past means nothing to me anymore. I’m Logan, always will be.
SABRETOOTH
You really have been tamed. That just makes me ripping your insides out even better.
They begin to fight some more. Sabretooth throwing Logan over his shoulder, and picking him up to spin him around by his legs. Rogue turns from the background where she’s been fighting robots.
ROGUE
Logan!
Rogue begins to run towards Sabretooth, full speed, she plows into his back and knocks him over. Sabretooth snickers as Logan lays on the ground, and he recovers from the blow.
SABRETOOTH
Little runts run off and got superstrength. How adorable.
He goes to attack her, when she uppercuts him, he falls back and into a now standing Logan’s claws.
WOLVERINE
I can take it from here.
Logan kicks Sabretooth off his claws and begins to slam his claws down into the now on the ground Sabretooth, who grunts with each stab. Colossus and Kitty are seen in the background fighting off Sinisters robots that apparently are robots with Scott’s powers.
CUT TO:
INT. SENTINEL FACILITY – MOMENTS LATER
Sinister is finishing up his work on transferring control of the Sentinels to himself, when a metallic wire suddenly wraps around his neck and raises him off the ground. He turns his eyes towards Magneto as he comes into the room.
MAGNETO
I’m afraid you’re fun stops here my friend.
SINISTER
You alone wish to stop me?
An optic beam suddenly destroys one of the panels that control the sentinels. Cyclops enters the room.
CYCLOPS
He’s not alone.
SINISTER
Fool, if you destroy the panels you will only danger not only the pathetic human race, but us as well.
CYCLOPS
Then tell me how to stop this.
SINISTER
Ha. You don’t think I didn’t expect this? Didn’t anticipate you’re arrival? It’s already too late. I’ve set a fail safe. In exactly 10 minutes they’ll be under my complete control. Well, half…we might need to anticipate some problems now.
Cyclops presses to his ear.
CYCLOPS
Storm, brace yourself. It’s gonna happen.
EXT. SENTINEL FACILITY – SAME TIME
Storm is being ganged up on by both Gambit and Callisto. She is unable to catch the message, until she manages to break the battle, her eyes going white, both Gambit and Callisto fall to the ground unconscious.
STORM
How’s it feel to get the wind knocked out of you?
Storm presses her com in her ear.
STORM
What was that, Scott. I was a little tied up?
CYCLOPS
(V.O.)
Get everyone ready. The sentinels are gonna attack. Both mutants and humans are gonna be in danger.
Storm begins to fly off when she’s grabbed by the foot by Callisto, who has recovered from having her air supply cut off.
CALLISTO
We’re not done yet sister.
Sinister is working at panels as are Gambit, Callisto, and Sabretooth. Pyro is staring up at the massive 24 foot sentinel robot sitting in the middle of the room in what can be described as a throne almost. This is MASTERMOLD. By size alone we can tell this is not your average sentinel.
PYRO
So, that’s the bad puppy eh? Doesn’t look so tough.
Sinister turns to Pyro.
SINISTER
My boy, that machine could kill any mutant on this planet.
Callisto is finished at her machine and begins to head towards Sinister with a concerned look on her face.
SINISTER
You are done uploading the files into your share?
CALLISTO
Yes, I’m picking up something though.
SINISTER
Yes?
CALLISTO
More than something. Some group. It’s the X-Men.
SINISTER
Go outside. I’ll finish here. They’ll simply have to be unnecessary casualties.
Callisto smiles. She, Gambit, Pyro and Sabretooth exit the room.
INT. X-JET - NEAR SENTINEL FACILITY – SAME TIME
The group stands around a holographic image of the sentinel facility, they look prepared for battle. Joining the usual X-Me are Cecilia and Emma in black leather suits of their own. Storm and Cyclops are circling the display.
CYCLOPS
As far as we can tell there’s 5 of them. 4 of which just appeared to exit the building. Essex is likely to be the one still left in the building. Magneto, can you get in there and hold him off for me?
MAGNETO
You underestimate me. I will have no qualms dealing with Nathaniel.
CYCLOPS
Good, just remember, save some of him for me.
CYCLOPS
Storm; is there anything you need to add?
STORM
People, I can’t stress this enough, in the case he gets those sentinels running in his favor, the whole mission changes. It’s no longer about taking down the bad guy. It’s about protecting the citizens.
Cyclops nods.
STORM
Oh, and the runt in the trench coat, let me deal with him.
Wolverine and Nightcrawler smile at that.
STORM
Let’s go do this people!
The X-Men prepare to leave the jet.
EXT. SENTINEL FACILITY – MOMENTS LATER.
Callisto, Sabretooth, Pyro, and Gambit are standing outside of the facility. The sentinels that had arrived before are standing immobile, shut off, perhaps by Sinister. The robots that remain from battling these are patrolling the ground.
GAMBIT
You sure bout this?
CALLISTO
Positive. I can feel them. We just can’t see them yet.
Sabretooth sniffs the air. Suddenly, before he knows it, he’s ambushed, Wolverine pounces him claws drawn and they are back rolling in the dirt. The robots turn their attention to this, as does Callisto, but before Callisto can even think she’s kicked in the face by Storm’s out drawn legs as she flies into battle. Pyro goes to fry Storm but is caught by an icy blast that freezes his clothes and some of his skin. He slowly and painfully turns to see Iceman.
ICEMAN
Johnny Boy, being the useless pawn again?
Pyro grits his teeth and begins a flame blast towards Iceman, but is caught by surprise when a shield goes up around him as Cecilia charges into battle.
CECILIA
Thank me later.
But before Cecilia can turn back around from shouting at Bobby, she’s smacked in the throat with Gambit’s outdrawn staff. Gambit hears a roar and is pounced by Beast.
BEAST
Where on earth are your manners, boy, you never hit a lady! You however…
Beast starts punching Gambit in the head multiple times. Callisto kicks Storm back off her and into an approaching robot. The robot falls back and in the background we see Nightcrawler teleport into battle. Storm stands up, Callisto speeds around her and is about to grab her when she’s grabbed by a bamfed Nightcrawler.
NIGHTCRAWLER
No. No. No cheating.
Nightcrawler throws Callisto face first into the ground and bamfs off. In the background, Jubilee is seen dealing with robots by exploding them with mass fireworks, some even in groups. Kitty phases through Callisto as she stands; only to be shocked by Storm’s lightning.
STORM
You again? And here I thought my only fun here would be taking care of Remy?
Storm is tackled from off screen by Gambit himself as she says this.
GAMBIT
You ask for me chere?
Gambit and Storm dive into the pushes and Callisto smiles following after them. Wolverine and Sabretooth are exchanging blows to the face. Wolverine slides his claws out and digs them into Sabretooth’s chest, but Sabretooth gets the better of Logan and jabs his own “claws” into Logan’s stomach. He licks the blood off them.
SABRETOOTH
I’ve been waiting a long time for this. Sitting in that prison cell, just waiting to taste your blood.
Wolverine gives a disgusted look to this, but begins to charge Sabretooth, claws drawn. Sabretooth kicks Logan back.
SABRETOOTH
Now do you really want to kill your last chance to get to your past?
WOLVERINE
My past means nothing to me anymore. I’m Logan, always will be.
SABRETOOTH
You really have been tamed. That just makes me ripping your insides out even better.
They begin to fight some more. Sabretooth throwing Logan over his shoulder, and picking him up to spin him around by his legs. Rogue turns from the background where she’s been fighting robots.
ROGUE
Logan!
Rogue begins to run towards Sabretooth, full speed, she plows into his back and knocks him over. Sabretooth snickers as Logan lays on the ground, and he recovers from the blow.
SABRETOOTH
Little runts run off and got superstrength. How adorable.
He goes to attack her, when she uppercuts him, he falls back and into a now standing Logan’s claws.
WOLVERINE
I can take it from here.
Logan kicks Sabretooth off his claws and begins to slam his claws down into the now on the ground Sabretooth, who grunts with each stab. Colossus and Kitty are seen in the background fighting off Sinisters robots that apparently are robots with Scott’s powers.
CUT TO:
INT. SENTINEL FACILITY – MOMENTS LATER
Sinister is finishing up his work on transferring control of the Sentinels to himself, when a metallic wire suddenly wraps around his neck and raises him off the ground. He turns his eyes towards Magneto as he comes into the room.
MAGNETO
I’m afraid you’re fun stops here my friend.
SINISTER
You alone wish to stop me?
An optic beam suddenly destroys one of the panels that control the sentinels. Cyclops enters the room.
CYCLOPS
He’s not alone.
SINISTER
Fool, if you destroy the panels you will only danger not only the pathetic human race, but us as well.
CYCLOPS
Then tell me how to stop this.
SINISTER
Ha. You don’t think I didn’t expect this? Didn’t anticipate you’re arrival? It’s already too late. I’ve set a fail safe. In exactly 10 minutes they’ll be under my complete control. Well, half…we might need to anticipate some problems now.
Cyclops presses to his ear.
CYCLOPS
Storm, brace yourself. It’s gonna happen.
EXT. SENTINEL FACILITY – SAME TIME
Storm is being ganged up on by both Gambit and Callisto. She is unable to catch the message, until she manages to break the battle, her eyes going white, both Gambit and Callisto fall to the ground unconscious.
STORM
How’s it feel to get the wind knocked out of you?
Storm presses her com in her ear.
STORM
What was that, Scott. I was a little tied up?
CYCLOPS
(V.O.)
Get everyone ready. The sentinels are gonna attack. Both mutants and humans are gonna be in danger.
Storm begins to fly off when she’s grabbed by the foot by Callisto, who has recovered from having her air supply cut off.
CALLISTO
We’re not done yet sister.
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Yay. That was good. Keep it coming
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woo hoo!! love the attack storm did....like did she take the air out?? and callisto and stormm...ouuuhhh this is gonna get good.
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Next up:
Callisto vs Storm vs Gambit. Iceman vs Pyro. Sabretooth vs Wolverine. Cyclops and Magneto vs Sinister. The X-Men unite when the Sentinels begin to attack. And the death of an X-Man.
Callisto vs Storm vs Gambit. Iceman vs Pyro. Sabretooth vs Wolverine. Cyclops and Magneto vs Sinister. The X-Men unite when the Sentinels begin to attack. And the death of an X-Man.
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Glad to see you all love it.
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MORE!!! THIS STORY IS JUST SO INCREDIBLE!! THE MOST ORIGINAL FAN-FIC EVER!!!
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