Sequels Young X-Men (My Script)

That sounds cool..
I am very curious about the rest of the story..
how it will work out etc...
Can not wait for the nest parts
 
Here's the next scene. Sorry it's a bit later than I expected. Hope you enjoy it. :)

INT. BUNKER

Kitty and Colossus are walking cautiously through the underground passage. All the while, we can hear the sound of guns and cries above.

KITTY
So how long is this passage?

COLOSSUS
We’re getting closer.

KITTY
How can you tell?

COLOSSUS
Because the noise is getting quieter.

They walk through a bit longer, then suddenly the lights switch off.

KITTY
Uh oh! Now how are we supposed to get through?

COLOSUS
Err… we’ve got a bigger problem.

KITTY
What’s that?

COLOSSUS
The door’s locked.

KITTY
What?!

We hear them pounding on metal.

COLOSSUS
Stand back.

KITTY
What? Why?

COLOSSUS
Just stand back.

KITTY
I don’t even know where “back” is. We’re in complete darkness, remember? Wait- hold on, you’re not going to-

COLOSSUS
LOOK OUT!

Colossus lets out a primal shout and charges. We can hear a thud against the metal, and then light floods down into the tunnel.

Colossus is standing on the broken down door, smiling triumphantly. He sees Kitty’s annoyed expression.

COLOSSUS
What?

KITTY
I could have easily phased us through.

COLOSSUS
Oh, right...

KITTY
(Chuckling)
C’mon, Tin-Man. Let’s find the prisoner and get out of here.

They start to walk through the hangar.

KITTY (CONT’D)
Before you tear this place in two.
 
hahahaha
I really liked that scene...
It has humor and it is getting somewhere very very cool...
Good job
 
EXT. OUTSIDE BUILDING – SAME TIME

The sand settles on the floor. Gradually, it begins to rise and form the outline of a young girl: Dust materializes.

A soldier sneaks up on her, as the battle still rages. He pulls a gun and takes aim.

SIRYN
Sooraya! Look out!

The soldier fires; but the bullet stops several feet before hitting her.

PULL BACK WIDER

We see Hellion, his hand outstretched, focusing his power on controlling the bullet. He strains his eyes and sends it flying harmlessly into the jungle.

Then he trains his thoughts on the soldier, who flies back twenty feet and falls to the floor, motionless.

ANGEL
(To Hellion)
Go, I’ll be okay.

HELLION
Are you sure?

ANGEL
Positive. It’s the mission that counts.

Hellion nods. He stands, and calls to the others.

HELLION
Teresa, you’re with me. Sooraya, keep this route clear! If we’re not back in ten minutes…

He shrugs.

HELLION (CONT’D)
Pray for a miracle. Let’s go.

Siryn and Hellion dash off towards the building, as Dust continues to take down the guards.
 
INT. BUILDING – COMMAND CENTRE

Colossus is pouring over the controls, unsure of what to do. Kitty is keeping guard.

KITTY
Could you hurry it up? I’ve seen glaciers move faster than you!

COLOSSUS
Hey, I flunked at computer science. I’m trying my best.

KITTY
Here… let me do it.

She walks over to the desk and phases her hand through the controls. When she pulls it back, she clutches a handful of wires. The controls spark.

KITTY (CONT’D)
(Smiling)
See? Now let’s go before they use the backup generator.

COLOSSUS
Kitty! Watch out!

She turns to see a guard standing at the doorway. He pulls out a gun.

GUARD
You’re not supposed to be in here!

He fires, but Colossus metals up and steps in front of Kitty. The bullet hits the organic steel, and falls to the floor. The guard stares in shock.

GUARD (CONT'D)
What are you-!

Colossus grabs him by his shirt, lifts him off his feet and throws him in a cupboard. He grabs the handle and tears it off.

Kitty smiles and moves past him, walking down the metal stairs and through the room. Colossus follows her.

INT. BUILDING – HALLWAY – SAME TIME

The door opens and SIRYN AND HELLION walk in, looking around.

SIRYN
Seems like Kitty and Peter have done their job. The alarms are down.

HELLION
I don’t think that’s going to be any help now.

Siryn looks up and sees several soldiers rushing towards them, from the opposite door. They pause ten feet away, a row of six.

SQUAD COMMANDER
No tricks, mutants! Stay where you are!

SIRYN
(Whispering)
You go on. I’ll take care of these.

HELLION
You sure?

SIRYN
Just help the others.

Hellion nods and disappears through a side door.

SQUAD COMMANDER
After him!

One of the soldiers starts to move, but Siryn cuts him off.

SIRYN
Sorry, but it looks like you’ll have to do with just me.

She smiles, then unleashes another high-pitched scream. The metal walls twist and buckle under the pressure; the soldiers collapse onto their knees, others squirm uncontrollably on the floor.
 
Sorry I haven't had a chance to update today. There'll be one tomorrow though. Look out for it. :)
 
INT. BUILDING – HALLWAY – SAME TIME

Kitty and Colossus make their way through a narrow corridor leading to a large door at the far end.

KITTY
I guess this is it.

She takes his hand and phases them both through the door. The room is lit by a single low-hanging lamp, positioned in the centre of the room.

In the far corner, is a cloaked figure. It shudders.

KITTY (CONT’D)
Hello?

INT. BUILDING – HALLWAY

Hellion appears round the corner. He sees the door up ahead. Suddenly, a thick metal door slams shut in front of the room.

Within moments, a chain of metal doors rattle down the hallway, heading towards Hellion.

He charges forward, lifting a hand, and stopping a door in mid-air. He ducks under and blasts the next door onto the floor.

He strains his eyes -– door after door collapses to the floor, as he makes his way to the room.

HELLION
Kitty!

INT. BUILDING – DARK ROOM – SAME TIME

Kitty turns at the sound of her name.

KITTY
Julian?

Colossus is staring at the hooded figure in the corner. He looks puzzled.

OUTSIDE THE ROOM

Hellion is right outside the room, banging against the metal door. He calls out.

HELLION
I can’t through. The blast doors are shut! Can you phase through it?

IN THE ROOM

KITTY
Through something that big? Not all three of us. You better call the others.

OUTSIDE THE ROOM

Hellion lifts a communicator.

HELLION (INTO COMMUNICATOR)
Teresa, come in. We’ve got a problem. We need you down here right away. Teresa? Teresa?

He looks up, just as the lights flicker off.

HELLION
Oh no!
 
INT. BUILDING – DARK ROOM

COLOSSUS
Kitty, I think we should go. Now.

KITTY
Why? What’s wrong?

COLOSSUS
Let’s just go.

KITTY
What’s gotten into you, Pete?

She walks over to the hooded figure. She reaches out with her hand.

COLOSSUS
Kitty! Don’t!

The figure leaps up, grabbing Kitty’s hand and using it to twist her around. The figure draws a knife and holds it to her neck.

KITTY
Nice try, jackass.

She tries to phase through, but fails.

KITTY (CONT’D)
What? My powers!

COLOSSUS
(To the figure)
What have you done?

HELLION (O.S.)
Kitty!

INT. BUILDING – OUTSIDE ROOM

HELLION
Peter! What’s going on in there?

IN THE ROOM

COLOSSUS
What have you done with the others? Where’s Teresa?

The figure’s face is cast in shadow. It starts to laugh; a deep manic laugh. Kitty lets out a whimper.

Colossus roars and leaps at the figure. Kitty elbows the figure, causing it to loosen it grip and giving her time to duck. Colossus tackles the figure to the ground.

Colossus takes off the hood, to reveal: STORM.

Colossus is shocked. Storm’s eyes turn white, and she blasts him with lightning.

He crashes into the opposite wall. Kitty rushes to his side. She screams at Storm, who rises to her feet, lightning crackling.

KITTY
Storm! How could you!

Storm smiles devilishly. She raises her hands, and unleashes an arcing bolt of hot lightning towards the students.

Kitty screams in terror, almost lost in the rumble of thunder as we-

FADE TO WHITE.
 
INT. DANGER ROOM – DAY

From the whiteness, the familiar appearance of the Danger Room leaks through. KITTY, COLOSSUS, SIRYN, DUST and HELLION are all standing in the centre.

The doors slide open and ANGEL strides in.

ANGEL
So… which one of you wants to tell me what happened?

HELLION
We failed. That’s what happened.

KITTY
Why is Storm part of the simulation?

ANGEL
Simply the element of surprise. It’s part of life… so expect it on every exercise. I guess we’re finished. You better get ready for Hank’s lesson.

The students file past Warren and disappear through the doors. Warren follows them.
 
OMG hahahaha
well done..
well done indeed....
Phieuw LOL
I like it
 
Coming up soon:

Hank prepares to visit the President when he is part of one of the children's pranks. And we see more glimpses from inside Hodge's base on Genosha. Including that of a large, robotic creature...
 
Storm? You got wondering there. Love it and need you to update
 
I thought I'd post my cast for my Young X-Men spin-off, whilst I'm writing the next few parts.

X-Men

LOGAN/WOLVERINE - Hugh Jackman
ORORO MUNROE/STORM - Halle Berry
DR HENRY "HANK" MCCOY/BEAST - Kelsey Grammer
ROGUE/MARIE - Anna Paquin
WARREN WORTHINGTON III/ANGEL - Ben Foster
BOBBY DRAKE/ICEMAN - Shawn Ashmore
KITTY PRYDE - Ellen Page
PETER RASPUTIN/COLOSSUS - Daniel Cudmore

Government

THE PRESIDENT - Josef Sommer
TRASK - Bill Duke
SENATOR CAMERON HODGE - Jon Voight
HENRY GYRICH - Joaquin Phoenix

Captured mutants on Genosha

KURT WAGNER/NIGHTCRAWLER - Alan Cumming
FORGE - Lou Diamond Phillips
SARAH RUSHMAN/MARROW - Natassia Malthe
JAMES PROUDSTAR/WARPATH - Steve Bacic
LANCE ALVERS/AVALANCHE - Drew Fuller
FRED DUKES/BLOB - Abraham Benrubi

X-Kids

THERESA ROURKE CASSIDY/SIRYN - Shauna Kain
RAY CRISP/BERZERKER - Layke Anderson
JIMMY/LEECH - Cameron Bright
ARTIE - Bryce Hodgson
STEPFORD CUCKOOS - Bonnie Piesse
JONES - Connor Widdows
JUBILATION LEE/JUBILEE - Kea Wong
JULIAN KELLER/HELLION - Jesse Hutch
SOORAYA QADIR/DUST - Genelia D'Souza

Others

TAXI DRIVER - Stan Lee
TOURIST - Chris Claremont
 
i didnt get into much of it yet but i will be sure to read the rest when i have some time! great job so far!!!!
 
Thanks. :) There'll be an update soon. And everything will come together as the main plot is revealed.
 
wow i just finished reading what you have so far! that is awesome! you are really good at writing these :)
 
Thanks a lot. :) I'm really glad people are having as much fun reading this as I did writing it. I'm just writing the next part now. Shouldn't be long now.
 
Ok, here's the next part now. Sorry for the delay. Hope you like it.

INT. XAVIER INSTITUTE – HALLWAY – SAME TIME

Hank is walking down the plush hallway briskly, a manila folder in hand. He passes several students on the way, opens the door at the far end and walks to-

EXT. XAVIER INSTITUTE – GARAGE – CONTINUOUS

There is a selection of cars, vans and, of course, Scott’s motorcycle. Hank walks a little further to the corner, when a blue vehicle waits.

But as he draws nearer, he notices something is wrong: the car is WRECKED. It is covered in mud, the bumper is on the verge of falling off and the windscreen is barely recognisable.

Hank grits his teeth, and scrunches the folder up in his fist.
 
INT. XAVIER INSTITUTE – CLASSROOM – MINUTES LATER

A crowd of students have gathered, facing the front. BERZERKER AND JUBILEE are there, too.

Hank glares at them, his eyes bulging.

HANK
I know it has been a stressful year… for all of us. And with Storm gone, I’m sure times will be difficult. But that does not permit you to behave irresponsibly. Storm is displaying a great deal of trust in you. The least you can do is obey her wishes.

The students stare at him, bewildered.

HANK (CONT’D)
As I’m sure you already know, Storm does not tolerant this sort of behaviour. And neither will I. As long as I am here, you will act like responsible members of society.

JUBILEE
Err… Mr McCoy? What are you talking about?

HANK
I’m sure you know full well, Miss Lee. One of the X-Vehicles… I found it this morning. I don’t know what made you think you could get away with it, but I can assure you… I will find out who did this.

Some of the students start to giggle. One of them in particular, HUSK, is smiling. Hank catches her eye.

HANK (CONT’D)
You seem to find this funny, Miss Guthrie. Were you involved?

She doesn’t reply. He walks over to her, touches her arm. But her body folds in on itself, and crumples to the floor. The other kids start laughing.

Hank is furious. His voice rises to a shout.

HANK
That’s it! All of you! If no one will own up, I will have to punish you all! I will be contacting every one your parents and-

Suddenly, there is a knock at the door and ANGEL walks in.

ANGEL
Is everything okay, Hank?

HANK
Of course. I can handle this.

ANGEL
(Smiling)
I heard.

Hank stares at him.

ANGEL (CONT’D)
How do you know it was any of these, Hank?

HANK
Well, I-

ANGEL
Have you even checked the security footage? You know the school is fitted with CCTV. You might be able to recognise some of them.

Hank looks embarrassed.

HANK
But the children-

ANGEL
They’re not children anymore, Hank. Besides, they’ve got enough to deal with. Let them be.

HANK
I’ll check the footage now.

With one last look at the students, he stomps off. The students look towards Angel, curiously.

BERZERKER
Mr Worthington, we…

ANGEL
I know, guys. I know what you’ve been through. But just try and stay out of trouble, okay? You know what Hank is like. A dog with a bone, he won’t let it go.

JUBILEE
But the tape-

ANGEL
Don’t worry about it. I swiped it clean before I got here.

The students smile.

BERZERKER
Thanks, Mr Worthington.

ANGEL
No problem. Now go on. Scuttle. Before Hank realises what’s happened.

The students make their way out of the classroom. Angel looks out at a window, where Hank is storming around, furious and muttering to himself. Angel smiles, and follows the students out.
 
INT. FACTORY

The sound of machinery and the hiss of engines assaults our ears. We see workers, clad in white satin, overlooking the process.

Bands of metal, hundreds upon hundreds, move along the beltway to other parts of the factory. In the corner, sparks fly as workers attempt to repair a piece of machinery.

Another white-clad worker strolls past the camera, pushing a trolley of high-tech guns and other weaponry.

PAN UP TO THE OVERLOOKING BALCONY

Looking down at the work, is HODGE AND GYRICH.

HODGE
Remarkable… isn’t it?

Gyrich nods his agreement.

HODGE (CONT’D)
All this… and we haven’t lift a finger. Remind me to congratulate the mutants’ efforts.

GYRICH
Of course, sir.

HODGE
Ironic, though, isn’t it, Mr Gyrich? That the mutants will be the cause of their own downfall.

GYRICH
You mean, it’s ready?

HODGE
Almost. First we’ll need to run a few tests… and then, we can start the revolution. Oh, the thought of it… and no-one will ever see it coming.

Gyrich’s eyes light up with excitement.

GYRICH
What about Trask? What’s his involvement in the project?

HODGE
Oh, he has his uses. His place in the White House, for one. If we’re to succeed, then we need the President’s support. And Trask is the only man who can get it.

GYRICH
Do you think he’ll go along with this?

HODGE
Mr Gyrich, I can assure you: Trask is one of the most egotistical, repulsive men I have ever met… but even he knows his place. He’ll thrive in our cause, don’t worry. I'll see to that.

Gyrich seems settled.

HODGE (CONT’D)
Yes, everything is going to plan… and much sooner than I expected. No doubt the mutants we picked up at Calinas helped to speed things along.

Just then, a SECRETARY walks up behind them. They turn to face him.

SECRETARY
Excuse me, sir. But they need you downstairs.

Hodge’s eyes strain, cautiously. Is it what he thinks…?

SECRETARY (CONT’D)
It’s ready, sir.
 
EXT. DAM – DAY

Establishing shot. A beautiful scenery, a dam is being constructed, surrounded by lush trees and exotic wildlife.

But as we move closer, it isn’t what it seems…

MUTANTS ARE WORKING ON BUILDING THE DAM. Each one of them wears a METAL BAND around their necks.

We see WARPATH, lifting up a slab of granite and placing it in a wheelbarrow. He heaves a sigh; his hands are bruised, his face is cut. But he lifts the wheelbarrow and speeds away.

Further along, two mutants are cutting down trees: a dark haired man named AVALANCHE, and a large, bald man known as BLOB.

They use a long saw to cut into the trunk of a tree. In a few moments, it gives way and the tree collapses to the ground, echoing throughout the camp.

It’s clear that nobody is happy. Most of the mutants are suffering from malnutrition, and many have cuts across their arms.

Soldiers, clad in grey, overseer the construction. Some yell at the slacking mutants, others patrol the area, their weapons trained in their arms.

Not exactly the vacation these mutants planned…
 
Good job..

I love how you introduced Avalance and Blob :D
 
Thanks. :)

They will have speaking roles later on, don't worry. And I'll introduce some more mutants from Genosha soon.
 

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