5.5 Hypers: Top Secret

J Alba's Lover said:
Hmmm why am i sensing a trend in all these fic stories.

Believe me, you won't be so flat character in final chapters ;)
 
tzarinna said:
I'm on the edge of my seat,looks good. :yay:

Well, you will be one of [blackout]twists[/blackout] at the end of the story.
 
CHAPTER VIII - INVISIBILIY

Interragation room.

JAL
Tell me truth. You don't have War Party's dead body.

SAVA
Why you think so?

JAL
Because I know this.

SAVA
:eek:

JAL
Yeah.

SAVA
How?

JAL
Because... Uhhh... you won't believe me.

SAVA
Why?

JAL
Because you will be dead before I will answer you.

SAVA
WTF with you?!?

JAL
That's your fate, my friend.

SAVA
You are kiddin, right?

JAL
You should just hope so ;)

Hype Jail.

HUNTER and ROBO come in CINE's lattice room.

HUNTER
Oh My God!!!

ROBO
Holy s***!!!

They see CINE's dead body, which is breaked up with a lot of blood. Everything is in blood.

ROBO looks around and notices that there are no guards.

ROBO
Where are guards?

HUNTER
They... They killed him. JAL told me that all guards were members of LeNoe's clan. That means that this clan isn't closed yet.

ROBO
I guess, he told too much info to us.

HUNTER
Yeah, I wonder why they didn't stop our talking before he mentioned Tzarinna.

ROBO
Maybe because they were afraid of us. We are still detectives. So if they did it, they would have problems with FBI.

HUNTER
Did you get something about her?

ROBO
About Tzarinna? I will.

HUNTER
Now we should better go to department to talk more with JAL.

ROBO
I am tired! I am tired of this s***!!! We don't even know if War Party was really killed!!!

HUNTER
What? We have his dead body!

ROBO
No! It wasn't his real body!

HUNTER
ROBO, tell me right now what happened!!!

ROBO
I... I remember that day, when we all heard of his murder. But later, I
went to morgue and... and I saw this!

HUNTER
WHAT ROBO?!? WHAT?!?

ROBO
I saw SAVA killing some guy. They took and undressed him. Then they put him in WP booth!!!

HUNTER
Why you didn't tell me?

ROBO
SAVA didn't want anyone to know this and... he... he started threatening me!!!

HUNTER
Oh God!!!

TO BE CONTINUED ...
 
CHAPTER IX - ADVANTAGE

The department.

HUNTER and ROBO go to interragation room.

HUNTER
Okay, I will talk with SAVA, but now we have no time for this.

ROBO
Right, but why you don't think SAVA can be real War Party's murderer?

HUNTER
Because he didn't have his real body. It doesn't make sense. He wanted to just delete all possible evidences.

ROBO
So you think he didn't have any connection with the real killer?

HUNTER
No, he had it and now he also has it.

HUNTER and ROBO come in.

They see nobody in the room.

HUNTER
F***!!!

They go to SAVA's room.

ROBO
Now I started thinking he IS real killer.

HUNTER
We need to find this out, but only after we will talk with RONNY.

They come into SAVA's room and meet him.

SAVA
Hi guys.

HUNTER
Where is JAL?

SAVA
He couldn't stay there anymore and I allowed him to go out.

ROBO
WHY?!? We haven't even finished talk with him yet.

SAVA
It doesn't matter. In 15 mins GREEN will come with RONNY. He will be your work for today.

HUNTER
They found him?

SAVA
Yeah, they did. I have no time, I need to go.

SAVA comes to the door and he opens it.

HUNTER and ROBO go out.

SAVA also goes out and closes the door with the lock. Then, he goes to exit of the department.

HUNTER and ROBO stay near SAVA's room.

ROBO
Damn, he closed it!

HUNTER
As I said, we don't have time for this.

ROBO
Uhhh... I think I won't be able to have much time to talk with RONNY. I need to meet some guy. He has very useful info.

HUNTER
Then, I will talk with RONNY.

ROBO
NO! Not only you!

HUNTER
Why?

ROBO
Because you just can't talk with people! Every time when you do that, you just start fighting with them. This isn't right.

HUNTER
And what will you do? I promise you, I will be nice guy with this moron.

ROBO
I doubt.

HUNTER
Trust me. I will start asking him right after you'll leave the room. There also will be GREEN.

ROBO
Alright. We need to find JAL and also to talk with El Payaso, he is the last.

HUNTER
I'll try to find JAL.

Interragation room.

GREEN
RONNY, if you don't want me to remind you what happened after Japan, then be good buy.

RONNY
EAT MY S***!!!

GREEN's guy, GAMMY79, gets electric club and strikes RONNY.

RONNY
SON OF B****!!!

GREEN
GAMMY.

GAMMY uses eclectric club again.

RONNY
DAMN IT!

HUNTER and ROBO come in.

HUNTER
Ok little barbie, we have questions.

ROBO
HUNTER.

HUNTER
Alright, alright.

ROBO
RONNY, have you ever had arm deal with War Party.

RONNY
Yeah, 2-3.

ROBO
Have he ever mentioned anout his other deals?

RONNY
No, but I guess he had other people in this business. Arm deal is what made Cold War alive.

ROBO
Okay, and in which guns or other war stuff was he interested?

RONNY
I won't tell you this, because I can't.

HUNTER
Why?

RONNY
If I do that, I will be killed tomorrow, even if this info is connected with only WP.

HUNTER
It doesn't make sense.

RONNY
Uhhh... WP died, right? But there are still his guys, which were his spokesmen in all his deals.

ROBO
Why he didn't want to show himself?

RONNY
Don't know. Find his spokesman and talk with me.

HUNTER
We know one guy.

RONNY
Anyway, i don't know much about them. I saw only one, El Payaso.

HUNTER
Yeah, i know him. We are gonna talk with him.

RONNY
Glad for you.

ROBO
(to HUNTER)
I need to go. Be quite.

HUNTER
I am Mr. Nice guy, don't forget this.

RONNY
Mr. Nice guy? WTF???

HUNTER
GAMMY!

GAMMY again gets electric club and strikes RONNY.

RONNY screams.

TO BE CONTINUED ...
 
Cine dead ?:wow: Gammy getting his zap on:woot:
 
hunter rider said:
Cine dead ?:wow: Gammy getting his zap on:woot:

Yeah :D

I think next chapters will be even more unpredictable (especially with the real face of murderer and searching for War Party's body) ;)
 
I seem to be a big deal in this story or at least I think I am. Good stuff. I love already being dead.
 
CHAPTER X - COVERT

The enbankment.

ROBO

Here you go.

RETRO
Hilton's porn-video? Man, I was kiddin!

ROBO
You know, I didn't feel it like joke :mad:

RETRO
Okay sorry. I didn't know this.

ROBO
So what about Tzarinna and RONNY.

RETRO
I didn't get anything about Tzarinna. Dude, she is really very defficult person to find in materials. I only know that she was married with some guy.

ROBO
And who is this guy?

RETRO
I found nothing about him.

ROBO
Uhhh... And what about RONNY.

RETRO
From what I heard, War Party bought 2 tanks, 14 guns, 6 machine-guns, 9 missiles, 4 helicops and 26 bullet-proof vests. BTW, did you know that nobody have never seen WP? Even his spokesman!

ROBO
Where did you find this?

RETRO
You know, I won't tell you.

ROBO
Anyway, thanx for info.

RETRO
Wait a minute. I have something for you.

RETRO gets one magazine and pack of tablets.

RETRO
Here you go.

ROBO looks at cover of magazine HYPE TIMES.

RETRO
There is very big article about your inquiry, especially about CINE's murder.

ROBO
F*** them.

RETRO
I am sure it will help you.

ROBO
But why I need tablets?

RETRO
They are for you to keep your nerves in normal state.

ROBO
Thank you.

RETRO
I need to tell you the last thing.

ROBO
Something happened?

RETRO
Did you know that SAVA got his post with the help of LeNoe's caln?

ROBO
:eek:

The department.

HUNTER
When did your last deal with him happen?

RONNY gets his personal pocket comp.

RONNY
Ummm... 4 months ago. I heard he was going to create his own war base. He had very good relations with politicals.

HUNTER
Was there anyone, who would finance his project.

RONNY
I told you everything what I know.

HUNTER
If you don't want your group to die right now, you will tell us this.

RONNY
What?

HUNTER
This!

HUNTER gets folder with documents and photos.

RONNY starts running over them.

HUNTER
There was 3 deals with him, right? The last one happened last month. It was in Israel. Why you didn't tell us about this?

RONNY
I couldn't remember.

HUNTER
Gammy.

Gammy strikes RONNY.

RONNY
Okay, okay. After this deal, I told El Payaso that there is rat in his group. He didn't want to know who was it, and he killed almost all his guys. He said that WP hates rats, but also he hates people, who tell him lie.

HUNTER
But why he didn't kill you?

RONNY
Dunno. I was needed WP.

TO BE CONTINUED ...
 
Ronny Shade said:
The twist ending....Ronny IS WP!!:eek:

I don't think this going to turn out like the Usual Suspects, even though it sounds very similar. But anyway, I'm the only War Party.
 
Ronny Shade said:
That'd be cool though, wouldnt it.

Yeah it would. I love the ending of that movie.
 
I'm loving this.

cine, its ****ing awesome..

I'm actually saying my lines as i read it.

:D
 
Thank you all guys. I am doing this only for you!!! :up: I love you all :)
 
CHAPTER XI - FEAR

HUNTER went to SAVA's apartment.

He knocks at the door.

HUNTER
Hey SAVA.

Nobody answers.

HUNTER
SAVA? SAVA?!?

HUNTER breaks the lock and opens the door. He enters SAVA's flat.

There is no one at home.

HUNTER
SAVA? Where are you?

HUNTER looks around. Then he turns to the door.

He comes to it and turns the back side.

He sees dead SAVA, who is fixed with axe on his head to the door.

HUNTER
Oh no...

The department.

RONNY walks out. ULTIMATEFAN comes to him.

RONNY
WTF you need there?

ULTIMATEFUN gets the gun and turns it to RONNY.

ROBO's apartment.

The letter.

SAVA? GREEN? ... HUNTER?

ROBO comes in his apartment. He sees HUNTER sitting on chair.

HUNTER
So you think I am murderer? Yeah?!?

ROBO
What?

HUNTER gets up and trows everything from the table.

ROBO
WTF are doing?!?

HUNTER shows him that letter.

HUNTER
DON'T SOUND LIKE A JERK!!! YOU ARE S***!!! F*** YOU!!! YOU THOUGHT THAT I AM MURDERER?!? B****!!!

ROBO
NO! NO! I DIDN'T!!! I JUST HAD SOME DOUBTS ABOUT YOU AND...

HUNTER gets the chair and trows it on ROBO.

At this moment, ROBO gets the gun and shoots at the chair.

HUNTER
AND NOW YOU WANT TO KILL ME YEAH?!?
ROBO trows the gun.

ROBO
LOOK, WTF WITH YOU?!? I WAS TRYING TO PROTECT MYSELF FROM YOUR MADNESS!!!

HUNTER
YOU!!! YOU KILLED SAVA!!!

ROBO
:eek: WHAT?

HUNTER
YEAH YOU DID IT! AND NOW YOU WANT KILL ME!!!

ROBO
HUTER, I DIDN'T DO THAT!!! I 1ST TIME HEAR ABOUT THIS!!! IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE!!!

HUNTER
NO IT DOES!!!

ROBO
How? I was that time with my informant. He said that War Party helped
SAVA to get his job.

HUNTER
But who could kill him?

ROBO
I want to find this now. I didn't know anything about his murder. Think about that, the killer wanted to kill you. He burnt your house. Then, CINE told us about TZARINNA, then he was killed. Now SAVA. Don't you remember what I told you about WP dead body?

HUNTER
Why should I believe you? Even you don't believe me!

ROBO
Because I have no reason to lie.

HUNTER
F*** YOU AND THIS F***ING S***!!! WE ARE NOT PARTNERS ANYMORE!
HUNTER goes out of the flat.

ROBO
CRAP!

HUNTER
WTF with this world?!?

Next day. The department.

GREEN
Ok, guys. Listen to me. Yesterday, our man, ROBO told us about murderer of SAVA.

Everyone is shocked.

GREEN
Yeah, I can understand what you are feeling now. But also, today GAMMY found another victim, RONNY. He was found on the rooftop of the department. This is getting very dangerous for all of us. I decided to become the head of our department...

HUNTER goes out.

ULTIMATEFAN
What's up HUNTER?

HUNTER
Green is a head of the department. What a crap!

ULTIMATEFAN
I think it will be very intersting for you to know something about him.

HUNTER
What? Did you get something?

ULTIMATEFAN
Oh yeah. And this is very useful info. I just need to know who is your next suspect?

HUNTER
No, no. AT first, I'll ckeck your info, and only then, you will get the answer.

ULTIMATEFAN
Come with me.

They go to HYPE TIMES publishing house.

ULTIMATEFAN
What can you say about GREEN?

HUNTER
I have no time for this. Give me this crap, and I'll name you our next suspect, ok?

ULTIMATEFAN
Look at this.

On screen of computer.

HUNTER
Uhhh... ULTIE, I am not gonna read all this. Tell me right now, what this
means!

ULTIMATEFAN
New war base got robbed in 2004, right?

HUNTER
So?

ULTIMATEFAN
When SAVA got his post?

HUNTER
In May 2004.

ULTIMATEFAN
There is info about guys, who robbed the base. They were weared in gray uniforms with green spots and "G.E.B.H" symbols.

HUNTER
GREEN's guys have exact forms.

ULTIMATEFAN
Right. And as I think, he robbed it to get for War Party.

HUNTER
Damn, this is very logical point.

ULTIMATEFAN
But this is just my thoughts.

HUNTER
Now there is a question. Why did GREEN help WP?

ULTIMATEFAN
I guess you know the answer.

HUNTER
Yeah, I know it.

ULTIMATEFAN
Ok, so will you now tell me who is your next suspect?

HUNTER
Alright, El Payaso.

ULTIMATEFAN
You know I can help you and find some info about him.

HUNTER
Great, but I don't need this now.

The department. Evening.

HUNTER comes in GREEN's room.

HUNTER
We need to talk, buddy.

TO BE CONTINUED ...
 
Poor Ronny. :csad:

This is fun,real page turner. :yay:
 
CHAPTER XII - CORRUPTION

HUNTER
How you feel like in SAVA's post?

GREEN
What are you talking about?

HUNTER
How did SAVA get his job?

GREEN
I dunno.

HUNTER
Stop telling me s***! YOU AND SAVA STARTED WORKING HERE TOGETHER WITH THE SAME MINUTE, HOUR, DAY, WEEK, MONTH, YEAR!!!

GREEN
Look, tell me what the f*** you need here and I will answer you.

HUNTER
Now it isn't your game. You are my suspect!

GREEN
Huh?

HUNTER
WAR PARTY helped you and SAVA to get this job. He was your boss, yeah?

GREEN
HUNTER, what the f*** with you?

HUNTER
I am asking you! Was he your boss?

GREEN
No, he wasn't!

HUNTER
Don't lie, he was!

GREEN tries to get the gun. But suddenly, HUNTER beats him in face and breaks his hand.

GREEN
Argh... DAMN YOU F***ING MORON!!!

HUNTER
ANSWER ME!!!

GREEN
YEAH HE WAS!!!

HUNTER
Why did he give the main post SAVA? Why not you?

GREEN
SAVA was his closer friend.

HUNTER
What he wnated from you both?

GREEN
Nothing.

HUNTER steps on GREEN's broken hand.

GREEN
F***!!! OKAY I WILL TELL YOU!!! STOP THIS!!!

HUNTER removes his leg.

GREEN
WP wanted this department to have his system. He wanted us to solve all law problems.

HUNTER
SO WE ALL WERE WORKING ON HIM?!?! ALL THIS TIME?!?!

GREEN
Yeah.

HUNTER kicks GREEN.

HUNTER
YOU KILLED HIM YEAH?!?

GREEN
NO! IT WASN'T ME!!! I STOP TALKING WITH WP 2 MONTHS AGO!

HUNTER
WHY?

GREEN
He didn't want to give me my money. Me and my band got all weapons for him, but he didn't want to pay.

HUNTER
Why WP would need you, if he had deals with arm dealers like RONNY?

GREEN
They had very quality goods, but he wanted more weapons.

HUNTER
Why?

GREEN
He was going to start war between Israel, Iran, Russia and USA. It would give him much more powers to become new political leader of country, who would win.

HUNTER
DAMN!!!

GREEN
Please! Don't kill me!!!

HUNTER
Why I shouldn't kill you? You are mafia's guy, you are a liar, you don't
have family. Why?

GREEN
You are needed in me.

HUNTER
Tell me the reason why I need you?

GREEN
I know how we can find El Payaso. He was spokesman of WP.

HUNTER
If I don't kill you, you will arrest me tomorrow.

GREEN
Trust me, I won't!

HUNTER
Why should I trust you? You were l were liar all this time!

GREEN
What you need to believe me?

HUNTER
Nothing.

HUNTER gets his dictaphone and turns it off.

HUNTER
This is your guarantee. If you do this, I will send the record to all journalists and detectives.

GREEN
(crying)
Oh God!

HUNTER leaves the room.

The next day. The morning.

The department.

ROBO goes to his room.

He opens the door and sees dead RETRO on his table. There is blood everywhere.

ROBO
(almost crying)
HOLY S***! NO!!!

TO BE CONTINUED ...
 

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