And that opening is missed, but again, this is film. Dialogue, especially long drawn out dialogue, takes up precious screentime.
In my opinion, that screentime could be saved up by not wasting it on stuff that wasn't in the graphic novel in the first place. If you take out the scene where Blake is watching 'The McLaughlin Group' on his TV, that would buy us 1.5-2 minutes of screentime. 'Dog Carcass in alley...' would take 1 minute tops, 'Existence is random...' only a couple of seconds.
I don't mind the fight scene, because let's face it, if we're going to see Rorschach fighting to stay up and relishing the encounter, why not see him fighting and relishing the encounter?
It just kills the drama and realism of that scene for me. What I loved about the original scene is that our 'hero' goes out like a punk, but here, it's just so typically... American, you know? An Irish midget jumps from the second floor, lands on concrete and breaks his leg... but no, we gotta see him get up on his feet, say a corny one-liner and pull a few punches before he ever so stoically falls to the ground.
Veidt has always talked like he belongs in high society, and he's always displayed a bit of an ego. Maybe he believes Chilean Spanish is a bastardization of the language. Maybe that's relevant to the movie and it's setting.
He screams "villain" because of his attitude, or because Pinochet is calling him?
He's also someone who gave away his fortune and spent his youth peniless, travelling the world and learning about foreign cultures.
To answer your question, I think both his prickish attitude and shady liasons, as shown in that scene, make him look highly suspicious.
The plot twist you refer to is, quite simply, not that impressive. There, I said it. It wasn't a cliche in 1986, but now, decades later, "good guy turning out to be the villain" has been done to death. People should see it coming from a mile away, really.
I agree to a point, but then why even bother presenting it as a mistery in the movie? If Adrian is made out to be a bad guy from the get-go, what's the point? Why not just reveal Blake's killer in the first scene of the movie?
What Veidt DOES and the fact that it could concievably work is shocking. You have a character who is really, if you think about it, only barely in the movie and story, not developed too much, ending up being the villain. And that's supposed to shock people? Thank goodness Moloch is in this to throw people off, but come on, does anyone ever buy that Moloch might be the person behind it all?
That is why Hooded Justice would make an excellent suspect, if they somehow figured out how to include his scenes and the tidbit about Rolf Mueller.
Yes, especially those random shots of Jon shaking hands with Kennedy, Nixon, Nixon just showing up as the President still...random "names" that Alan Moore liked and wanted to include.
They're placing WATCHMEN in our world, and a few name drops or references are needed to do something like that.
Come on, that part with Kennedy was pretty sublime, "He NODS, laughing", followed by "two years later in Dallas, his head snaps FORWARD and then BACK."
And both Kennedy's assasination and Nixon still being in power hint at the of one of the main Watchmen characters direct involvement.
Take the previously mentioned McLaughlin Group segment for example. It's just there, there's no real point to it, no punchline like News reports in Robocop, other than to provide lot of unnecessary expository dialogue and probably demonstrate the wonders of modern Hollywood make-up. It's basically just "Hello, I am John McLaughlin and I am 20 years younger. Blah blah blah." and "Hello, I am Pat Buchanan and I am also 20 years younger. Blah blah DIRTY COMMIES blah."
Then maybe the reasoning for him calling isn't to show Veidt is a member of an international conglomerate of villains. I mean, I don't know, I'm just speculating. I can't remember if it comes up again later on in the script.
It is never adressed in the script again. The whole scene seemed pretty gratuitous to me and, in my opinion, wrong way to establish him as a character.
It means in the context of a film script. You don't just write everything that is happening visually into a script. That's the job of storyboards, art departments, and the Director.
Again, what elements do you feel are "missing", based on the script?
Oh. My bad.
Well, off the top of my head, most of the juxtaposition between Dr Manhattan's interview and Laurie and Dan's fight in the alley is not present. Stuff like "let's try and keep it
snappy", "whatever is it you super-people do" and "the mob's getting
aroused", "the show's over". Without the overlapping dialogue, intercutting of these two scenes seems pointless.
Similar case being the scene with Nixon intercut with Dr Manhattan on Mars, only that it's been completely replaced with random chatter between Nixon, Schlesinger, Kissinger and HR Haldeman that doesn't really go anywhere.
The part where Dan and Laurie attempt to have sex while Veidt does acrobatics on TV. There's quite a bit more, but I just don't feel like re-reading it right now.