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BvS David S. Goyer IS the Script Writer!

How do you feel about Goyer writing the script for the first Superman Batman film

  • His work on MOS was VERY GOOD. He'll do GREAT.

  • His work on MOS was OKAY. I am Skecptical.

  • His work on MOS was POOR. I feel dread.

  • He NEEDS Affleck's help and guidance to deliver a great script

  • His work on MOS was VERY GOOD. He'll do GREAT.

  • His work on MOS was OKAY. I am Skecptical.

  • His work on MOS was POOR. I feel dread.

  • He NEEDS Affleck's help and guidance to deliver a great script

  • His work on MOS was VERY GOOD. He'll do GREAT.

  • His work on MOS was OKAY. I am Skecptical.

  • His work on MOS was POOR. I feel dread.

  • He NEEDS Affleck's help and guidance to deliver a great script

  • His work on MOS was VERY GOOD. He'll do GREAT.

  • His work on MOS was OKAY. I am Skecptical.

  • His work on MOS was POOR. I feel dread.

  • He NEEDS Affleck's help and guidance to deliver a great script


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Guys, you only have a right to an opinion when it comes to criticism, but not to the facts, and the fact remains that David S. Goyer has written some of the best comic book films in the last 10 years. The guy also knows the genre since he wrote some comic book stories. Enough of the negative criticism, because it's not going to change anything. "Man of Steel" was a success, so Snyder and Goyer will get to work on The sequel.
 
Are you referring to a specific movie that came out in 1999?
Ironically, I'm referring to The Phantom Menace. I love it, but it's a common thing for Prequel Trilogy defenders to cite the "Yeah, GL is VERY distraught about all this, swimming in his all the money he keeps making".

I think that's true of many films once you oversimplify to that extent. I'd say it's also true of Captain America, Iron Man 3, etc.
Sure, but if you compare potentials... my God, MoS' was otherwordly when it comes to CBMs.

Which is going to be hard to do now that they have to introduce Batman and his entire entourage, the Batman-Superman relationship, as well as possibly Luthor, and potentially some other villains for them to fight.
To be fair, I think it's going to be very easy, and Batman's inclusion will only help things.
 
Guys, you only have a right to an opinion when it comes to criticism, but not to the facts, and the fact remains that David S. Goyer has written some of the best comic book films in the last 10 years. The guy also knows the genre since he wrote some comic book stories. Enough of the negative criticism, because it's not going to change anything. "Man of Steel" was a success, so Snyder and Goyer will get to work on The sequel.

See, D.P., this post I just quoted showcases the kind of "opinion is fact" attitude I was talking about.
 
You raised some valid points, no hard feelings.

I'm just going to switch gears because we would have been multi-quoting each other forever, lol.

Guys, you only have a right to an opinion when it comes to criticism, but not to the facts, and the fact remains that David S. Goyer has written some of the best comic book films in the last 10 years. The guy also knows the genre since he wrote some comic book stories. Enough of the negative criticism, because it's not going to change anything. "Man of Steel" was a success, so Snyder and Goyer will get to work on The sequel.

I mean, this is how I feel, but Goyer is not everyone's cup of tea and there is not really anything that can change that.

I guess he could win over people with this film, but if he hasn't by now he probably won't.
 
You raised some valid points, no hard feelings.

I'm just going to switch gears because we would have been multi-quoting each other forever, lol.



I mean, this is how I feel, but Goyer is not everyone's cup of tea and there is not really anything that can change that.

I guess he could win over people with this film, but if he hasn't by now he probably won't.

That doesn't change the fact that Goyer wrote for some of the best CBM's in the past decade.
It's also a fact that you dance with the one that brung you and you make pictures for the masses, not for a small minority who don't like a particular writer.
 
That doesn't change the fact that Goyer wrote for some of the best CBM's in the past decade.
It's also a fact that you dance with the one that brung you and you make pictures for the masses, not for a small minority who don't like a particular writer.

He has written some of the best CBM's in recent memory.

The Nolan Trilogy was amazing IMO, and the Blade movies were great save Trinity.

People argue that the first Blade movie ushered in the era of CBM's we are in now.

Yet in still, people even trash the movies I mentioned, so there is just no winning people over. I do agree though, fans are going to have to learn to deal with it because Goyer isn't going anywhere and WB seems to be fully invested in him.

Hopefully Affleck will have some involvement in the story and kind of bridge the gap between the people who don't like Goyer and the people who do.
 
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Guys, you only have a right to an opinion when it comes to criticism, but not to the facts, and the fact remains that David S. Goyer has written some of the best comic book films in the last 10 years. The guy also knows the genre since he wrote some comic book stories. Enough of the negative criticism, because it's not going to change anything. "Man of Steel" was a success, so Snyder and Goyer will get to work on The sequel.
LOL. That itself is an opinion. I happen to think that 2 out of the 3 Batman films were rubbish, so that doesn't hold true. So "best comic books in the last 10 years" is an opinion, not a FACT.
 
Isn't Iron Man 3 broadly panned?

I didn't even bother to see it, as I found Iron Man 2 idiotic.
lol. Iron Man 3 is a bad film but it is most certainly not broadly panned.

BOX OFFICE WISE: Nearly DOUBLE the gross of MOS

CRITICS WISE: 78% on Rotten Tomatoes and Certified FRESH whereas MOS is 56% and ROTTEN.

So Iron Man 3 is not broadly panned. It is well reviewed and extremely successful financially.
 
Ironically, I'm referring to The Phantom Menace. I love it, but it's a common thing for Prequel Trilogy defenders to cite the "Yeah, GL is VERY distraught about all this, swimming in his all the money he keeps making".
George Lucas was a very rich man, and he just made an additional 4.05 billion from selling Lucas Arts to Disney.

How do you "love" the phantom menace? I like the phantom menace, it might be better than return of the jedi, to be honest, I don't get why people hate it. But love?

Sure, but if you compare potentials... my God, MoS' was otherwordly when it comes to CBMs.
If it had actually delievered on its promise it might be the highest rated movie on imdb. However, sometimes it doesn't make sense to aim way too high, it's like if I tell you I'm running the Ironman tomorrow. I can try... and not succeed. That's not particularly commendable.

To be fair, I think it's going to be very easy, and Batman's inclusion will only help things.
It depends how they go with it. I hope they don't have Batman and Superman team up immediately and then fight Luthor in a robot outfit, and then fight additional villains.

I see no other way to pull this off than a pure versus movie.
 
lol. Iron Man 3 is a bad film but it is most certainly not broadly panned.

BOX OFFICE WISE: Nearly DOUBLE the gross of MOS

CRITICS WISE: 78% on Rotten Tomatoes and Certified FRESH whereas MOS is 56% and ROTTEN.

So Iron Man 3 is not broadly panned. It is well reviewed and extremely successful financially.

They could have put poop on a piece of paper, called it a script, and made money... people were going to go see it because the avengers was well liked and because the first two movies were well liked. The third Spider Man movie made 891 million dollars, and it was broadly regarded as terrible.

I've seen a lot of criticisms of the movie, and the people I know who watched it found it dumb.
 
I mean, I love the TDKT, but Goyer didn't write all of them, he wrote BB and that was heavily criticized for its dialogue, too. And even then, Nolan changed some stuff.

And Blade 1 and 2's scripts were changed by their respective directors. The one movie he had full control of was Blade 3 and it shares so many flaws with the ones I find in MoS it's not even funny.

So, the accurate thing to say is that Goyer has been co-responsible for some of the generally liked and loved CBMs.
 
George Lucas was a very rich man, and he just made an additional 4.05 billion from selling Lucas Arts to Disney.
I know. I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, or if you're disagreeing with me.

How do you "love" the phantom menace? I like the phantom menace, it might be better than return of the jedi, to be honest, I don't get why people hate it. But love?
I love it the same way I love the entire SW franchise. I can rewatch it any time, even if I have seen it recently, and enjoy the hell out of it.

If it had actually delievered on its promise it might be the highest rated movie on imdb. However, sometimes it doesn't make sense to aim way too high, it's like if I tell you I'm running the Ironman tomorrow. I can try... and not succeed. That's not particularly commendable.
Well, that's what I'm saying: compare promises of films. Nothing more.

It depends how they go with it. I hope they don't have Batman and Superman team up immediately and then fight Luthor in a robot outfit, and then fight additional villains.

I see no other way to pull this off than a pure versus movie.
I don't know how they do it, but almost everyone here suspects that busniessman Lex will help rebuild Metropolis and wage a war against Superman because of the events of MoS and Batman is suspicious of this alien that has revealed himself to the world. In principle it's highly serviceable.
 
Well, that's what I'm saying: compare promises of films. Nothing more.
But is it commendable if I decide to try and run an Ironman tomorrow? Probably not. If you tell me you're going to build a spaceship and go live on the moon that's not commendable either. It should have occurred to Goyer that a more focused movie might work better.

I'm not saying that he should aim for something as dim as the Marvel phase 1 films, all of which are shallow imo except for Ang Lee's Hulk. There is an intermediate level, between having zero themes and having twenty themes with incomplete execution, and that's called having 1, 2, or 3 themes. The best CBM of the past decade, The Dark Knight, has very few themes: escalation, the belief Gotham needs a hero, I think that's all.

I don't know how they do it, but almost everyone here suspects that busniessman Lex will help rebuild Metropolis and wage a war against Superman because of the events of MoS and Batman is suspicious of this alien that has revealed himself to the world. In principle it's highly serviceable.
It's high-risk, high-reward. It can work, we'll see.
 
They could have put poop on a piece of paper, called it a script, and made money... people were going to go see it because the avengers was well liked and because the first two movies were well liked. The third Spider Man movie made 891 million dollars, and it was broadly regarded as terrible.

I've seen a lot of criticisms of the movie, and the people I know who watched it found it dumb.

My god YES! If Marvel really cared about their poster boy, they would do proper justice to the characters and properties involved in that franchise. I don't need to mention anything about that and that horse has already been beaten. But I thought I would never see Jar Jar Binks in human form until I saw Iron Man 3. Besides what's a hero without a proper villain to fight?
 
But is it commendable if I decide to try and run an Ironman tomorrow? Probably not. If you tell me you're going to build a spaceship and go live on the moon that's not commendable either. It should have occurred to Goyer that a more focused movie might work better.
Sorry, what does "run an Ironman" mean? I think I'm missing something.:oldrazz:

I'm not saying that he should aim for something as dim as the Marvel phase 1 films, all of which are shallow imo except for Ang Lee's Hulk. There is an intermediate level, between having zero themes and having twenty themes with incomplete execution, and that's called having 1, 2, or 3 themes. The best CBM of the past decade, The Dark Knight, has very few themes: escalation, the belief Gotham needs a hero, I think that's all.
Ah, but MoS had exactly 3 things going: Nature vs. nurture, consequences of first alien contact and legacy. It was a recipe for success.

For conversation's sake, I think TDK was also about chaos and about the barriers one can/should break to achieve a goal. Although my latter suggestion and your latter suggestion might be identical, if I understand what you mean by "Gotham needs a hero".
 
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It presented a typical question and responded with a complex and layered answer. If I was to ask a similar question in 1939's wizard of Oz kansas I'd probably get a simple straight forward answer. If I were to ask the question in a modern and consequence ridden world such as ours, I'd probably get a non answer such as was given in this film.

If Clark had the power to bring people back from the dead and he then asked Martha, should I bring daddy back to life? what do you think the simple righteous answer would be in a film like the wizard of oz? Now what do you think the realistic complex answer would be in our world? Sorry but this doesn't need to be that 2001 thing to be considered a more complex take on the material. It's already achieved that. Could it have been a more complex film, hard to find a film that couldn't.

Just because there can be complex questions brought up doesn't mean that the movie is complex. Many movies treat complex issues in a simple manner. To take another example, the X-Men movies center around questions about being different, the treatment of minorities etc. Those are extremely hard questions to solve since we haven't done it in reality, but it certainly doesn't mean that the movies are complex in my view. They don't completely lack complexity but when you call a movie complex as a general statement you have to compare it to all movies. Complex movies rarely make much money since the average person can't get into them.

Superhero movies are for me fun movies that usually have some substance to them, but it's not something I watch when I feel to be intellectually challenged.

To be honest with you, I personally don't need to see a film where the hero has to be encouraged to be anything. I'd rather he himself do it, cheerleading squad behind him or not. The more difficult the circumstances the more heroic.
I don't need that either but this is a case of a movie where the protagonist doesn't become the superhero until he gets that. In that light I'd prefer if he had gotten a bigger portion of it from his human parents. I feel that was better to argue to change what was there instead of ripping something out completely and replacing it.

That seems like a set of personal standards. Again, fine.
It's my analysis of how things tend to be, especially in the case of someone similar to Superman, but everything I write is personal opinion.

The fishing job is no different than the newsroom job. Only that it's out of the way, however no more out of the way than smallville. Given he was on a journey of self discovery it actually makes sense(character wise), he my not have been climbing mountains in tibet like bruce wayne but....
He hears about danger he races off to help. I personally don't see how this is all that removed than what he does in costume outside of the fact that he does it undercover. For all intents and purposes Batman isn't actually a public hero in most stories, just a myth. No different and no less heroic imo.
It's extremely unlikely to find people to help on a fishing boat. He was the one being helped there because he didn't know the job good enough to stay safe. An oil rig exploding isn't exactly commonplace. That's why I don't think he had any intentions of going around to help people, he just couldn't ignore it when he stumbled upon it. I agree that the journey makes sense as a person that has no idea who he is or what he should do, but my point is that a different upbringing could have stilled some of that anxiousness and, more importantly, given more importance to the Kents. They aren't irrelevant but I think the mix could be made more interesting.

Interesting comparison however Banner is clearly trying to hide seeing as he is the equivalent to a fission bomb and he knows it, where as clark is trying to find his purpose/place in the world. The fishing boat is a great touch too because it's just another sort of farming and feeding of the community(as jon mentioned).
That's kind of my point though. Banner should be the one that really seeks out as much solitude as possible since he is dangerous, but he just can't stop himself from trying to actively help people. I would have liked to see a little more of that in Clark. He can wander around not knowing where his place truly is but instead of helping when an accident or something occurs he could arrive to a place and think "what good can I do here?". It's not a huge difference but for me it's an important one.

It all gets a bit tangled though as I have one opinion how the current thing could be better and I have another about how the whole set up could be changed to be better.

Take the exact same scene. Replace jon's last moments with with Jon begging for his son's help. Have Clark then turn away:csad: Bingo.

You seem to be ignoring the actual point of the scene. Clark hardly just stood there.

Moreover, the situational threat was very well built up imo.
-First you get a scene with the son questioning the patriarch on an issue of gumption no less. Clark doesn't seem all to interested in listening to his adoptive father.
-Then you get the shot of the dog being locked in the car for safety.
-Then you get the protect your mother order from Jon(foreshadowing)
-Then you get the injured leg
-Then you get the inability for jon to escape due to that injury(cause&effect)
-Then you get clark clue in to the situation, literally look back at the crowd, fully acknowledging the the decision he's about to make(otherwise it may have just been seen as an oversight).
-Then you get jon, knowing what he's good son is about to do(again bingo), stop him in an intimate short hand between the two. So now Clark will listen to his adoptive father? Must be important.
-Then you get the the scream
-Then you get the cry

The strength of the writing here is that clark and jon are clearly two people that butt heads, typical one when a family enters a dual man of the house dichotomy. Towards the end of the initial argument, clark means to apologize but is interrupted. In the end, Clark learns of his fathers love and gumption by way of action and sacrifice and Jon goes out knowing he has his sons trust by way of painful inaction.

I personally think this was well done, both subjectively and objectively. You wanna see a poorly crafted sequence go watch the Room. Specifically the scene where dude walks into the flower shop. It's classic.
I don't think I understand what you're getting at. With that scene he becomes a downright villain.

In practice that's all he does. He thinks about doing something but then allows his father to sacrifice his life to keep up the charade. My issue is that I can't identify at all with doing that if I could have helped. I of course couldn't have helped in that situation but Clark could.

On the scene:
-The arguing part I like. So far it's going good.
-Forgetting the dog in the car is a horrible move. Every pet owner I know sees the pet as a family member. And it's not locked in for safety, they just forget it.
-I think the protect your mother is iffy, since the bridge is really close and Clark can get the dog faster and safer. That's being protective to the point of stupidity, although people can be stupid with things so it's fine.
-The leg part ties into the weird physics. The wind is strong enough to lift cars and rip down trees juts be hind Jonathan. Even worse, it actually lifts the car that's on top of his car while he's in it, but somehow he can just stand there calmly and look at his family when he gets out (plenty of such inconsistencies in the movie though). Extremely exaggerated drama for the sake of drama.
-In that part when the car comes flying and lands on their car, Martha is the one wanting to go and help while Clark says "it's OK". His mother isn't an animal, you can tell her to stay put and that you'll fix it (in fact you can do that with a well trained dog). He probably had time at that point to do it at somewhat normal speed (I don't know if he has superspeed, but as strong as he he he should be able to run fast). But no, Jonathan goes back for the dog but Clark doesn't go back for his father when there's an accident.
-Cavil's acting in the end is very good, but it doesn't sink in because most things leading up to it is either illogical, dumb or unsympathetic.

The argument before the disaster doesn't really play into it that much since it comes across as Clark saying more hurtful things than he really means. It's not a huge argument and it's obvious that it would be discarded completely in the face of life-threatening danger. If you want to polarize that to actions I'd say that letting his father sacrifice himself is less of a polar opposite than Clark risking everything to save the man that he really considers his dad. Jonathan already said that he's doing everything he can for Clark.

I haven't seen The Room but if I recall correctly it's the movie with the "oh, hi Mark" scene? If so, being better than that isn't something I'd call an achievement in any way. I prefer to talk about MoS with some standards since that's both what I expected and what the makers aimed to have.
 
Sorry, what does "run an Ironman"? I think I'm missing something.:oldrazz:
The Ironman is one of the greatest athletic achievement that a human being who is not an olympic athlete can achieve. It's a 4.5 km run, followed by a 192 km bike ride, followed by a marathon (42km run). It's a good idea to try and run one, if you actually plan to prepare for it. If Joe Blow decides to go run an ironman without investing the effort and without a realistic accounting for how much effort he will need, then he's an idiot, and not to be commended.

Me telling you I'm going to run an Ironman tomorrow or even in the next year is equivalent to Goyer's attempt in MoS of writing an epic movie. It was either beyond his abilities independent of effort, or he didn't put the effort in to meet that goal.

To continue the analogy, if I did decide to train for an ironman, I would hire a personal trainer, and I would buy a better bicycle. Why can't Goyer swallow his pride and hire a dialogue editor?

Ah, but MoS had exactly 3 things going: Nature vs. nurture, consequences of first alien contact and legacy. It was a recipe for success.

For conversation's sake, I think TDK was also about chaos and about the barriers one can/should break to achieve a goal. Although my latter suggestion and your latter suggestion might be identical, if I understand what you mean by "Gotham needs a hero".
Perhaps you're right. There are not too many themes in MoS for a 2.5 hour movie. There are however too many themes for what is effectively a 1.5 hour movie. If they invested more time into dialogue and less time into the giant metal squid and other such things, they could have pulled it off.

Think of the Kryptonian civil war at the start. Do they even tell us what the war is about? Nope. LOL - fail. They just show a lot of action scenes. I like the action scenes. But, I think if they told us what the Kryptonian civil war was about, we might have had a better movie.

Re: TDK. You can apply many themes, but they are related and integrated and not independent. MOS' themes, in contrast, are parallel, and unintegrated. What I mean by "Gotham needs a hero" is the idea that since Gotham is a troubled city that could collapse to cynicism, it is good that they have someone to look up to, someone who can inspire them to be better. Harvey Dent is the White Knight, and Batman is the Dark Knight, it's two different conceptions of how Gotham can improve. Gotham is doing moderately well at the start of the movie when it has both models. At the end of the movie, Batman sacrifices himself to preserve the image of Dent. I think this duality has excellent synergy with the Joker-Batman conflict. The Joker keeps trying to corrupt Batman, it's his dream, and the image I get from the movie is that if he did succeed in corrupting Batman, Gotham would sink.
 
I think villainous is a strong word (someone used it to describe Clark during the tornado scene). He seemed to really want comply with his father's wishes and was just about to save him when Kent raised his hand.

But yeah. First of all, forgetting the dog is DUMB. Second of all, having Kent not get the dog is questionable. If Kent gets hit with something big and survives unfazed, it COULD reveal his superpowers. But anything else is suicidal.

But also, it basically undoes everything they tried to do. Suddenly, Superman is the boyscout who takes orders from anyone, including someone who is insane at this point.

He is shown as weak, helpless, DUMB, and afraid.

Clark should have been #$Q@! YOU! I'm gonna save your dumb @$$!

And then Pa Kent would live, and they'd have an interesting kind of tension. Or he could be killed by a fragment of glass as Superkid's picking him up.
 
The Ironman is one of the greatest athletic achievement that a human being who is not an olympic athlete can achieve. It's a 4.5 km run, followed by a 192 km bike ride, followed by a marathon (42km run). It's a good idea to try and run one, if you actually plan to prepare for it. If Joe Blow decides to go run an ironman without investing the effort and without a realistic accounting for how much effort he will need, then he's an idiot, and not to be commended.

Me telling you I'm going to run an Ironman tomorrow or even in the next year is equivalent to Goyer's attempt in MoS of writing an epic movie. It was either beyond his abilities independent of effort, or he didn't put the effort in to meet that goal.

To continue the analogy, if I did decide to train for an ironman, I would hire a personal trainer, and I would buy a better bicycle. Why can't Goyer swallow his pride and hire a dialogue editor?
I don't think we're disagreeing. I was just saying, take promises/original ideas out of context and MoS sounds like the best CBM to me. Nothing more.

And thanks for explaining the Ironman, I was seriously brainfarting here.

Perhaps you're right. There are not too many themes in MoS for a 2.5 hour movie. There are however too many themes for what is effectively a 1.5 hour movie. If they invested more time into dialogue and less time into the giant metal squid and other such things, they could have pulled it off.

Think of the Kryptonian civil war at the start. Do they even tell us what the war is about? Nope. LOL - fail. They just show a lot of action scenes. I like the action scenes. But, I think if they told us what the Kryptonian civil war was about, we might have had a better movie.
Agreed on the 1,5 hour thing.

As for the civil war, it's not that per se, it's a coup by Zod to overthrow the Council, get the Codex and get the hell out of Krypton. They do tell us what it is, they just don't spend any more time with it. And it does sound like the exact same plan Jor-El has, only the latter was probably programmed to be smart enough to colonize empty planets using the Codex and the World Engine, instead of destroying Earth to do it.
 
I think villainous is a strong word (someone used it to describe Clark during the tornado scene). He seemed to really want comply with his father's wishes and was just about to save him when Kent raised his hand.

But yeah. First of all, forgetting the dog is DUMB. Second of all, having Kent not get the dog is questionable. If Kent gets hit with something big and survives unfazed, it COULD reveal his superpowers. But anything else is suicidal.

But also, it basically undoes everything they tried to do. Suddenly, Superman is the boyscout who takes orders from anyone, including someone who is insane at this point.

He is shown as weak, helpless, DUMB, and afraid.

Clark should have been #$Q@! YOU! I'm gonna save your dumb @$$!

And then Pa Kent would live, and they'd have an interesting kind of tension. Or he could be killed by a fragment of glass as Superkid's picking him up.


One of the better scenarios that I thought about that they could have done with this scene instead would be having Jonathan dying from a heart attack due to the stress caused by the tornado while saving Clark from getting exposed in front of everyone else.

Let me explain, Clark would disobey his father's orders and go about helping more people in order to help get them to safety and while doing so, he is being careless when it comes to concealing his powers somewhat since he is not being cautious from the flying debris. Clark is about to get a flying truck but since he knows it can't hurt him, Clark doesn't really duck for cover. Jonathan races to Clark and pulls him out of the way so that no one will see Clark getting hit and surviving it but the strain causes his heart to give out.

The lesson from all of this would be that Clark needs to be more responsible in how he uses his powers in front of people and he needs to choose a better time when it comes to revealing himself since he wasn't ready, from Jonathan's perspective, to show himself to the world just yet.
 
As for the civil war, it's not that per se, it's a coup by Zod to overthrow the Council, get the Codex and get the hell out of Krypton. They do tell us what it is, they just don't spend any more time with it. And it does sound like the exact same plan Jor-El has, only the latter was probably programmed to be smart enough to colonize empty planets using the Codex and the World Engine, instead of destroying Earth to do it.

I may simply be forgetting the lines, but I don't think that this is well-explained by the movie at all, and I suspect you're connecting dots that Goyer himself didn't connect.

Your interpretation is not supported by this chapter from the film's novelisation:
http://io9.com/whats-jor-el-thinking-during-man-of-steels-kryptonia-514135108

We do know that Zod wants to take control of the Codex and remove the decadent families. However, that's not explained, and it should be explained as it doesn't make any sense in the context of the movie. Zod was engineered and bred to be an obedient little soldier, not to be a revolutionary, how can he choose to be a revolutionary in a world without choice? It doesn't add up, it should be explained. Why does he think some families are decadent and not others?

If it's the same plan Jor-El has, then Jor-El should have aligned with Zod. Jor-El had begged them to stop mining the core and to move to the stars.
 
They could have put poop on a piece of paper, called it a script, and made money... people were going to go see it because the avengers was well liked and because the first two movies were well liked. The third Spider Man movie made 891 million dollars, and it was broadly regarded as terrible.

I've seen a lot of criticisms of the movie, and the people I know who watched it found it dumb.
That's not correct. IM2 was received less well than IM3 judging by the available info. It just didn't have that single polarizing thing of making the Mandarin into a white guy using Extremis (or rather fans being angry because the movie played them as the Mandarin played the American people in the movie).

Of course IM3 had help from The Avengers though. It will be interesting to compare the boost to whatever Thor: The Dark World gets in order to more accurately judge the "Avengers effect".

I don't think you'll find any superhero movie that hasn't gotten a lot of criticism. I've seen plenty for The Avengers and The Dark Knight. Your argument isn't exactly helpful to your point since MoS has gotten a ton of it, so the fact remains that the other poster was right to say that IM3 was received better. That's of course irrelevant to our own personal opinions of these movies, but that wasn't the point being discussed.
 
One of the better scenarios that I thought about that they could have done with this scene instead would be having Jonathan dying from a heart attack due to the stress caused by the tornado while saving Clark from getting exposed in front of everyone else.

Let me explain, Clark would disobey his father's orders and go about helping more people in order to help get them to safety and while doing so, he is being careless when it comes to concealing his powers somewhat since he is not being cautious from the flying debris. Clark is about to get a flying truck but since he knows it can't hurt him, Clark doesn't really duck for cover. Jonathan races to Clark and pulls him out of the way so that no one will see Clark getting hit and surviving it but the strain causes his heart to give out.

The lesson from all of this would be that Clark needs to be more responsible in how he uses his powers in front of people and he needs to choose a better time when it comes to revealing himself since he wasn't ready, from Jonathan's perspective, to show himself to the world just yet.

That sounds better. Maybe you should have helped with the script ;)
 
Mjölnir;26816265 said:
That's not correct. IM2 was received less well than IM3 judging by the available info. It just didn't have that single polarizing thing of making the Mandarin into a white guy using Extremis (or rather fans being angry because the movie played them as the Mandarin played the American people in the movie).

Of course IM3 had help from The Avengers though. It will be interesting to compare the boost to whatever Thor: The Dark World gets in order to more accurately judge the "Avengers effect".

I don't think you'll find any superhero movie that hasn't gotten a lot of criticism. I've seen plenty for The Avengers and The Dark Knight. Your argument isn't exactly helpful to your point since MoS has gotten a ton of it, so the fact remains that the other poster was right to say that IM3 was received better. That's of course irrelevant to our own personal opinions of these movies, but that wasn't the point being discussed.

I've seen mixed to negative reactions for both MoS and IM 3 spanning several major issues for both. My original point is that we shouldn't compare MoS to IM 3 since it's not a high bar. In general I've seen a lot of people say "stop criticising MoS! at least it was better than X!" where X is usually a movie that has its own problems, like the avengers, iron man 3, superman returns, or superman 1978. One poster even compared MoS favourably to The Room.
 
That sounds better. Maybe you should have helped with the script ;)

Haha, oh how I wish.

If I were in charge of the story, let alone of the final cut of the film, I'd go about making these changes.

1. Instead of Clark just wandering aimlessly around in the middle of nowhere, incorporate the segment from the "Birthright" mini-series where Clark travels to Africa and finds himself in the middle of a bloody civil war going on there.

2. I would have placed the World Engine in Metropolis, with Black Zero hovering over the Indian Ocean instead. Superman races off and saves some people from the ensuing chaos caused by the World Engine in Metropolis and ultimately stops the machine like he did in the film. The difference here is that when Superman is laying unconscious on the ground, the people of Metropolis gather to him and help him get back on his footing; something similar to the scene from Spider-Man 2 involving the train, thus showing that people are warming up to Superman.

3. We would have gotten a scene after the Church Scene where Clark dresses up in his superman suit, getting ready to leave and thinking that he may never come back to Earth, thus having a heartfelt goodbye to his mother before he leaves.

4. The running time of this film would have been 2 Hours and 45 Minutes, with the added time being devoted to the character building moments.

5. Have Amanda Waller be in it instead of General Swanick, and the female soldier could have been Carol Ferris instead, thus further establishing the larger DC Universe. She could have been a pilot used to take on the two kryptonians in the battle of Smallville, where Superman ends up saving her from being killed.

These are only some of the changes that I would have made.
 
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