'Destroy All Humans!' - thejon93

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'Venom' fan-fic fans, don't worry, I will be back soon with more entries to it soon, so look for more to come soon.

Synopsis:
The war between two planets begin when very few citizens of the planet Earth decide to steal a powerful crystal from another planet occupied by Furons. The crystal is one of the most powerful substances in the world; the Furons use it for cloning, the Humans want it for destruction. When the Humans finally recieve the crystal, they use it's power to destroy the Furon home-planet to stop any kind of attack they might make on them, but before the beam hits the Furon planet, the Emperor sends Mothership-13 to infiltrate the human planet to recieve the crystal but must work even harder to get it back to re-grow their population. Occupied by Orthopox-13 and the infamous Crypto-137, the remaining Furons look to strike back as they invade Earth in search of their crystal, and the ultimate goal: To Destroy All Humans.

Rating:
PG-13 for intense sequences of action/violence and some language.

Teaser Trailer:
0.00
"Since the beginning of time, two planets were far away neighbours, and didn't even know it" - Bert Wither; VO.
0.07
Flash of Earth and Furon planet.
0.11
"But now..." - Bert Wither; VO.
0.12
Blue beam hits Furon planet and it explodes.
0.17
"They're at war" - Bert Wither; VO.
0.19
Mothership moves towards Earth.
0.23
Civilian looks up to the sky.
0.25
Flying Saucer quickly passes by.
0.28
Earth in view out of Mothership window, the reflection grows from in-front of the window and you can see Crypto-137. Crypto slams his fist against the window right over Earth's figure.
0.34
Car flips over and then flies into a building as another force pushed it.
0.37
An army of soliders with convoy vehicles move forward.
0.39
Five tanks lined up side-by-side move forward.
0.41
Crypto stands in-between the two armys.
0.43
Crypto turns around towards the tanks and smirks(fades-out).
0.46
"Now, which of you monkeys will be going first?" - Crypto-137
0.50
Crypto throws his hand up into the air and the tanks all flip over.
0.52
"TAKE HIM DOWN! TAKE HIM DOWN!" - General Armquist
0.53
Crypto pulls out Zap-O-Matic and shoots it towards the army of soldiers.
0.54
Cut to saucer headed up high into the sky being chased by a blue-tinted ball erupting energy.
0.55
Cut to Crypto using jet-pack to fly off of rooftop. Crypto turns back while in the air and shoots Ion Detonator at the tank below.
0.58
Crypto lands on the roof.
0.59
Man on the machine gun on the top of the tank looks at the remote-grenade.
1.00
Crypto stands up a pushes the button on the gun, the tank explodes and the fire rises all the way to the top of the building.
1.06
'Destroy All Humans!'
Total Running Time: 1.10min.

Trailer:
0.00
General Armquist walks into board meeting.
0.02
"We have reason to believe, that our enemy is in possession of a powerful element that can be used to... destroy our planet" - General Armquist
0.09
Blue crystal powering a machine when all of a sudden, somebody grabbed it.
0.12
"...someone stole our crystal" - Orthopox-17
0.13
The Furons at the Furon meeting were speechless. Crypto-137 stands up.
0.16
"Well, I personally want to thank Poxxy over there for keeping this meeting short and sweet because... trust me, I don't think any of us have the patience to sit through some boring discussion on-" - Crypto-137
0.24
"CRYPTO!" - Orthopox-17
0.25
Crypto quickly sat down.
0.26
Crypto-137 walking out of meeting and the Furon city streets; where everything seemed to be unusually colourful.
0.28
"Number 13, right?" - Crypto-137
0.29
"So I was told" - Orthopox-13
0.30
"You're one of the lucky ones, you see, you have the luxury of putting up with me on your ship" - Crypto-137
0.33
"I suppose I am, aren't I?" - Orthopox-13
0.35
"Hey, who would tell you otherwise?" - Crypto-137
0.37
Mothership-13 heads off of Furon planet, cut to it flying in space.
0.39
General Armquist turns around towards Silhouette while others working on a weapon.
0.40
"Are you ready to make the launch?" - Silhouette
0.42
Silhouette holds up crystal to her face.
0.43
"We were always ready" - General Armquist
0.45
Blue-tinted beam hits Furon planet, it explodes. The power of the blast propelled the Mothership forward.
0.50
"They took something from us..." - Crypto-137
0.52
Crypto staring out the window at the remains of the Furon planet.
0.54
"They took everything from us..." - Crypto-137
0.56
Crypto looks up with a saddened look on his face to all the other clones on the ship.
0.59
"And I say, IT'S OUR TURN TO TAKE IT BACK!" - Crypto-137
1.02
Mothership-13 heads to Earth.
1.05
Mothership stops right in-front of the Earth.
1.08
Crypto turns towards Pox.
1.09
"You sure you know how to park this thing?" - Crypto
1.11
"Yes, Crypto" - Pox
1.13
"Well... won't they be able to see it with their... things... that they look through?..." - Crypto
1.19
"Microscopes?-" - Pox
1.20
"Microscopes, yeah..." - Crypto
1.22
Saucer flies down.
1.24
Crypto launches a blast from the saucer, destroying a building completely.
1.27
"This is what I'm talking about" - Crypto
1.28
Crypto picks up a car with his psychokinesis powers and spins it towards a tank before it can fire at him.
1.31
'Destruction...'
1.33
Crypto standing in the middle of the street with smoke and debris everywhere.
1.35
The flying saucer zooms by.
1.36
'Chaos...'
1.38
Crypto jumps off building roof and crashes into the window of another building, rolls to his feet and pushes a soldier out of the window at the end of the hall with his psychokinesis powers.
1.43
'Anything to...'
1.45
Crypto flies through bus.
1.47
Majestic vehicle heads towards Crypto while he's on the ground.
1.48
Crypto stands up and throws the car into the air with his PK powers and the car lands on-top of another one.
1.52
Crypto standing up holding his disintegrator ray as a metal hand grabs the surface area of the road from down in the hole.
1.53
"...oh dear..." - Crypto; a shadowy, robot-like figure stood over Crypto
1.56
Crypto in his saucer flies towards giant robot and it ends just before they collide.
2.01
'Destroy All Humans!'
Total Running Time: 2.06min.
 
Trailer #2:
0.00
"5..." - Operator, VO; Armquist peers over at Operator.
0.01
"4..." - Operator, VO; Armquist looks out window.
0.02
"3..." - Operator, VO; Rocket starts up.
0.03
"2..." - Operator, VO; Flying saucer quickly passes by.
0.04
"1..." - Operator, VO; Armquist quickly turns towards the Operator: "STOP THE COUNTDOWN!" - Armquist.
0.06
The rocket blasts off but all of a sudden the saucer flies over it and they both explode as the rocket spins to the ground.
0.08
General Armquist walking towards saucer.
0.09
Saucer begins to open.
0.10
Crypto-136's hand reaches out.
0.12
General Armquist looks enraged at the Furon.
0.14
Crypto-136 crawls out of the saucer and stands to his feet.
0.17
General Armquist walks over to him and punches him in the face which knocks him to the ground.
0.19
"Fill him full of led" - Armquist commands the group of soliders; screen goes black as they fire their weapons at 136.
0.25
"We have reason to believe..." - Armquist walks into board meeting
0.27
"That a communist planet is in possession of a powerful weapon, it should be up to us to destroy them before they can use it against us" - Armquist
0.32
"How right you are, Armquist" - Silhouette
0.34
A black-clothed figure walks into the meeting with a gas mask over her face.
0.36
"Our Furonic friends across the galaxy are in possession of a crystal" - Silhouette; flash of the blue-tinted crystal.
0.39
"It should be our job to retreive it to use it against them" - Silhouette
0.41
Armquist looks enraged at Silhouette.
0.42
"You want your revenge, General? Stand by me, and you'll get it" - Silhouette; Silhouette walks away from Armquist.
0.45
Man in space suit grabs the blue-tinted crystal; fades-out.
0.46
"Those monkeys stole our crystal" - Crypto-137; fades back in.
0.49
"I say you send me in to find that crystal and destroy some monkeys while I'm at it!" - Crypto-137
0.53
Mothership-13 flies into space.
0.54
"We'll send you with Orthopox-13 and an army of other Cryptosporidium units, just in case" - Emperor; Crypto smirked.
0.59
Crypto-137 walks up to Pox-13 on Mothership.
1.01
"What is this crystal capable of doing, Pox?" - Crypto-137
1.03
"Anything you wish it to, and more" - Pox-13
1.05
Furon looks up to the sky and sees a blue-tinted beam come closer towards the planet.
1.08
"Much, much more..." - Pox-13
1.10
Furon planet explodes due to the blue-tinted beam.
1.15
"Now, all that's left are preparations" - Silhouette
1.17
"Preparations... for what?..." - Armquist
1.19
"A counter-attack... there may be more of them out there... in search of revenge, we can let that get the best of them to finally destroy them all" - Silhouette
1.26
Armquist grins.
1.27
"Dammit they stole something from us, guys..." - Crypto-137; Crypto talked to the army of Cryptosporidium units.
1.29
Crypto hugs another crying Cryptosporidium unit.
1.31
"They gave us lives to live, and they stole them from not only us, but they stole it from everyone. And I say, IT'S OUR TURN TO TAKE IT BACK!" - Crypto-137
1.38
"Give 'em hell!" - Armquist
1.39
Army of soliders march forward.
1.40
Zap-O-Matic implodes into Crypto's hand from his gauntlet.
1.41
Crypto points Zap-O-Matic at the army.
1.42
Crypto flying into the air with his jet-pack and shoots his Zap-O-Matic.
1.44
Crypto on-top of moving saucer while a jet behind him began to move closer but then began to shoot at him.
1.48
Crypto stands up and faces somebody else on the saucer.
1.49
Crypto leapt into saucer and pulled the saucer up before he hit the building.
1.53
Crypto was then threw off of the saucer from the climb up the building but grabbed hold of the edge of the saucer.
1.55
"I made a promise to fight..." - Crypto-137
1.56
Jet launches rocket at Crypto while inside a building as he tries to use his PK powers to stop it, it explodes right in the range of the PK field and blasts Crypto backwards through a wall.
2.01
"And I'm keeping it" - Crypto-137
2.02
Giant Robot kicks a car at Crypto but Crypto quickly catches it with his PK powers.
2.05
"Either we fight for this..." - Crypto-137
2.07
Saucer flies above building and then blasts another with the saucer's Death Ray right along the building and then it fell over.
2.13
"Or we have nothing else to live for" - Crypto-137
2.15
Crypto smacks his hands together and in-front of him, knocks the turret off the tank as it blasts right behind him hitting the ground and then launching itself high up into the air.
2.19
'Destroy All Humans!'
Total Running Time: 2.23min.
 
'Destroy All Humans!' Sneak Preview:

Introduction:
0.00
Crypto flips over tank with PK powers.
0.01
Crypto stands on-top of moving saucer.
0.02
Crypto jets down towards the streets using his jet-boots.
0.03
"Either we fight for something, or die for nothing... I'm sure I've heard that line somewhere before but that's not the point" - Crypto-137
0.08
Missile moves towards Crypto inside of a building as he runs from it but then finally uses his jet-boots to get further away from it as it explodes back down the hall.
0.13
'Destroy All Humans!'
0.15
Crypto runs towards a parked car then picks it up with his PK powers and throws it at a giant robot.
Total Running Time: 0.18min.

Hey guys, the writer of this fan-fic here, thejon93 and I just thought that before I start with the script, I should give this "Sneak Peek" at the film's fight sequences listed in their right order so please, enjoy:

1. "The Ultimate Prize" - 'Saucer Race':
0.00
Crypto-137 looks behind him as he sees others catching up to him on the tracks and then looked back in-front of him where a large ruin was within his path as he quickly spun out of the way.
0.06
Crypto pushed a button in-front of him and all of a sudden the screen in-front of him zoomed into what was ahead.
0.10
Crypto pushed a different button then all of a sudden an aiming-target came up on the screen.
0.12
Crypto then put his hand on the ball to his right and aimed the target right in-front of him where ruins were ahead. Crypto launched a Death Day beam at them and destroyed the ruins ahead.
0.19
Crypto pushed the button which he previously used to zoom in and the screen in-front of him zoomed out.
0.21
"We can only thank whoever, for these kick-ass gizmos" - Crypto-137
0.23
Crypto's saucer passed by the destroyed ruins while persued by other saucers.
Total Running Time: 0.27min.
This sequence is set up as an annual competition for all Cryptosporidium units, Cryptosporidium units fight for the right to live normal lives on their homeplanet which neither of them have the luxury of doing as they are always caught up in their hard-working labor across their entire planet. This sequence is also used as an introduction to Crypto-137.

2. "Protecting The Furons" - 'Space Battle':
0.00
Crypto began running down the hall on the Mothership with other Crypto units.
0.03
Crypto turned around the corner towards the saucers but quickly looked out the window at what was headed towards the Furon planet. It was somekind of red creature with razor sharp knees, fingers, toes, elbows and it's spine stuck out.
0.08
Crypto leapt into his saucer and started it up.
0.11
Blue-tinted beams shot out from the Furon planet at the creatures as most of them didn't hit the creatures.
0.14
Crypto's saucer flew off the ship first and headed towards the creatures.
0.17
"Prepare the Sonic Boom" - Crypto
0.18
Crypto grabbed the targetting ball to the right and aimed the target on the screen at the creatures.
0.20
"Let the fun begin, boys" - Crypto sent out the message to all the other Crypto-units.
0.22
Crypto launched the Sonic Boom at the creatures; the Sonic Boom was like a concentrated, blue ball.
Total Running Time: 0.24min.
This sequence introduces the Furon planet's only known threat, the Reds(simple and convinent, yes, I like it like that), they live on a smaller planet near the Furon planet called Urthium. The Reds are bent on taking control of the Furon planet.

3. "Arrival on Earth" - 'Discovering Psychokinesis(PK) Powers':
0.00
Crypto running towards tank, screaming in anger at it. All of a sudden, the tank launches a rocket at Crypto. Crypto stopped dead in his tracks and put his hands in-front of his face in fear.
0.05
Due to Crypto throwing his hands in the direction of the rocket, the rocket launched towards the right and hit another vehicle which flew all the way into the building in-front of it.
0.09
Crypto removed his arms away from his eyes and looked at his hands in awe of what he's done. The man gunning the turret on-top of the tank looked at Crypto in awe as Crypto looked up at him with the same look on his face but then smirked.
0.18
Crypto threw his hand up in the air and the tank's front end was launched into the air as it flew backwards, Crypto then pushed his other hand towards the tank and it flew away into the distance then finally stopped on it's launcher. All of a sudden, a rocket came bursting out and it hit the ground right in-front of the tank and launched it back to it's regular stance on it's wheels.
0.29
Crypto sighed and leapt towards the tank using his jet-boots.
Total Running Time: 0.32min.
The plan for this sequence is to introduce the PK powers which allows Crypto to launch any kind of object, weapon, whatever, into the distance as if picking them up with his own mind. This power has never been discovered by any Furon ever on their homeplanet but for some reason this power works in full on the human's planet, Earth.

To be continued...
 
4. "Chased by the Ball" - 'Saucer Chase':
0.00
Crypto's saucer flew up high towards the tallest building as his saucer was being chased by a concentrated, blue ball.
0.04
"Stick close to the building with this one, will you?" - Crypto
0.05
Crypto pushed a button which made the saucer came closer to the building without hitting it. The blue ball chased behind, scrapping the building wall.
0.10
Crypto pushed another button which rotated his seat around to the back where he could see the ball closing in.
0.14
Crypto targets the ball and launches the Death Ray towards it but it does nothing as it still closes in.
0.19
Crypto stopped shooting the ball and looked at it in disbelief, Crypto quickly turned around and saw a gargoyle statue ahead.
0.23
Crypto made his seat face the front again and filled off the Auto-Pilot and steered out of the statue's way. As the ball came towards the saucer and hit the statue on it's way while still chasing Crypto.
Total Running Time: 0.29min.
This sequence in the fic just looks to be a simple, action-packed chase. This is the Earth's second use of the blue crystal as they use it to try and takedown Crypto considering they had been expecting a counter-attack after they destroyed the Furon planet.

5. "Searching For Crypto-136" - 'Area-42 Deconstruction':
0.00
"Let's test out this new weapon we have here, Poxxy" - Crypto-137
0.02
"Crypto, you might not want to make use of that weapon while you're too close because it-" - Pox-13
0.06
Crypto launched the Quantum Deconstructor at a military base and a huge green blast came up after it hit, completely destroying the base.
0.12
"You just don't listen, do you?" - Pox-13
0.13
"Well you should've told me this before, Pox! Geez..." - Crypto-137
Total Running Time: 0.16min.
This sequence is set up as a search for Crypto-136 who Crypto-137 believes is being held captive by the military, what Crypto finds out next leads into the next action sequence.

6. "136... Lost?!" - 'Fight Sequence':
0.00
Crypto quickly started up the saucer as he was being chased by Crypto-136 who had bullet-scars all over his body and was covered with mechinary.
0.03
Crypto paniced as he finally got the saucer started and it was hovering in the air, but Crypto-136 quickly leapt at the saucer and grabbed hold of the edge of it. The saucer flew off into the sky.
0.11
Crypto took a deep breath of relief when all of a sudden, 136's hand came smashing through the shield and he grabbed Crypto by the head and threw him out as he slid along the saucer and finally stopped himself from sliding before he fell down.
0.18
Crypto couldn't stand up as he couldn't keep himself stable on the moving saucer, however, 136 could by using his jet-boots which made his feet stick to the surface more.
0.23
136 leapt towards 137 without emotion and speared him right off of the saucer but stopped himself from falling as well as his boots attached to the saucer.
0.27
Crypto kept falling until he finally powered-up his jet-boots and began flying back towards the saucer.
Total Running Time: 0.31min.
So, Crypto-136 is currently being used by Armquist and Silhouette(the main baddies; and the ones responsible for the destruction of the Furon planet) as an android, being controlled by all of this high-tech gadgetry implanted onto him. They send him after Crypto after he invades Area-42.

So, hope you enjoyed this little peek at 'Destroy All Humans', all the clips put together are about 2.30mins(2.17mins to be precise) long all together. There are eight battles in total in this fan-fic and I didn't show you the rest because they are both big end boss battles and I don't want to reveal how they're going to turn out too early. Again, hope you enjoy them, and the fan-fic will be coming very soon.
 
Hey guys, sorry I haven't been able to write the fic yet it's just my computer has a virus; pop-ups keep coming up, and typing is a real pain because it skips some letters when I type at normal speed. Here's a sample with this same, unedited paragraph:
Hey guys, sorry I haven't ben able to wrie the fiyet it's just my computer has a virus; pop-ups keep coming up, and typing is areal pain because it skis soe letters when I typea normal sped. Here's a sample with this same, unedited paragraph.

I don't know quite yet but I may be away for a while, if that happens, I will continue to write the fic later-on. Sorry about this guys, hope you enjoy what I've posted so far.
 
DESTROY ALL HUMANS!
PART 1:
Rocket sits in the desert in-front of a military base in the distance.

Armquist marched to the operating room in the base and pushed the door wide open and walked into the room where the operators of the rocket jumped in fright.

Armquist walked over to the window where he could see the rocket in the distance.

"Status?" - Armquist

"...just fine, sir. The rocket will be ready to go in a matter of seconds" - Operator

"Good, let us hope and pray for the best to come of this" - Armquist

Armquist peered over at the timer on the table which was at 20 seconds.

Armquist smirked and looked back out the window at the rocket.

"Okay, let's start 'er up" - Operator

The other operator pushed the button on his right side and the rocket began to start up as dust, smoke and sand began to fly all over the place from below it.

Armquist put on a headset.
"How are you guys doing in there?" - Armquist

The two in the rocket also put on their headsets.

"A little shaky, but it's home for now, I guess" - Pilot

"Don't worry, you'll be back on dry land soon, Bentley. Besides, I've always refered shaken, over stired" - Armquist

The two pilots laughed.

Armquist smiled and looked at the clock which read 3 seconds.

Armquist turned his attention back outside to the rocket but then quickly caught a glimpse of a flying object which quickly sped by right above the rocket, it had seemed to disappear into the clouds.

Armquist looked in fear at where he caught the sight from the flying object as the timer read 2 seconds, he looked over at it and paniced as he kept looking back and forth at the timer and the window.

The timer reached one second and Armquist quickly looked at the operator.

"STOP THE COUNTDOWN!" - Armquist

The operator was about to hit the button but the timer reached zero and the rocket flew up into the sky.

Armquist again looked out the window at it and finally calmed himself down and looked at it in awe as it sailed higher into the sky.

The rocket continued to fly higher up in the sky but then, all of a sudden, the flying object(flying saucer) crashed right into the rocket and the rocket exploded as the saucer flew towards the desert-filled ground below at high speed.

Armquist looked at the rocket as it fell in hundreds of pieces all the way down to the ground.

The saucer then finally crashed right into the ground.

Tears began to shed from Armquist's eyes as he slowly turned over to the fallen saucer in rage.

Smoke began to erupt from the saucer as Armquist raced down the stairs and outside of the base where he quickly marched towards the saucer. A group of soliders came out of the building a while after Armquist and quickly sprinted after Armquist to catch up.

The saucer's shield opened as Armquist stopped at the edge of the saucer.

Armquist looked enfuriated at the remnants of the saucer as the one inside reached it's hand up onto the surface from the saucer.

The alien(known as a Furon) climbed up to the surface and tried to get to it's feet.

As it finally got to it's feet, it stared up at Armquist in fear, Armquist then kicked the Furon in the face and it fell to the ground.

Armquist turned away from the Furon and marched towards the soliders.

"Destroy him" - Armquist

The soliders pointed their weapons at the Furon and all fired at him, Armquist turned around towards the Furon as he was being shot by the multiple amounts of soliders.
 

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