thejon93
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Now previously(with my 'Raining Down' script), I did something incredibly stupid. Now, right after I finished and published my 'Raining Down' script to 'ScriptBuddy', I deleted it, imagining that it would still be published to the 'Screenwriter's Community', but no. So, last night, I begun to work on a script for 'Speed 3' with a returning Jack Traven(Keanu Reeves) and Annie Porter(Sandra Bullock). So, considering I had already published my previous script, I deleted the copy of it to write the script for 'Speed 3', and now my 'Raining Down' script is gone, I didn't realize this till this morning and so you can imagine that I'm pretty po'd over this(didn't even send me a written draft of it by my e-mail address). So, all I have left of this previous script are my rough notes, so... that's one good thing about this situation(I'm hoping that they send another copy to the 'Screenwriter's Community' so others can at least read it, which was my only intention for the thing). Anyways, I'm done with 'ScriptBuddy' for a while until I see my script again(which I highly doubt), but if I see it, I'll go back there to write in screenplay format, but now, I just can't stand to look at it, because everytime I do, I keep calling myself an idiot for destroying something that I have worked so hard on. Anyways, enough of me blabbering, here's the first chapter of 'Speed 3':
Chapter 1:
EXT: OUTSIDE APARTMENT BUILDING - DAY
It was outside of an apartment building, when a street thug named, LOU, was climbing up a ladder as he climbed up onto the platform.
LOU
[Pulls out walkie-talkie]
Which floor?...
?
Fifth floor.
LOU looked up at the other platforms, as he stood on the one for the second floor, LOU then began to climb up the fleet of stairs towards the fifth floor. Finally, after a minute of climbing up the stairs, he reached the fifth floor. He then pulled out a chisel as he bent down beside the window and begun to scrap the dried glue off of the window's edge so that he could open it, as he pulled the window up the the top as he crawled in through it, right into the hallway.
LOU
[Holds walkie-talkie near his face]
What number?...
?
"56".
LOU looked around the series of hallways, he didn't spot "56", but he did see "55" when looking to the hallway to his right as he marched towards it, once he was in the section, facing "55", he turned around and right there behind him was "56". He then put the walkie-talkie near his face again.
LOU
[Whispers]
I've found him.
?
Great, LOU. Now go inside, and kill him.
LOU put the walkie-talkie back in his pocket as he then pulled a gun out from the back of his jeans, as he held a firm grip of it in his right hand, as he prepared himself for anything. He then kicked the door right down as it fell back inside the apartment, as it fell right up against the edge of the bed. From LOU's point of view, the apartment was empty. LOU then slowly stepped closer towards the apartment, as finally, one of his feet reached inside the apartment. LOU then swung himself inside the apartment and pointed the gun around both corners, but then suddenly, JACK TRAVEN then knocked the gun out of LOU's hand and swung his fist right up towards LOU's jaw which threw him back into the wall, was he slowly slid along down it, unconsious.
JACK
You lookin' for me, %#&hole?...
EXT: OUTSIDE APARTMENT BUILDING - DAY
It was outside of an apartment building, when a street thug named, LOU, was climbing up a ladder as he climbed up onto the platform.
LOU
[Pulls out walkie-talkie]
Which floor?...
?
Fifth floor.
LOU looked up at the other platforms, as he stood on the one for the second floor, LOU then began to climb up the fleet of stairs towards the fifth floor. Finally, after a minute of climbing up the stairs, he reached the fifth floor. He then pulled out a chisel as he bent down beside the window and begun to scrap the dried glue off of the window's edge so that he could open it, as he pulled the window up the the top as he crawled in through it, right into the hallway.
LOU
[Holds walkie-talkie near his face]
What number?...
?
"56".
LOU looked around the series of hallways, he didn't spot "56", but he did see "55" when looking to the hallway to his right as he marched towards it, once he was in the section, facing "55", he turned around and right there behind him was "56". He then put the walkie-talkie near his face again.
LOU
[Whispers]
I've found him.
?
Great, LOU. Now go inside, and kill him.
LOU put the walkie-talkie back in his pocket as he then pulled a gun out from the back of his jeans, as he held a firm grip of it in his right hand, as he prepared himself for anything. He then kicked the door right down as it fell back inside the apartment, as it fell right up against the edge of the bed. From LOU's point of view, the apartment was empty. LOU then slowly stepped closer towards the apartment, as finally, one of his feet reached inside the apartment. LOU then swung himself inside the apartment and pointed the gun around both corners, but then suddenly, JACK TRAVEN then knocked the gun out of LOU's hand and swung his fist right up towards LOU's jaw which threw him back into the wall, was he slowly slid along down it, unconsious.
JACK
You lookin' for me, %#&hole?...
