DorkyFresh
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you take his friends, his family, the people of the earth, and Lois from him... and you threaten to kill them if Superman doesn't bow to your wishes... THAT'S how you crumble a man of steel...Now that you've established that he is completely invincible, how will you convince the audience that the villain can present any real threat to him? This is what Lara is referring to. How do you build up from that?
Start the movie in the streets Metropolis...the top of a skyscraper explodes, hurling Lois Lane over the side, screaming, towards the ground below. Go with Lois' POV...the wind screaming by as she falls, debris everywhere, frantically flailing and looking around. Then some of the larger chunks of concrete seem to vaporize in mid-air, as if hit by a strong blast of heat. She's starting to spin out of control when out of the corner of her eye, she sees something......weird. A flash of colors...red, blue...a strange shape that looks like it's coming towards her...an almost human-like shape...is it another person thrown from the building? What are those colors...why is it flying towards me...oh my God I'm going to die...etc. Then as the strange object comes near her...and she's just moments from hitting the ground...she screams out again.....and.....
Cut to black......The Superman logo onscreen....
Then open up again in Metropolis...."three days earlier"....a cab pulls up to the curb and out leaps Lois Lane, rushing towards a small crowd of other reporters and cameras surrounding a police officer...she's there to get the scoop, but finds out there's already some tall guy in glasses that she's never seen before who says he's from the Daily Planet too...interviewing some cops and bystanders. She doesn't think much of him, but she's a bit put off by being beaten to the punch. She gets him back by stealing a cab from him...but when she arrives back at the Daily Planet...there's that friggin' guy again...already there in the office! WTF? It's then that he's introduced to her by Perry as Clark Kent, the newly-hired reporter.
And so on...and we'll get back to that opening scene where Supes saves and meets Lois for the first time. Something like that....starting with a heart-pumping action sequence but still not letting the cat out of the bag completely.
dude that is brilliantbut should lead into clark using his powers
I agree there definitely needs to be an action-packed/compelling opening. I remember someone suggested doing something really subtle for the trailer where Kent is walking into a burning building to save someone and bits and pieces of his clothing burn off in the fire to slowly reveal his suit.
Do a Begins type opening;
A huge action scene with Supes, then BAM! -> it's three years earlier and Clark is just walking into the DP for a job...
Who says Superman even needs to be in the very first action sequence... have the opening of the movie set up the villain. TDK was a perfect example of that... there was not even a mention of Batman but it set up the Joker perfectly...