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King Ruler said:Alright, so now that we've made our changes, how's this sound now:
Richard Grayson is a 16 year old boy in Gotham City training under the wing of Batman. He has been doing so for a few years now (let's go with 2 or 3), and strives to be able to fight along side of Batman, but his mentor still refuses. To prove he can do the job, he makes a costume [slightly resembling the Nightwing costume] (it can just be a black leotard with gloves and boots and a black eye mask; I'd go with the Robin costume, but thinking realistically, would you wear the same bright colors you wore when you were publically known in Gotham as an acrobat as your superhero costume, with little altercations?). After making a huge mistake while out "proving himself", the Batman gets angry with Richard and decides to no longer train him. Heart broken, Richard leaves the batman's side and travels to New York to try and prove himself as a hero on his own.
(NOTE: All this can first take place in the "Extreme" or whatever Batman series and lead into the "Extreme" Titans)
(NOTE: From now on, everything I'm typing can take place in the Titans series)
Months later when Richard arrives in New York, he constructs a new costume (after learning things with Batman). He learns that he can use the bright colors of his acrobatic uniform to draw out the fire of gun wielding enemies if he is trying to hide in the shadows. He decides to use this to his advantage and constructs the uniform. He transfers to a new school and makes friends with the star quarterback Victor Stone, son of Silas Stone, head of STAR Labs.
While on a school bus heading towards another school for a football game, it gets into an accident with another truck, exploding. Surprisingly, Vic is the only human that survives the accident. And surprisingly, he's not even a human. His skin (prostetic skin) is half destroyed, revealing that underneath he is actually a robot. he runs to STAR Labs to search for his father and asks what the problem is. His father tells him that Vic was created as an android in STAR Labs. Originally, STAR Labs were constructing robot models to sell to the military, but they were declined once they could not meet the deadline (nor could they create robots meant for battle just yet). So with the military out of the way, as well as all that spare time on their hands, Silas had a robot made for himself and had it modeled after his deceased son, who would be have looked liked Vic at this age. Angry, confused and lost, Vic runs off.
(One of the original robots that was designed for war still sits in the Lab, functioning as an assistant. Its name is an acronym, spelling CLIFF, though I haven't come up with what CLIFF will stand for yet...)
Vic runs off and looks for Richard so they can talk, but when the two meet up, they discover that there are suits following them, and they believe it is STAR Lab employees, so thye try and evade them. Richard helps, and dons his green and red outfit to hide his identity. In the end, it's discovered that its not STAR Labs chasing them, but members of a terrorist organization named HIVE. They defeat their stalkers and return to the Lab, where Vic is comforted by his father and recharged back to full health. The two, after their little adventure, decide that possibly they should become a crimefighting duo, but Vic says that it isn't really his cup of tea (he later changes his mind when he arrives at school and notices that everyone is afraid of him and a little upset about the whole accident).
In later issues, the HIVE could unleash a creature called Plasmus upon the city and Robin and the newly dubbed Cyborg could be trying to stop this, but are failing, but then they are helped (unintentionally) by a kid named Garfield Logan, who seems normal, but it turns out he has fake skin and his real skin is in fact green. He morphs into an animal and weakens Plasmus, who runs away. Robin and Cyborg chase after the "Changeling" as he runs off, and they follow him to the Dayton Mansion, home of Steve Dayton the millionaire. It's later discovered that Dayton is the adopted father of Garfield, who was genetically altered while still a fetus inside a woman (who really didn't want the child after her husband left her. She decided to give herself up for Dr. Nile Caulder's experiment funded by Dayton. After it was done she had her baby and was on her way. The experiment was a success, granting man with the ability to transform into animals, but it left the baby with green skin. As the boy the grew up, Dayton taught him how to control his powers and nurtured him. Eventually, Gar's asked to join the new team of heroes and fight Plasmus.
From there we can introduce the villains and the other members, who I think should be Wonder Girl, Speedy, and Raven (Power Girl should come in much later, IMO, but it's up to you).
How does all this sound?
sounds good. now who would like to write Extreme Batman, Extreme Superman, and Extreme Justice?