First time posting art.

Holy crap thats jaw droppingly good!

 

its good but you just copied a picture. theres not much to say the original was a cool shot and obviously you thought so too. See the thing is, when people use source material like a photo they more often than not treat it as scripture.

this is a great debut pic for Hype, better than I've put up. However, if you take the same route for future pics (which i think ppl would be interested to see), try to add something to the original by making it your distinct interpretation. If you can do this you garner a lot of respect and admiration. O and the ppl on the Hype love Bats. I mean in a a crazy crack induced euphoria sorta stalkerish festishism. So your on to something already...

 

I don't care if it's the same as the pic, the fact that its a drawing is crazy. good job man. im pumped for begins as well so if uve got any more batman stuff deffinately post it. as u can see, dansker was right about all the bat fans

 

o"Haire,

You're Batman drawn looks very good. This is Michael Keaton i think?! Right?

Can you make (draw) a Spider-Man or RoboCop or somebody else?

And, excuse when my English is not correct, i'm from Belgium and i didn't learned a lot of English. 2 schoolyears i think...

Steve

 

no its definatly bale he based his drawing on this pic

 

Nice Batman drawing

 

I like Batman drawing, my only gripe is his mouth looks slightly askew, but the shading is dead on! Great work. And I love that Kramer! Excellent.

 

stunning. More. Now.

 

Nice job man,but i really don't like the eyes and the mouth they look very flat..................

 

loving the Kramer. a big Seinfeld fan myself. kudos, and welcome to the Fan Art forums.

 

I think it looks alot better. Subtle cahnges, but good oens nonetheless.

 

What pencil hardness do u use?

 

Practice practice practice, That's what I heard from many of the teachers at the Kubert school.
One thing you may want to keep in mind when it comes to the mouth is, the corners of the mouth will always line up with the puples of the eye, unless you're drawing the Thing or characters like that.
Good job O'Haire.

 

What kind of paper are you working on? If my instincts are correct, I bet you are using paper that isn't the best for this type of work. Whenever I render with pencil like this, I'll use illustration board or at least a heavier ply paper with some tooth to it.

Also, I'm curious as to what kind of pencils you are using as well? That decision will also make a big difference in your work.

Anyways, the new piece seems to be coming along well and I’m interested in seeing the final.

-Jeremy

 

You're crazy good at shading and stuff!

 

who cares if it comes from an original pic. It is a rendering. YOur just jealous.