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How I would do Spidey's 4-6

ScarletVenom25

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Im just gonna get straight to the point, no need in dwadling...

SPIDER-MAN 4
Villians-Lizard, Kraven
Lesson-Sometimes, we must do the right thing, even if we dont think its so right.
Plot-Its been a few years since Harry Osborn's death, but Peter Parker is still grieving. Being Spider-Man, he must try and face this event to propel him to better things, like his staff job at the Daily Bugle, or his lab assistant job with Dr. Conners, who's Limb Regeneration formula (Project Lizard) is almost ready for human testing. Peter's mind is also on Mary Jane, who is still terrified with what dangers might lurk towards her because of her relationship. Spidey doesn't have easy, either. He has to deal with the new public nusiance-Kraven the Hunter, who is keen on taking down Spidey once and for all.
Major Events-Doc Conners turns into the Lizard
Kraven begins to hunt down Lizard
Venom returns
Peter preposes to MJ (who says yes)
Spidey defends Lizard from Kraven, making him a villian in NY's eyes
Final Battle-Lizard vs Kraven vs Spidey/Spidey and Lizard vs Kraven
Result-Conners learns how to control Lizard, so he helps Spidey battle Kraven, while Lizard fights Conner's mind internally, making him attack Spidey. In the end, Lizard throws Spidey and Kraven off the building their fighting on, and when Kraven tries to stab Spidey from behind, he moves and Kraven stabs himself, dying in the process.
End of movie-We Spidey on his final swing, and during one of his swings, we see black webbing and Spidey is pulled out of the frame. We then here Venom's scream.

I'll post 5 later. Leave feedback!
 
very good, one of the few stories i actually like
 
Remove the useless return of Venom and add in the Man-Spider storyline and it would be acceptable.
 
If youve seen my sig then u could probably guess where Im going with my villians. To the dislike of probably many people, Venom and Carnage will be in my Spidey 5, along with Scorpion. I wont give to much away, but I am still workin on it and ppl who have their symbiote info straight will see where im going with Venom and Scorpion in the same movie =)
 
If youve seen my sig then u could probably guess where Im going with my villians. To the dislike of probably many people, Venom and Carnage will be in my Spidey 5, along with Scorpion. I wont give to much away, but I am still workin on it and ppl who have their symbiote info straight will see where im going with Venom and Scorpion in the same movie =)

what ever you do dont make mac gargan venom :cmad:
 
Never said I was. But there definately will be some Scorpion vs Venom action. And just in case nobody caught on, the Sinister Six will be the villians for Spidey 6
 
Okay, I don't find the choices wrong or anything, but there's such a thing as villian overload especially when it comes down the Sinister Six.

Don't get me wrong. It's an approach that works right if handled correctly, but 3 villians was overload on Spider-man 3 and let us not forget the Batman movies.
 
There's only one way Sinister Six works, and that's if a good portion of the villains had already been introduced in previous films, a portion of the villains are two-dimensional characters that don't need backstory (i.e. Rhino), and only one or two villains have real dramatic focus. In the case of Sinister Six, I say the dramatic focus would fall on whoever the leader is, and Electro, who would probably have a nervous breakdown and kill some of the other members.
 
I agree with the Lizard being the next main villian with a side villian, I'm a Kraven fan and think he could work well, maybe hired to catch the Lizard but then after running into Spiderman at the same time, he thinks Spidey is the best Prey ever and goes after him instead. That could be in 4,
I'm not a Hydroman fan as he really fits the Sandman mold for the movies.
If Sam was doing 4-6, he could develop the Rhino properly but he won't be on board and the next director could make Rhino cheezy. Scorpion being hired by JJ would be cool but I haven't seen them make JJ truely hate Spidey yet, it's been more of a comedic hate. They would need to get JJ to truely hate Spidey to get the Scorpion hired on but it would work in the next trilogy.

Electro would work too and of course, not with that old school outfit, Doc Ock could be brought back, he's not dead. I like the Sinister Six but that shouldn't come about until all the villians have been shown to us, so Spiderman 7 would be best, I know i'm looking well ahead but Marvel does want to treat Spidey like the Bond movies, an ongoing character. They need to stop killing villians! I'm still upset that the Green Goblin died!

I know people hated Venom and I was a comic Venom fan but I wouldn't want to see him or Carnage again till Spidey 8-9.
 
Venom should stay dead forever.

I have mixed feelings about that... I mean, I wanted them to keep Venom alive for future movies, but when I saw Spider-Man 3, and when I really thought about it, I realized that, with the direction they went in terms of storyline, they HAD to kill Venom. The Spider-Man 3 interpretation wouldn't have worked as a recurring character, I don't think.
 
I mean, I agree they should have saved Venom for his own movie probably, but after the way he was killed... it seems like it would be an extreme stretch to bring him back.
 
Im just gonna get straight to the point, no need in dwadling...

SPIDER-MAN 4
Villians-Lizard, Kraven
Lesson-Sometimes, we must do the right thing, even if we dont think its so right.
Plot-Its been a few years since Harry Osborn's death, but Peter Parker is still grieving. Being Spider-Man, he must try and face this event to propel him to better things, like his staff job at the Daily Bugle, or his lab assistant job with Dr. Conners, who's Limb Regeneration formula (Project Lizard) is almost ready for human testing. Peter's mind is also on Mary Jane, who is still terrified with what dangers might lurk towards her because of her relationship. Spidey doesn't have easy, either. He has to deal with the new public nusiance-Kraven the Hunter, who is keen on taking down Spidey once and for all.
Major Events-Doc Conners turns into the Lizard
Kraven begins to hunt down Lizard
Venom returns
Peter preposes to MJ (who says yes)
Spidey defends Lizard from Kraven, making him a villian in NY's eyes
Final Battle-Lizard vs Kraven vs Spidey/Spidey and Lizard vs Kraven
Result-Conners learns how to control Lizard, so he helps Spidey battle Kraven, while Lizard fights Conner's mind internally, making him attack Spidey. In the end, Lizard throws Spidey and Kraven off the building their fighting on, and when Kraven tries to stab Spidey from behind, he moves and Kraven stabs himself, dying in the process.
End of movie-We Spidey on his final swing, and during one of his swings, we see black webbing and Spidey is pulled out of the frame. We then here Venom's scream.

I'll post 5 later. Leave feedback!

Hey, this is actually pretty freakin good. kudos to you. And I love the idea of having a cliff-hanger ending. If you make a good story on how Venom survived then I'll like 5 probably too.
 
Thanks for all the feedback, and I had a feeling people would divided on my bringing back Venom. 5 is almost ready, and I should be posting it by tommorow. Heres a little spoiler-some of my Sinister Six villians will be introduced in Spidey 5, w/o powers.
 
brilliant
I love the final swing thing!!! I can so imagine Spidey swinging and boom pulled down and Venom Scream brilliant bravo!!!!
 
Why is it that that reminds me of BATMAN RETURNS in a way, just instead of Catwoman. It's Venom waiting in the wings.
 
Damn if people still see potential for Brock's Venom I don't know what to say... how many angles can you see that footage? And I know Gargan was Venom once.... but the guy IS scorpion and no one but Brock can play the character... now if you are a Carnage fan then I can't help you there...

Anyways... I like the theme scarlettvenom... but you should go a step beyond doing what is right... it should be doing what is right for personal gain/pleasure (not really revenge in essense) vs doing what is right for everyone (sort of on par with SM2 but it goes a step beyond with the greed factor)... you gotto give it that more personal thematic element to it... I think it applies to almost every character....

MJ- Wants to better her opportunities as an actress... but she can't neglect her relationship with Peter Parker...

Kraven- Is already the greatest hunter in the world? Why would he want to target another (possibly innocent) man as prey when this is the case? To further glorify himself and nothing more...

Gwen- Maybe falls in love with Peter... but needs to understand that she can never be with him/Spiderman as long as MJ is in the picture... will it stop her from trying?

Conners- I still think if they took an unethical approach to the serum treatment... sort of like stem cell research... maybe Conner's should have accepted his life with one arm rather than playing God by screwing with human/Lizard genetics

Parker- Yeah Conners is his professor... but if Gwen or her father is killed by the doings of the Lizard... when do you say enough is enough and take matters into your own hands
 
Here it is, SPIDER-MAN 5!

Villians: Carnage, Venom, Scorpion
Allies: Black Cat
Lesson: You must be able to rely on friends. Trust can help in important situations. (Can't think of a really good lesson for this one)
Plot: Venom. The person that Spidey thought he had rid the world of has returned. He is searching for his "other"-the piece of symbiote that remains intact at Dr. Conners's lab. Spider-Man must make sure that Venom never finds this symbiote and gain his full strength. But Spidey also has to compete with Detective Mac Gargan, who becomes the vigillante "Scorpion", in a search for escaped convict Cletus Kasady, who swore to reign carnage over New York. MJ is going to LA for 2 months, and Peter is feeling very alone. And what about that new Black Cat character? Who is she and what does she want?
Major Events:
Venom reveals the regenerative properties of the symbiote helped him survive the bomb-these properties were a key in Doc Conners Lizard serum
Kasady bonds with the rest of the symbiote, and becomes Carnage
Scorpion is born when Detective Mac Gargan uses the police force's new battle suit to track down Venom
Spidey has several run ins with Black Cat, who is performing several diamond heists
Aunt May is diagnosed with an unknown disease, that is slowly killing her
MJ goes to LA to shoot a few episodes for a soap opera
Spidey captures petty criminals, like former FX artist Quentin Beck, Max Dillion, and Adrian Toomes

I'll post the final battle later, leave feedback!
 
not bad, but you should go in more detail on how Venom survived. Oh yeah, and a lot of people on these boards don't like reading extemely long posts, so next time you might wanna post it like you posted 4, giving a brief plot, major events and the ending. Good stuff though. Keep it up man.
 
hey ur doing a great job. and the story sounds great.
but how does venom survive?
 
Thanks for all the feedback, I think im gonna edit my post of 5 like I did 4. Im glad everyones liking my stuff.
 
Im just gonna get straight to the point, no need in dwadling...

SPIDER-MAN 4
Villians-Lizard, Kraven
Lesson-Sometimes, we must do the right thing, even if we dont think its so right.
Plot-Its been a few years since Harry Osborn's death, but Peter Parker is still grieving. Being Spider-Man, he must try and face this event to propel him to better things, like his staff job at the Daily Bugle, or his lab assistant job with Dr. Conners, who's Limb Regeneration formula (Project Lizard) is almost ready for human testing. Peter's mind is also on Mary Jane, who is still terrified with what dangers might lurk towards her because of her relationship. Spidey doesn't have easy, either. He has to deal with the new public nusiance-Kraven the Hunter, who is keen on taking down Spidey once and for all.
Major Events-Doc Conners turns into the Lizard
Kraven begins to hunt down Lizard
Venom returns
Peter preposes to MJ (who says yes)
Spidey defends Lizard from Kraven, making him a villian in NY's eyes
Final Battle-Lizard vs Kraven vs Spidey/Spidey and Lizard vs Kraven
Result-Conners learns how to control Lizard, so he helps Spidey battle Kraven, while Lizard fights Conner's mind internally, making him attack Spidey. In the end, Lizard throws Spidey and Kraven off the building their fighting on, and when Kraven tries to stab Spidey from behind, he moves and Kraven stabs himself, dying in the process.
End of movie-We Spidey on his final swing, and during one of his swings, we see black webbing and Spidey is pulled out of the frame. We then here Venom's scream.

I'll post 5 later. Leave feedback!
sounds good....but it seems like maybe Kraven would be hunting spiderman because hes turning into the Man-Spider, idk, i dont think that would ever work...but wtvr


anyways nice job...how exaclty do you plan on venom surviving though?
 
ive been busy lately, but ill finish 5 as soon as i can.
btw, Venom survives thanks to the regenerative properties of the symbiote. we then find out that Doc Conners did use these properties in his Lizard serum, which caused his uncontrollable rage.
 
I edited my Spidey 5 post, it has everything except for the final battle, I'll post that later.
 

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