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I kinda got some of the idea from another poster. Anyway...
Zooms on the clock to the left of Jonah's desk. It says 10:31. It zooms out until the clock is blurred and there is a shot of Jonah on the phone. The last words you hear are... "Ok get it by tomorrow, as a matter o'fact your fired!". He then gets up and goes to the elevator and rides to the bottom floor. He walks out onto the empty parking lot (except for his car). He starts walking to his car when he hear a dull thump. He looks around. He looks at the surrounding buildings. He finally spots a dark figure in the shadows on top of one of the hi-rises. He instanly thinks it's spiderman and he start mouthing off. Then the cam zooms to the figure, which is still silluoetted in the darkness. Suddenly the figure smiles and shows his white, long, sharp teeth. Jonah is to busy talking to notice that this figure has smiled, and that spiderman can't smile since his mask covers his mouth. He finally heads for his car, walking a little more briskly now. He takes one more look back at the rooftop. The figure is now gone. Jonah figures he scared spidey away with his harsh words. Just as Jonah has reached his car, WHAM. Venom lands on the hood of the car causing damage under his dense body weight. Venom smiles again. Jonah is scared but he has never seen this creature before so he takes on step back. He starts to get his phone and call the police when... THWIP! Venom webs his mouth shut and then webs him to the wall. He then Jumps all the way to the top of the building and heads away. In the morning, Peter finds his boss webbed to the wall and calls the police. They take him off and he tells the police his story. He says it was spidey(cuz he blames everything on spiderman), but he had mutated or something and that he was more dangerous than ever. They obviously don't believe and him and they ignore his story. Peter overhears and wonders who/what the mystery thing is. The movie then continues in the office... blah blah blah. I'm done.
This scene happens after they have shown how eddie becomes venom.
Also, when Jonah Jameson is attacked the is no music throughout that whole scene.
Jonah doesn't suffocate under the webbing because the webbing fell after after a few minutes.
Suggestions and constructive critisism is welcome.
Whaddaya Think?
Zooms on the clock to the left of Jonah's desk. It says 10:31. It zooms out until the clock is blurred and there is a shot of Jonah on the phone. The last words you hear are... "Ok get it by tomorrow, as a matter o'fact your fired!". He then gets up and goes to the elevator and rides to the bottom floor. He walks out onto the empty parking lot (except for his car). He starts walking to his car when he hear a dull thump. He looks around. He looks at the surrounding buildings. He finally spots a dark figure in the shadows on top of one of the hi-rises. He instanly thinks it's spiderman and he start mouthing off. Then the cam zooms to the figure, which is still silluoetted in the darkness. Suddenly the figure smiles and shows his white, long, sharp teeth. Jonah is to busy talking to notice that this figure has smiled, and that spiderman can't smile since his mask covers his mouth. He finally heads for his car, walking a little more briskly now. He takes one more look back at the rooftop. The figure is now gone. Jonah figures he scared spidey away with his harsh words. Just as Jonah has reached his car, WHAM. Venom lands on the hood of the car causing damage under his dense body weight. Venom smiles again. Jonah is scared but he has never seen this creature before so he takes on step back. He starts to get his phone and call the police when... THWIP! Venom webs his mouth shut and then webs him to the wall. He then Jumps all the way to the top of the building and heads away. In the morning, Peter finds his boss webbed to the wall and calls the police. They take him off and he tells the police his story. He says it was spidey(cuz he blames everything on spiderman), but he had mutated or something and that he was more dangerous than ever. They obviously don't believe and him and they ignore his story. Peter overhears and wonders who/what the mystery thing is. The movie then continues in the office... blah blah blah. I'm done.
This scene happens after they have shown how eddie becomes venom.
Also, when Jonah Jameson is attacked the is no music throughout that whole scene.
Jonah doesn't suffocate under the webbing because the webbing fell after after a few minutes.
Suggestions and constructive critisism is welcome.
Whaddaya Think?
