Hype! Survivor: Mods vs Members - Day Four: GO SPAIN!
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sounds good to me!
JewishHobbit
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I doubt you have anything to worry about 
The Squirrel
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This last judge should really get their stuff together. 
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i'm about to infract them for taking so long 
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Results!
Posters Tribe!
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Judge 2
Judge 3
Judge 4
Total Score
Posters Tribe!
Judge 1
Design Well, considering there is not a design
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Matt -00/20!
Hunter - 00/20
Characterization as relates to Matt and Hunter Well, I cant say that I am crazy about essentially being a sex offender with powers but I do like the rest. You took everything that I told you and turned it into my backstory. I said I preferred to be in the X-Men First Class world, you put me there. I said that my super power of choice was the Zack Morris time out, you not only gave me it, you did it in a manner which fits within the universe without making a mockery of it. You did the same with all of Robs answers. Really well done.
Characterization as relates to Matt - 18*/20!
*I took off two points for making me try to rape Jean Grey.
Characterization as relates to Hunter - 20/20
Creatvity of the backstory Once again, this is really well done. These stories are not only creative and elaborate but are also fairly compelling to read. That said, Im not sure if this is intentional or not but The Dealer, in Robs story is the Shadow Broker from Mass Effect to a T. You lose points for that. Matt - 20/20
Hunter - 10/20
Creaitivity in placing the character into your chosen mythos This, you did perfectly. Rob picked Star Wars, which is easy as the universe is massive, basically anyone can be fit right into it. I gave you a much more narrow window though by requesting X-Men: First Class. Yet you used the power that I answered to design a story that fits me into the franchise perfectly without disrupting established continuity. It is actually really creative and inspired.
Matt - 20/20
Hunter - 10/20
Matt -00/20!
Hunter - 00/20
Characterization as relates to Matt and Hunter Well, I cant say that I am crazy about essentially being a sex offender with powers but I do like the rest. You took everything that I told you and turned it into my backstory. I said I preferred to be in the X-Men First Class world, you put me there. I said that my super power of choice was the Zack Morris time out, you not only gave me it, you did it in a manner which fits within the universe without making a mockery of it. You did the same with all of Robs answers. Really well done.
Characterization as relates to Matt - 18*/20!
*I took off two points for making me try to rape Jean Grey.
Characterization as relates to Hunter - 20/20
Creatvity of the backstory Once again, this is really well done. These stories are not only creative and elaborate but are also fairly compelling to read. That said, Im not sure if this is intentional or not but The Dealer, in Robs story is the Shadow Broker from Mass Effect to a T. You lose points for that. Matt - 20/20
Hunter - 10/20
Creaitivity in placing the character into your chosen mythos This, you did perfectly. Rob picked Star Wars, which is easy as the universe is massive, basically anyone can be fit right into it. I gave you a much more narrow window though by requesting X-Men: First Class. Yet you used the power that I answered to design a story that fits me into the franchise perfectly without disrupting established continuity. It is actually really creative and inspired.
Matt - 20/20
Hunter - 10/20
Judge 2
Design - 0/20
Relation to Matt - 19/20 Plenty of Mattism in there in both his likes and personality, raping aside
Backstory - 20/20 Inventive and tragic, It was an engaging read
Mythos integration - 20/20 Really smartly done with a clever use of the characters power
Design - 0/20
Relation to Hunter - 20/20 Captured my love of the SW universe and character type perfectly
Backstory - 18/20 Not overly original but a good solid revenge set up
Mythos intergration - 18/20 Doesn't tie into any of the films directly but fits well within the OT saga
Relation to Matt - 19/20 Plenty of Mattism in there in both his likes and personality, raping aside
Backstory - 20/20 Inventive and tragic, It was an engaging read
Mythos integration - 20/20 Really smartly done with a clever use of the characters power
Design - 0/20
Relation to Hunter - 20/20 Captured my love of the SW universe and character type perfectly
Backstory - 18/20 Not overly original but a good solid revenge set up
Mythos intergration - 18/20 Doesn't tie into any of the films directly but fits well within the OT saga
Judge 3
Matt's character
Design: 0 pts
Characterization: 12 pts; the only way it relates to Matt is his avatar. Lazy characterization. Plus, I don't imagine Matt as a rapist.
Backstory: 15 pts; I like the creativity of the backstory. It is very interesting and makes me want to know more about him.
Mythos integration: 18 pts; It was very well integrated
Hunter's character
Design: 0 pts
Characterization: 13 pts; also very weak but stronger than Matt's
Backstory: 10 pts; I found this rather boring
Mythos integration: 10 pts; also rather boring
Design: 0 pts
Characterization: 12 pts; the only way it relates to Matt is his avatar. Lazy characterization. Plus, I don't imagine Matt as a rapist.
Backstory: 15 pts; I like the creativity of the backstory. It is very interesting and makes me want to know more about him.
Mythos integration: 18 pts; It was very well integrated
Hunter's character
Design: 0 pts
Characterization: 13 pts; also very weak but stronger than Matt's
Backstory: 10 pts; I found this rather boring
Mythos integration: 10 pts; also rather boring
Judge 4
Design - 10 points
Characterization as relates to Matt and Hunter - 28/40 points
Creatvity of the backstory - 40/40 points
Creaitivity in placing the character into your chosen mythos - 30/40 points
Characterization as relates to Matt and Hunter - 28/40 points
Creatvity of the backstory - 40/40 points
Creaitivity in placing the character into your chosen mythos - 30/40 points
Total Score
390 points!
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Mod tribe!
Judge 1
Judge 2
Judge 3
Judge 4
Total Score
Judge 1
Design - Design - You couldn't have used the more recent hero machine? I actually like it though, it is simplistic, colorful and fun. But at the same time the quality isnt that high.
Matt - 10/20
Hunter - 10/20
Characterization as relates to Matt and Hunter You seem to have gotten me down, but your effort for Rob was pitiful. He is British and likes wrestling. Thats it? As for me, I dont really care for the Nolan Bat films. Why put me into it? Also, where the hell did you get that I want to be an actor from? And Joe Manganiello? You couldnt have at least used my man-crush Casper Van Dien!?!? You really shouldve taken the opportunity to ask use questions.
Matt - 10/20
Hunter - 05/20
Creatvity of the backstory Well, being as Rob is essentially Metallo and I am more or less Deadshot .
Matt - 05/20
Hunter - 05/20
Creaitivity in placing the character into your chosen mythos Neither shoehorned in nor inspired in the ideas inception.
Matt - 05/20
Hunter - 10/20
I actually like it though, it is simplistic, colorful and fun. But at the same time the quality isnt that high. Matt - 10/20
Hunter - 10/20
Characterization as relates to Matt and Hunter You seem to have gotten me down, but your effort for Rob was pitiful. He is British and likes wrestling. Thats it? As for me, I dont really care for the Nolan Bat films. Why put me into it? Also, where the hell did you get that I want to be an actor from? And Joe Manganiello? You couldnt have at least used my man-crush Casper Van Dien!?!? You really shouldve taken the opportunity to ask use questions.
Matt - 10/20
Hunter - 05/20
Creatvity of the backstory Well, being as Rob is essentially Metallo and I am more or less Deadshot .
Matt - 05/20
Hunter - 05/20
Creaitivity in placing the character into your chosen mythos Neither shoehorned in nor inspired in the ideas inception.
Matt - 05/20
Hunter - 10/20
Judge 2
Tribe 2 - Matt
Design - 10/20 reminds me of oldschool Marvel art
Relation to Matt - 5/20 Other than the Steelers this doesn't really fit Matt
Backstory - 17/20 - Very funny, especially the pay-off
Mythos integration - 3/20 It doesn't intergrate into an actual franchise mythos, 3 points for the making of TDKR intergration
Tribe 2 - Hunter
Design - 3/20 I kinda look like a 70's porn star with bad armor taste.
Relation to Hunter - 10/20 Some of me is in there but it's basic and SR was an odd franchise to put me in
Backstory - 20/20 I liked how you made me a version of Metallo for a sequel
Mythos Intergration - 20/20 Effective way to place the character into the Mythos
Design - 10/20 reminds me of oldschool Marvel art
Relation to Matt - 5/20 Other than the Steelers this doesn't really fit Matt
Backstory - 17/20 - Very funny, especially the pay-off
Mythos integration - 3/20 It doesn't intergrate into an actual franchise mythos, 3 points for the making of TDKR intergration
Tribe 2 - Hunter
Design - 3/20 I kinda look like a 70's porn star with bad armor taste.
Relation to Hunter - 10/20 Some of me is in there but it's basic and SR was an odd franchise to put me in
Backstory - 20/20 I liked how you made me a version of Metallo for a sequel
Mythos Intergration - 20/20 Effective way to place the character into the Mythos
Judge 3
Hunter's character
Design: 17 pts
Characterization: 17 pts; it seems very HR-like though it's not perfect a I don't picture HR as a villain
Backstory: 17 pts; it is a very interesting backstory though I'd wish the MI6 story was a little fleshed out
Mythos integration: 15 pts; it was okay
Matt's character
Design: 20 pts
Characterization: 20 pts; It is soo Matt!
Backstory; 20 pts; I love it!
Mythos integration; 20 pts; This is the epitome of what I want Matt to do to crazy Batfans! PERFECT SCORE!
Design: 17 pts
Characterization: 17 pts; it seems very HR-like though it's not perfect a I don't picture HR as a villain
Backstory: 17 pts; it is a very interesting backstory though I'd wish the MI6 story was a little fleshed out
Mythos integration: 15 pts; it was okay
Matt's character
Design: 20 pts
Characterization: 20 pts; It is soo Matt!
Backstory; 20 pts; I love it!
Mythos integration; 20 pts; This is the epitome of what I want Matt to do to crazy Batfans! PERFECT SCORE!
Judge 4
Design - 40/40 points
Characterization as relates to Matt and Hunter - 30/40 points
Creatvity of the backstory - 40/40 points
Creaitivity in placing the character into your chosen mythos - 34/40 points
Characterization as relates to Matt and Hunter - 30/40 points
Creatvity of the backstory - 40/40 points
Creaitivity in placing the character into your chosen mythos - 34/40 points
Total Score
439 points
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man, that's a lot of math
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The lack of art cost the poster tribe dearly!
Tribal PM's to be sent out shortly.
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do we get to see the entries?
JewishHobbit
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Not surprising. Byrd Man and I were the only ones who were able to do anything with this challenge (though sml and DACrowe were at least able to offer opinions). We had no outlets for art and I didn't have time to draw anything. I started a sketch of Matt's character but then left it at work on accident and didn't have time to get back to it. I made a cool logo though. The "o" in Chronic was a pocket watch 
So yeah, I've expected this loss since deadline.
And yeah, Matt's no rapist but I needed a way to put him IN the story, take him OUT of the story, and then END his story all between the scenes. The lustful mentality was a sign of Matt's ego, thinking he's simply the best, and it led nicely to his death
So yeah, I've expected this loss since deadline.
And yeah, Matt's no rapist but I needed a way to put him IN the story, take him OUT of the story, and then END his story all between the scenes. The lustful mentality was a sign of Matt's ego, thinking he's simply the best, and it led nicely to his death
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it kinda goes with his obsession with Big Ben of Pittsburgh...
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