Your post got me thinking.
Personally, I would be against Pete being the father as well. But, reading your summary, that is a heck of alot better than what we got! Even the part you added about the Jackel. It sounds a whole lot better than the total, out of character, illogical story we got.
I just think the idea of a pregnant Gwen was just bad from the get go, [FONT="]irregardless, of who the father was. Also, the whole [/FONT]
accelerated growth thing is just too contrived. Plus if Pete was the dad, Marvel looks totally clueless. We can't have baby May, because it makes Pete too "old." What do you think two adult children do?
You're mention of Loki reminded me. Didn't they make a big deal that Loki owed Pete a favor? If they wanted to go with making the marriage go away, why not have Pete call on
Loki to save Aunt May? Loki agrees, but, as we know, he is a god of
mischief. Loki has to do something in the past to prevent the shooting incident, and it somehow happens to involve doing away the marriage. He can also allow the whole missing something in their hearts thing. Even
this makes more sense and is less deus ex machina. Sigh, missed potential.
The sad thing is, they could use the whole OMD, as a mystery. Slowly things are unraveled. Pete and MJ start noticing things. The whole thing about deals with the Devil is it always goes wrong. But, Marvel will not do this. Joe Q made a comment, before OMD, where he said, what if we said Pete & MJ are not married. Then we make no more reference to them ever being married. Then just ignore it. That's what I think they are doing. Dropping yet another potential build-up and just moving on, no longer to reference, except for the odd inside joke, like whenever Pete rolls his eyes at the mention of clones.
And lastly, you mentioned the birthday issue. Was that the issue with Pete jumping the timeline, including his death in the graveyard by the police? I thought that was going to come back to play to wrap up JMS run, which I assumed was what OMD was heading (when I was hoping all Joe Q's anti-marriage talk was a smoke screen). Again, more missed potential.