Justice League script review

[The Marvel]

Whole script?

No. Just those fifteen pages.

Whats it like? Is it good?

 

[Maze]

Whole script?

No. Just those fifteen pages.

OK.

i've done some research on you , Advanced Dark vouch for you..

still feel that there is something going on at Warner , this thing is too bad to be true imo.

 

[Showtime]

Research? What are you Batman?

 

[The Marvel]

Research? What are you Batman?

I think he is.

 

[Gotham]

Ehh. I'll get it elsewhere.

Alright.

Heed of warning: This script stopped leaking almost twenty four hours ago.

 

[Maze]

Research? What are you Batman?

t: Yup just not the one from that jl "fake " thing

 

[Showtime]

Alright.

Heed of warning: This script stopped leaking almost twenty four hours ago.

It's ok. I won't have an issue.

 

[Showtime]

t: Yup just not the one from that jl "fake " thing

Noted.

 

[Maze]

You seem to learn fast Showperman or should i call you Whashowki? t:

 

[Gotham]

Whats it like? Is it good?

The dialogue is absolutely terrible. I mean, just unconvincingly terrible. Superman is terribly introduced by, and literally, a "grunt". Batman has no entrance and they basically treat him as a no-nothing character.

 

[Showtime]

You seem to learn fast Showperman or should i call you Whashowki? t:

Not on the forums.

 

[Maze]

Sorry , Showperman....people are so fed up of secret and lies ,i felt like revealing it...I think it's REALLY time to expose Warner or i fear this world will come to an end..

MazerMan

 

[Showtime]

Sorry , Showperman....people are so fed up of secret and lies ,i felt like revealing it...I think it's REALLY time to expose Warner or i fear this world will come to an end..

MazerMan

I don't work for WB anymore...

 

[Maze]

I don't work for WB anymore...

Good.

You lose money ,you gain respect ..if they don't stop soon ,they will lose both.

 

[millennium movies]

Man it better not be true, this movie is looking worse and worse every week.

 

[Showtime]

Good.

You lose money ,you gain respect ..if they don't stop soon ,they will lose both.

 

[Maze]

Cmon soldier , you are the levelheaded one.

 

[Showtime]

Cmon soldier , you are the levelheaded one.

I used to be...

EXT. GOTHAM CEMETARY – MORNING

The sun peeks over the horizon casting a faint light through the autumn kissed trees. Two figures dressed in black huddle together for warmth and comfort over a headstone set apart from the rest.

EXT. HEADSTONE – CONT.

HERE LIES​

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JANET DRAKE​

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BELOVED MOTHER AND WIFE​

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“OUR HEART’S ARE WITH YOU AS YOU WALK HAND IN HAND WITH ANGELS.”​

 

[Maze]

Matter of time , you'll be again.

ps : nice excerpt.

 

[Jake Cassidy]

^ Is that Tim's mum, Showtime?

 

[The Guard]

That amount of story/action CAN be done in 14 pages, but it would come across as so unbelieveably amateurish and insanely fastpaced...I'm talking worse than Akiva Goldsman's BATMAN & ROBIN stuff, and I just cannot believe WB would greenlight something like that.

Gotham, so you've read the excerpts...can you shed any more light, or does this 14 page script consist of vague plot points?

You say the dialogue is unconvincingly bad...how so? Too many puns? No dramatic weight? Elaborate.

 

[Gotham]

That amount of story/action CAN be done in 14 pages, but it would come across as so unbelieveably amateurish and insanely fastpaced...I'm talking worse than Akiva Goldsman's BATMAN & ROBIN stuff, and I just cannot believe WB would greenlight something like that.

Gotham, so you've read the excerpts...can you shed any more light, or does this 14 page script consist of vague plot points?

You say the dialogue is unconvincingly bad...how so? Too many puns? No dramatic weight? Elaborate.

Dramatic?

Never use that word again in the same sentence with this film.

 

[Showtime]

^ Is that Tim's mum, Showtime?

Yes.

 

[Showtime]

That amount of story/action CAN be done in 14 pages, but it would come across as so unbelieveably amateurish and insanely fastpaced...I'm talking worse than Akiva Goldsman's BATMAN & ROBIN stuff, and I just cannot believe WB would greenlight something like that.

Gotham, so you've read the excerpts...can you shed any more light, or does this 14 page script consist of vague plot points?

You say the dialogue is unconvincingly bad...how so? Too many puns? No dramatic weight? Elaborate.

Right. As I said, can, but shouldn't.

 

[bunk]

The dialogue is absolutely terrible. I mean, just unconvincingly terrible. Superman is terribly introduced by, and literally, a "grunt". Batman has no entrance and they basically treat him as a no-nothing character.

That's like a knife in the heart.