Ok what i read of it i really liked, although i told myself i wouldn't read all of it because it might influence the one im writing now. I like your writing style its easy to read, it flows and it makes sense, i love the scene early on at the beach, and I'd love to see it on screen. Gambit's intro is good i like what you did, showing a more ruthless side. I look forward to reading it all once i finish mine. Keep writing man