Superman Returns Sequel

[That'ssuper!]

I am currently writing my first version of a sequel to Superman Returns where I'm exploring a new concept of Superman's character. So far it has four chapters with more coming soon. You can find it at: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3791843/1/Superman_Man_of_Steel

There's a poll there just to get variation in opinion so I know what to think.

 

[Noir]

Nice try, but you know, its just.. idk, lackluster.

 

[That'ssuper!]

Nice try, but you know, its just.. idk, lackluster.

Really How so, I am intereste in fixing this up as much as possible.

 

[That'ssuper!]

There's a new chapter for anyone interested. The link is above in the first post. Brainiac makes his arrival on Earth.

 

[That'ssuper!]

Another chapter is update this time I am revising the whole thing and looking where this any lackluster parts. This part is long, but gets exciting when into it. http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3845050&chapter=6/