Supernatural (WB Property) The Plantation

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    EXT. WOODS- NIGHT

    AROOSTOOK COUNTY, MAINE

    We open to a forest. Cut across to a flashlight shining through. We find DAVE MORGAN (17) leading three teenagers through the woods. MARK SINGER (17), ALAN CURTIS (16), and LISA GRANT (17).

    LISA
    I’m getting cold.

    Mark wraps his arms around Lisa, she inches closer to him. Alan laughs.

    ALAN
    Get a room.

    MARK
    So, how far is this place anyways?

    DAVE
    Just a little bit further, but trust me man- it’s worth it.

    ALAN
    So where are we going again?

    DAVE
    The old Miller Plantation.

    ALAN
    You mean thee Miller Plantation?

    DAVE
    What other one could I be talking about?

    MARK
    How did you find it?

    Dave shrugs

    DAVE
    Someone in school showed me. It’s not much further now.

    Lisa looks towards Mark

    LISA
    What’s the Miller Plantation?

    DAVE
    You mean you don’t know? Old man Miller used to be the local reverend, until he started hearing voices. Left the church the very next day and began to isolate himself out at his old plantation with his wife and two daughters.

    LISA
    What happens?

    DAVE
    Eventually, old man Miller has enough. Decides that it’s better to die than live another day. He kills his two daughters in their beds and then his wife. Next morning the police find Old Man Miller hanging from the rafters of the barn.

    Lisa looks towards Mark frightened.

    MARK
    It’s just an old local legend. Didn’t actually happen.

    Mark shoots Dave a look. Dave shrugs. They walk out of the clearing and towards the…

    EXT. MILLER PLANTATION

    We see an old abandoned house. Creepy. Run Down. An old wind mill whirls above. An a decrypt barn house off to the side. The four approach the house, frightened. Dave grins and shines the flashlight on his face.

    DAVE
    They say that his spirit still lives in that house to this very day.
    (beat)
    And anyone who dares to go inside becomes his next victim.

    Mark shrugs, trying to play tough guy.

    MARK
    It’s not real man.

    DAVE
    Yeah? So, you’re not afraid?

    MARK
    Me? No. Definitely not.

    The teens crouch down hiding behind an old tractor and peer up towards the looming house.

    DAVE
    Prove it.

    MARK
    What?

    DAVE
    Prove it.

    MARK
    Fine.

    DAVE
    Yeah?

    MARK
    Yeah.

    DAVE
    Alright then.

    Mark nods, he stands up. Lisa tries to hold him down.

    LISA
    No, don’t go.

    Mark snickers

    MARK
    What’s the worst that can happen?
    (beat)
    I’ll be back

    Mark slowly approaches the house. Timid. He looks back towards Dave, urging him on.

    DAVE
    He is so dead.

    Mark gulps as he looks up towards the looming house hanging over him. Wind howls behind him. He breathes out and walks up the steps. Dave watches afar, nervous. Lisa closes her eyes. Alan’s eyes dart back and forth. Mark reaches for the door. It doesn’t budge.

    MARK
    It’s locked!

    Mark tries again and it opens. Fear shows through his face as he enters the abandoned home.

    INT. MILLAR HOME

    Mark enters and looks around. Cobwebs hang everywhere. It’s obvious that no one has been inside for a very long time. Mark gulps as he walks further into the house, shining his flash light in front of him. We see a creepy SHADOW of a dark black cape and long bony hands with claws RUSH past the screen. SLAM! Mark drops his flashlight. THUMP! Mark jumps as he looks around, in the dark everything is scarier. He quickly turns around. The door had closed behind him. Mark reaches over for his flash light, we hear an eerie moan. He quickly stands back up and approaches the door. He puts his hand on the handle. It won’t budge.

    MARK
    Come on… Come on…

    The dark shadow appears again. Closer than before. Mark turns around. Afraid.

    EXT. MILLAR PLANTATION

    The three watch on. Afraid. Not knowing what was happening inside. Then they hear it, a blood curdling scream. Mark. Dave gulps.

    ALAN
    He’s in there man.

    Dave nods

    LISA
    Do something.

    Dave shakes his head no, afraid. Guilt.

    DAVE
    I can’t.

    They stare on. The door opens and Mark runs out of the house, scared as hell. Dave, Lisa, and Alan continue to watch the house. MILLAR appears at the edge of the door in his black billowing trench coat, old and withered away. Dave, Lisa, and Alan SCREAM and run off. CLOSE UP on Mark RUNNING, he trips. Dave helps him up. For the first time, we see Mark’s face. Claw marks and bruises. Fear and betrayal. Dave gulps and looks back towards the plantation.

    SUPERNATURAL: THE PLANTATION
     
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    EXT. OPEN ROAD- AFTERNOON (I CAN PLAY THAT ROCK AND ROLL BY JOE WALSH)

    We TRACK the Impala speeding down an open road.

    SAM (O.S.)
    So, I’ve been…

    INT. IMPALA

    Sam browses through a newspaper.

    SAM
    Looking through here. Nothing comes up. Not a thing.

    Sam looks around as the Impala pulls into a small neighborhood.

    SAM
    I’m telling you man. Place is as clean as a whistle.

    DEAN
    Yeah, well… there’s gotta be some reason Dad sent us out here.

    Sam shrugs

    SAM
    Maybe it’s gone?

    Dean shakes his head no. He glances up ahead and notices a PRIEST blessing a house.

    DEAN
    Check it.

    Sam looks up and notices.

    DEAN
    Now what would a priest be doing blessing a house when there’s nothing supernatural going on?

    SAM
    Maybe the family just moved in. It’s not unheard of to call the local pastor to come and bless a house… for good luck.

    The Impala drives closer towards the house. We see a woman standing by, crying. This is CAITLYN SINGER, 40 years old.

    DEAN
    Yeah, well… I don’t think so.

    EXT. NEIGHBORHOOD

    The Impala pulls over to the side of the road. Dean and Sam get out. The priest finishes blessing the house and embraces Caitlyn.

    PRIEST
    There, there… I’m sure he will be alright.

    Caitlyn nods

    CAITLYN
    Thank you father.

    The priest shakes his head ok and leaves. Dean and Sam approach her.

    DEAN
    Hey, I’m Dean… this is my brother Sam. We just want to know if anything happened here.

    CAITLYN
    Excuse me?

    Dean shrugs

    DEAN
    Well, it’s kinda obvious that you called your priest here to come over for a reason. We just want to find out what…

    CAITLYN
    I think you better leave.

    Sam shoots Dean a look.

    CAITLYN
    Just go!!!

    Caitlyn walks back into the house. Dean bites his lower lip.

    DEAN
    That went over well.

    Sam hits his brother in the shoulder.

    SAM
    That really did the trick Dean.

    Dean looks towards Sam, off guard.

    DEAN
    Well, what was I supposed to do?

    Sam walks back towards the Impala.

    SAM
    I don’t know. Try being a little less obvious about it. And probably more sincere.

    Dean shrugs. He looks back towards the house. They walk back towards the Impala. DANIELLE SINGER, 19 years old, beautiful, runs out of the house.

    DANIELLE
    Wait!!!

    Sam and Dean turn around, unaware. Danielle slows down as she approaches them.

    DANIELLE
    I’m sorry for my Mom’s behavior. It’s just that our family has really been through a rough time lately.

    DEAN
    Rough time?

    DANIELLE
    Yeah, my little brother. He’s in the hospital. Doctor’s say it’s pretty bad.

    SAM
    I’m sorry. What happened?

    Danielle hesitates

    DANIELLE
    You wouldn’t believe me.

    DEAN
    No, please. Go ahead.

    DANIELLE
    There’s this local legend. The Miller Plantation.
    (beat)
    It’s this old abandoned place. Supposedly haunted. Well, legend goes that anyone who enters the house…

    Danielle breaths out, unable to finish.

    SAM
    What happens?

    DANIELLE
    Anyone who enters the house encounters old man Miller. By the time they leave, it’s all the same signs.

    DEAN
    Which are?

    DANIELLE
    Bruise marks, claw marks.

    SAM
    You brother…

    Danielle nods

    DANIELLE
    He and a couple of his friends went up there. You know how teenager guys are. Well, Mark entered the house. His friends said that when he came out, he was screaming as though he just saw the devil. He hasn’t uttered a word since.

    Dean and Sam nod

    DEAN
    Where is your brother now?

    DANIELLE
    He’s at the local hospital, in good hands. The doctors are doing everything they can for him.

    SAM
    How wide spread is this?

    DANIELLE
    Lately, there have been more than five teenagers sent to the hospital for the same thing. Now I don’t know what’s going on- but, that’s what happened.

    Dean and Sam nod

    DEAN
    Thank you for your time.

    DANIELLE
    So, who are you?

    DEAN
    People who can help.

    Danielle nods. Dean and Sam get back into the car.

    INT. IMPALA

    Sam looks towards Dean, grinning and on the verge of laughter.

    SAM
    People who can help?

    Dean shrugs

    DEAN
    What?

    SAM
    How long have you been waiting to say that?

    DEAN
    Honestly?

    Sam shrugs and nods. Dean grins.

    DEAN
    The whole time.

    The Impala REVVS its engines.

    EXT. NEIGHBORHOOD

    Danielle walks back towards her house as she watches the Impala drive off.
     

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