Eddie Brock
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"This is the one," Sergeant Hampton announces as we come to a halt in front of a holding cell. Sarge presses a few buttons on the keypad, and the door slides open with a hiss. The bespectacled occupant doesn't move. Sarge explains, "Franklin Mercer. 24 years-old. Technopath. We apprehended him in the process of downloading the financial records for every resident of Carver."
Franklin looks up at me. Though he tries to hide it, I recognize the momentary shock as he realizes who he's looking at. I notice the odd collar he's wearing.
As if Sarge can read my mind, he explains, "It's a power dampener. With all the technology required to run this place, someone like Franklin here could have a field day. It was a necessary precaution."
Franklin's eyes slide down to the object tucked under my arm. That's when they really light up. He looks like a kid at Christmas.
I hold out the laptop. "Franklin, I need you to do me a favor," I explain. "Sergeant Hampton here has agreed to grant you special privileges if you help me." Franklin takes the laptop - tentatively at first, but then he pulls it towards him with vigor. "Also, as fair warning, the Sergeant is prepared to knock you out if you try anything. Understand?"
Franklin nods. He opens the laptop slowly, seemingly cherishing every moment.
"This was left at a recent crime scene. I'm wondering if you can work your magic to find out any information about who left it there." The laptop was a present by the Coordinator. When I turned it on, I found an email from him congratulating me on yet another success. I know next to nothing about hacking, but if there's anyone who can trace that email, it's gotta be a technopath, right?
Franklin types away at the keyboard furiously. "This encryption is elegant. Firewall on top of firewall, concealed in code and locked with passwords." He's talking like an art critic reviewing a painting. "It could take any normal hacker months to crack this."
I frown. "So how long--?"
"I'm in," Franklin interjects immediately. Even I'm impressed. "Now, from the information I'm gathering, I should be able to triangulate the position of the sender. I've got a lock on his IP address." Franklin frowns. "Man, this is sloppy. I guess he didn't expect anyone to get this far. Okay, wow. I've got an address."
Franklin spins the laptop around so Sarge and I can see. He's pulled up a satellite image of an abandoned industrial park. There's a blinking dot on top of the central building.
"If your boy hasn't moved, this is where he is," Franklin states.
"I know this place. It's a few miles out from Carver," Sarge announces. He takes the laptop from Franklin and begins guiding me out of the room. "Come on. We can have you there in ten minutes. It's time to take out this son of a b****."
As we exit the cell, Franklin cries out, "When will we discuss my special privileges?!"
Franklin looks up at me. Though he tries to hide it, I recognize the momentary shock as he realizes who he's looking at. I notice the odd collar he's wearing.
As if Sarge can read my mind, he explains, "It's a power dampener. With all the technology required to run this place, someone like Franklin here could have a field day. It was a necessary precaution."
Franklin's eyes slide down to the object tucked under my arm. That's when they really light up. He looks like a kid at Christmas.
I hold out the laptop. "Franklin, I need you to do me a favor," I explain. "Sergeant Hampton here has agreed to grant you special privileges if you help me." Franklin takes the laptop - tentatively at first, but then he pulls it towards him with vigor. "Also, as fair warning, the Sergeant is prepared to knock you out if you try anything. Understand?"
Franklin nods. He opens the laptop slowly, seemingly cherishing every moment.
"This was left at a recent crime scene. I'm wondering if you can work your magic to find out any information about who left it there." The laptop was a present by the Coordinator. When I turned it on, I found an email from him congratulating me on yet another success. I know next to nothing about hacking, but if there's anyone who can trace that email, it's gotta be a technopath, right?
Franklin types away at the keyboard furiously. "This encryption is elegant. Firewall on top of firewall, concealed in code and locked with passwords." He's talking like an art critic reviewing a painting. "It could take any normal hacker months to crack this."
I frown. "So how long--?"
"I'm in," Franklin interjects immediately. Even I'm impressed. "Now, from the information I'm gathering, I should be able to triangulate the position of the sender. I've got a lock on his IP address." Franklin frowns. "Man, this is sloppy. I guess he didn't expect anyone to get this far. Okay, wow. I've got an address."
Franklin spins the laptop around so Sarge and I can see. He's pulled up a satellite image of an abandoned industrial park. There's a blinking dot on top of the central building.
"If your boy hasn't moved, this is where he is," Franklin states.
"I know this place. It's a few miles out from Carver," Sarge announces. He takes the laptop from Franklin and begins guiding me out of the room. "Come on. We can have you there in ten minutes. It's time to take out this son of a b****."
As we exit the cell, Franklin cries out, "When will we discuss my special privileges?!"
***
The SDS helicopter lands a few hundred yards from the industrial park. We don't want to alert the Coordinator that we're coming for him. Sergeant Hampton rounded up three officers for a strike team. However, I insist, "Let me handle this. The Coordinator has made it clear that this is personal, so I want to take him down myself."
"Whatever you say, Mantis. Just bring him out here when you've got him."
Nodding, I bound off in the direction of the industrial park. It's time to settle the score with the Coordinator once and for all. Only this time, he doesn't have anyone doing his dirty work for him. I'll be glad to have this nuisance out of my life. Arriving at the marked building, I slip in quietly through a broken window.
The building is kinda creepy in this state. Empty cubicles dominate the room, and I leap silently over them towards the stairs. The Coordinator could be anywhere in here, so I'll start my search from the ground up. Taking the stairs down to the basement, I find myself in an old boiler room. I half-expect Freddy Krueger to pop out and attack me.
Well, there goes any hope of sleeping tonight.
Suddenly, I hear the familiar sound of pinging and beeping from machines. Seems out of the ordinary, considering the circumstances, so I investigate. I turn the corner and am surprised to find computers on top of computers, with more servers and wires than I care to count. Franklin was right. This is the Coordinator's base of operations. Now, to find the man himself...
"HELLO, MANTIS. WELCOME TO MY HUMBLE ABODE. PLEASE, MEET ME IN THE EXECUTIVE OFFICE ON THE TOP FLOOR. WE HAVE MUCH TO DISCUSS."
It's very likely a trap, but it's also the only lead I have. I start to get the sinking feeling that the Coordinator isn't really here, but I make my way to the elevators regardless. The elevator is waiting for me, doors open and everything. Yep, this is definitely a trap. My only option is to spring it. I didn't come all this way for nothing.
I'm surprised to find that nothing bad happens to me during the elevator ride. I move cautiously through the top floor, but there are no booby traps to be found. Eventually, I find myself standing at the doors to the executive office. "Here goes nothing." I take a deep breath and throw open the doors.
"HELLO, MANTIS."
I'm surprised to see a wheelchair-bound man sitting behind the desk. He's connected to a breathing tube, and his eyes seem lifeless. I know he's alive because they follow me as I walk further into the room.
"NOT WHAT YOU WERE EXPECTING, IS IT?"
The voice is coming from the loudspeakers. "Are you--?"
"THE COORDINATOR? YES. WE FINALLY MEET IN PERSON. I'D SHAKE YOUR HAND, BUT YOU CAN SEE WHERE THAT POSES SOME DIFFICULTY FOR ME."
This man who has been terrorizing me for months is crippled? I mean, I suppose it makes sense. That's why he sent others to dispatch of me. And it also explains the lifeless voice. But something about the situation just seems...wrong.
"I'M SURE THIS IS A LOT TO PROCESS ALL AT ONCE, SO ALLOW ME TO EXPLAIN. I WAS NOT ALWAYS LIKE THIS. NOT LONG AGO, I COULD WALK AND TALK AND DO ALL THE THINGS THAT MAKE ONE NORMAL."
Those eyes stare at me as if they're looking into my soul.
"I EVEN HAD A WIFE. SHE WAS EXPECTING OUR FIRST CHILD, MY SON. I HAD DREAMS OF BEING A LOVING FATHER, OF TEACHING MY SON TO THROW A BASEBALL, OF WATCHING HIM MATURE AND BECOME HIS OWN MAN. I HAD DREAMS OF GROWING OLD WITH MY WIFE, RETIRING WITH HER TO THE COUNTRYSIDE. I DON'T THINK THESE WERE UNREASONABLE DREAMS. BUT YOU TOOK THEM FROM ME."
Suddenly, though his face does not - and cannot move - those eyes seem to burn with an anger that I've never seen before. It's at this point that I'm sure this beaten shell of a man is, indeed, the Coordinator.
"WE WERE DRIVING HOME FROM DINNER. WE HAD JUST CELEBRATED MY WIFE'S BIRTHDAY. IMAGINE OUR SURPRISE WHEN WE DROVE RIGHT INTO A METAHUMAN FIGHT! YOU AND THAT CRYSTAL CHARACTER."
Crystalline. That was fairly early on in my "career." It wasn't one of my cleanest efforts, but I did all that I could to end the fight quickly.
"PANICKING, I SWERVED TO AVOID GETTING CAUGHT IN THE BATTLE. I LOST CONTROL OF THE CAR, AND WE CRASHED INTO A PARKED VAN. OUR CAR WAS A MANGLED WRECK. I BARELY SURVIVED THE CRASH. MY WIFE AND CHILD? THEY NEVER HAD THAT LUXURY."
The story hits me hard. "I'm so sorry. I didn't--"
"NO! YOU DON'T GET TO APOLOGIZE! WHERE DO YOU METAHUMANS GET OFF? YOU RUN RAMPANT WITH YOUR POWERS, TRYING TO DESTROY EACH OTHER, AND US NORMAL PEOPLE ARE MERELY SCENERY! PAWNS TO YOUR TWISTED GAME!
"I MADE A PACT THAT I WOULD MAKE YOU VIGILANTES PAY. BUT FIRST, I HAD TO TAKE VENGEANCE ON THE ONE RESPONSIBLE FOR MY WIFE'S DEATH. FOR MY SON'S DEATH! I WOULD CRUSH YOU, MANTIS, IF IT WERE MY DYING ACT!"
The silence hangs heavy in the air. Did I crash his car? No. Did I kill his wife and unborn child? No. But my hands are stained with their blood, regardless. Because, in a way, he's right. I'm indirectly responsible for their deaths. And nothing I can say will make that right.
"SO HERE WE ARE. I GREW TIRED OF THE CAT-AND-MOUSE. I ADMIT, I ENJOYED WATCHING YOU SCRAMBLE FOR A WHILE, BUT I'VE BEEN DOING A DISSERVICE TO MY LOVED ONES. THEIR DEATHS DEMAND JUSTICE, AND I'M PREPARED TO DELIVER IT!"
With his very limited control over his hand, the Coordinator reaches out and presses the button on a remote on his lap. A red light flashes underneath his shirt.
"I LEFT THAT COMPUTER ON PURPOSE. I KNEW YOU'D USE IT TO FIND ME. I WANTED TO BRING YOU HERE. IN A FEW SHORT SECONDS, THIS ENTIRE INDUSTRIAL PARK IS RIGGED TO EXPLODE. I ACCEPT MY DEATH, KNOWING THAT I WILL SOON SEE MY WIFE AND CHILD. AND THE BEST PART? I FULFILL MY PROMISE BY TAKING YOU WITH ME!"
I try not to panic. I know the Coordinator. He isn't bluffing. I leap over the desk and rip open his shirt. The bomb is embedded in his chest. Even with ample time, I don't think I'd be able to get it out. I look the Coordinator in the eyes. His continue to burn with seething rage. I can't save him.
"I didn't mean for anything to happen to you or your family," I say softly. If he's going to die, I'm going to apologize to him formally. "I accept that what happened was terrible, and I accept that my presence played a role indirectly. As long as I live, I won't forget what you've taught me here today. And for what it's worth, I hope you're right. I hope you do see your family after this."
For once, the Coordinator is silent. There's no time to reflect on it. If I only have seconds, I need to move quickly. Shielding my face with my new exoskeletal protrusions, I leap through the glass window behind the Coordinator. As I land, I tuck and roll before taking off in a sprint. I need to get clear of the industrial park! In desperation, I leap into the air and pray for the best.
KABOOOOOOOM!
The industrial park explodes in a massive fireball behind me. The ensuing shockwave knocks me out of the air, and the heat from the explosion sears my back. I land in a crumpled heap a few dozen yards away. As I'm recovering, I see Sergeant Hampton and the SDS officers running to me.
"Mantis!"
"I'm fine." I stand up straight and feel the back of my costume. Most of the fabric burned away, and my bare skin is exposed. Wonderful. I turn around and look at the remains of the industrial park. Somewhere in there is what's left of the Coordinator. I hope he found peace. "Let's go home."
"Whatever you say, Mantis. Just bring him out here when you've got him."
Nodding, I bound off in the direction of the industrial park. It's time to settle the score with the Coordinator once and for all. Only this time, he doesn't have anyone doing his dirty work for him. I'll be glad to have this nuisance out of my life. Arriving at the marked building, I slip in quietly through a broken window.
The building is kinda creepy in this state. Empty cubicles dominate the room, and I leap silently over them towards the stairs. The Coordinator could be anywhere in here, so I'll start my search from the ground up. Taking the stairs down to the basement, I find myself in an old boiler room. I half-expect Freddy Krueger to pop out and attack me.
Well, there goes any hope of sleeping tonight.
Suddenly, I hear the familiar sound of pinging and beeping from machines. Seems out of the ordinary, considering the circumstances, so I investigate. I turn the corner and am surprised to find computers on top of computers, with more servers and wires than I care to count. Franklin was right. This is the Coordinator's base of operations. Now, to find the man himself...
"HELLO, MANTIS. WELCOME TO MY HUMBLE ABODE. PLEASE, MEET ME IN THE EXECUTIVE OFFICE ON THE TOP FLOOR. WE HAVE MUCH TO DISCUSS."
It's very likely a trap, but it's also the only lead I have. I start to get the sinking feeling that the Coordinator isn't really here, but I make my way to the elevators regardless. The elevator is waiting for me, doors open and everything. Yep, this is definitely a trap. My only option is to spring it. I didn't come all this way for nothing.
I'm surprised to find that nothing bad happens to me during the elevator ride. I move cautiously through the top floor, but there are no booby traps to be found. Eventually, I find myself standing at the doors to the executive office. "Here goes nothing." I take a deep breath and throw open the doors.
"HELLO, MANTIS."
I'm surprised to see a wheelchair-bound man sitting behind the desk. He's connected to a breathing tube, and his eyes seem lifeless. I know he's alive because they follow me as I walk further into the room.
"NOT WHAT YOU WERE EXPECTING, IS IT?"
The voice is coming from the loudspeakers. "Are you--?"
"THE COORDINATOR? YES. WE FINALLY MEET IN PERSON. I'D SHAKE YOUR HAND, BUT YOU CAN SEE WHERE THAT POSES SOME DIFFICULTY FOR ME."
This man who has been terrorizing me for months is crippled? I mean, I suppose it makes sense. That's why he sent others to dispatch of me. And it also explains the lifeless voice. But something about the situation just seems...wrong.
"I'M SURE THIS IS A LOT TO PROCESS ALL AT ONCE, SO ALLOW ME TO EXPLAIN. I WAS NOT ALWAYS LIKE THIS. NOT LONG AGO, I COULD WALK AND TALK AND DO ALL THE THINGS THAT MAKE ONE NORMAL."
Those eyes stare at me as if they're looking into my soul.
"I EVEN HAD A WIFE. SHE WAS EXPECTING OUR FIRST CHILD, MY SON. I HAD DREAMS OF BEING A LOVING FATHER, OF TEACHING MY SON TO THROW A BASEBALL, OF WATCHING HIM MATURE AND BECOME HIS OWN MAN. I HAD DREAMS OF GROWING OLD WITH MY WIFE, RETIRING WITH HER TO THE COUNTRYSIDE. I DON'T THINK THESE WERE UNREASONABLE DREAMS. BUT YOU TOOK THEM FROM ME."
Suddenly, though his face does not - and cannot move - those eyes seem to burn with an anger that I've never seen before. It's at this point that I'm sure this beaten shell of a man is, indeed, the Coordinator.
"WE WERE DRIVING HOME FROM DINNER. WE HAD JUST CELEBRATED MY WIFE'S BIRTHDAY. IMAGINE OUR SURPRISE WHEN WE DROVE RIGHT INTO A METAHUMAN FIGHT! YOU AND THAT CRYSTAL CHARACTER."
Crystalline. That was fairly early on in my "career." It wasn't one of my cleanest efforts, but I did all that I could to end the fight quickly.
"PANICKING, I SWERVED TO AVOID GETTING CAUGHT IN THE BATTLE. I LOST CONTROL OF THE CAR, AND WE CRASHED INTO A PARKED VAN. OUR CAR WAS A MANGLED WRECK. I BARELY SURVIVED THE CRASH. MY WIFE AND CHILD? THEY NEVER HAD THAT LUXURY."
The story hits me hard. "I'm so sorry. I didn't--"
"NO! YOU DON'T GET TO APOLOGIZE! WHERE DO YOU METAHUMANS GET OFF? YOU RUN RAMPANT WITH YOUR POWERS, TRYING TO DESTROY EACH OTHER, AND US NORMAL PEOPLE ARE MERELY SCENERY! PAWNS TO YOUR TWISTED GAME!
"I MADE A PACT THAT I WOULD MAKE YOU VIGILANTES PAY. BUT FIRST, I HAD TO TAKE VENGEANCE ON THE ONE RESPONSIBLE FOR MY WIFE'S DEATH. FOR MY SON'S DEATH! I WOULD CRUSH YOU, MANTIS, IF IT WERE MY DYING ACT!"
The silence hangs heavy in the air. Did I crash his car? No. Did I kill his wife and unborn child? No. But my hands are stained with their blood, regardless. Because, in a way, he's right. I'm indirectly responsible for their deaths. And nothing I can say will make that right.
"SO HERE WE ARE. I GREW TIRED OF THE CAT-AND-MOUSE. I ADMIT, I ENJOYED WATCHING YOU SCRAMBLE FOR A WHILE, BUT I'VE BEEN DOING A DISSERVICE TO MY LOVED ONES. THEIR DEATHS DEMAND JUSTICE, AND I'M PREPARED TO DELIVER IT!"
With his very limited control over his hand, the Coordinator reaches out and presses the button on a remote on his lap. A red light flashes underneath his shirt.
"I LEFT THAT COMPUTER ON PURPOSE. I KNEW YOU'D USE IT TO FIND ME. I WANTED TO BRING YOU HERE. IN A FEW SHORT SECONDS, THIS ENTIRE INDUSTRIAL PARK IS RIGGED TO EXPLODE. I ACCEPT MY DEATH, KNOWING THAT I WILL SOON SEE MY WIFE AND CHILD. AND THE BEST PART? I FULFILL MY PROMISE BY TAKING YOU WITH ME!"
I try not to panic. I know the Coordinator. He isn't bluffing. I leap over the desk and rip open his shirt. The bomb is embedded in his chest. Even with ample time, I don't think I'd be able to get it out. I look the Coordinator in the eyes. His continue to burn with seething rage. I can't save him.
"I didn't mean for anything to happen to you or your family," I say softly. If he's going to die, I'm going to apologize to him formally. "I accept that what happened was terrible, and I accept that my presence played a role indirectly. As long as I live, I won't forget what you've taught me here today. And for what it's worth, I hope you're right. I hope you do see your family after this."
For once, the Coordinator is silent. There's no time to reflect on it. If I only have seconds, I need to move quickly. Shielding my face with my new exoskeletal protrusions, I leap through the glass window behind the Coordinator. As I land, I tuck and roll before taking off in a sprint. I need to get clear of the industrial park! In desperation, I leap into the air and pray for the best.
KABOOOOOOOM!
The industrial park explodes in a massive fireball behind me. The ensuing shockwave knocks me out of the air, and the heat from the explosion sears my back. I land in a crumpled heap a few dozen yards away. As I'm recovering, I see Sergeant Hampton and the SDS officers running to me.
"Mantis!"
"I'm fine." I stand up straight and feel the back of my costume. Most of the fabric burned away, and my bare skin is exposed. Wonderful. I turn around and look at the remains of the industrial park. Somewhere in there is what's left of the Coordinator. I hope he found peace. "Let's go home."