Sequels The Official "How YOU would do Spider-Man 4" thread

[HughJackFan420]

(Meanwhile at Dr. Connors lab)

Dr Connors: Where is that Parker??? Always late. If he doesn't show up in the next 5 minutes I'm going ho...

(Peter bursts through the lab door)

Peter: Sorry Dr. Connors I got caught up in uh...um...

Dr. Connors: Save it Peter. I wouldn't be surprised if you showed up to your own funeral late. Well let's get to it shall we....

(Peter and Dr. Connors start walking into another room. Peter notices a machine covered in a tarp.)

Peter: Hey what's this???

(Dr. Connors charges towards Peter)

Dr. Connors: Don't touch that!!! That is very sensitive and expenisve equipment. It's something I'm working on that's all.

Peter: Oh...sorry.

Dr. Connors: It's alright. Now can I go over what I've discovered about the symbiote?

Peter:Fill me in.

Dr Connors: Well as you've shown me it is sensitive to vibrating sound waves. I myself have discovered it's also vulnerable to fire. Yet the most interesting of all is the fact how it reacts to an agressive host.

(Dr. Connors pulls out the symbiote which is containted in a secured glass jar)

Dr. Connors: Let's say there is more than one host to chose from. Peter I'd like you to meet Leo and Greg.

(Dr. Connors is referring to two chimps locked in cages.)

Peter: Hi Leo...Hi Greg.

Dr. Connors: Leo is not as aggresive as Greg so play close attention to the way the symbiote reacts coming close to each one of these guys.

(Dr. Connors places the jar in front of Leo and the symbiote barely moves.)

Dr. Connors: Now watch happens when I place it near Greg.

(Dr. Connors places the jar in front of Greg and the symbiote reacts violently as does Greg who is screeching and going crazy in the cage.)

Dr. Connors: I knew that the symbiote was a parasite which feeds off aggressive energy like anger, hate, violence. I just didn't realize how serious this can be. But that's what it needs to attach too. If a host releases energy from any of these kinds of emotions the symbiote can sense it and will follow that host until it attaches itself to it. This is pretty dangerous stuff we have here.

Peter: You can say that again.

(Dr. Connors looks at Peter strangely)

Peter: Ahem...So this little bit of the symbiote that you have left, what do you plan on doing with it?

Dr. Connors: I plan to burn it but not until I have studied everything there is to it. This is an amazing yet pretty dangerous discovery so I have to take certain precautions. That's why I'm coming to a conclusion of finding out a way to control it otherwise if there is no hope I will destroy it.

Peter: You sure that's a good idea Dr. Connors??

Dr. Connors: This is something from out of this world Peter. We've made a discovery unlike anything this world has seen. But before we go public with it we must learn how to control it.

Peter: Public??

Dr. Connors: Imagine if this stuff fell in the wrong hands?? Imagine the possibilites??

Peter: Believe me I have and that's another reason why I think you should get rid of it as soon as you can Dr. Connors.

Dr. Connors: Thanks Peter but I'm being very careful trust me. Your only concern should be passing the finals especially for this class. I'll keep you posted as to what else I might find out about our little alien friend. Don't forget to study ok see you in class.

Peter: Thanks Dr. Connors. See you later.

(Peter walks out but as he does he can't keep his eyes off the machine covered in tarp)

Peter: (talking to himself) Hmmm I wonder what that machine is about?? I hope it's a machine to get rid of that symbiote. If it was up to me I'd burn it before it kills someone elses best friend.

 

[I7eIVIoNBoY]

not bad, i rly like it...the only part that i dont like tho is where he talks to himself at the end, lol...and maybe black cat could be running on the rooftops instead, jumping from building to building...or not. lol. thumbs up!

oh and the opening narration could be a little shorter..

 

[Jack O Lantern]

It's not bad, but a little advice. You can't write what the audience can't see. You write "We see Spiderman swinging in the New York night sky on his way to meet Dr. Connors." there's no way to show that visually so it shouldn't be in the script

 

[gangsta_crizzab]

(instead of posting the entire script (which I haven't finished due to finals and pokemon =p) I thought maybe I should post a summary so you guys have a much better idea of what direction I want to take SM4 in)

(so here is the 1st part of:


WEB OF SPIDER-MAN

The movie takes place a year and a half after the end of Spider-Man 3. The first scene of the film is Spidey having a fight with some common thug for a great Daily Bugle picture. The common thug seems to have possession of high tech electrically charged gloves. He kicks spidey around for a while, but as he's about to do the final strike, spider-man webs up the thug's fists and the electrical energy is trapped, destroying the gloves and leaving the thug defeated. During this fight, the thug reveals to Spidey that he acquired his gloves from Allister Smythe, an underground weapons dealer, and soon-to-be new President of Oscorp. Allister Smythe is famously known around the world for his contributions to millitary warfare through the advancements of robotics. Spidey tells this little tidbit to Captain Stacy in secret (sorta like Batman to Gordon ) and promises Stacy that he'll further investigate the smuggling ring that Smythe supposedly runs. Peter goes home to his apartment, exhausted and down. We find out that MJ left Peter for LA. Wanting to find better opportunities, MJ insisted that she should leave NY and take a break from their relationship. It's pretty obvious that she hasn't gotten over the confrontation at the jazz bar from 3, so Peter is again in that stage where the Parker luck is coming into action,. He too is still dealing with Harry's loss, so you can say that he's at the thin line that separates normalcy and depression. But not everything is all doom and gloom, he has a staff job at the Bugle, and he's Dr. Conners' assistant, so he's getting paid better. Also, Him and Gwen Stacy made up since the incident at the Jazz Bar, so Gwen and Peter have gotten closer to each other since the last movie. This is good for Peter, since a good friend can always get you through times of trouble. So, Connors hasn't changed much from the last movie, except for the fact that he has been working overtime at the Biology labs at ESU. Using the symbiote sample from 3 and the funds from the University, Connors is hard at work on a formula that may help people with missing limbs regenerate their lost body parts. Since Connors is a physicist, not a biologist, he builds a reactor that fuses the DNA of the Symbiote and Lizard DNA to produce this formula. We find out that the symbiote has the ability to replicate DNA from a sample of tissue. So mixed in with the Lizard DNA and the replicated genetic code, arms,legs, faces, any part of the human body can be replicated. Connors believes, like Otto Octavius before him, that this invention may be what may make him great amongst men. But it is his ignorance that contributes to his downfall. Like all Mad scientists do, Connors believes that higher output from the machine will allow for the two samples to bond with each other. The machine overloads, and explodes. The explosion evaporates the symbiote sample and the Lizard DNA, causing a gaseous reaction. This gaseous reaction doesn't affect Connors at first, but as the weeks progress, Peter and Gwen start to notice the devastating effects the accident had on Connors. Connor starts feeling cold in the middle of July, he suddenly has an appetite for insects, and huge patches of his own skin start to shed. Peter and Gwen figure out that the accident had somehow imprinted the Symbiote/Lizard DNA into Connors' own DNA. Being the genius Peter is, Peter races against the clock to find a way to stop Connors' mutation. Meanwhile, Spider-Man continues his investigation on Allister Smythe, but what Spider-Man doesn't know that someone else is investigating him. One night, Spider-Man confronts Smythe and his goons at the docks. His goons all turn out to have high powered experimental laser sniper rifles. This particular event gives gets really tense, since Spidey basically is using his spider-sense to try and point out where Smythe's goons are at. Spidey eventually takes out all of Smythe's goons. Spidey confronts Smythe and threatens to turn in Smythe, telling him he'll lose everything that he's ever worked for. Spidey offers a deal where if Smythe stops his smuggling ring, he'll let him go with a warning. Unfortunately, Smythe explains to Spidey that money will always be the key to Smythe's happiness and that money is the only thing that's really definite in this world nowadays. Smythe is willing to do anything, take any risk, as long as there is money and success involved in the benefits. It is after this that Smythe unleashes his newest creation on the heels of his acquisition of Oscorp, the slayers (think of the imperial probe droids from ESB but sleeker and outfitted with goblin-like weaponry). He sends two slayers after Spider-Man, which ensues an clausturphobic chase across the docks. Spider-Man is eventually cornered by the slayers, but all of a sudden the slayers are taken out by an unknown shadowy figure. Spider-Man asks who the figure is, but the figures disappears, and leaves behind a portfolio. Spidey takes the portfolio, and sees candid photos of Peter Parker. Spider-Man takes a closer look at the photos and realizes who the figure was. As he comes to his epiphany, Spider-man is knocked out from the back. He gets up and sees what seems to be a ghost back from the dead, Eddie Brock comes towards the fallen hero and simply tells him, "Hey Parker."

(and that's only the 1 1/2 hour of what may be a three hour movie, I'll post the rest of the summary tomorrow.)

(P.S. Pokemon Diamond/Pearl is EFFING RAD!!!!!=D )

 

[gangsta_crizzab]

double post

 

[HughJackFan420]

Felecia: Oh Flash I knew you'd comeba....

(The man grabs Felecia and wrestles with her. Finally he pins her down on the apartment floor.)

Cletus Cassidy: My victims keep getting prettier and prettier. I've been watching you darling. I know what you do and I must say the Catwoman outfit is very sexy and appealing especially to guys like me.

(Cletus notices the bags of money)

Cletus: I only came for one thing but that right there is just the icing on the cake I've been looking for.

Felecia: The names Black Cat creep and now that we crossed paths prepare for some bad luck.

(Felecia grabs Cletus by the throat with her feet and flings him across the room. Cletus stands up and pulls out two huge seratted knives)

Cletus: I didn't want this to get messy babe but you pushed me. There's more than one way to skin a cat.

Felecia: Bring it...

(Felecia ducks and dodges Cletus' attempts to cut her. The fight leads outside on the apartment fire escape and all the way to the rooftop. Cletus loses one knife in the battle. As Felecia tries to finish off Cletus by doing a flying round house he throws the last knife in her leg and she falls on her back screaming in pain.)

Cletus: Keep screaming baby it only turns me on. Oh what's wrong? I thought cats were supposed to land on all fours.

(Cletus rips out the knife from her leg and is about to plunge her with it)

Cletus: You and me could've been quite the pair babe. Looks like I'm just gonna have to spade and get paid. Thanks for the money. I promise not to spend it all in one place hahahaha.

(Cletus goes to stab her and the knife is pulled away by a web. Spiderman swings into action kicking Cletus to the ground)

Spiderman: No means no.

Cletus: Spiderman!!! You will not stop me from my kill.

Spiderman: Your serial killing days are over Cletus. I don't know where you've been hiding but thanks to the Bugle I didn't think you would be to hard to find. Serial killer with shaggy hair, badly dressed, has a thing for knives. Way to go on laying low genius.

(Cletus goes for his gun but Spiderman covers him in webbing.)

Spiderman: Not so fast quick draw. I hope you packed your things cuz you just won a vacation to a cold lonely cell at the beautiful state penetentiary.

(Spiderman walks over to Felecia. He notices that it's Felecia Hardy.)

Spiderman: (thinking to himself) That's Flash's girlfriend. What a lucky guy and lucky for her I came just in time. (speaking to Felecia) Ahem, are you ok that cut looks pretty bad. Let's bandage it up so I can swing you to the hospital.

Felecia: (Disappointed in herself she forcefully gives her thanks) Uh thanks Spiderman. I could've taken him but he caught me off guard.

Spiderman: Tough chic. Well no offense but you should leave taking down creeps like this to the authorities or superheros.

Felecia: Well thanks for the offer but no thanks I'll be fine.

Spiderman: You sure I mean it's no trouble at all I can swing you down to...

Felecia: I SAID I'M FINE!!!

Spiderman: Sheesh, well excuse me I was just trying to help. Well suit yourself. I'm gonna go make this delivery now and uh be more careful.

Felecia: Thanks for the advice.

(Spiderman turns to Cletus wrapped up in webbing)

Spiderman: Alright dumb dumb it's time to drop you off at your new home.

(Spiderman swings away with Cletus fighting to get out of the webbing. Felecia just stares at Spiderman swinging away.)

Felecia: Spiderman?? Psssh I could've taken that guy I know I coud've I had em I.... OWWWWW!!!! That sicko got me good.

(Felecia tries to get up and sighs at her wound and goes to her apartment to patch her self up.)

 

[HughJackFan420]

(Meanwhile at Felecia Hardy's apartment. We see Felecia taking off her mask with money bags in her hand opening the door and there is a man waiting for her inside the apartment.)

Felecia: Oh my God!!! Flash you scared me half to death.

Flash: What do you have in the bags Felicia???

Felecia: Nothing just um laundry. How did you get in here?

Flash: Looks more like money laundry and your not the only one who knows how to break in locked doors. Damn it Felecia I didn't want to believe it but a couple of my friends coming out of the clubs seen you robbing a museum. It was all over the Bugle. Look your father...

Felecia: My father is dying ok Flash. I need to see him and I'm busting him out of the joint whether you like it or not. You can't do anything about it.

Flash: I don't want to stop you Felecia but you've changed. You went from this quiet college girl that I fell for now you dress up in this get up giving cat burgarly a new meaning. I can't stop you but but Spiderman....

Felecia: Psssh Spiderman??? That clown in tights??? That spider couldn't catch a fly.

Flash: When were you gonna tell me huh?? It's over Felecia. I can't have a thief for a girlfriend. How can I trust you??? I'm outta here good bye...

Felecia: Wait Flash don't...

Flash: Bye Felecia.

(Flash leaves Felecia's apartment slamming the door behind him. Felicia breaks down in tears and goes to change in a more simple outfit. As Flash walks out he notices a creepy looking character, a man in a red and black outfit waiting in the apartment hallway on the main floor. Flash walks out of the apartment building and the man walks up the stairs from which Flash came down from and heads towards Felecias apartment. The man is at Felecia's apartment door and knocks. Felecia opens without looking through the peephole and begins to speak without realizing who it is at first)

 

[Jplaya2023]

where's the rest of the script??????????????????

 

[HughJackFan420]

where's the rest of the script??????????????????

be patient my friend my brain doesn't work that fast lol

 

[pjspider1C]

Another thing to help you out... The dialogue between your characters gives a lot of exposition about things happening elsewhere. Instead of having your characters talk about it - show it. Showing is always more interesting than telling. Each line in play or movie should either 1) Forward the plot or 2) Develop a character or 3) both 1 and 2. And also, remember your audience is smart. You don't have to spell everything out through dialogue.

 

[Jplaya2023]

be patient my friend my brain doesn't work that fast lol

alright pimp i'll give you a couple more hours then

 

[HughJackFan420]

Another thing to help you out... The dialogue between your characters gives a lot of exposition about things happening elsewhere. Instead of having your characters talk about it - show it. Showing is always more interesting than telling. Each line in play or movie should either 1) Forward the plot or 2) Develop a character or 3) both 1 and 2. And also, remember your audience is smart. You don't have to spell everything out through dialogue.

thanks for the advice. i'm new at this and this is just a rough draft really more like an outline for me to work off of. just trying to get the plot and story in and once i'm done i'll iron out the wrinkles.

 

[pjspider1C]

No problem. I'm a bit of a writer myself, and I know any feedback you can get from anywhere is always helpful somehow. I know where you're coming from, friend.

 

[HughJackFan420]

(swinging into action Spiderman makes his entry at a New York presinct too meet Captain Stacy)

Spiderman: Hi guys.

Cops in Presinct: Hey Spidey....What's happening webhead...

Spiderman: Hello Capt Stacy can I interest you in the catch of the day???

Capt Stacy: My my my well if it isn't the notorious Cletus Cassidy.

Spiderman: Caught em right before he claimed another... victim freakin psycho.

Cletus: I'll kill you Spiderman I'll kill the ones you love right in front of you before I do it too...I'll....

(Spiderman shoots webbing at Cletus' mouth)

Spiderman:Promises, promises. I take it you guys will take it from here.

Capt Stacy:Yes and thanks to you Spidey the streets of New York are much safer now that we got this nut job off the street.

Spiderman: See you Captain.

(The next morning we see Peter Parker at Harry Osborn's grave holding a basketball)

Peter: Hey buddy how's it going. I came down here to tell you I feel like I can't forgive myself for what happened. I miss you everyday and I feel guilty everyday. I should've never kept that black suit for that long. I got addicted to the feeling of it. I should've gotten rid of it differenlty. I really don't know what happened to the guy that killed you Harry but if he still out there believe me I will make sure he pays. What am I saying? I don't know what to think no more. Aunt Mae says revenge is like a poison. I can see why it's like that. I have this anger poisioning me and it comes from guilt. I feel like I need to release it on someone or something. I miss you Harry. I just need some kind of closure.

(MJ and Aunt Mae with flowers walk up behind him)

MJ: Hey Pete.

Peter: Hey MJ hi Aunt Mae.

Aunt Mae: Hello Peter.

Peter: I miss him you guys. I wish I could've just...

MJ: We did all we could. Spiderman did all he could.

Aunt Mae: That's right and he loved you and I'm sure he's in a better place now proud of you smiling down on you. His father and him are finally together.

MJ: Yeah that's one way of looking at it.

Peter: I don't know about that.

Aunt Mae: Why do you say that??

Peter: Huh oh nevermind well who's hungry I'm ready to eat it's on me.

MJ: Oh Peter how sweet I'm in the mood for pizza.

Aunt Mae: That's sounds good.

Peter: Great I know a great place with really awesome pizza.

(You see Aunt Mae and MJ put down flowers by Harry's grave as well as Peter putting down the basketball by his grave and walk away but Pete looks back.)

Peter: See you pal.

(Meanwhile in a dark warehouse we have Felecia looking for someone. she walks in through the front)

Felecia: Hello??? Anyone here??

(a big fat man comes out of the dark)

Fat Man: Hey beautiful where you been all my life.

Felecia: I was told I could buy explosives here.

Fat Man: Whoa your not a cop are you??

Felecia: No I just need as much C4 you can give me for all of this....

(Felecia pulls out a bag full of money, jewlery, and diamonds)

Fat Man: Wow honey what do you wanna do blow up Time Square??

Felecia: Let's just say I'm having a hard time reaching a relative...

Fat Man: Haven't you ever heard of a phone???

(Fat Man reaches in a box and pulls out a lot of C4 and detonation equipment)

Fat Man: You know how this stuff works???

Felecia: Yeah just the stuff I worked with was on a much smaller scale.

Fat Man: Well these ain't fireworks lady. You best be careful and know what your doing. You never got this from here ok??

Felecia: No problem and thanks so much I'll be back if I need anything else.

Fat Man: Take care sweetie:

(Felecia walks out with her bag full of goodies)

 

[comic_book_guy]

seems great so far man

 

[HughJackFan420]

(Meanwhile Peter, MJ, and Aunt Mae arrive in a taxi at Pizza Time. They all walk in ready to enjoy a pizza dinner)

Mr. Aziz: Peter! How you been man.

Peter: Hey Mr. Aziz I've been good thanks.

Mr. Aziz: Who are these two lovely ladies??

Peter: This is MJ and this is my Aunt Mae

Mr. Aziz: Nice to meet you.

Aunt Mae & MJ: Nice to meet you too.

Mr. Aziz: So Peter what are you doing nowadays??

Peter: Well I'm a photographer for the Daily Bugle and it's going quite well.

Mr. Aziz: You are showing up on time right??

Peter: Haha of course no complaints over there.

Mr. Aziz: That's good Peter very good. Well since your an old friend visiting pizza is on the house.

Peter: Oh Mr. Aziz I couldn't possibly...

Mr. Aziz: Hey Peter it's ok man. Just order what you want and we'll have a table ready for you outside.

Peter, Aunt Mae, MJ: Thank you so much Mr. Aziz.

(the three walk out and sit at their table)

MJ: For a guy that was riding you while you were working here he's a pretty nice guy Pete.

Peter: Yeah he's not so bad.

Aunt Mae: Well I'm starving just smelling the cooking here. Excuse me I have to go use the ladies room.

(MJ watches as Aunt Mae leaves the table.)

MJ: Hey Peter I know how you feel about Harry. It's ok to feel angry but don't let it consume you. I can see the pain on your face sometimes when you think of him and earlier at the cemetary...

Peter: He was my best friend and he was just doing what he always did in high school. He protected me. He sacrificed his life. I would've done the same. I wish I could've stopped Eddie myself. I swung by the construction site to make sure that scumbag who took my friend away was definitely gone. I didn't see any sign of him I don't think we'll be hearing from him anymore. Good riddance.

MJ: You shouldn't say that Peter. This Eddie guy was probably a decent guy before his transformation.

Peter: MJ he tried to take my job and ruin me. The guy was a creep before he actually turned into one and when he did he tried to kill you and me and succeeded killing Harry. It was that suit MJ. I spoke with Dr. Connors yesterday and he showed me and told me more about the symbiote. It's an actual living alien parasyte that feeds on aggression, anger probably the reason it took me over and really made a turn for the ugly when it got a hold of Eddie. It's a powerful thing which makes me wonder if Eddie survived.

MJ: Well you never really told me much about him. I guess when we weren't talking I missed out on some things.

Peter: Yeah but it's in the past.

MJ: And you should bury your anger for this guy with the past. Peter if this guy actually survived that explosion I don't want you to do anything stupid in fact I don't think he made it otherwise he would be bent on revenge trying to find Peter Parker.

Peter: Or Spiderman remember? He knew who I was he knew who you were. It was like fighting Mr. Osborn to save you again but this time a lot more worse and a lot more close to our end. I warned you MJ...Spiderman will always have enemies.

MJ: I don't care Peter I love you I would die for you.

Peter: I love you too but I won't stop protecting you. I will never let you die.

Aunt Mae: Is everything alright? Why are you two crying?

MJ: Oh everything is fine we were just sharing a moment.

Mr. Aziz: One large wonderful pizza for 3 wonderful people. Hope you enjoy.

Peter: Thanks Mr. Aziz.

Mr. Aziz: Your quite welcome and come back anytime.

MJ: We will thank you.

(We see MJ, Aunt Mae, Peter finishing up their meal and Peter tips and they all get up and get ready to head home standing outside of Pizza Time)

Aunt Mae: Well I will leave you to love birds alone. Call me sometime Peter.

Peter: Ok Aunt Mae take care.

MJ: See you later Mrs. Parker

(Aunt Mae hugs and kisses Peter and MJ goodbye Aunt Mae waves a taxi down and gets in.)

 

[pjspider1C]

Question for you HughJackFan - what's the theme of your script? The underlying statement, you, as the writer, is trying to make...

 

[darkseid26]

you should have felicia have cletus help her out with geting her father out the joint.

 

[darkseid26]

you spelled >aunt may< wrong unless you spell it that way where your from then i apologize.

 

[darkseid26]

is the fat man king pin?

 

[HughJackFan420]

pjsspider the theme to my script will still be revenge and second chances. i think that since the first spiderman movie the theme and tone has always been revenge. Norman Osborn getting revenge on the people that were trying to ruin him. Spiderman wanted revenge for his uncles killer who he thought was the robber at the wrestling match. at the end Harry wants revenge cuz he thought spiderman killed his father. in the second movie Harry is still seeking revenge and Doc Ock didn't want revenge but he felt like he had a second chance of making things right by drowning the machine in the river. the 3rd movie was about revenge and second chances and i'm just gonna keep going with the same theme and tone just with different characters and different reasons.

darkseid...no that's not kingpin just some random black market guy. i just pictured him big to hold down a warehouse full of black market stuff. sorry i didn't picture that scene more detailed but the only reason Black Cat was there was for some C4 she needs to bust her dad out of prison. and since Cletus attacked Black Cat i don't think he'll be helping her out.

 

[pjspider1C]

While revenge has been an element in each of the Spider-Man movies, it wasn't necessarily the main conflict in each one. To recap...

SM1: Power vs. Responsibility
SM2: Sacrifice to do what's right.
SM3: Revenge vs. Forgiveness

Revenge was part of the theme for SM3, but only a portion of the story in SM1 and 2.

I would encourage you to focus mainly on Peter Parker, because that's who the story should be about. Think about him as a normal person, then think about him as a hero, then think about him trying to find balance between the two, and then figure what other obstacles he has yet to overcome that we haven't seen before.

 

[HughJackFan420]

(MJ and Peter are walking away from Pizza Time)

MJ: Peter I just wanna say that no matter what I will always love you. We have been through so much together.

Peter: Yeah tell me about it.

MJ: I know your worried about me more than ever now. But I remember you showing me the ring. If you still wanna ask me Peter of course I would say...

(As Peter and MJ are talking they are standing near an alley where a shadowy hooded figure who looks up when he hears Peter's name being called out by MJ and comes out into the light. We see a now weak and very sick looking Eddie Brock with burn marks over his face and body.)

Eddie: Peter??? Peter Parker??!!! You ruined my life!!!

MJ: Oh my God...

Peter: Eddie???

Eddie: Yeah you remember me...you remember taking away my job, my dream, my girl, and almost my LIFE??!!!

(as Eddie shouts black tendrils leak out of his skin but shaking as if they were weak and part of his blood now)

Peter: Oh my God Eddie what happened to you??

Eddie: Oh you mean this?? (touching his black tendrils) This is what is left of the last thing you tried to take from me. You've taken everything from me but not this. It belongs to me.

Peter: Eddie that stuff doesn't even belong on this planet. I don't know what it is but it's not safe too...

Eddie: Parker...always the boy scout. We just need a stronger sample. We can sense that there is a stronger sample out there.

(Eddie's eyes go all black)

Peter: We?? Oh my God you have completely bonded with this thing. Eddie I can get you help. Can't you see what it's doing to you...

Eddie: Eddie is just a part of us together we are Venom and if you wanna help me you can start by dying....DIE PARKER!!!! RAAaaaaaa

(Eddie lunges at Peter choking him but he is able to control Eddie but not able to reveal his true identity in public. Peter doesn't use any of his Spidey powers but two cops come rushing to break it up.)

Cop 1: Freeze ya jerk...

Cop 2 Get on the ground now!!!

(Eddie struggles to get a knife out and slices at Peter on his arm)

MJ: Noooo!!! Stop!!!

Peter: Owww!!! Alright Eddie I didn't wanna do this...

(Peter punches Eddie with an uppercut that launches Eddie in the air causing him to drop the knife and lays him out on the concrete. Picture Deebo knocking out Red on Friday)

Cop 1: Geez kid you ever think about joining the force?

Cop 2: Are you alright kid?? You need some help with that cut?? We can take it from here.

(The cut in his shirt exposes his suit a little bit. Peter quickly covers up)

Peter: No thanks guys just put that creep away for as long as you can.

Cop 1: Well attempted murder can give you an extended vacation at the state pen.

Cop 2: You guys take care and be careful.

(Cops handcuff Eddie and haul em off)

MJ and Peter: Thanks we will.

MJ: Oh my God Peter he's alive?? What if he finds that sample that Dr. Connors has?? Well lets first get you bandaged up huh?? That looks pretty bad.

Peter: Thanks MJ. I got a first aid kit at home and I sure could use a beautiful nurse like you to clean me up. But after that I have to go talk to Dr. Connors.

MJ: Ok let's get outta here.

 

[pjspider1C]

1) It's a bad idea to bring back Eddie Brock/Venom because that entirely defeats the purpose of the story in SM3.

2) Even if Eddie were to return, having him say "we" does not mean he's completely bonded with the symbiote. "We" indicates a separation between Eddie and the symbiote. Carnage was the first symbiotic villian to refer to himself as "I" because he was the first to fully bond with the symbiote completely.

 

[HughJackFan420]

While revenge has been an element in each of the Spider-Man movies, it wasn't necessarily the main conflict in each one. To recap...

SM1: Power vs. Responsibility
SM2: Sacrifice to do what's right.
SM3: Revenge vs. Forgiveness

Revenge was part of the theme for SM3, but only a portion of the story in SM1 and 2.

I would encourage you to focus mainly on Peter Parker, because that's who the story should be about. Think about him as a normal person, then think about him as a hero, then think about him trying to find balance between the two, and then figure what other obstacles he has yet to overcome that we haven't seen before.

i understand where you coming from but it's kinda hard to come up with a fresh original theme i mean as much as I'd like to come up with a fresh GI Joe "knowing is half the battle" theme I'm just trying to stick to theme and tone from the previous movies. i'm just sticking to what works and still throwing new obstacles around Peter different ones and harder ones. sorry to disappoint but i think i got a good story here.